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Reviewer: harry potter girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter One

like it

Reviewer: machbon Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter One

p eut tue me dire s.t.p quand là suite de la série sortira mercie da d'avance vous p

ouvez me laisser a mesage dans mon  blog machbon



Author's Response:

Translation? :(

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 12:29 AM Title: Epilogue

"I warily made my way into the warm, yet murky water, feeling around the dirty earth beneath my feet, hoping that I didn’t get bitten" lol obviously not all human fears disappear when changed::))
Great description of the underground city!

“Whatever caused Bella to disappear from my visions,” I said slowly. “It’s coming here. Soon.” Crap! lol

Incredible story! Well worth the read. Thanks for sharing:)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing and reading :) 

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wonderful chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you :) 

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 27

[“Goodness, Bella!” Rix cried....to find me with my hands wrapped around his midsection. My face was pushed against his clothing, and I was licking his shirt] lol definitely embarrassing::))

Author's Response:

Yeah. I definitely wanted to have some over-the-top reaction. :) Hee hee hee. Thanks for reading

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 26

“You are free to leave, if you will swear not to return to our shores.” Shiloh sounds just like a certain vampire doctor:( Glad she was spoofing!

"...and sweat was starting to bead at her forehead" Me too:) I think the heat is only part of the reason I'm sweating right now. This description of a Walker's change sounds so much worse than a vampire's change:(

Incredible chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad the glitch from earlier didn't impede your reading it.

Reviewer: littlelostbunny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 25

I absolutely am captivated by this story.  I have to admit I was extremely annoyed when it ended on a cliffy I was getting into the chapter and then it ended on me lol.  I will be tuning in to find out what happens next that's for sure.  It's a great story, beautifully written and with strong loveable characters.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Sorry about the cliffie :( I had to end it there. The next chapter is probably going to be written in the 3rd person perspective, so I had to cut off Bella's POV with a cliffie. I'm working hard on it, but it's proving a bit difficult. I try to get it out just as quickly as I can! 

Reviewer: mingaling Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter One

Omg I loved the last chapter! It was so intense! But, please tell me Bella doesn't die?!?! Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Haha. Thanks for the review! As for Bella's condition, you'll have to wait til the next chapter! 

Reviewer: deltagrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 24

I am loving this story. The characters draw you in immediatly. The new addedcharecters have great strong personalities. I love the new B. Cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am moments away from posting the next chapter! :D 

Reviewer: csp4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 24

Lots of thoughts going thru my head! I do miss Nora:( I'm surprised Bella can even move with all the damage done to her body.

Author's Response:

She's having trouble, but the vampire venom/walker training is helping. Thanks for your review! :D 

Reviewer: csp4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 23

“Steven could have killed my mom this morning....What else can I do? I have to keep her safe.” Hmm, not sure how staying human would keep her mom safe but that's a very Bella way of thinking.

lol lol damn, I'm so glad the next chapter is up but with my luck it will be an even bigger cliffy::))

Author's Response:

Haha! Yeah. Bella doesn't really think things clearly. :) Thanks for the review! I'm trying to get ch 25 up quickly. 

Reviewer: lfsleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 7:51 AM Title: Chapter One

I've just spent the last few hours reading your story from start to finish and all I can say is wow! I am completely captivated and entranced by your story and can't wait to read more. I love the fact that the story isnt what you would normally see on a fan fiction website and the original idea is so refreshing and interesting. This is definitely my new favourite! Keep up the awesome work! Can't wait for the next chapter to be uploaded.... 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words. The next chapter has been sent to my beta and should be returned in the next few days.

Reviewer: csp4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 22

“I’m just not very coordinated. I’ll probably fall. A lot.” With everything she's done lately - jumping buildings, running at super-sonic speeds - & she still thinks of herself as clumsy!

I figured Steven would be a big problem no matter what kind of hot air Shiloh was trying to spout.

Author's Response:

Yup. Bella is still as self conscious as ever. She's starting to get a bit more confident, but not by much. 
Shiloh is trying to keep Bella from worrying. She doesn't want her to start freaking out and make a rash decision. :) 

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 17

As much as I want to know about Shiloh too, I'm surprised Bella's so driven/obsessed with getting personal information.
I've been way off before with my guesses but to me the mystery of the 4 children in the drawing is obvious. They're Shiloh's. Probably killed during the same war where Shiloh got the scar.

Author's Response:

Bella's very curious about Shiloh, but she's more enthralled by the others devotion to her. 
That undying loyalty is something that she had never experienced before. Even with the Cullens. 

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 16

“You should speak to your mother about your involvement with us,” And tell her what & how much. I will look forward to reading that conversation if it ever happens:::)))

"the servants of the vampire lords" that sounds more like the vampire stuff I grew up with - very creepy!

Author's Response:

Haha. That conversation WILL happen before the end of the story. I'm going to enjoy writing it, too! 

 

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen

"The garbage exploded, covering me with a gross, sticky mess that smelled horrible" lol lol nasty::))

Author's Response:

Haha! Yeah. I loved that imagery. Thanks for your review! :D 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 10:26 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen

I am really enjoying this story

Author's Response:

Thank you :) 

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

love it update soon

Author's Response:

Thank you. 

Reviewer: LadyWolf81 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 11

I can't wait to read more of this story, and I like how your writting style just flows.



Author's Response:

Thank you :) Next chapter is being edited as we speak! I hope to have it posted before Thanksgiving. 

Reviewer: cullen freak8888 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter Six

Oh my goodness! This story is amazing! I have no idea what is going to happen next and I cannot wait until I read the next chapter. This story just...blows my mind! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you :) 

Reviewer: belladonnajinx Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter Six

This story is great! I almost screamed and panicked when there wasn't a chapter seven!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the delay! :( I actually forgot that I had an account on TWCS. I'll be putting all the updates I've completed on here. If you don't feel like waiting, look for me on ffnet.

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