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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 12:25 PM Title: Epilogue

This is by far one of the best epilogues i have ever read. A lot of times the epilogues seem rushed.  This was the perfect glimpse into their lives!  

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 8

The manager better watch out. I know in my state it's the law a woman can breastfeed anywhere. He could get sued and fined.

Reviewer: Mounds01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 9:23 PM Title: Epilogue

I loved this story, great job!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 8:38 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved the epilogue, and am only sorry you quit writing fan fic several years ago! I think I will read the five chapters of the sequel to this story, though.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 19

The nursery sounds like baby girl heaven, and it was so sweet of Bella to sell her house to the pregnant war widow! I'm thinking that maybe she will get her book published?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 17

Good for them, it makes perfect sense to me!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 16

I'm glad Bella told her boss what to do to himself, and I'm glad she knows how wealthy Edward really is. They ought to just quit dancing around and get married!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 15

The timimg was right and they truly are a family now. That was beautiful!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 14

Sounds like everybody had a real fun Halloween!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 13

That really was a perfect birthday party for the twins, as well as their daddy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

Yes indeed, time to fish or cut bait!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 11

I'm glad they enjoyed their trip through the haunted house, that sort of thing gives me nightmares!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 10

Guess Bella is better at girl talk than she thought. That, or maybe it was the company!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

As close as Rose and Emmett are to Bella and Lily, it figures that Em would warn Edward like he did.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 8

Such fun at the pool, but even more, I thought, when Esme and Alice told those jerks where to get off! What is wrong with some people? It was so sweet when Carlisle told Bella she was one of them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 7

So many people think Seattle is constantly rainy, not knowing how beautiful it can be on nice days! I live in Central Washington, so I really appreciate that view of the city at sunset. I think it went real well for a first date!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 6

Looks to me like everyone is pleased with Edward and Bella meeting and getting to know each other. It was fate that poor little Lily had the colic when she did, since it led to all kind of good stuff for her mama!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 5

This is a really good start for the two single parents, abandoned by their respective spouses! They truly do have a lot in common.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 4

Though it's awful for Lily to be feeling so bad, you're right, they have met! I hope she goes to lunch with Edward and his father!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

I think Carlisle having tats is great! I can see that Bella and Edward need to meet and get to know each other. Since they have Rose and Jasper in common, that may be a possibility.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm already picturing the tattoos on them both.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really love when they meet like this! Very promising beginning.

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 5:57 PM Title: Epilogue

Great story

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 8

I'm still hung up on his locket. Where did you find it?

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 6:18 PM Title: Epilogue

I loved this story! thank you so much for sharing it with us!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

I absolutely love this story so far!! it is so cute!  I have already fallen in love with the characters.  I can't say much more because I am only at the beginning!  Onward I go!

 

PS. That picture of the seattle is GORGEOUS! I gasped!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

I love the locket. Where is it from?

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 7

Washington State....oh how I miss going to the Kitsap Mall and seeing the snow capped mountains in the background....but, there is too much rain there for my arthritic spine and hips!

Reviewer: CEOofMyLife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:40 PM Title: Epilogue

I absolutely loved this story! Great job! :)

Reviewer: KellanLutz355 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2011 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

OMG!!! Esme is too funny! I love this story...but I especially love a guy with tattoos!!!

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 3:08 AM Title: Epilogue

i just love this story:)

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 8

so sweet:)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 13

what a sweet and wonderful chapter

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 9

well with such a busy and hectic life you still have wonderful talent    just so you know you stories are appreciated

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

the bathing suit is so cute and the wonderful storyline over breastfeeding in public is wonderful I never have understood why people get so upset for that when the mother and child are covered.  seriously!!!!!.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 5

loved the chapter

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

small world hey  lol

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 3

love it!!!!  I agree with E who wants a parent to ask about your sex life...   arrrgggg

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

very much likey like  LOL

Reviewer: crazedtwi Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love this story! :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 8:06 PM Title: Epilogue

great story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 17

sorry to hear it will end so soon

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 16

I don't understand, and your is not the first, but girl and guy meet they fall in love, and some how it is implied that girl would break off with guy because he is a millionaire...why? that is like the cherry on top of the sundae. The sundae is great without the cherry is just an added bonus. LOL just my thoughts

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

Not sure how he carried her upstairs, undressed her and redressed her without her waking but I won't nit pick because I really like the story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 11

well done, but I have never been in a haunted huse that ever really scared me

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

sweet story so far

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 5

great

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 2

hot Tattward

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love Ink and Edward

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:03 AM Title: Epilogue

i am truly sorry that you went through the heartbreak you did dear and i hope that as the time has passed it's gotten easier to deal with that being said i want to thank you for writing such an amazing story everything about this made me smile and it was really a wonderful help to the sour mood i was in before i started reading this :D you are brilliant dear :D

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 8

I just absolutely love this story it's sooo cute :D I love the whole dynamic they all have together and  tatted up daddyward and tatlisle are incredibly hot :D brilliant doll I may not review often but I love it and appreciate the time you took to write this :D thank you :D

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 11:16 PM Title: Epilogue

i really did enjoy this story...started this morning and just couldn't stop until I was done!!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:08 AM Title: Epilogue

Excellent story!!! Could not stop reading from beginning to end, that rarely happens with me. Thank you for a very entertaining, exceptional story!!

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 10

awww love it

Reviewer: jess2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 1:07 AM Title: Epilogue

this was an amazing story! i loved it

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 11

There goes my heart.  I would have went into arest mode instantly.  LOL

Reviewer: Aliceee Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 6

O MY GOSH

A date with Edward Cullen. Amazng.

Uhm yeah  love your story.

You know you have many fans in Germany. You know it's five o'clock in the morning and i read your Fanfic. Crazy, isn't it? :D

in Love 

Albi

Reviewer: Aliceee Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

i really like your story.

Ed's so adorabel and his littel Wandy ist just like Alice :D

in love

Albi

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 4:34 AM Title: Epilogue

It was a beautiful story and ty for enjoyed my day.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 19

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 17

good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 16

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 15

Beautiful....Good job for the sex scene.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

Another good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

another good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 12

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 11

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

good chapter again.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 9

good chapter.

Reviewer: sclark0925 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 3:13 PM Title: Epilogue

Beautiful story!  I sighed in relief when I realized that this would be a drama free story!  Sometimes it's nice to see a happy love story from start to finish without crazy ex-boyfriends and pyscho almost rapists, ya know!?  I love these characters. 

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 8

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 7

It was very cute...I liked this chapter

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 5

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

Another good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Like the first chapter...hope the rest will be good.

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 4:16 AM Title: Epilogue

OMG *squee* So lovely, not too much drama, a true happily ever after!

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 13

Im so in love with this story!!!!! I would love to see the tattoos but I cant find them... :(

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 3

hahahaha Tanya is a cat!!!!! I love me some TattooDaddyward!

Reviewer: ELLC Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

love it

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:51 PM Title: Epilogue

I loved this story, when I first read this over on fanfiction.net, I was intrigued, and then when I couldnt read more of the chapters over there, and I realized you posted the chapters over here I knew I had to sign up on here so I can read this. I loved this ending, I loved that Bella and Edward ended up being happy and adding to their little family. I am sad that this is the end, but it was a perfect ending to a perfect story.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 19

I loved this chapter. That was nice that mostly everyone had a part in how the nursery was to be designed.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 17

I loved this chapter. I am overjoyed at the fact that they are moving in together, they were practically already a family.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

I freaking loved this chapter. Loved the Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 15

I loved this chapter. I loved how Edward didnt want to bother Bella at work, but he called her anyway because he knew that Car needed her, it was so sad that Car broke his arm. I loved how Bella was with Car and Wendy. I loved the Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 14

I like how Bella and Edward and the kids are becoming their own little family. I loved this chapter.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 13

I loved this chapter. This chapter was filled with sweetness, and awesomeness. I loved the Bella and Edward, and their I love You's. Car and Wendy are so cute.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 12

I loved Edwards POV. Cas, Rosa and Violet made me laugh.

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Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

I loved this chapter. I loved their date.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 10

I loved this chapter. Loved the girls chat. Alice can surely ramble.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 9

I loved this chapter. Wendy and Car made me laugh.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 8

OMG! I totally loved this chapter. I loved the Bella and Edward and their time at the pool with the others. Esme made me laugh when she gave those men a piece of her mind.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 7

So I seriously thought that Bella and Edward were totally getting it on in the beginning of the chapter. Sneaky thing you did with the beginning of the chapter. Their date was so sweet.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

I totally loved this chapter. I had a feeling that Esme was going to play matchmaker. Car is so cute.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 5

I loved this chapter.

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Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

Aww. Poor Lily. I loved the Bella and Edward, I was wondering when they were going to see each other again.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

Esme made me laugh, Its so sweet to see Edward with his kids.

Reviewer: divalicious23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

I loved this.

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