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Reviewer: tinaspice02 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chess Strategies

I absolutely this love this story!!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chess Strategies

Oh no damn cliffy lol...wonder whats wrong? Edward is gonna o crazy with caolinanging up om her

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chess Strategies

you are so bad... end button.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2012 12:42 AM Title: A Time Out

Klaus , Tyler Lockwood and a full moon. Not a good combo!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 10:41 PM Title: A Time Out

Oh its getting good

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 9:05 PM Title: The Swan Prophecy

Hes the one she has to kill

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 7:25 PM Title: The Swan Prophecy

ugh

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 7:39 PM Title: Good News, Bad News

So......does this mean Bella will become a vampire sooner than latet?

 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 4:52 PM Title: Good News, Bad News

Omg!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 2:39 PM Title: Good News, Bad News

that sounds awful.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 8:50 AM Title: The Kat and the Swan

Oh no

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 12:08 AM Title: The Kat and the Swan

okay.

Reviewer: lillisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 7:01 PM Title: Prologue

Love it when will another chapter be available?? cant wait!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:59 AM Title: Easy Riders

he has to see her in that leather.. LOL

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 10:09 PM Title: Dances with Wolves

I love this cross over

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 5:36 AM Title: When the Cat's Away

I really like damon and Bella. I know brother and sister, but she softens him and yet he is not giving into her hurting herself.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 3:00 PM Title: When the Cat's Away

Ooh, a day out with the awesome big bro! I'm excited about the next chapter!! Also, I wonder how Bonnie will feel with everyone bar Damon criticizing her decision to help out. I'd be pretty short tempered if I kept saving the town over and over again with my friends just yelling at me for endangering myself. How about a "thank you" every once in a while?

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:27 PM Title: If It's Not One Thing, It's Another

Damon: "Oh my god, are you breaking UP with me?!?!"

I have wondered myself if the Originals would be at all difficult for the Cullens to kill. By all accounts they are faster, stronger and more durable than TVD vamps, and even the originals could be stabbed by wood. If they were just to dismember the body and separate the pieces, that would suffice, would it not?

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:17 PM Title: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?

Aaaand, heeere's Elijah! I'm excited about this new addition! I'm also looking forward to seeing what impact, if any, Jasper's powers will have on the Stefan/Elena/Damon love triangle. If he can feel Elena's mixed emotions and pull towards both of the Salvatores, and Edward can hear her thoughts, this will all come to light much more quickly than in canon.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2012 6:53 AM Title: I Know What It's Like to Lose Her

ugh.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 5:36 PM Title: Prologue

Im familar with twilight, am obessed with it, in fact im obessed with all things vamps lol. I just wanted to know if there were two breeds of vamps. It will be intreseting to see the voliture and the originals find out about each others. Esp since, imo, edwards kind is harder to kill then damons kind. Damons kind was started by magic, who knows what started edwards kind lol. So the true werewolves, not shapeshifters like jake, are they the ones casius was talking about in breaking dawn? Or will they be 2 different breeds of werewolves, 3 if you count shapeshifters?

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:42 PM Title: Welcome to Forks

So hows this work, theres two forms of vamps? I no vd vamps really are vamps formed fom magic.



Author's Response:

I am not sure how familiar you are with Stephenie Meyers interpretation of the Vampire but it is quite different from the VD version (which is more like the Hollywood depiction of the Vampire).  In Twilight, the vampires have cold, marble-like skin, cannot ingest anything but blood, sparkle in the sunlight (as opposed to burning), have red eyes (human blood drinkers) or butterscotch eyes (animal blood drinkers).  So, in essence, there are two breeds of the Vampire species that exist in this "universe".

Reviewer: IamRomance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 6:29 AM Title: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?

i love this story so good so well written i cannot wait for the next chapter so excited

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 6:04 PM Title: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?

oh wow. Elijah, I think he is really cute.  I like his personality too.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 11:57 PM Title: Welcome to Mystic Falls

I'm looking forward to Elena meeting Isabella!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 1:39 PM Title: Welcome to Mystic Falls

ahh later maybe!  Well well we might have ignition Houston.

Reviewer: lillisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 3:05 AM Title: Welcome to Mystic Falls

i love it and you captured all the charactures perfectly please finish the story i cant wait to read more chapters!!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 11:19 AM Title: Leaving on a Jet Plane

Okay, so I'm glad the Katherine/Elena doppelgänger issue is coming up... finally! I was worried that Bella was just going to show up, see Elena, and then start throwing stuff around trying to kill her. As established by Rosalie, our girl's got balls of steel, and when it comes to protecting her boys, she will surprise everyone by throwing down! My favourite line of the chapter comes, unsurprisingly, from Damon. You've really got him down, in my humble opinion! 

"Oh, please" Damon jeered at Edward. "What are you...Mormon?"

I guess it's especially funny because S. Meyer is Mormon... Thanks for sharing! I loved it!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:05 AM Title: Dances with Wolves

Methinks Bella is being overly harsh to Jacob. After all, didn't Edward throw her across the room to protect her from Jasper on her birthday? Jacob didn't even do anythong except look at her darkly. Aaand, once again, Damon makes everything better. This line: 

"Shapeshifter, huh?" Damon's tone was skeptical as he looked off into the distance where Jacob disappeared. "Looked like a damn werewolf to me." 

had me cracking up!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 9:38 AM Title: Directions to Normal

Uh oh. How is Damon going to react to this! In a way, he's probably worse than Edward ever was, because he would rather she hate him but still live through everything than risk her in any way. Loved the Katherine/Elijah interaction at the beginning!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:02 PM Title: Dances with Wolves

Jacob could have killed her so easily!  Wait until he imprints on Sally Sue at the drive in and Bella is a memory.  That is what I  have against Jacob Black.

Reviewer: kymmie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 3:36 AM Title: Dances with Wolves

Lol. Gotta love Damon and his remarks. :)

Reviewer: kymmie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2012 2:49 AM Title: Directions to Normal

Uh oh, lol. Can't wait for more. I love it!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2012 1:11 AM Title: Directions to Normal

bring that part up.. Bella He needs to know.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 2:47 AM Title: Travel Plans

Yep wait on the rest.. It will come. Now that Damon has said she should have been changed maybe "the bunny eaters" will relent.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:44 PM Title: Letters From a Condederate Soldier

These letters were somehow both sweet and utterly believable. There was a bit of Damon snark, but you can hear the gentleness of which his human side is so capable. Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: Yasric Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 4:54 AM Title: An Open Mind

OMG... you had me crying like a baby with Stefan's memories, until Rosalie spoke... I love where this is heading and I can't wait for more...

Reviewer: readerlover0227 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 6:32 PM Title: An Open Mind

that's cool that they are all going to Misytic Falls! Now Bella may get to look through her chest and see all her stuff and the letters from Damon. And meet  Elena and Bonnie!!:D eeeeepppp!!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 5:22 PM Title: An Open Mind

I agree with Alice. Carlisle needs to be there too. well 7 new vampires coming into town and they are the cold variety.. WOOOHOO.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:12 PM Title: Stand by Your Girl

Edward needs to go with her as well as Alice. Or you don't have permission to take our Bella! LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:39 AM Title: A Reluctant Compromise

I am some where with Edward.  I feel the loss of Bella right now because she is at the point of perhaps dying. They can't change her because she won't make it through the change. So. Can the salvatore vampire change her? They are different.

 

Well me oh my.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 4:01 PM Title: Terminal Velocity

well yes die.  Change her or can you?  I think it is time to bring in the Salvatores

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 8:52 PM Title: It's Complicated

I loved Damon trailing off as he realized that the Cullens were dangerous. He's so snarky, and then... survival mode!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:07 PM Title: It's Complicated

Now listen here you are delaying the good part. The part where all the vampires discuss who they are and what they do then the fact that Bella maybe or probably is their baby sister.  Then Edward will calm down. I hope!

Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:09 AM Title: History Lessons

I really enjoy this story and I was wondering if you would add an extra chapter or write a longer chapter when you update this story on the 10th of this month as it is my birthday. Even if you do not, I really enjoy this story and thank you for finally writing a decent crossover of Twilight and Vampire Diaries.

Reviewer: kymmie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:50 PM Title: History Lessons

Uh oh! :). I was hoping you would have the confrontation in this one. I can't wait to see what happens when they all find out about each other. 

Reviewer: Jenn0509 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:03 PM Title: History Lessons

Awesome! Keep it up! :)

-Jenn

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 2:06 PM Title: Revelations

ut oh!

Reviewer: KansasAsh Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 3:07 PM Title: Revelations

I love this story!  It is so addictive & I watch my email for notices that it's been updated.  It's well written & the different characters seem to be meshing well! 

Reviewer: alana21gr Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:42 PM Title: Prologue

Thank u very much for this fic, is adicted!

I'm very intregued to know how are you going to explain the diferent kind of vampires that exist in your universe jajaja.

Take care

Muxus

Reviewer: kkahiapo Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 11:09 AM Title: Jigsaw Pieces

Ahhhhhhh I need to read what's gonna happen next!! I'm so taken with this story you have no idea! I'm so completely invested and offer my sincere gratitude to you for writing such an interesting, well thought out story!

Reviewer: IamRomance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 10:19 PM Title: Jigsaw Pieces

love this story, love that both my fav vampire stories are being meshed together and so well at that, cnat wait for more.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:51 PM Title: Jigsaw Pieces

Oh, dip! With Meyer vamps being so much stronger than TVD vamps, I don't think a confrontation between the dynamic dastardly duo and the vicious vamp Victoria would have our boys coming out alive. So, I'll let them just avoid one another for now! That raises an interesting point, however. What would happen if a Twilight vampire's venom entered the bloodstream of a TVD vampire? Or if someone with vampire blood in their system was killed by a venomous vampire? Maybe they'd be like a new hybrid between the two. No sparkles in the sun, maybe a bit of a shimmer and sunburn? A heart that still beats blood and venom? Not as strong as Twilight vamps, but stronger than TVD vamps and able to compel people? Hm... so many ideas! Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:22 PM Title: Cerebral Mystery

Well, I don't know any of the medical jargon, but it certainly seems like you do! I like the medical explanation of what these memories/visions are doing to (Isa)Bella's brain. Nicely written!

Reviewer: jadedrose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 9:13 PM Title: Through the Guidance of a Witch

OMG! This is soooo good! I want more! I need more! MORE!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Teambellaedward1982 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:35 PM Title: Through the Guidance of a Witch

:)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:20 PM Title: Bared Souls Lay Bleeding

Now Damon knows Edward is a vampire.  Jacob said Leech, but tht is enough description.

Reviewer: kymmie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:23 PM Title: Cerebral Mystery

Uh oh. When will she find out her "dreams" are real. I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:22 PM Title: Cerebral Mystery

Oh my if they would all just sit down and TALK to EACH OTHER.  :-)

Reviewer: kymmie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 1:13 PM Title: A Tangible Fear

Oh poor Bella. I wonder when they will figure it out about the reincarnation. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 12:18 AM Title: A Tangible Fear

Oh Carlisle Edward has to know. Then he has to prepare himself to not let Bella down. He has to act (if it is only an act) like he wants her to be a vampire. It was just time. He does NOT want to loose her.  Man oh man I hope that is the case.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:22 PM Title: Paint a Disturbing Picture

I would think the same thing a brain tumor.  Causes same symptoms except for the halucinations of being Damon's sister. Those are odd.

 

Reviewer: Yasric Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:56 AM Title: A Rare Sunny Day in Forks

OMG... This is the first The vampire diaries/Twilight fanfic I read here and let me tell... It's awesome... loved from chapter one. The way you describe everything, I can see it happening... really loved it... now I'm curious if Bella regain her memory or if it just a flashback to convince Damon that she's his sister... I'll be waiting...

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 1:00 AM Title: A Rare Sunny Day in Forks

Edward, Carlisle. hurry.

Reviewer: readerlover0227 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:35 PM Title: Prologue

Awesome chapter! :) please updated soon I can't wait for more!! Best Twilight/ Vampire Diaries story!:)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:04 PM Title: Avoidance of a Scandal

I am more or less lost here. Yes Katherine wanted to send Isabella away. Why? scandal? Does that mean someone might think her pregnant?  Scandal?



Author's Response:

Hi,

I'm not sure how familiar you are with 19th century social rules but back then, a young umarried woman caught unchaperoned let alone "in flagrante delicto" with a man (even if forced) would cause unprecedented scandal and gossip within a community and cause her and perhaps her family to be shunned.  So such matters, if they can be dealt with quietly will be.

I hope that was a helpful explanation.

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:56 PM Title: All is Not Well in Paradise

Awesome

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:50 PM Title: All is Not Well in Paradise

she is still sick.  He is such an ass. The thing is if she wanted to go to the res. She should have gone if she had to walk.  When you are right you don't cave in or he will go there each time. 

 

 

 

Reviewer: kpiercedoppleganger Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:23 PM Title: All is Not Well in Paradise

Good chapter, I'm excited to read some interaction bewteen Bella and her brothers.

Reviewer: readerlover0227 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:30 PM Title: All is Not Well in Paradise

First of all -Great chapter!!! I love it and makes me want more! :) Second- is this a E/B or a B/D just asking since she is and isn't their sister thing. 

Reviewer: kpiercedoppleganger Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

Excitingly awaiting the next chapter.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

Elena is so very much like Bella.

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:05 PM Title: Something's Off

good start, please keep this up.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:07 PM Title: Her Name is Bella

I hope you keep this up.  This could be really good.

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 1:49 AM Title: Prologue

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