Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:45 AM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
ahh and so we meet Tanya. Always with the jealousy of Bella.. I hope Bella is alright!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:43 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
England at last and Carlisle has so much to think on.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:25 AM Title: The Demands of Duty
How sad they must be for him to leave.. It's they way they must live though. Love the story. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:22 PM Title: Presentation of Future Queen
I hope all goes well..
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:08 PM Title: Bon Voyage
Well we shall nickname them bunnies lol that was so sweet and sensual I am falling in love with these character
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:08 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
peace and quiet before they have to go back to their royal lives.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 9:23 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
They are too cute for words. Im so glad that they are enjoying each other. I feel like its all to soon and the other shoe will drop.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 9:15 PM Title: Bon Voyage
They are taking to married life well. I'm glad that the King showed Bella kindness before she left. Not knowing when she would see her family again must of been heart wrenching.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:57 PM Title: Altering Plans
awww young love..I would be sad to see my family one last time as well..
Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:24 PM Title: Altering Plans
So we got a small peek that King Charles does hold some love for his bb girl. Love that E is so impressed with her mind
Date: 28 Jan 2011 7:02 PM Title: Bliss
OH my how embarrassing! I could not imagine having to have witnesses!! I am so glad they are well matched.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:50 PM Title: A Day For Miracles
YAY!!!!! OH I am so happy they are wed and happy in it.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:44 PM Title: Bliss
Oh the creepy old men were gross but a historical evil lol I loved it so well done my god they have it already huh!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:41 PM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
I love that Alice has taken Bella under her wing. Angela is great too. I like Jacob as her brother its different and nice.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:34 PM Title: Princely Reformation
Ughhh King Charles is gross. I don't doubt that Bella is afraid that Edward will be that way with her too. I can't wait until they meet!!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:28 PM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles
wow.. I hope Jacob is right.. I'm sure he is. love the story!!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:23 PM Title: The Mind of A Prince
I truly hope that Edward isn't like her father and cavortes about on her.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:06 PM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
Another great chapter. I love this story and can't wait to read more. I am so glad that I am reading it completed so that i do not have to wait for updates. on to the next chapter.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:55 PM Title: A Day For Miracles
Oh that was lovely I do hate that King Charles is so disgusting in this but it was the way
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:52 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess
What a great story!! I look forward to reading more.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:09 PM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
OH running to read the wedding and the meeting!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 4:45 PM Title: Princely Reformation
Oh cause she is that girl Edward. UGH he's going to feel so stupid for even thinking of a mistress when he sees who she IS lol
Date: 28 Jan 2011 3:59 PM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles
oh how fun when they figure it out so excited
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:20 AM Title: The Mind of A Prince
oh he is a cad but love Angela
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:06 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
oh is Edward her Tony and she his Bella lovely so excited for the wedding day!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:50 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess
Love a great period fic can't wait to read more
Date: 27 Jan 2011 6:22 PM Title: Epilogue
Very sweet Epi. I enjoyed your story. Thank you for writing.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 6:11 PM Title: Balancing Duties
This was a sweet chapter showing Bella's struggle to leave her children and become the Queen again. Edward is so good to her and I love the emotions you show in both of these characters. I have enjoyed this story.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 5:53 PM Title: The Birth of Two Heirs
A Prince and a Princess delivered safely! I love the names. Enjoyed.
I liked the excerpt from The Children of Creation.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 5:44 PM Title: A Critical Choice
Poor Bella having to go through Alice's difficult birthing as she waited for her own children to be born. But Yay! Alice came through ok and has a lovely little girl. I liked the name too! Yes, it's all about finding balance. I am sure Bella and Edward's love will keep them on the right path.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 5:02 PM Title: Embracing the Crown
I had wondered when Renee thought Bella was showing a lot more than she did at the same time in her pregnancies. So twins. I am going for a boy and a girl. The best of both worlds! You've already picked names...so I won't go there! Bella are now King and Queen. Alice is having her baby! Enjoying.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 4:52 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment
So James...eh! I loved Bella setting him in his place and telling him he would soon be 'worm food'. All of Tanya's family were in on it or coerced. I think it the judgement was just. King Calisle could have killed them all to make an example of them. Hopefully they will be broken enough to not try any retribution. So it looks like Edward and Bella will be taking over England soon. That's good and bad. They will be able to reign as they want, but it will also be a heavy burden. Enjoying.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 4:32 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
So I wonder who Tanya will name that will end up being the person who killed Newton? Will it be someone that will totally surprise them? One of the counselors? Some of those men did not seem happy at Bella and Edward's news of an heir, or that she will be prominent in the political talks. I wonder what Tanya's fate will be? I thought it good and clever of Bella to send for Edward to hear the ladies talk with Tanya. It shows trust. Enjoying.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 2:49 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
I was hoping that Jacob would be able to visit soon! Not only Jacob, but Renee too! This will be happy Christmas for Bella. I am glad the war seems to be over before it started. There will always be people wanting to stir up trouble for power and money. Bella and Edward saw that clearly in the faces of the advisors of the court. Enjoying.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 2:40 PM Title: A Snake Hiding in the Garden
I wonder who the snake in their midst is? I have a feeling that the royal women will find out! I am sure their men would be freaking out if they knew though! LOL! Enjoying.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 2:19 PM Title: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War
Even after she's gone Tanya's bitterness still lingers. Sigh. So Bella wowed the Italian ambassadors. This war that is looming needs to be handled with diplomacy. Maybe it will keep it from happening. The painting of Bella that Jacob painted and sent her was so sweet. He is such a good brother to her.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 2:09 PM Title: Banished
Good riddence to Tanya. She was really delusional thinking she could start rumors about Bella and not raise the wrath of Edward. I sort of feel sorry for Kate, she didn't have a choice in what she did. I like Rosalie and Emmett certainly does too! Enjoying.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 1:56 PM Title: Aftermath
What intrigue is in the wind? What is going to threaten them and their families? I am glad that Bella was pregnant and not being poisened. I am glad that Tanya is gone, though I'm sure she will have her spies about. Enjoying.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 7:31 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
So Bella was integrated into the council meeting and she contributed well, pleasing Edward most of all. So I am worried about Bella. I thought she might be pregnant, is it possible she's being poisened by Tanya? I hope it's the former. Enjoying.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 7:20 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Yeah, I would think that Bella would like to have Edward back in more ways than one. She misses him so and this whole situation with Lady Tanya sucks. I do hope that Tanya is sent home and banned from court...that probably would be too easy though. Bella does need to watch her back. Oh I loved mama bear Alice going after Tanya and then her and Rosalie's laughter afterwards. Enjoying.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 7:04 AM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Carlisle keeps true to his word and Bella gets to sit in on the audience. She decided well with the man who wanted to start the school. Oh but I can see that Tanya is going to be a thorn in Bella's side. I hope she can get together with Lady Rosalie without Tanya. So is Bella pregnant already?! Enjoying.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 6:55 AM Title: Confidante
Gossip is an ugly thing that sometimes grows a life of it's own. I hope Bella can stay immune to their words. It's wonderful that Carlisle confided in Bella letting her know his plans for abdication and her insertion into the strategy meetings. Very progressive of King Carlisle. I can understand Edward's frustration. His family and country seem to be so much more enlightened that that of France. Enjoying.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 6:46 AM Title: The Demands of Duty
"Edward slowly leaned down to capture the lips he had been teasing lovingly with his own, savoring the subtle sweetness. It pained Edward to leave his Bella, but he also knew that this would not be the first time that his duty would force them to spend time apart. His only hope was that these separations would be few and far between." This is so difficult for both of them. They are the futur rulers and also ambassadors. They will always have to put duty first before personal wants or needs. Enjoying the way you are telling this tale.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 6:33 AM Title: Presentation of Future Queen
Back to the real world. Edward seems pretty anxious about his past conquests and what they may do to hurt Bella. Bella noticed them too. I hope they talk about this, though this is Edward past, it could affect their future. I love the secret code they devised to remind each other of their love. Enjoying.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 6:06 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
This interlude at Nottingham is turning into an extended honeymoon. The lovemaking outdoors was perfect, both feeling it as a fulfilled fantasy of Italy and their hill. Very sweet and hot. Their love comes shining through. Enjoyed.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:49 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
There's always a war looming somewhere isn't there? Sigh.
Did we see a bit of Jealousward when Garrett kissed Bella's hand? If he was bothered by that...wait until he really sees someone flirting with his wife. LOL! Enjoying!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:24 AM Title: Bon Voyage
I wonder what te real world is going to do to their married bliss? These two were able to extend their honeymoon throughout the journey to England. Merry old Britain...a new world for Bella to discover. Enjoying.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:07 AM Title: Altering Plans
"As the meeting wore on, Edward watched in fascination as his wife took in all of the information discussed while the other wives found seats across the room, looking bored and wanting to be elsewhere. Her eyes studied the maps and marked locations from afar with curious eyes, her sharp mind working nonstop." I loved watching Bella show her intelligence. She kept it from her father, but she couldn't keep it from her Tony...and he is pleased. It is too bad they have to leave so soon...but I am looking forward to England. Oh and Jessica is a jealous fool and Charlie is still an ass! Enjoying.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 3:25 AM Title: Bliss
I had to come over here to read the uncensored version. I didn't realize it was censored or I would have started this story here first!
Edward was a skilled and tender lover. Bella's first time was not without pain, but it was most definitely a night for both of them to remember! I love the way you wrote Edward's emotions. His love and his need to control the lust he felt for Bella, afraid to scare her. Enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2011 8:29 PM Title: Presentation of Future Queen
Great chapter! But it only takes 20 minutes to get to whitehall from kensington
Date: 24 Jan 2011 2:27 AM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
love it
Date: 12 Jan 2011 10:12 PM Title: Epilogue
Wow I've just finished this story and it was amazing. I don't know what movie you had used for the ending but it does not matter. It is awesome. Thank you
Author's Response:
LOL...I'm glad you liked it...I sort of stole the end of Titanic ;)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2011 3:16 PM Title: Epilogue
wonderful storu this epilogue hav me chills
Than you for sharing this
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2011 2:56 PM Title: The Birth of Two Heirs
great great story
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2011 10:38 PM Title: Altering Plans
hooray, wondeed how Emmett was going to get to Rosalie
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2011 9:29 PM Title: A Day For Miracles
;)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2011 8:55 PM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles
poor bella
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2011 7:37 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess
different, suspect that Tony is Edward Anthony
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:55 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess
WOW, exciting to read.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2011 10:08 AM Title: Epilogue
That was so beautiful!!! It is sad that the story did end but i am happy that it ended when they were old and grey!!! I loved this story!!! Thanks for a great story!! BIG FAN!!!!!
Date: 30 Dec 2010 3:44 AM Title: Epilogue
Just spent the whole day reading this non-stop...loved it. Thanks for sharing it!
Author's Response:
Awww Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 25 Dec 2010 10:07 PM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful story and I enjoyed reading it.
I even got a little teary-eyed at the end of the epilogue. Happily ever after. *sigh*
I have read a few of your one-shots and plan on reading more. Happy Holidays. And happy typing!
CrimsonR
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 1:56 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess
Your stories are so...INCREDIBLE if thats even a word to describe them. I just finished Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights it was.....AWESOME and even in this first chapter you have me ENTRANCED. Your stories speak more to me then the books. Dont get me wrong i LOVE twilight but your spin on these stories and these charactors is a new and refreshing outlook.
Author's Response:
Awe...thank you! I'm so glad you enjoy them. They keep me sane and happy! I think I'd go crazy if I couldn't do Twilight fanfic. I just published my first novel through the TWCS Pub house earlier this month and am supposed to be working on the sequel, but I just can't resist a good Twilight fanfic. I hope you enjoy the rest!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2010 12:33 AM Title: Epilogue
OMG... that is by far the best ending I have read so far. I truly enjoyed this story.
Thank you for sharing it.
Date: 11 Dec 2010 9:52 AM Title: A Day For Miracles
Great story - glad it worked out for them :) (though I don't think I could have forgiven Edward as easily as Bella did)
Date: 11 Dec 2010 8:14 AM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles
Oh my goodness, Tony is Edward, isn't he?!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2010 10:38 AM Title: Epilogue
I stayed up and read the whole story. It was very sweet and I liked it, until the epi. It was just sad and depressing. I mean, I get they were together in the end, but it wasn't the same.. Knowing she lived without Edward for 25 years was beyond sad and as I write this tears are running down my face.
I just hoped for a happy ending.
I remember you mentioned this was your first 3rd person story...you did very well!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:35 PM Title: Epilogue
very good story. excellent ending too.
Date: 03 Nov 2010 12:07 AM Title: Bliss
eeeek! Having old men listen to you on your wedding night! Bella is a trooper!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 10:01 PM Title: A Day For Miracles
Wonderful!!!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 9:19 PM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
Poor Bella. I'm glad she only has to wait one more day to find out Angela is going with her. I love the way your writing is very reflective of the period.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 7:24 PM Title: Princely Reformation
I am loving Edward!!!!!!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 1:53 PM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles
I am so hoping that Tony ends up being Edward!!!!!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:55 AM Title: The Mind of A Prince
Edward is nicer than I expected.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:28 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
Another wonderful chapter! Thank you.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:48 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess
I enjoy your writing! Thank you.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:43 PM Title: Bliss
apart from the dudes listening - it was a perfect wedding nite hehe lol
Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:03 PM Title: A Day For Miracles
YEAH!!!!!!!!!! That only happens in books :))))
Date: 01 Nov 2010 8:46 PM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
WHAT?????? while someone is there in the room with them - i never knew that! Can you imagine!!! HOLY shit!!!
But brilliant all the same!!! i love it!
Date: 01 Nov 2010 8:38 PM Title: Princely Reformation
OHHHH my good Lord! Im so glad he is gonna take Angela with thank goodness for that!
xx brilliant!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2010 8:12 PM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles
Fabulous chapter
xoxox
Date: 01 Nov 2010 7:51 PM Title: The Mind of A Prince
OHHH i love her!!! I cant stop reading - its gonna be an all nighter again!
xx
Date: 01 Nov 2010 7:35 PM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
hehehe im hooked!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2010 7:23 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess
OHHH wow im gonna love this story!!!! Ill try and update every chapter but im terrible with that! I like reading of the blogs instead of FF.
Pictures and Banners are very HOT!!
xxx :D
Date: 25 Oct 2010 7:43 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess
I am really terrible about reviewing stories I read and I apologize for not reviewing each chapter but I do want you to know how much I enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it with all of us.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 9:36 AM Title: Epilogue
whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....i'm crying so much right now...i dry heaved a bit too lol...but seriously it was sad to know she lived almost 25 years after edward died...i wouldv'e given up the same day...that ending was really sad...as soon as i read the first line i started tearing up...im also sad that it came to an end but all good things must
XOXOBella*DeOnnaOXOX
Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:18 AM Title: Bon Voyage
of course edward was excited...he just gave her a pearl necklace...who in their right mind wouldn't get excited...lol...i love te story so far....but i know drama is coming...i can feel it...great job.
XOXOBella*DeOnnaOXOX
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 12:29 AM Title: Epilogue
WOW!! Fucking WOW!! What a fantastic story!! I started reading it yesterday morning and just now finished it.
The Epilogue is amazing and I am soo pleased with it. It's hard to imagine Edward and Bella dieing in any story but the way you ended this one with them being together once again, is awesome!!
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I love this "frame of time" and need to watch the Tutors (I believe that was the name of the show that inspired you to write this story).
You did a great job and I wanted you to know how much I enjoyed it!!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 3:19 AM Title: Epilogue
couldnt read the last one, i hate the ones where they skip ahead just to die..but i liked this story..i wish this last chapter wasnt here.. this story would be better without it.. seriously. but i like this, other then the cliche death ending.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:43 AM Title: Bliss
That was one of the better honeymoon scenes that I've read. It was poetic and lovely. It's so very nice read an M rated story and not to have Bella being spanked and forced to submit to a sadist. I honestly feel that it would have been better without the oral part. For me, it detracted from the believability. Yes, it's fiction, I know.
I can tell you have put a lot of time and research into this story, and I thank you for your efforts.
I truly loved how you worded this chapter. You should be proud. Wish I could write so well.
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 11:56 PM Title: Epilogue
This is a great story! The end was beautiful!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:29 AM Title: Epilogue
Oh, my God. *happy tears* Soooo very sweeeeeeeeet!
Adorable story with an absolutely wonderful ending!
Thank you for sharing!
Hugs,
Gwen
Author's Response:
Awe...thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. Have to ask....is that your real name or are you a huge Dr. Who/Torchwood fan? Gotta admit I love them both!
Date: 18 Aug 2010 2:03 PM Title: Epilogue
I think this is your best chapter. I LOVE LOVE how you wrote it. I was sad when I was first reading it and realized that Edward had died but you made it all better. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!! This was an amazing story. You did a wonderful job writing it. I will miss getting updates on it.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 17 Aug 2010 9:40 PM Title: Balancing Duties
Love how you have written Bella and Edward both taking care and time with the babies. I am also glad that Bella was able to tear herself away from the babies just for a little while.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 9:26 PM Title: The Birth of Two Heirs
LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter. Great Job!!!
Date: 17 Aug 2010 4:24 PM Title: A Critical Choice
Lots of things happening in this chapter. Love it.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 2:34 PM Title: Embracing the Crown
I so enjoy reading this story. I love how you have Edward and Bella talking about their children. It just seems so real. Love it.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 12:15 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
I am glad that Bella and Edward get to continue their time as newly weds in honeymoon. But I can't help but wonder what has Carlisle so concerned.