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Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 11:04 AM Title: Epilogue

oh how perfect.. I'm in tears... it is the perfect ending... I love it.. great job...

Reviewer: twi-pixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:02 AM Title: Epilogue

*sob* It's over? *sob*

That was amazing!

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 7:57 AM Title: Epilogue

Thanks for sharing your talent

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 6:27 AM Title: Epilogue

Such a beautiful ending. It couldn't have been more perfect.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 6:15 AM Title: Epilogue

I just cried through this entire chapter. I can't remember the last time I cried so much reading a fic..... I'm thinking it was way back when I read "The Best Man" :0) I loved your story. I am happy that Bella got to say goodbye to her children and grandchildren and that her first 2 babies were there with her in the end. The best part was Edward meeting her and saying that he never really left that he'd just been waiting for her. (There I go crying.... again.... ) :0) Great job! I'm going to add you to my fav authors. I really like your stories and your a great writer. So sad this ones over.

Reviewer: cshorte Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:23 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved it!!! Beautiful ending!!

Reviewer: hbayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:37 AM Title: Epilogue

I have loved this story! I always get so excited when I see the update in my e-mail! This chapter made me cry, but it was beautiful! I'm so glad she got to be with Edward again! Thank you for this great story!

Reviewer: Heatherstwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:27 AM Title: Bliss

A++++

Reviewer: Heatherstwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:15 AM Title: A Day For Miracles

I just have to say it again  = really love this

Reviewer: Heatherstwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:08 AM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities

I couldn't even imagine witnesses LOL.

Reviewer: Heatherstwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:04 AM Title: Princely Reformation

This is so well written!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:04 AM Title: Epilogue

Great story!

Reviewer: Heatherstwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:58 AM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles

A+

Reviewer: Heatherstwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:52 AM Title: The Mind of A Prince

Really good. Great writitng. Hopefully he will be a faithful hubby.

Reviewer: Heatherstwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:42 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

I really really like this! You need to put this on Twilighted.

Reviewer: Heatherstwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:32 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess

Excellant. Very well written.

Reviewer: meg0407 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:31 AM Title: Epilogue

omg that was so great i always get all sad when one of them died and left the other behind such a great ending i loved this story

Reviewer: tkeaton1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:24 AM Title: Epilogue

OMG... I cried like a baby during that whole thing! Wow! I truly loved this story!

Reviewer: superganhc Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:11 AM Title: Epilogue

Tissues!!  More Tissues over here!!  That was BEAUTIFUL.  Thank you!!

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:56 AM Title: Epilogue

Well, you brought tears to my eyes with that one. Not easily done either. I hate to see this story end. I had hoped we would get more of their rule together. I plan to read this again in it's entirity.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:27 AM Title: Epilogue

wow what a beautiful ending you, even though you had me bawling my eyes.

 

Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:23 AM Title: Epilogue

Jen--You have done it again! Another wonderful story--wonderfully written, and "told".   I truly love your writing style, you can write in modern times; which makes us love all the characters, or in "olden days" and again make us love them truly.  When you write a story, I can always feel their pain, hurt, and most of all their love for one another.

I can truly say only you and one other author can make me feel this way.  I always look forward to your stories.  Please keep up the GREAT WORK!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Messages like this make my effort feel worth it.  Thanks so much for the kind review.  I'm glad you can feel thier pain because honestly I feel it as I write it.  Trust me, however hard a chapter might be for you guys to read, it was at least a little bit harder to write.  If I had a dollar for every time I cried while writing a chapter, I'd be a rich woman!  LOLOL!  Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:17 AM Title: Epilogue

Sniffle, sniffle - goodbye!

Reviewer: twimom817 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:17 AM Title: Epilogue

Wow what an ending. This story was great and the ending had me in tears.

Reviewer: Bad_Days Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:43 AM Title: Epilogue

The has been such a joy to read.  Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us!

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:26 AM Title: Epilogue

That's really sweet!  I love your ending.  All the loose threads tied up, like a good story should end. 

Reviewer: EdwardCullensMate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:21 AM Title: Epilogue

Very emotional heart felt chapter I am sorry this story has come to an end.

Reviewer: Nessa_Yanara Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:18 AM Title: Epilogue

Ah!!! *sighs* that's awesome... so sweet!!!

i loved this story every step of the way, and i'm going to miss it...you had make me cry, laugh and daydream a lot, congratulations, really a great job!

will you write something new??? i hope so.

Hugs, hugs, more hugs and sighs!!!

 

Nessa

 



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Right now I'm still working on my NASCAR story Breakaway and my original story posted here called The Children of Creation.  I'm sure that there will be other Twilight fics that will brew up once Breakaway is done, but I'm going to try to keep it to one fanfic  plus my original for as long as possible.  I do have little plot bunnies scurrying around in my head though...so I"m sure you will see more :)

Reviewer: bookonabeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:59 AM Title: Epilogue

I loved this story, from beginning to end. Thanks so much for taking the time to share it! A tissue warning for this chapter would have been nice;)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:28 AM Title: Epilogue

Your ending could not have been more perfect!  It reminds me of the ending of "The Ghost and Mrs. Muir".  In the end, he comes for her and age drops away leaving only eternity.  Thank you for a perfectly marvelous story!

Reviewer: valenid Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:24 AM Title: Epilogue

Oh, God *sniffle* This is one of the most beautiful, heart-wrenching  endings I've ever read. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. *sob*

I am so sad to see this story end. I'm a sucker for period fics and yours has been tremendously touching and has been very near and dear to my heart. Even though I lurked, I cried and got angry and laughed and loved right along with your characters. I seriously can't wait to read more of your stories.

xo,

Val

PS: I seriously cannot stop crying... 

Reviewer: siledubh Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:54 PM Title: Epilogue

Thanks so much for writing this story, I really enjoyed it!  I hate to see it end but you did a great job with the epilogue.  I shed a few tears bu loved seeing Edward and Bella together again.  I look forward to seeing what you write next!

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:52 PM Title: Epilogue

oh my i cried edward died of a heart attack! what an ending, they had 5 children together and many happy years together, bella out lived everybody except jacob, thankyou for another wonderful story tracy

Reviewer: Maggie79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:45 PM Title: Epilogue

Beautiful ending to a wonderful story.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:45 PM Title: Epilogue

thank you for sucvh a wonderful story it always refreshing to read something i little different

keep up your writing i truly love it.

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:25 PM Title: Epilogue

Great job!

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:16 PM Title: Epilogue

wow!!! what a wonderful way to end a story!!! it was perfect...I love this story and thank you for writing it and posting it up for everyone to read.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:15 PM Title: Epilogue

OMG!  The ending is sad.  I hate it when people have to die in the end but it's worth it.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:13 PM Title: Epilogue

Hard to type through the tears! Beautiful ending even tho' it was so sad for the most part. Together again as they should be.

Thank you for such a beautiful journey.

Reviewer: aphrodite Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:09 PM Title: Epilogue

I LOVED IT!!!!

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:47 PM Title: Epilogue

Aww, a beautiful end to a beautiful story.. Thank you for sharing it with us, and keep writing :)

Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:30 PM Title: Epilogue

*sniff* So wonderful! This was the perfect ending. Amazing job, and congratulations on finishing another story.

~Rachel

Reviewer: luvnrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:20 PM Title: Epilogue

That was good but so sad!!!!!! I am crying!!!!!!!! But I loved it...a very good story!

Reviewer: MinaR Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:49 PM Title: Epilogue

*sob* It's was so beautiful *sob* I actually always imagined that you would end this story like this *sob*  Though Edward dying suddenly like that broke my heart *sob* I loved you story! thanks for sharing it with us.

xoxo

Mina

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:47 PM Title: Epilogue

Beautiful

Reviewer: neeuqpmats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:46 PM Title: Epilogue

Aww. that ending was sweet and perfect.  Loved this story so much!!  Am going to miss it so much.  It has been one of my absolute favourites!!! 

Reviewer: jcf83187 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:41 PM Title: Epilogue

This was such a beautiful story, thank you for writing it.

Reviewer: Pumpkinpie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:29 PM Title: Epilogue

OMG that was such a good story. I loved every minute of it. You are such a great author and love reading your other stories.

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:26 PM Title: Epilogue

Okay so this last one made me cry, but in a good way. This was a very good story I enjoyed it

Reviewer: noshameaddictplt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:14 PM Title: Epilogue

This is one of the best stories ever.  I enjoyed it so much.  Thanks for sharing your gift.

Reviewer: Teddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:14 PM Title: Epilogue

*sniffle*

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:09 PM Title: Epilogue

Crying, crying, crying! I know she lived a good full life, but just the thought of death *shudder* and Edward died of a heart attack *sob* I will miss this story, great job once again!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:03 PM Title: Epilogue

I'm so sad to see it end but it ended beautifully. I love that Edward was there for her and then the ending, I want to show you something was cute. I loved it. thanks again so much

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:49 PM Title: Epilogue

That was beautiful! Well done & thank you for keeping so true to form & era.

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:47 PM Title: Epilogue

Way to go making me bawl my eyes out!  But I sure to love the way you ended this. Reminds me of both the ending of Titanic  AND Somewhere in Time.
Excellent story.  I know that I will be re-reading this again.

Reviewer: jennchris821 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:42 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved the epilogue. Amazing story and I am so sad to see it end. Great job!!!

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:31 PM Title: Epilogue

A wonderful story, and a tear filled epilogue. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:28 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you. This is a beautiful story and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:25 PM Title: Epilogue

Oh wow, that was so good! Loved it!!! Thanks for a great story!

Reviewer: kdc2239 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:22 PM Title: Epilogue

What a perfect ending! Thank you for writing this story, I loved every chapter!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:13 PM Title: Epilogue

I loved it!  I had hoped that Edward and Bella would have died close together but the way you ended it works too.  I am going to miss this story....so besides the orginal fic what else is in the works?

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: julie70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:07 PM Title: Epilogue

i have really enjyoed reading this story..and what an amazing ending..i had tears in my eyes reading it..:)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:00 PM Title: Epilogue

That was an incredible epi!  Amazing job, once again!  I loved it all!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:53 PM Title: Epilogue

i have loved this story...the epi made me cry ..but it was a good cry...thank you for sharing this story

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:50 PM Title: Epilogue

aw that was sad but sweet was that from titanic are what movie? i loved this story thank you!!!



Author's Response:

LOL...yeah, I found myself humming the Celine Dion song as I wrote it.  LOL

Reviewer: siriusyellowlab Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:47 PM Title: Epilogue

Congratulations on finishing another wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

I'm sad to see the story end, but I'm glad that Bella and Edward were reunited in the end.

Reviewer: bothen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:46 PM Title: Epilogue

It's so sad, but very beautiful at the same time! Great story!

Reviewer: leslieljs713 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:45 PM Title: Epilogue

Beautiful, just beautiful. I actually cried.  What a wonderful story.

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:44 PM Title: Epilogue

Oh... Not cheesy at all!! Well maybe... a little... but... still... Who cares?? I loved it!!

I thought it was Lord of the Rings at the begining but nah...

Anyway it is it's amazing and so intense...

xoxo

marianne

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:44 PM Title: Epilogue

sweet ending to a kewl story

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:39 PM Title: Epilogue

oh these dreadful tears!!!!!!!!!!!

Sad to see it end as well!

Nicely written!

Thank you for sharing it with us!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:37 PM Title: Epilogue

So sad, but such a great ending. Finally they are united in heaven again.

It was good how you wrapped everything up and mentioned what happend to the rest of the family.

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 4:02 PM Title: Balancing Duties

aww! very very cute chapter. I love the babies. aww! I love Bella and Edward. aww!

Reviewer: luvnrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 3:06 AM Title: Balancing Duties

How sweet!  I love me some king Edward!!

Reviewer: ChickenKSoup Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 12:14 AM Title: Balancing Duties

Edward is so cute :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:30 PM Title: Balancing Duties

sweet chapter.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:19 PM Title: The Birth of Two Heirs

woo hoo one of each

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:59 PM Title: Balancing Duties

Sweet!! I love the babies!!!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:26 PM Title: A Critical Choice

Such a dramatic chapter. But very good descripted.

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:20 PM Title: Balancing Duties

They really are coming into their own as King/Queen and parents!

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:52 PM Title: The Birth of Two Heirs

They are finally here!  Way to go Bella!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 6:34 AM Title: Balancing Duties

Oh yes, a change in topography to say the very least!  So much time, so many kegals!  I loved the blend of parenthood and politics here.  They really did have a balancing act!  Wonderful!

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:33 AM Title: Balancing Duties

Aww, that was a sweet chapter.  I liked how they reconnected with each other.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 4:57 AM Title: Balancing Duties

Great chapter! I loved every bit of it. :0)

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 4:13 AM Title: Balancing Duties

Great job!

Reviewer: reesessweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:44 AM Title: Balancing Duties

awww...what a great chapter. i really love that you made edward and bella be such progressive thinkers. they knew the importance of education among their people, especially for the future. i don't think many rulers back then valued education as highly, seeing as most of the poor didn't even know how to read back then.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:43 AM Title: The Birth of Two Heirs

I loved the birth of the Prince and Princess...what great names. I'm a little sad to know this story is nearing the end.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:36 AM Title: Balancing Duties

loved it!!! i can't believe its almost over!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:27 AM Title: Balancing Duties

Thank you. Such a beautiful story. I am sorry to see it conclude.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:14 AM Title: Balancing Duties

I loved it!  I know we are getting to the end.... I am soooo sad!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: siriusyellowlab Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:29 AM Title: Balancing Duties

It's just wonderful to see the new family getting settled into everyday life. Sigh. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Bedivere Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:07 AM Title: Balancing Duties

I'm so happy I found this story and got the chance to read it =D

Thanks!

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:58 AM Title: Balancing Duties

Awwwwwwww! That was a great chapter, babe! I'm so glad you made this king Edward so different from all the other kings. Most would not have waiting for their wives to continue with sex. Also, don't think I could have handled a wet nurse either. Gross! Thanks for a great chapter.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:01 PM Title: Balancing Duties

That is a nice ending to a great story,  I will miss this story.

Reviewer: cshorte Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 10:49 PM Title: Balancing Duties

Loved it!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:38 PM Title: Balancing Duties

That was amazing!  I am so happy Bella decided against the use of a wet nurse, I never really understood why nobles did that, breast feeding creates a special bond between mother and baby.  I loved it all!  Cannot wait to see what the epi has in store for us :)

Reviewer: wish0011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:27 PM Title: Balancing Duties

Yay. some nice fluff with Bella and Edward and the twins! A very nice chapter!

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:22 PM Title: Balancing Duties

Thank you for the quick update. Well, one more chapter to go. I really enjoyed reading this story.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:11 PM Title: Balancing Duties

aww that whole school thing was great. I loved that they gave him what they did and then they went and got some. lol poor Bella. she was dying that whole entire time she was in that room. :( poor thing. I'm sad to see this go. thanks so much for the hard work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:48 PM Title: Balancing Duties

So sweet. Happy that they think of themselves as parents first and rulers second.

Sad this will be ending with the epi next but it was a great ride! Thanks for such a beautiful and loving story.

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