Date: 21 Jun 2010 11:04 AM Title: Epilogue
oh how perfect.. I'm in tears... it is the perfect ending... I love it.. great job...
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:02 AM Title: Epilogue
*sob* It's over? *sob*
That was amazing!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 7:57 AM Title: Epilogue
Thanks for sharing your talent
Date: 21 Jun 2010 6:27 AM Title: Epilogue
Such a beautiful ending. It couldn't have been more perfect.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 6:15 AM Title: Epilogue
I just cried through this entire chapter. I can't remember the last time I cried so much reading a fic..... I'm thinking it was way back when I read "The Best Man" :0) I loved your story. I am happy that Bella got to say goodbye to her children and grandchildren and that her first 2 babies were there with her in the end. The best part was Edward meeting her and saying that he never really left that he'd just been waiting for her. (There I go crying.... again.... ) :0) Great job! I'm going to add you to my fav authors. I really like your stories and your a great writer. So sad this ones over.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:23 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved it!!! Beautiful ending!!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:37 AM Title: Epilogue
I have loved this story! I always get so excited when I see the update in my e-mail! This chapter made me cry, but it was beautiful! I'm so glad she got to be with Edward again! Thank you for this great story!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:15 AM Title: A Day For Miracles
I just have to say it again = really love this
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:08 AM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
I couldn't even imagine witnesses LOL.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:04 AM Title: Princely Reformation
This is so well written!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:58 AM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles
A+
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:52 AM Title: The Mind of A Prince
Really good. Great writitng. Hopefully he will be a faithful hubby.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:42 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
I really really like this! You need to put this on Twilighted.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:32 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess
Excellant. Very well written.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:31 AM Title: Epilogue
omg that was so great i always get all sad when one of them died and left the other behind such a great ending i loved this story
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:24 AM Title: Epilogue
OMG... I cried like a baby during that whole thing! Wow! I truly loved this story!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:11 AM Title: Epilogue
Tissues!! More Tissues over here!! That was BEAUTIFUL. Thank you!!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:56 AM Title: Epilogue
Well, you brought tears to my eyes with that one. Not easily done either. I hate to see this story end. I had hoped we would get more of their rule together. I plan to read this again in it's entirity.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:27 AM Title: Epilogue
wow what a beautiful ending you, even though you had me bawling my eyes.
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:23 AM Title: Epilogue
Jen--You have done it again! Another wonderful story--wonderfully written, and "told". I truly love your writing style, you can write in modern times; which makes us love all the characters, or in "olden days" and again make us love them truly. When you write a story, I can always feel their pain, hurt, and most of all their love for one another.
I can truly say only you and one other author can make me feel this way. I always look forward to your stories. Please keep up the GREAT WORK!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Messages like this make my effort feel worth it. Thanks so much for the kind review. I'm glad you can feel thier pain because honestly I feel it as I write it. Trust me, however hard a chapter might be for you guys to read, it was at least a little bit harder to write. If I had a dollar for every time I cried while writing a chapter, I'd be a rich woman! LOLOL! Thanks again for the review!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:17 AM Title: Epilogue
Sniffle, sniffle - goodbye!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:17 AM Title: Epilogue
Wow what an ending. This story was great and the ending had me in tears.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:43 AM Title: Epilogue
The has been such a joy to read. Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:26 AM Title: Epilogue
That's really sweet! I love your ending. All the loose threads tied up, like a good story should end.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:21 AM Title: Epilogue
Very emotional heart felt chapter I am sorry this story has come to an end.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:18 AM Title: Epilogue
Ah!!! *sighs* that's awesome... so sweet!!!
i loved this story every step of the way, and i'm going to miss it...you had make me cry, laugh and daydream a lot, congratulations, really a great job!
will you write something new??? i hope so.
Hugs, hugs, more hugs and sighs!!!
Nessa
Author's Response:
Thanks. Right now I'm still working on my NASCAR story Breakaway and my original story posted here called The Children of Creation. I'm sure that there will be other Twilight fics that will brew up once Breakaway is done, but I'm going to try to keep it to one fanfic plus my original for as long as possible. I do have little plot bunnies scurrying around in my head though...so I"m sure you will see more :)
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:59 AM Title: Epilogue
I loved this story, from beginning to end. Thanks so much for taking the time to share it! A tissue warning for this chapter would have been nice;)
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:28 AM Title: Epilogue
Your ending could not have been more perfect! It reminds me of the ending of "The Ghost and Mrs. Muir". In the end, he comes for her and age drops away leaving only eternity. Thank you for a perfectly marvelous story!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:24 AM Title: Epilogue
Oh, God *sniffle* This is one of the most beautiful, heart-wrenching endings I've ever read. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. *sob*
I am so sad to see this story end. I'm a sucker for period fics and yours has been tremendously touching and has been very near and dear to my heart. Even though I lurked, I cried and got angry and laughed and loved right along with your characters. I seriously can't wait to read more of your stories.
xo,
Val
PS: I seriously cannot stop crying...
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:54 PM Title: Epilogue
Thanks so much for writing this story, I really enjoyed it! I hate to see it end but you did a great job with the epilogue. I shed a few tears bu loved seeing Edward and Bella together again. I look forward to seeing what you write next!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:52 PM Title: Epilogue
oh my i cried edward died of a heart attack! what an ending, they had 5 children together and many happy years together, bella out lived everybody except jacob, thankyou for another wonderful story tracy
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:45 PM Title: Epilogue
Beautiful ending to a wonderful story.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:45 PM Title: Epilogue
thank you for sucvh a wonderful story it always refreshing to read something i little different
keep up your writing i truly love it.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:25 PM Title: Epilogue
Great job!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:16 PM Title: Epilogue
wow!!! what a wonderful way to end a story!!! it was perfect...I love this story and thank you for writing it and posting it up for everyone to read.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:15 PM Title: Epilogue
OMG! The ending is sad. I hate it when people have to die in the end but it's worth it.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:13 PM Title: Epilogue
Hard to type through the tears! Beautiful ending even tho' it was so sad for the most part. Together again as they should be.
Thank you for such a beautiful journey.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:47 PM Title: Epilogue
Aww, a beautiful end to a beautiful story.. Thank you for sharing it with us, and keep writing :)
Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:30 PM Title: Epilogue
*sniff* So wonderful! This was the perfect ending. Amazing job, and congratulations on finishing another story.
~Rachel
Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:20 PM Title: Epilogue
That was good but so sad!!!!!! I am crying!!!!!!!! But I loved it...a very good story!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:49 PM Title: Epilogue
*sob* It's was so beautiful *sob* I actually always imagined that you would end this story like this *sob* Though Edward dying suddenly like that broke my heart *sob* I loved you story! thanks for sharing it with us.
xoxo
Mina
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:46 PM Title: Epilogue
Aww. that ending was sweet and perfect. Loved this story so much!! Am going to miss it so much. It has been one of my absolute favourites!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:41 PM Title: Epilogue
This was such a beautiful story, thank you for writing it.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:29 PM Title: Epilogue
OMG that was such a good story. I loved every minute of it. You are such a great author and love reading your other stories.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:26 PM Title: Epilogue
Okay so this last one made me cry, but in a good way. This was a very good story I enjoyed it
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:14 PM Title: Epilogue
This is one of the best stories ever. I enjoyed it so much. Thanks for sharing your gift.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:09 PM Title: Epilogue
Crying, crying, crying! I know she lived a good full life, but just the thought of death *shudder* and Edward died of a heart attack *sob* I will miss this story, great job once again!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:03 PM Title: Epilogue
I'm so sad to see it end but it ended beautifully. I love that Edward was there for her and then the ending, I want to show you something was cute. I loved it. thanks again so much
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:49 PM Title: Epilogue
That was beautiful! Well done & thank you for keeping so true to form & era.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:47 PM Title: Epilogue
Way to go making me bawl my eyes out! But I sure to love the way you ended this. Reminds me of both the ending of Titanic AND Somewhere in Time.
Excellent story. I know that I will be re-reading this again.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:42 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved the epilogue. Amazing story and I am so sad to see it end. Great job!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:31 PM Title: Epilogue
A wonderful story, and a tear filled epilogue. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:28 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you. This is a beautiful story and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:25 PM Title: Epilogue
Oh wow, that was so good! Loved it!!! Thanks for a great story!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:22 PM Title: Epilogue
What a perfect ending! Thank you for writing this story, I loved every chapter!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:13 PM Title: Epilogue
I loved it! I had hoped that Edward and Bella would have died close together but the way you ended it works too. I am going to miss this story....so besides the orginal fic what else is in the works?
Rhonda
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:07 PM Title: Epilogue
i have really enjyoed reading this story..and what an amazing ending..i had tears in my eyes reading it..:)
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:00 PM Title: Epilogue
That was an incredible epi! Amazing job, once again! I loved it all!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:53 PM Title: Epilogue
i have loved this story...the epi made me cry ..but it was a good cry...thank you for sharing this story
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:50 PM Title: Epilogue
aw that was sad but sweet was that from titanic are what movie? i loved this story thank you!!!
Author's Response:
LOL...yeah, I found myself humming the Celine Dion song as I wrote it. LOL
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:47 PM Title: Epilogue
Congratulations on finishing another wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
I'm sad to see the story end, but I'm glad that Bella and Edward were reunited in the end.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:46 PM Title: Epilogue
It's so sad, but very beautiful at the same time! Great story!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:45 PM Title: Epilogue
Beautiful, just beautiful. I actually cried. What a wonderful story.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:44 PM Title: Epilogue
Oh... Not cheesy at all!! Well maybe... a little... but... still... Who cares?? I loved it!!
I thought it was Lord of the Rings at the begining but nah...
Anyway it is it's amazing and so intense...
xoxo
marianne
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:44 PM Title: Epilogue
sweet ending to a kewl story
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:39 PM Title: Epilogue
oh these dreadful tears!!!!!!!!!!!
Sad to see it end as well!
Nicely written!
Thank you for sharing it with us!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:37 PM Title: Epilogue
So sad, but such a great ending. Finally they are united in heaven again.
It was good how you wrapped everything up and mentioned what happend to the rest of the family.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 4:02 PM Title: Balancing Duties
aww! very very cute chapter. I love the babies. aww! I love Bella and Edward. aww!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 3:06 AM Title: Balancing Duties
How sweet! I love me some king Edward!!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 12:14 AM Title: Balancing Duties
Edward is so cute :)
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:30 PM Title: Balancing Duties
sweet chapter.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:19 PM Title: The Birth of Two Heirs
woo hoo one of each
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:59 PM Title: Balancing Duties
Sweet!! I love the babies!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:26 PM Title: A Critical Choice
Such a dramatic chapter. But very good descripted.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:20 PM Title: Balancing Duties
They really are coming into their own as King/Queen and parents!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:52 PM Title: The Birth of Two Heirs
They are finally here! Way to go Bella!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 6:34 AM Title: Balancing Duties
Oh yes, a change in topography to say the very least! So much time, so many kegals! I loved the blend of parenthood and politics here. They really did have a balancing act! Wonderful!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:33 AM Title: Balancing Duties
Aww, that was a sweet chapter. I liked how they reconnected with each other.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 4:57 AM Title: Balancing Duties
Great chapter! I loved every bit of it. :0)
Date: 19 Jun 2010 4:13 AM Title: Balancing Duties
Great job!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:44 AM Title: Balancing Duties
awww...what a great chapter. i really love that you made edward and bella be such progressive thinkers. they knew the importance of education among their people, especially for the future. i don't think many rulers back then valued education as highly, seeing as most of the poor didn't even know how to read back then.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:43 AM Title: The Birth of Two Heirs
I loved the birth of the Prince and Princess...what great names. I'm a little sad to know this story is nearing the end.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:36 AM Title: Balancing Duties
loved it!!! i can't believe its almost over!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:27 AM Title: Balancing Duties
Thank you. Such a beautiful story. I am sorry to see it conclude.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:14 AM Title: Balancing Duties
I loved it! I know we are getting to the end.... I am soooo sad!!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:29 AM Title: Balancing Duties
It's just wonderful to see the new family getting settled into everyday life. Sigh. Thanks for the update.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:07 AM Title: Balancing Duties
I'm so happy I found this story and got the chance to read it =D
Thanks!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:58 AM Title: Balancing Duties
Awwwwwwww! That was a great chapter, babe! I'm so glad you made this king Edward so different from all the other kings. Most would not have waiting for their wives to continue with sex. Also, don't think I could have handled a wet nurse either. Gross! Thanks for a great chapter.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:01 PM Title: Balancing Duties
That is a nice ending to a great story, I will miss this story.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 10:49 PM Title: Balancing Duties
Loved it!!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:38 PM Title: Balancing Duties
That was amazing! I am so happy Bella decided against the use of a wet nurse, I never really understood why nobles did that, breast feeding creates a special bond between mother and baby. I loved it all! Cannot wait to see what the epi has in store for us :)
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:27 PM Title: Balancing Duties
Yay. some nice fluff with Bella and Edward and the twins! A very nice chapter!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:22 PM Title: Balancing Duties
Thank you for the quick update. Well, one more chapter to go. I really enjoyed reading this story.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:11 PM Title: Balancing Duties
aww that whole school thing was great. I loved that they gave him what they did and then they went and got some. lol poor Bella. she was dying that whole entire time she was in that room. :( poor thing. I'm sad to see this go. thanks so much for the hard work. thanks again bye
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:48 PM Title: Balancing Duties
So sweet. Happy that they think of themselves as parents first and rulers second.
Sad this will be ending with the epi next but it was a great ride! Thanks for such a beautiful and loving story.