Date: 17 Dec 2019 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
This was a really beautiful story! I'm so glad I found it on Facebook!
Date: 17 Dec 2019 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
This was a really beautiful story! I'm so glad I found it on Facebook!
Date: 13 Dec 2018 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
excellent
Date: 13 Dec 2018 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
excellent
Date: 20 Dec 2017 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
I thought she might be pregnant.
If she is, I hope he hasn't hurt her.
Date: 01 Feb 2017 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
AWESOME!!! little story ;) i didn't want it to end ;) thanks so much for sharing this with us ;D
Date: 01 Dec 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
Very good and inspiring story.
Date: 20 Oct 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hahaha midget wrestling...one of my good friends is a midget wrestler. I read your other stories. I'm liking them very much. I didn't realize until about half way through the last one that I had read it before.
Date: 19 Aug 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Jeez, I'm one big hormonal, old woman right at this moment!!!! Wonderful story. You did an awesome job writing and putting it into a format that drew your reader right into the story. You made me feel just like Bella. I want to jump his ass, too!!!
I was looking for something that I could read over several days intermittently between housework (dust bunnies are getting to be the size of Texas because of FF) when I found "Walk." Yeah, right. "Next" flew by like it had nitrous oxide pumped into it!! And what a ride. I absofuckinglutely loved your story (sorry for the ugly word).
Loved the ending!!! Kate finally got her comeuppance and Lilly got a reprieve (“You're off shit shoveling duty, squirt.”). And let's not forget these words "When I first met Bella, I thought she was too young to know what she wanted. Too naïve to make decisions that would affect her entire life. Now that she is surrounded by our five children, I can see how wrong I was to assume such things. She taught me how to live again. She taught me how to love again. She taught me how to walk." Only thing I could add would be the joy of watching both Edward's and Bella's characters go from lost lonliness to love forever, together.
I've already looked for your other stories so I'm sure I'll see you there.
I also owe you an apology. I'm normally a much better reviewer even though I only read "completed" stories. You deserve so much more that just one review from me - so - for that, please accept my apology and promise that I will do better next time.
Thank you for writing for our fandom. I enjoy reading all the wonderful stories that authors give so freely to their readers. I appreciate you so much!!!
Elaine - sparkledamnu Sparkle Elaine Damnu Phillips on FB sparkledamnu on all
fanfiction reading sites.
Date: 19 Feb 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 20
Awesome story! :)
Date: 11 Nov 2013 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love this story as much as the first time I read it. Thank you!
Date: 05 Apr 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
I can't wait for Edward to tell her that he feels the same way!! It is just a matter of time I am thinking! I just wish I could find someone to love me just as much!! That is so sad what happened to Jacob...I don't like to see people hurt because of their sexual preference. Esme is certainly different in this story, but I like her.
Date: 05 Apr 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was pretty awesome for their first time!! I am amazed that there is another Seether fan out there...Plastic Man is one of my favorites...love those guys!
Date: 30 Mar 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
awesome epi!!!! gotta love that Lily...LOL! great job on this! can't wait for your next story!
Date: 29 Mar 2013 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
OMG I LLOVED IT SO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! GOD AND KATE WAS SUCHA BITCH MY GOD BUT OMG SUCH A GOOD STORY AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Mar 2013 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
Excuse my language but you rocked this shit! I've followed this story from the beginning and I loved it immediately. This chapter made me tear up more than once. Great job! That was the perfect ending.
Date: 29 Mar 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
OMG, what a great story.
Date: 29 Mar 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
Have loved this fanfic! :)
Date: 29 Mar 2013 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 20
So, so, so worth the wait. Well done. Loved the addition of Mary, Philip, and Lydia. Excellent job.
Date: 29 Mar 2013 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
Aw, what a perfect ending! I really loved it SO much! I am so happy for them! I cannot wait to see what you come up with next, story-wise :D
Date: 28 Mar 2013 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wonderful end to a sweet story.
TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 28 Mar 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 20
thank you .I really enjoyed your story!!!........Edward got what he wanted and more.well done
Date: 28 Mar 2013 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
It was well worth the wait!!! I loved the story Thanks for finishing it!! You did a great job with this chapter...well all of them. Thanks again!!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Mar 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hate to see this end thank you for this wonderful story.
Date: 25 Feb 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please update soon!!! I love the story!!!
Date: 16 Dec 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved it. Full circle!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it. He finally got everything he wanted. Can't wait for the epilogue!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved the chapter and I cant wait for the Epi.
Thank you for the update and I cant wait to read more from you.
Date: 10 Dec 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
I love it! Great job....thanks!!!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
I can't believe it's over, what a great job you did. I loved their journey and the ending was perfect. can't wait for your future works!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was amazing! I really loved their names. The girl weighed a little more than I did; I weighed 5 pounds 7 ounces, but I was 20 inches long ;) I really am also happy for them for their happy ending! They deserved it :D Cannot believe it is over, but there is still the epilogue :D
Date: 09 Dec 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
Lucas and Lillie, love it. You did such a wonderful job with the writing of this story. Thank you so much for all of your hard work.
Date: 09 Dec 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
woo hoo for babies.
Date: 09 Dec 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
Absolutely perfect! I loved it! Thank you!
~allidel :)
Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
It is the babies arrive!
Oh yes it's nice to meet a Tanya is not a bitch.
Thank you for this great chapter.
Date: 30 Nov 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yay!! The babies are coming. Loved the chapter. Can't wait for the delivery!!
Date: 30 Nov 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
thank you for the update.......I love this Edward , he is so loving & thoughtful....Bella is to funny......I hope the babies are healthy......I also hope Edward parents get there to.......until you post again
Date: 30 Nov 2012 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Aw, that was AMAZING! I am SO happy the babies are coming! I am also glad Edward didn't do what my dad did when my mom went into labour...he changed the oil in the car and washed all of the windows (which normally takes him about 15 minutes!) and then almost forgot her bag! My mom was also on bed rest for 6 weeks with me, because she went into preterm labour. I was the first baby too, so it wasn't like they had done this before, oh dear. Anyway, I cannot wait to see what they name the babies and what their birthday is...you haven't mentioned it yet. :D
Date: 30 Nov 2012 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh please don't leave us hanging, great chapter can not wait to read about the birth of their babies
Date: 30 Nov 2012 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
I did the same thing when my water broke, but the contractions hadn't started yet...check the cats, call the boss, grab the bag, then wake up the husband to drive us to the hospital. He reacted similar to Edward - not quite sure what to do or what was going on for a few minutes!
I can't wait to meet the babies! And see the suprise Edward's been working on!
Thanks for sharing!
~allidel :)
Date: 30 Nov 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
Ohh the babies are on the way, cant wait for the next chatper.
Date: 30 Nov 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
woo hoo almost baby time!!!!!
LOL for them trying to keep things from B. Sneaky one.
Date: 30 Nov 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
here come the babies!!!!
Date: 30 Nov 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yay!!!! Can't wait till the little ones get here. Please update soon!
Date: 30 Nov 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bouncing in my seat. Can't wait for the next chapter. No long wait please.
Date: 30 Nov 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
awww he is so sweet! are they getting married after the babies are born??
Date: 25 Nov 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
great chapter, can not wait to hear about the bundles of joy arriving
Date: 20 Nov 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
I really do hope that Bella listens to the doctor and Edward. There is nothing worse than a defiant Bella.
Loved the chapter.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
SO amazing :D I am so happy they are having one of each, but I cannot wait to see what they name them!
Date: 19 Nov 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. I was borderline as well.
Date: 19 Nov 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre !
Merci.
Date: 19 Nov 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wonderful chapter, Bed rest can be a blessing and a curse, thats for sure. E is such a wonderful man.
Date: 19 Nov 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
it's great she has a wonderful support system :) hope she'll be able to carry to full term
Date: 05 Nov 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story and I it has only taken me a few days to read it. I cant wait for more.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
C'était vraiment bien cette rencontre avec Kate !
Bella et Edward sont heureux ! J'ai hâte de lire la naissance des bébés.
Merci.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
Mon Dieu !
Merci.
Date: 01 Nov 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Je viens de voire un extrait de twilight, c'est magnifique !
J'aime ce chapitre.
Bella va avoir un bébé.
Date: 01 Nov 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
Mon Dieu ! Bella attaquée par Laurent !
Date: 01 Nov 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
C'est un bon chapitre, quand tout le monde est là, ça fait beaucoup de monde.
Merci.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
Enfin ! Je suis très contente qu'ils aient des relations.
Merci, c'est un beau chapitre.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward va craquer, c'est sûr !
Bon chapitre, j'aime beaucoup.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bien ce chapitre, ils se sont beaucoup rapprochés !
Date: 30 Oct 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
C'est un super BBQ, en plus Edward a compris que Bella était libre.
Merci !
Date: 30 Oct 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bon chapitre.
Merci.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bon chapitre !
J'aime bien Bella mais Edward aurait dû lui dire la vérité et ses projets.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Edward a eu bien des misères avec sa femme mais il a bien surmonté, j'aime ça !
Rencontre avec Bella !
Date: 27 Oct 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh ive been reading for two days, and i love it!
Cant wait to see whats next
Date: 26 Oct 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
That was amazing! I really loved it! I cannot wait to see what the babies are :D Although, I can relate with Edward about "Subway, again?" Because Subway was one of three places to eat in the town where I went to college...besides the cafeteria/dining hall and a Mexican restaurant. I don't like it very much now.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love the united front on the *stomping* of Cunt Kate.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am so glad that she got Zeus! Can't wait for more chapters!
Date: 25 Oct 2012 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
great chapter! the ranch seems to be doing well, Esme was so happy about the babies, and hopefully we've seen the last of Kate! I love how he was acting on the plane...lol
Date: 24 Oct 2012 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
Luvin this fic! I know its getting close to the end but I want it to be longer! LOL! Thanks for writing.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter. Glad esme was so cool. Kate is such a skank. Yea for Zues.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
So damn cute, these two. I'm assuming since Kate commented about them still being married that she signed the divorce papers back before she was caught tramping it up? Maybe she was just hoping he hadn't signed them yet.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved the chapter. Twins!!! Yea! Can't wait for the next update. Yeah, those vaginal ultrasounds are not fun. Had one when I was pregnant with my oldest. He's 19 now and I still remember that exam!
Author's Response:
I'm happy you liked the chapter! Thank you for reading :) I don't think those exams are easily forgotten... :( xoxox
Date: 06 Oct 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love this ff!!! Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you like the story! xoxox
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter. I think her getting the horse is a good trade. Woo hoo twins
Author's Response:
I thought so, too ;) Edward will be happy to have Zeus. Thanks for reading! xoxox
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the update..I just adore this story........I'm so happy for Edward & Bella....Bella parents are happy and Edwards parents are going to be estatic........Alice was about to lost it...wait till Emment finds out...lol.can't wait to see what happens next................WELL DONE!!! ......BRAVO!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words :) I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. The next chapter will be up soon! xoxox
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
I just started reading your story , it is very good, keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you're enjoying it :) xoxox
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
You're right. Vaginal ultrasounds aren't fun
Ugh. I cringe thinking about it. I love how attentive Edward is being. It makes me mushy inside. :) happy days!
Author's Response:
Yeah, he is awesome. I love him :) Thank you for reading! xoxox
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
Twins!!!! That's awesome! They are going to be busy bees from now on.....lots to do!
Author's Response:
Yay! It'll be great :) Thanks so much for reading-glad you liked it! xoxox
Date: 04 Oct 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yay! Yay! Clapping jumping up and down for Edward and yes, Bella too! Edward has wanted to be a daddy for so long.... Yippee!!! TWINS
Author's Response:
Twins. He's going to be on cloud nine, eh? Thanks so much! xoxox
Date: 04 Oct 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yay! First Laurent has been arrested and secondly - they are preggers!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter-thanks for reading! xoxox
Date: 04 Oct 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
Aw loved it! Having a rubbish week, so was happy to see this update today and with such a great chapter :) So sweet.
Author's Response:
That was nice-thank you. I'm glad that I could help brighten your week just a little :) xoxox
Date: 04 Oct 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
Aw, YAY!!!! I am so happy for them! I cannot wait for them to find out what they are! YAY!
Author's Response:
I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks so much for reading xoxox
Date: 04 Oct 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
THIS IS AWESOME.. EDWARD IS VERY EXCITING TO READ WHEN HE'S LIKE THAT.. ALL HAPPY AND SHIT.. ITS WONDERFUL!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you ;) I like him all happy and shit, too! LMAO I'm glad you're enjoying the story, thanks for reading! xoxox
Date: 04 Oct 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it! I agree with the vag ultrasound....not my favorite!
oh Bella....marry the boy!
Author's Response:
There will be a wedding or a marriage lol just not sure when or how, yet! Thanks for reading! xoxox
Date: 04 Oct 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
aww that was an awesome chapter... Oh please Bella you need to marry that boy before that baby is born... I agree with Edward call me old fashion but I like to see the parents get married before the babies are born...
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I haven't decided yet when Bella will marry Edward... I have an idea though ;) Thanks so much for reading! xoxox
Date: 23 Sep 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
Go Edward!! Way to pay back the slimy weazle for hurting Bella. So much excitement coming up. Edward is FINALLY going to be a daddy!! Loved how this chapter ended. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked the chapter-thank you for reading! xoxox
Date: 20 Sep 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
yeah for bella being ok. And for Eddie being estatic.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading xoxox
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yay, glad Edward kicked Laurent's ass and Bella is ok! Aww, I wondered if a baby was on the way when she was feeling faint when she stood up in the bath. So pleased for Edward as Bella will happily have his baby, not like that evil Kate.Can't wait for more - love this story :)
I have just read your Across the Hall story since I typed my last review (pretty fast reader) - thats a great story too! Great writing!
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reading (ATH, too!) xoxox
Date: 19 Sep 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Squeee!! Love them. Ok, now let's take this Kate bitch to the cleaners and tie that loose end up. Oooo, I hope she gets what's coming to her good.
Author's Response:
LMAO Kate will be showing up again-Thanks so much for reading! xoxox
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you, thank you, thank you...for not making us wait a week!! I love the chapter, and the whole story. It actually pops in my head every once in awhile, when I'm not even near a computer. It's that good!
Thank you for sharing,
~allidel :)
Author's Response:
That is really cool! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. xoxox
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yay!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! xoxox