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Reviewer: zanath Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 61 - Epilogue

I had never read a drabble before...How cute and what fun for a quick read.  Thanks - Xanath

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 61 - Epilogue

awwww!!!! *sniffs* amazing ride!



Author's Response:

I aweed loudly after writing this! And might have had a little tear... Poor Garrett wasnt in the final. for more reasons than just one. If I ever do outakes, Ill show Garrett, what men do in Town of Man to get off... haha. Thanks for reviewing and being an epic host of Drabble Wars this goes for Jess ALSO! MWAUH!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 60

Yay!!!!  Great job, Mona.... especially on such short notice!

 

xoxo

texasbella



Author's Response:

Sometimes I can think up some awesome shit on short notices! And truthfully its usually what I write the best. AND x3 lol, If you notice I've gotten better with each drabble.

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 59

wait... is rose good or bad... she's good right?  she's helping bella...



Author's Response:

She is good, an organic body compliments of eddie boy!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 58

do it bella.. do ittttttt!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 57

*bites nails*

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 56

agghhhhh

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 55

so not cool

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 54

so this is a good nurse?



Author's Response:

SO many people asked about the NURSES, they are twins with different eye color, it was supposed to be a clue for bella in her drug induced shit to say hey I have kids and their twins... omg i have twins. I suppose I didnt think it out enough!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 53

killing me here mona!



Author's Response:

I love killing people apparently with my epic weird writing...

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 52

ahh fuck a bigger duck!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 51

there's the girl they needed.... heave ho to the ho!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 50

oh shit... 

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 49

omg!!  go jasper, go jasper!!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 48

i want them together!!!  waaaaaaaaa!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 47

hey!  It's my birthday! (in the story)



Author's Response:

Happy birthday! *giggle*

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 46

hmm, another plot twist...

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 45

*whimpers*

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 44

*starts plotting how to get Renee to Vegas to play some slots* hehe



Author's Response:

Oh, I so am okay with this!!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 43

awww, damn hormones!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 42

well fuck a duck!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 41

the wonders of alternate universe science!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 40

I just love Jasper...

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 39

NICE!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 38

awwwww

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 37

splish splash time? and perhaps a head out of his ass time...

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 36

all together now EYE ROLL

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 35

shush away dear heart

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 34

oh nos!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 33

and why is that strange creepy looking dude?



Author's Response:

Riight, seriously I was just staring at the doc like why would she listen to you?

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 32

well now...

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 31

uh oh, did Angie not get hers?



Author's Response:

Oh she got hers, only she is a cry baby... thinking she done did wrong by letting it happen. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 30

happy sigh



Author's Response:

Right, he is the kind of man i'd like to borrow occasionally!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 28

giddy up!



Author's Response:

Ride that boy cowgirl! Thanks for reviewing babes!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 27

hahahaha... pure brilliance at the end!



Author's Response:

haha... who isnt a pile of mush after the big 'O' I sure am... then I get hyper haha. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 26

yeah, decided not to wait, I'll just have both accounts up and hop over here as needed ;)



Author's Response:

I jumped over too and even sent you a long review reply. MWAUH! thanks for reviewing and sticking with me through my rollercoaster ride.

Reviewer: ama2978 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 61 - Epilogue

What a great story. I like that it was different. I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing. 



Author's Response:

Awe, thanks. I have been coined the 'writer of weird' I shall live up to it... Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 61 - Epilogue

This was a very interesting story a little crazy but good none the less. Thanks for taking the time to share this with us. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review and saying such kind words!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 42

Whose the snitch?

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 29

I have noticed the dates are going backwards, im sure there is a reason behind it. but i want to know why this is?



Author's Response:

I thought I only had one date wrong, I am sorry for the error but it is supposed to go forward.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 12

This is becoming very interesting. I have so so so many questions but I will just read on and see if they are answered.



Author's Response:

If any aren't answered I'd be happy to set anything you need striaght or even have a longer indepth conversation about it. I am on Twitter Mona_Rider and on FB as www.facebook.com/MoneRiderFF

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

This sounds very promising, and i cant wait to see what you have in store for this story.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 61 - Epilogue

This. is beautiful! I loved it!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing... and I can't believe anyone loved it but YAY!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 61 - Epilogue

great ending!! Loved this little story! :)

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with me and reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 60

yay for Rose! :)

 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 59

so i wonder how Rose came back??



Author's Response:

Edward made her an Organic body... Sorry I didnt have enough time to add all the dynamic of answers but I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 58

yes shoot her! :) LOL

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 57

well that is interesting.... they keep sedating her will have had to have long term effects!

 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 56

well at least Jasper is on his way

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 54

:(

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 53

well that is not good.... I am sure Renee came to take the babies... and is prob going to tell everyone that Bella is dead and then raise the kids herself :(

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 52

uh oh :(

 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 51

yay for babies :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 50

oh jeez! so if my calculations are right she is still about a month away from giving birth, (if she goes on time) Can't wait to read more tomorrow!

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 49

twins huh?? hopefully one of them is a girl, and that Jasper is sincere :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 48

huh... disconnected

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 47

hmm... ok wonder why she is in hiding?

 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 46

huh... so victoria got sterilized?

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 45

hmm .. wonder what that is all about?

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 44

hmm.. well thank god for Zafrina... she is helpful being there all the time

 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 43

aww :) at least she gets to still see him :)

 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 42

well at least they had some time together... hopefully it is a girl and they can get the ball rolling on their plan :)

 



Author's Response:

Exactly! thanks for reviewing...

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 41

ok so she is prego.... sept 30



Author's Response:

Yes! Thanks for reviewing...

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 40

so they stay there until they are prego??

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 39

lol sideways huh?



Author's Response:

I think they were going at it like rabbits too haha... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 38

good job! LOL :)

 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 37

Jasper... start with "Im sorry"  lol

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 36

oh yeah he will have to do alot to make up for that.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 35

jealousy...ah yes, well will they get in trouble??

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 34

uh oh

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 33

hmm...

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 32

well that is interesing... so if she has a boy then she can't do anything yet? hmm...

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 34

Wow this is getting good! I cannot wait to see more jealous and possessive jasper. Please update soon

Author's Response:

I am, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 31

wonder what is up with her... probably didn't know what was gonna happen when she got there ... see what happens when you don't educate your kids? they freak out! LOL



Author's Response:

Angela... is a preachers kid! She thinks she was to go get sperm injected inside and go home. not have sex and be defiled. Good thing for Bella she had Rosalie! Thanks for reviewing...

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 30

shower time :)



Author's Response:

Shooooower time.. *giggle.* thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 29

yeah not likely that he will forget LOL :)



Author's Response:

Riiight, but a girl can wish... hope... especially Bella. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 28

hallelujah indeed!



Author's Response:

haha I loved that part... *grins.* Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 27

of course he does... LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 26

;)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 25

oh :) See ya tomorrow!(even if you are a little mean for leaving us there!)



Author's Response:

You will get more tomorrow than the FF following... they don't get the sex scenes! Thanks for reviewing... and tomorrow is only two hours away. I may slip another in. MWAUH!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 24

hmm so are Zafrina and Garrett still there?? lol



Author's Response:

Outside of the cottage... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 23

we went back a day??

 



Author's Response:

Maybe Mona needs to watch the dates and certain details better... Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 22

:) excited for the next few tonite 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and I tried to get em all in. :D

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 21

oh Bella! :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 20

so romantic! LOL :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 19

:) we will get to the 25th or chapter 25?

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 18

:) i am just sitting here waiting for new updates to pop in my inbox! :) LOL



Author's Response:

Your loving it... that makes me so happy! *grin* Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

hmm... :) I vote for a few more :) LOL

-Kate



Author's Response:

I voted for a few more too! WE WON! haha Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 15

hmm... wonder who it is?? :)

 



Author's Response:

hmmm... wonder. *winks* Thanks for reviewing babes!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 12

oh! answers only lead to more questions! :)

 



Author's Response:

Riiight... if only I could just blurt them all out! *wink* Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 10

This is getting good I cannot wait for more.

Author's Response:

I am so excited to give more... Thanks for reviewing..

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

well Renee is just a jealous little..... ugh... ok Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Yes she is.. *Hint* she is power hungry also. Thanks for reviewing...

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 9

huh ... well that was interesting.... :)



Author's Response:

I think it gets more interesting and better as the chapters go... to be atleast. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 7

well won't that be cozy with her guard there the whole time! :)

-Kate



Author's Response:

Riiight, I'd be all creeped! But thats me.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

oh can't wait to read the rest of this little video of Dr Edward cullen! :)

-Kate



Author's Response:

I just love him in this... He is a sort of background character but he does put alot into the story. *hint for you* thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

Very ready :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the reviewing...

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 5

:-)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing...

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

can't wait to see what happens when she gets there! :)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing... I will keep updating as I can! :D

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Bella :( maybe Renee will come around before she leaves.

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing... *wink*

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