Date: 06 Dec 2020 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 30
I loved the story! Did Jasper and the family ever tell Bella that Edward lied and told them that she never wanted to see them ever again? Of course, it was always their own decision to leave without saying goodbye, but they were trying to respect her decision. It was false, but she should know.
Date: 30 Apr 2017 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 30
I'll sound redundant but it can't be helped. This story was an incredible one and I love how original your plot was!!!! it made for a page turner I couldn't put down until it was finished!!!!!
I do hope you do a sequel and I will keep an eye out for it!!!!!
Thank you!!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2016 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 30
Absolutely amazing story. Read it all in one day. LOVED IT!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
Bella/Garrett would be nice.Bella/Peter also.
Date: 13 Feb 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
It is hung out with them. she needs to get Jasper and Em toplay tug of war with Eddie and see which arm comes off first.don't hate me just trying to help you write better.;) kevin
Date: 24 Oct 2015 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
You made a small error thatjust buggs me. Hunters stand downwind from the pray they don't want to smell or hear them not upwind. Air is a fluid like water, think of it like a stream of water with two people standing in it. Whatever the person up stream drops into the water, will flow down to the person down stream. The same thing happens with a scent or sound carried on the wind. I will now get off of my soapbox and say I like the chapter very much, THANKS!
Date: 17 Apr 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
I was going to wait till the end of this story for my review but i read yoour rant. I think you are doing a fine job so far. Thank you
Date: 25 Mar 2015 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 30
What a good story. I love all things J/B. Thanks for sharing, I'm so glad I found it complete. I hope we do get the sequel, I will enjoy as well as your first two stories... I am now a fan.
Date: 03 Jul 2013 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
What is up with Cassie?
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
How terrible for Bella!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
Give it to her Bella!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
And so the drama begins!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh boy...can't wait for the talk
Date: 03 Jul 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ed the douche bag!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oookay...who did esme cheat with?
Date: 20 Feb 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 30
Love it
Date: 28 Jan 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 30
Marvelous! By the way, I thought the end very fitting. It ends, so to speak, at the beginning. I'm looking forward to a sequel - no matter how long between. Thank you for all the hard work you put in here. It always showed. Bravo!
Date: 26 Jan 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 30
LOVED IT!!! :) excited for the sequel when you post it! :)
-Kate
Date: 24 Jan 2013 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 30
Glad E and Anna got what was coming to them
TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 24 Jan 2013 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 30
Looking forward to the sequel
Date: 16 Jan 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 29
I do love this Bella. She is sure and firm in her actions. Her relationship with Jasper is marvelous - and just what he needs to keep him on his toes. I loved this piece and look forward to the epi!
Date: 15 Jan 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 29
Looking forward to more
Date: 15 Jan 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 29
Cant wait to see what happens to Fuckward by the V. Yey for mini lemon
Date: 15 Jan 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 29
Add if jasper changes Bella and what happens to Eddie and the othe girl and Bella cuzin
Date: 07 Jan 2013 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 28
Love the "improved Bella" so much. She is strong, sure of herself and her guy and she is determined. Nice touch with the tracking device! I'm looking forward to Edward getting his butt kicked!
Date: 02 Jan 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter!! Looking forward to all these new stories!!
-Kate
Date: 02 Jan 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 28
looking forward to more
Date: 02 Jan 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 28
Cassie is bad ass. Hope Rose doesnt try to do something stupid. Hmmm which make is at Calvin's location. His mom really is a delusional bitch.
OOOOh Fight Fight Fight. Cant wait.
Date: 22 Dec 2012 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 27
Go Cassie! Nice,very nice. This Bella is not the old one Edward is used to. She has grown, matured, and is not that girl anymore. She also has Jasper. Loving it!
Date: 22 Dec 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 27
looking forward to more
Date: 22 Dec 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
B is being smart. Gotta love Cassie for the tracking device.
Date: 21 Dec 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 27
LOVED IT... hopefully they find her quickly! :)
-Kate
Date: 07 Dec 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 26
Excellent chapter with a great ending! God help Edward when Jasper catches up to him!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 26
looking forward to more
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh grandma needs to die along with Fuckward and Colin.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
I knew she'd forgive Emmett, but I think Rosalie is about to meet a new Bella Swan! Edward just can't seem to stay away from Bella's family. Great chapter!
Date: 02 Dec 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
looking forward to more
Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
glad Cas took it well. Rose is sooooo annoying.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next one! :)
-Kate
Date: 27 Nov 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter... can't wait to see Cassie's reaction to everything and see what happens with Edward and Ashley and Anna! :)
-Kate
Date: 27 Nov 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
Marvelous stuff. I can't see Cassie being upset at Bella - her Dad maybe a bit - but not Bella. She was in a difficult situation and survived how she needed to. Also, her bond with Carlisle is bound to flavor things. A detail I love in here is that Jasper cooks for Bella. It screams his love and concern in a loud, unmistakable voice. Edward's involvement here is a puzzle I'm looking forward to figuring out.
Date: 27 Nov 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
oooh Eddie involved with Anna huh? hmmm so not good.
Date: 27 Nov 2012 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
looking forward to mroe
Date: 21 Nov 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love the Major...and the whole chapter! More please?!
Date: 19 Nov 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter!! Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 15 Nov 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
looking forward to more
Date: 15 Nov 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 23
oooh yummy claiming time.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
love keep it up have a good day
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
hmm Time for Eddie to die...
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 22
i love the story sorry i am more of the reading not reviewing type
Date: 11 Nov 2012 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
:-). Is this Collin Bella spoke to the same Collin in Edwards pov? So that would make him her cousin?
Author's Response:
Oops typo lol it should be Calvin. I'll go fix it. Collin is the friend with benefits Bella had at the beginning if the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 11 Nov 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter!!! Can't wait to read more! :) With Esme, who I am gonna guess that her mate is maybe Marcus? and then with Edward!
-Kate
Date: 11 Nov 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
thankyou for updating. i enjoy your writing.
Date: 11 Nov 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
looking forward to more
Date: 30 Oct 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 21
yummy beginning.
poor calvin and kids
Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter.... poor kids :( that just breaks my heart... hopefully they can not only get him full custody, but get her some jail time for child abuse.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 21
looking forward to more
Date: 28 Oct 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 21
i love your story and head up short or long to me is good as long as it not month before a update or any notes as to why no update thow type of story get me a bit upset
Date: 25 Oct 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
You have a good story. The chapters are short but then that is fine. I hope you are good at updating. Of course Garrett wanted her for a mate. Beauty, smart and sweet who would not? Edward. Well that little guy is still to be sorted out.
Jasper made his status clear so Yippie.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
thank you for no Jake. I wont say I can not stand him. I am just not really into wolves. It seems to me Edward and Alice played a bad game and were trying to kill off Bella.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
Perfect so far..
Date: 25 Oct 2012 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
Punish Eddie. Well isn't prudish Eddie spending eternity with Tanya the Ho of the vampire fandom enough? LOL
Date: 25 Oct 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
YEA your breakup scene was perfect. Rewrite New Moon..
Date: 25 Oct 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 20
ha ha garrett got put into his place!!!
Date: 24 Oct 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter! Loved how she saw through Garrett's plan :) Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 23 Oct 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
looking forward to more
Date: 15 Oct 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
Why there might be a fight, and Garrett and Caius would lose their heads... ha ha
Date: 15 Oct 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh, Jasper will take tis well...not!! This should be interesting!
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
hmmm wonder who's idea it was? Garrett's I bet. Naughty Naughty.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the lovely reviews and thanks for reading... I'll ask my beta is she has a page here if she doesnt then she at the other site, I post there too.
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
ah so it was Garrett huh? Thats cool Oooh she's met the V too in person. Interesting twist.
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 17
Thinking now that the original Jenks vamp was one of the V brothers. Hmm now what is Garrett up to.
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
glad they talked and set some things straight between them
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
ROFL for your disclaimer note.
I think Cassie probably already knows. Think she snooped in Daddy's stuff and found out. Ah well. Hope she gets better soon now that she has Dr Hottie.
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
glad Peter decided to tell her. Aww poor Cas
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
hmmm the original vamp was probably one of the V maybe? Or was is Carlisle? ah well
Tried to look up your Beta but she doesnt seem to be on the site with that name. And I dont read on the "site that shall not be named" anymore. Too much censorship and bullying going on. TY for posting here. I'm enjoying it.
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
I LOVE peter's relationship to B. Malice is evil. She knew what Fuckward did I bet. And I wonder if Esme wasnt in on it too
Date: 12 Oct 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ooh Victoria is playing games...id go nuts too
Date: 12 Oct 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
Abso LOVE her standing up for herself. Peter and char are the best.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
Rose needs to worry about rose. Love em. Cant wait to see what they all come up with as revenge on Eddie.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love Peter. Glad she is not being a doormat.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad they got to talk a little
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad b still likes em. Lol for tub time. Yeah Eddie needs to pay.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
Fuckward and skankya deserve each other. Oh lying Eddie, its gonna come back to bite you.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ah b is doing Colin huh? That's gonna go over well with Jazz.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Good chapter. Ah Eddie lied about the dumping huh? Not a surprise.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love this more bad ass bella. No wolves to protect Charlie?
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. Cant wait to see how it goes.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
loooking forward to mroe
Date: 12 Oct 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh! LOVE IT!!! ;)
Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 08 Oct 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am seriously hooked on this story...please tell me you're going to update soon. I love it! Thank you sooooo much for sharing. I look forward to reading more, until then, Take Care,
~ Helen.