Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just wish that you didnt use the pair of Edward and Jasper. These two are probably the most popular pair of slash readers, definitely part of top 2. A different pairing would have been just as effective (of course not as read..l still...)
But I definitely agree that there is the real horror of date rape. And our teens, whether male or female, have to be aware of this kind of danger.
Author's Response:
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think you captured this horrific experience with class. What an awful experience for your friend and I am sorry that he had such a disgusting introduction to sex. Rape is the worst crime and I wish no one had to experience such an act. It's nice to know that your friend is a survivor. My only critism about that story would be that you used Edward as a rapist... I know, I know, one of them had to be, but Edward... really. LOL! I was sad to see this was a one shot because I would be interested in knowing what happened, such as did Jasper report it? And, how he coped and moved on afterwards. Beautifully written, congradulations for the way you handled this subject.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review. It means a lot to me. It just kills me that there is so much evil in this world. I know I was taking a leap when I put Edward as the rapist, but if it makes a difference, I love Edward with all my heart lol. This is just my one and only story of him playing the bad guy. I even winced a little putting him in the story like that.
Thanks again
Ebony