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Reviewer: Snowgood Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

I enjoyed it very much, and can definitely see you developing the characters more to fill it out...however, I'm still waiting on second spins!

Reviewer: JenGail01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 20

AAAHHHH...Helen cracks me up!  I liked the story, unfortunately I also live in a house that has uninvited "guests".  My husband and I have just gotten use to it, but visitors are often uncomfortable here. Thanks for an entertaining read.   

Reviewer: Fanfictionfan1664 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 20

I loved this story. Thanks for sharing it.

Trip

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 20

I loved this quirky story! Please feel free to write a longer version! I am going to miss ghost Blair, Helen and Elizabeth!

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 10

Helen just stared. Ah, that incorrigible Helen! SNORK! Me likee~~~ this is veddy interesting..



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like Helen. She's one of my favorite characters.

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 19

I'm sitting on the edge of my seat, chewing my nails.....as the kids say, than what happen?
Are you sure one more chapter will tell it all?
Maybe you should take or do two more chapters, it will be okay with me.
Hurry.

Author's Response:

Heh heh, yeah, the last chapter is up. I had to keep this story under a certain word count, so I had to rush the ending a bit. I have plans to do a re-write on it and make it longer and more detailed.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wow! I wasn't expecting this confession from Elizabeth's grandfather!
I hope that Blair shows up for the seance! A showdown between John and Blair would be GREAT!

Author's Response:

Of course he shows up!

The last chapter is up. I hope you like it!

Reviewer: Snowgood Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm spellbound!  I am really enjoying this ghost tale.  I did read one on Wattpad called he followed me home that I liked too.  You are talented, keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I had fun with this story. I had to keep it around 20,000 words when I wrote it, but now that I don't have any restrictions with it I may play with it a little and flesh it out to a full novel. Of course, I have 3 major projects ahead of it in my que, so it wont be happening any time soon.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Fanfictionfan1664 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 18

I enjoyed that. Waiting to see how well Blair cooperates with Miss Donna.

Your timing is out though. Fall equinox is a little under 6 weeks before Halloween.

Author's Response:

Is is around September 20th? I know the summer solstice is June 20th. September 20th would have worked - I should have done my homework. I'll have to change the wording so it's more accurate. The fact that it's supposed to be Halloween is irrelevant to the story - it can be any time. This story was for a writing prompt from Avon and I thought making it Halloween would be fitting for the season.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: Rie Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 17

Well if they can find her grandmother floating around they could all live happily together! Can't wait to meet Miss Donna :) Great chapter as always!

~Marie



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm confident Lizbet will make an appearance...

Reviewer: Fanfictionfan1664 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 17

How absolutely mortifying, to have to admit that you were dreaming you were having sex with the guy sat in front of you, when in fact it was with a ghost! Love that scene!

Trip

Author's Response:

Bwhahaha! Thanks. Yeah, it would be pretty horrific. I like to torture my characters sometimes.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 16

 After all that, and he still wants her to be his girlfriend! 



Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you so much for your reviews. I love hearing what my readers are thinking.

Yep - Devin is head over heels for Elizabeth. How do you think he'll react to finding out just how well she knows his great uncle? :)

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh damn! They have a pissed off ghost on their hands!  



Author's Response:

Talk about a mood killer!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

It's his uncle! How does she tell him that she has been sexing up his dead uncle? Hahaha



Author's Response:

That conversation comes later. It's deliciously awkward.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 13

Awwww, he is really worried about Her!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 12

He left her out there? What a rude ghost!



Author's Response:

It wasn't intentional. He can't really hang out constantly.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh no she didn't! She called him Blair!!! And then slapped him!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 10

Hummm, is Blair Devin's grandfather?



Author's Response:

Nope. Great-uncle.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

Still talking to Helen, funny!



Author's Response:

I love Helen.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 8

Cute

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 7

Awwww  Devin is hot and sweet!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 6

Hummm hot devin fixing the house!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wow, was that crazy ghosts sex?

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love the weasel!

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well, well, well! How does one fight /get between a ghost and a person is really the million dollar question. I kind of want Blair to look at Devin, really look at him and then...boom bang, see the light, but what fun would that be. So I guess I'll wait for you to just write the next chapter.
Please hurry and write more soon.

Author's Response:

Next chapter will post tomorrow around 9:30 PST. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm ready for ghost!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

I can't wait until the house!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds good!

Reviewer: Sailiwon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 10

Last line cpt 10

What a nice laugh. Caught me totally by suprise.

Tks



Author's Response:

Glad I could make you chuckle. :)

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh my goodness! Why oh why would you stop here?
Please don't leave us hanging long.
Cant wait for the next chapter.
Great story, really enjoy it.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing! The next chapter will be posted tomorrow morning. It is a bit of a cliff hanger insn't it!

Reviewer: Fanfictionfan1664 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 15

So it seems Blair doesn't know he's dead. Can't wait to see how Elizabeth and Devin talk their way out of this!

Thanks for writing.


Trip

Author's Response:

Poor Blair! He's got a rude awakening coming his way.

Reviewer: beck Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 14

Ooh! Can't wait to find out what the connection is. Thanks for this story.



Author's Response:

You're welcome! Thanks for the reviews. The connection is revealed in the next chapter - I just posted it. Enjoy!

Reviewer: Rie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 13

Aww poor Devin! Good chapter...hmmm just a tad worried about her, huh?

~Marie :) 



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's fallen pretty hard.

Reviewer: Fanfictionfan1664 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's very rare I read original fic - I'm a Twi fan through and through. But this story has capture my attention, and I look forward to each update. Thanks for sharing it.

Trip

Author's Response:

Thanks Trip! This was a fun idea for me and I'm toying with the idea of starting another ghostly story for the MASTERpiece contest, but I'm not 100% committed yet. I always appreciate your reviews - you were a regular reviewer of Strawberry Wine as well.

I'm so glad you like the story!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story looks interesting! I love a good mystery!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! This was a fun story to write. I hope you like it as it all plays out.

Reviewer: FunFish2222 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm enjoying this!!! Wonder where she is. Can't wait to read more!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing. Every place mentioned in this story with the exception of Stormclyffe House is a real place in Maine. She's on an actual island that local teens use for drinking parties and shenanigans.

Reviewer: Rie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 12

Okayyy....Well thats a crummy way to start the day! LOL Can't wait to see how she gets off the island.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it would definitely suck to wake up that way.

Thanks for continuing to review. Reviews are like tiny cheerleaders cheering on my efforts.

Reviewer: beck Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

Deven sounds hot!



Author's Response:

I think so too :)

Reviewer: beck Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

I heard you had started posting another story! Glad you're back. Does this mean you'll be posting more to Second Spins again? Prettyprettyplease?



Author's Response:

Soon! I have to finish a novella for a publisher's prompt, but once it's finished I will get back to Second Spins. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: Rie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

Yay! I am very excited to read this story. I love original work. :D



Author's Response:

Thanks! Feel free to check out my other two stories. They are both original - one finished, the other almost finished.

Reviewer: Rie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi :) Good 4 chapters but I'm confused...Is that the end? It says complete but it didn't feel that way at the end. I hope its not because this story has a really good story line going. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Rie! It's got twenty chapters total. I'll be posting a few a day. If I get enough positive feedback I might add a bit more to it now that I don't have to keep it under 20,000 words.

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