Date: 28 Dec 2018 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
love this story! need more to find out what happens next!
Date: 09 Jun 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Is this finished?
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
I JUST FINISH READING THE 4 CHAPTERS YOU HAVE UP I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT SO MUCH IT WAS VERY HOT BUT WHY DOES IT READ LIKE IT IS UNFINISHED IT REALLY LEFT ME WANTING A LOT MORE.
Date: 07 Jan 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
hello. I want to ask you for permission to translate this story on Russian I would be glad to see your written permission in the form of letters in the mailbox anyutik-k@yandex.ru . thank you in advance! and thank you for the beautiful story!
Date: 14 Oct 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, that was some encounter in the parking lot! I hope he kept some wipes in his glove box because all I can think about is trying to clean Bella off before they go back inside! LOL - well I was thinking about the hot sex too...!
I'm almost afraid to read the next chapter because I'm afraid this is going to get really dramatic if Charlie is really dead and Esme is happy about it. And if he's not dead, then they're going to be fugitives any way you look at it...
Date: 08 Oct 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh man, can you say 180? That was a totally unexpected, crazy-ass chapter! WTF? I am just spinning thinking about how quickly this story changed! I had not expected any of this chapter and it seems like this is going to end badly...like Bonnie and Clyde! Lord, please tell me they're not going down in a blaze of glory...
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it! Can't wait to read the other chapters you wrote!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow this was great!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great story and also pretty hot. Can't wait to see their love unfold and also see what happens in the present time with Charlie's disappearing and Bella and Edward on the flight.
Nice style of writing.
What I find somehow a little bit confusing, is that the story is marked as completed, but still ongoing.
Date: 03 Oct 2012 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
hope you update soon :) x love it
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
Please let them have a HEA
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for more! Does this have a hea?
Author's Response:
Sorry, I can't tell you, you'll have to read and find out ;)
Date: 29 Aug 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love it so far cant wait for more.
Date: 29 Aug 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
I didnt like it
I fucking loved it xx
Author's Response:
Had me scared there lol! Thank you ;)
Date: 29 Aug 2012 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! i think i felt that orgasm too. update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hot damn!!!! Great story!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me that Edward and Bella will not go to jail. And will have an HEA!
James is a f*cking pig!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope his d*ck rots off!
Author's Response:
I can't tell you exactly what'll happen but I will tell you that there will be a HEA ;)
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
I like this story.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
can't wait..... update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 27 Aug 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
if this was a one shot WOW!!! thank god your your continuing, it's great!!!!!!!!!! i'm so looking forward to reading.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're looking forward to it, thanks very much :)
Date: 27 Aug 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am absolutely addicted to this story! LOVE IT!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
I loved it and I hope you cont. so we can see what happens next..I also hope Charlie isn't dead.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
LMFAO - Absolutely loved this o/s. So glad they finally get their HEA although if you ever decide to extend this to a story, I'm so there LOL. Great job! Story deserves more recognition.
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
enjoyed reading
Author's Response:
Thank you :)