Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 34
Such a beautiful story, only bad part is that it has to end.
Date: 17 Jul 2013 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 34
good story.. thank you
Date: 16 Jul 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 34
What a perfect ending.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 34
loved it, great job so glad they not only had the HEA but are living the dream. Love the pic on the blog!!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 34
Crying like a baby here.
Date: 14 Jul 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 34
Wonderful chapter. Glad she got the last word with her sperm donor. Wonderful wedding.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 34
WOW! I can't believe this is the last real chapter. I will be impatienly waiting for ur final update of the EPI!! This truely has been an amazing beautifully well written story & have enjoyed following right along with u & looked forward to each & eveone of ur updates inspite of ur eratic update schedule. I am truely going to miss reading this truely captivating & intriging story. I only hope that u plan on writting a new story for me to follow along with!! Tell me do u plan on writting a new story??????????? Please tell me that u do!! I most definatly rate this story as a 10 out of a 10 & most definatly give this a 10 star rating!!!!!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 34
Wonderful!!!! I love how you wrote these two, well all of them. Can't wait for the epi. I hate to see this end. It has been one of my favorites.
Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us. I hope you have another stroy up your sleve.
Thank you again.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 34
OMG what an amazing chapter the perfect ending to this beautiful story :) can't wait to see how you finish their life. Thanks for he great read.
till next time.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 34
AWE! It's over, I loved it.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 34
So much stuff going on in this chapter. The wedding is beautiful. (Though, you managed to use the same blue hue I was so I've now had to change everything)...Despite that fact....I really like how you put it all together and I will miss this story so very much. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 34
Thank you so much for the update. This was a wonderful story.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 34
It was beautiful!!!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 34
That was a nice ending. Glad to see the good girl does get her HEA.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 34
That was a great chapter. I remember when Bella was talking to her mother she told she was going to have one. Well maybe not directly, but I knew that was what she meant. I am soooooo happy that you didn't just rush through the ending like some people do. You took your time and wrote it out and didn't leave us hanging. Your a wonderful writer!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 33
So much happened within this chapter.
One of the best proposals I've read in a while. Sweet union sex. I'm glad they seem to finally be getting back on track and healing from everything they've been through.
Hmm... I never considered why Charlie did what he did. It'll be interesting to find out why he behaved like a manic and why he hated Bella so dearly.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 33
I just love this story. I will be sad when it ends.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 33
AW I'M GOING TO SEE THIS END I LOVE THIS STORY GREAT CHAPTER I HOPE TO SEE CHARLIE GET WHATS COMMING TO HIM BIG TIME BEFORE THE END.
Date: 29 Jun 2013 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 33
Jo. Great chapter. I was surprised by the quick update. You are amazing. I love easing everything you write. I will be sad to see this one end but you have taken these characters to a good place.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2013 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 33
great chapter. are you going to do a sequel?
Date: 27 Jun 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 33
Woo hoo Sweet proposal, new baby, new jobs/school, and all. Wonderful chapter as always.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 32
Think Bella did really well considering everything done to her. Def can understand them not going back
Date: 27 Jun 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 33
OMG! So much in this chapter. And thanks for the tissue warning. I SO needed it...Like I was sobbing; the kind of sobbing that makes your nose run sobbing. I swear I cried through the whole chapter. Everything from Bella saying yes, Atomic baby's arrival, everything. I had a feeling Bella was going to ask Garrett to give her away and I am glad that's what she did. I am also very happy to know that there will be at least two more chapters. This chapter almost felt like an ending. I am really going to miss this story when it's over. I've connected with this Bella on so many levels, more than you probably know. I love this story. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 26 Jun 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 33
Awww. I love the babies name. Very cute Nei is adorable.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 33
Oh I am so happy for them! Finally, after all they have been through, their happy ever after. I would LOVE a sequel...hint, hint
What a wonderful story you have written. You are truly talented and I am so happy to have found you in this vast land of fanfiction. Thank you!
Date: 26 Jun 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 33
I can understand Bella wanting to understand why Charlie did certain things to her. I hope he has a very reasonable explanation, but I can't think of any. I hope Bella realizes you can't understand hateful people or why they do the things they do.
Date: 25 Jun 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 32
I'm so glad that they have found their way back to each other. It's also great they have there plans for their future started. I'm not worried about her response one bit. So I don't mind the cliffy.
Date: 24 Jun 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 32
That was the sweetest proposal ever. I am so glad that she has came through the pain and they are stronger for it.
Date: 24 Jun 2013 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 32
I just read these last 3 chapters........loved every one! But yeah....that is mean of you leaving this 'cliffy' :-p
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2013 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 32
AS ALWAYS ANOTHER CHAPTER VERY WELL WRITTEN. HMMM!!!! WELL IT DOES SADDENS ME THAT THE END IS FAST APROACHING. THIS STORY OBVIOUSLY HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR A SEQUEL WITH THE NEW DIRECTION THERE LIVES ARE HEADED FOR BUT YOU ARE THE MAGIC MAKER AND ONE CAN ONLY HOPE.
Date: 24 Jun 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 32
Jo. Thank you for allowing them both to heal so much. Great job. It was so full of emotions. I hate your cliffie ;-). But the rest was awesome.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 32
yep ... you syck. :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 32
Awesome chapter!
Date: 23 Jun 2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 32
Of course she will say yes...i like how bella has overcome and grown so much. Emotional scars take longer to heal than physical ones, so im proud of bella
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 32
Glad they seem to finally be healing and moving forward with their lives and are no longer allowing themselves to be victims.
Date: 23 Jun 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 32
Awwww! I am so happy to see them finally work things out and be closer. I knew they just needed some time. And I totally love what Marcus is doing for the both of them. That's very exceptional and not many bosses would do that. Very nice touch. Edward's proposal is very thoughtful and sweet. I completely love it! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 31
I'm glad they both realize that they need help!! :) I can't wait to read more about the therapy!! Great chapter!
Date: 22 Jun 2013 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 30
I have a feeling that Bella will take her distance in the next chapter! I can't wait to read more ;)
Date: 19 Jun 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 31
wow out for a whole month??? dayum but reasonable. So what happened with Charlie besides being arrested? hope someone killed him or at least made him thier biatch in jail.
They both def need help
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 31
I don't understand why Edward won't carry Bella upstair but Garret ???
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
This is truely a very beautifully captivating & intriging story!!! I am truely enjoing reading this amazingly well developed story!! Thanks for all ur hard work & dedication in writting this story. I am definatly giving this story a 10 star rating!!! I absolutly love long stories most of all!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2013 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 31
OH MOST DEFFINATELT NOTHING BUT LOVIN FOR YOU! WITHOUT A DOUBT ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER.
Date: 11 Jun 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 31
This was an amazing chapter, so emotional. Looking forward to next update.
Date: 10 Jun 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 31
amazing, the chapters get better and better!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2013 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 31
I think you captured the struggles, someone would have in circumstances as this, very well.
Date: 10 Jun 2013 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 31
Great chapter!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 31
Great chapter!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 31
You did an amazing job bringing their frustrations to the surface. I do hope I am never one in that situation but if so I do hope the outcome is like yours, working together. Good luck with the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2013 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 31
WOW what a great chapter!!! I love this story! I think you did great with it...I've never had to deal with that either but I felt for both of them and could understand where they were both coming from. So great chapter!!!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 31
Love this story and anxiously await the next chapter.
Date: 10 Jun 2013 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 31
OMG! I needed so many tissues! It was interesting seeing things from Bella's point of view. And I hated seeing Edward's outburst like that, but he was frustrated and definitely did the right thing by calling Garrett to help Bella and going to his parents house. Things would have been bad had he stayed. That was needed. And I'm glad they've worked out that mess and are going to enter counseling. They both need it. Loved the scene with Bella, Esme and Rosalie and them pampering her and telling her how much they all love her. She needed that. And SO many tears while Bella was in her coma with her mom. So very very emotional! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 31
It has to be so frustrating for both of them life has changed forever when they get through this they will be so much stronger.
Date: 10 Jun 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 31
I'm here... I'm here!!!
So glad to see she's awake but sad how they've got the heal to move forward. Don't know what it feels like but can only imagine.
Can't wait for next update so they can get better and whatever Renee was talking about something good happening soon. Def can't wait!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
Ive always said i need a coma to lose weight...never thought abt the loose skin. Poor bella, i agree after a trAgic tragedy u need normal
Date: 10 Jun 2013 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 31
Just got through watching Game of Thrones finale and has got me thinking that we should put Charlies head on a spike! Bastard!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 31
I think you did a good job with the various emotions. Those self esteem issues are tough ones to fight. They like to jump up and bite you in the butt. But I am glad to see Bella fighting through it and realizing when she needs help.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 30
I just finished reading all 30 chapters...I love the story! Please continue!! I also agree with your responses to negative feedback...ignore all of those. How unfortunate that people are filled with such unkindness that they fail to realize that their statements truly hurt and cause grief. This is the only story of yours that I have read so far but I have enjoyed your take on the characters. There is a gift that people have when they can cause others to smile, feel happiness, and hope! You have that gift!
Date: 04 Jun 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 30
See I had faith. I knew you weren't evil.
Date: 04 Jun 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh I just knew there was going to be a confrontation at the hospital and they would take the ER hostage.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2013 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 30
Ohhh thanks to God she's alright :')
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2013 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
What a terrifying and dramatic event that scene was. I didn't expect Bella to be awake by the end of the chapter, so that was a nice surprise.
Oh my gosh, how much more drama can these two withstand before they crash and burn? I don't see how either will be able to return to working in the ER without having flashbacks, or if even they could handle it at all.
Date: 29 May 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 30
Yay Bella's awake!!!
Date: 29 May 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 30
Lord I cryed trough this whole chapter. When he begged Carlisle to do what ever he had to to save her I just boo hooed. My husband was like "what the hell's wrong with you?!?" LOL
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2013 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 30
Great chapter! So glad bella is ok!
Date: 27 May 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 30
That was a packed chapter!
Date: 27 May 2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 30
Great job sweetheart. This was quite the chapter. Take care.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 30
Wow! Loved the intervention! Glad Bella's a fighter too."
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 30
you had me crying on this one, thanks, lol. Great chapter though one little error, a person who has been on a ventorlater for as long as Bella has, has to be weaned off over a period of time, the lungs need time to relearn to work on there own again. But VERY good
Date: 27 May 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 30
I'm so happy you updated. I really like your story and i'm already looking foreward for next chater.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 30
Wow What a chapter!! Loved it!!! Keep up the great work!!!
Date: 27 May 2013 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 30
Well of course they will fight and push the other away....they both went though a tramatic experiance......edward with thinking he wouldlose bella and bella having to deal with the fact her father hated her so much he would kill her
Date: 27 May 2013 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 30
I was worried you would cut off the chapter when she was shot. TY for not doing that and making me crazy.
Garrett and Em were funny. One step forward and two steps back...Bella is going to really need therapy and patience.
Date: 27 May 2013 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 30
So happy she is awake but she will have a long recover to bad that Jacob and Charlie where not killed I would of liked that. Please let Bella have a baby they need to be able to do that.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 30
omg you!!!!!! I'm crying over here!!!!!!! God so sad!! I'm so happy she's okay but you have to give them children you have too!!!!!!!! Bella has to be able to move on with Edward and have kids and be su0per happy forever and ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! god i'm just so sad and happy at the same time and wishing death to charlie jacob and sam!!!!!!!!! they don't deserve to live i don't care what you do you make those bastards suffer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next update and do you know approximately how many more chapters will be added?? that way i can brace myself for the sadness of the story ending but yes youu must give bella and edward their happy ever after!!!!!!!!!!! you must it has to happen!!!!!!!!!!! they must live happy and healthy and married with kids and grandkids and great grandkids they must!!!!!!! you have to do this after all the shit in this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! stupid fucking charlie and jacob i hate you!!!!!!!!! sam you too burn in hell basstards!!!!!!!!!!! end rant!!!!! update soon can't wait for more!!!!!!!
Date: 27 May 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 30
WOW. That was totally drama filled. I did NOT expect Charlie to shoot her. Let alone shoot her three times! I'm glad that Edward and Garrett were able to take down Jacob. I am wondering though, what happened to Charlie? Was he killed? Is he in police custody? What about him? I'm VERY happy that Bella made it through everything. I don't think I've ever been that stressed out reading a chapter or on edge. LOTS of emotions in this chapter. Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
Love it hope charlie and jacob die horendous deaths
Date: 27 May 2013 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 30
HEA HEA HEA HEA...: of course there'll be repercussion from the event but I'm glad you didn't end the chapter with her still in the coma or when his hair was being pulled.
Still can't wait for next update... The crazier update may bring an earlier chapter ;)
Date: 24 May 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 29
ahh. Hate you ? No . strangle you? Yes. LOL Get us off the ledge..
Date: 24 May 2013 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 29
Tufano - Your cliff hangers always kill me. great chapter. I loved her journal entry we should all be so healthy and aware. mmmmm. maybe I should start journaling. Great job I can't wait for the update. Please take care.
Vicki
Date: 24 May 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wouldn't Angela have known that one of the dick heads in the waiting room was Bella's dad or had she never seen him? So her nightmare is beginning for real. I think she will realie she's stronger than she thinks she is but I hope no one gets hurt unless it's that piece of shit who calls himself her father
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2013 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 29
OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT HER DAD IS TRYING TO KILL BELLA LIKE SERIOUSLY AND WHO THE HELL IS HELPING HIM????????? JACOB????????? SAM?????? WHO WOULD WANT TO HURT HER I MEAN SHE MAY HAVE ENEMIES BUT YOU SHOULDN'T JUST TRY TO KILL THEM!!!!!!! LIKE WTF!!!!!!!!! OMG I HATE CLIFFIES BUT OMG YOU MUST UPDATE BEFORE THE WEEKEND IS OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MUST FIND OUT WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH IM FREAKING OUT!!!!!!!!! Btw what do you mean by the cocking of a hammer like a gun?????? omg he can't kill her!!!!!!
Date: 23 May 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 29
God! Are you serious... I so want to kill Charlie and Jacob!! :) I can't wait till the next chapter! I so want to know what will happen!
Date: 23 May 2013 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 29
What the hell? Please post soon, verry soon, like now.
Date: 23 May 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 29
shit shit shit not him and not a gun. Everything was going so well but she new something was going to go wrong. Where is security I hpe they are sneaking in to kill that bastard.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2013 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 29
I'm glad Alice stuck to her guns and didn't waiver for Jasper's pathetic ass.
I loved Bella's birthday presents. Edward really treated her right. The surprise dinner was a nice touch.
I expected Charlie to show back and up and cause grief, but didn't expect him to take Bella, Edward, and Garrett hostage at gunpoint. Angela said there were two men in the waiting room, Charlie and I'm gonna assume Jacob.
Looking forward to more.
Date: 23 May 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 29
grrrrrr....... REALLY!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 29
Love the story!!! Can't wait to see what happens!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 29
Obviously we cant see exactly what Alice saw at the bar, but seems like she overreacted a bit.
Yummy birthday.
YA KILLING ME with the cliffy!!!
Date: 23 May 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 29
Well, totally loved everything for Bella's birthday. Very nice. I love her journal entry. Realizing that she's nothing that Charlie ever said she was. Now, that ending....I don't hate you for it. We knew the shit with Charlie wasn't over...not by a long shot. It just sucks that her dream and fear are coming to fruition. I really hope that no one gets hurt! Thanks for sharing!