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Reviewer: beth626 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2022 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wow!!!

Reviewer: beth626 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2022 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wow!

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2020 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wait that's how it ends?! I was hoping for so much more! This was such a great story!

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2020 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

She can be just as vexing and cruel as Stefan. Yet sexy and sly too.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2020 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 16

Gah, I just love Peter!!!

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2020 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

His instincts to bite her where he did were perfect and did just the trick 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2020 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 14

Now that was a yummy chapter!

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 13

Seriously what's going on with her hearing and senses of smell?

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 12

Hawt dayum!!! Get to it kiddies 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 11

Yeah I definitely like this Bella much better! And I hope Jasper leaves the cullens and joins Stefan and Bella.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 10

Just let it go Bella and be the other crazy half to his.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 9

How pissed is she gonna be when she wakes?

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 8

Just accept Stefan and get laid girlie 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

If she could just get over being scared. I thought she knew of vampires if Edward was trying to get her to go a her birthday party?

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

For her sake I hope she gets with the program 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh, I do so hope Bella doesn't get squeamish now.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 4

It's like hide and go seek, but with death 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 3

Bwahahahaha... 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 2

Stefan seems like a hottie with the whole bad boy thing going. I wonder if Bella will be his mate? I also like the fact that last chapter Charlie totally took up for her. I'm so glad she's not some whiny little crybaby.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hilarious beginnings!

Reviewer: Gabby0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2019 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 18

I hadn't read this story in years. I still love it! I'm also still sad it ends here and we don't get to see the shot they stir up in the future. 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2018 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 18

I love your stories 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm glad Charlie got closure, but I sure wanted to see some Cullen pain.  I am so mean, huh?  I loved this story though.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 17

In addition to being an ass, Aro is really stupid.  Dam!   I can't wait to see Carlisle and his cronies die.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 16

I love that she knew Peter and Char and they were protecting her.  Her gift would be more like a curse for a while I think.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 15

I'm happy that both Bella and Stephan got to fuck Edward up.  Carlisle is so annoying.  I wonder how he will die.  I hope it's painful.  mwahahaha

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, I wish t5hat Stephan had to prove to Bella that he trusts her in the same manner of ways.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

something about the ear ringing is fishy to me......  i don't know why the Cullens aren't running away screaming..........

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 12

I love that Stephan is getting all sensitive with her and worrying about her issues.   Everyone else can go to hell, but he cares about Bella's pain and choices.

I do hope she gets to kill Edward and maybe Alice and Carlsle. :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 11

I love the Cullen confrontation.  Bella's quip about Carlisle to Jasper while they were walking out was too funny.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 10

Bella's confusion at Stephan's hotness is cute.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

I wonder what all Stephan has planned.   hmmmmm

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 8

Poor Bella is so confused.  I do so wish that she had learned some vamp stuff from the Cullens before her trip and that would make her opinionated sass talk to Edward that more awesome.  LOL

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 7

I like that members of the Volturi are laughing at Aro behind his back.  I do wish that Stephan was a little nicer to Bella though.  But I guess he is supposed to be scary and shit.  I'm OK with that to everyone else.  --shrugs--

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 6

So Bella didn't know about the Cullens being vampires yet?  That does change things for Bella.  Too bad she didn't already know about vamps.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 5

Bella fainted from freaking out.  Poor thing.    I did laugh at all the names she called her teacher though.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well I am glad I was misguided at my thoughts of Stephan eating Bella as well as the others.   I am glad about Aro getting framed for killing everyone else.  mwahaha  Does that make me a bad person?  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awe....now it seems like Stephan wants to kill everyone, including Bella.  :(

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

Yay!  So Stephan is intrigued with our sassy Bella.  I am too.  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love that this Bella didn't cave in one dam bit to Edward and Alice's bitching and moaning.  I even loved the idea of Charlie throwing a bitch fit at the school too.  :)

Reviewer: Ohsasy Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Another wonderful masterpiece. You wrote my vampires the way I love them with death, sex blood, and gore . Stephan is truly the devil and he's unapologetic for it.

Reviewer: elvenayra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

The Best! All your stories are great but this one & the Demons Mate are my fav.

Reviewer: mum2shane Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 18

must say this is one of the best stories iv read in a long time

Reviewer: Eclipse3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 13

Real dracula stefan is cool

Bella is hillarius

 

Reviewer: kitty81424 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

If you ever want to write a fanfic that also have romanian words, i could help you. Google translate is not very precise. Adress kitty81424@yahoo.com

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2015 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 18

Aaaaah fucking feelings

Reviewer: andrew_pine Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 18

Fantastic story.wouldhave liked to see Eddie and Daddy dismembered and burned before Aro left.

Reviewer: andrew_pine Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 9

So she gets rid of one ass in Eddie to be stuck for eternity with another,girl can't catch a break.

Reviewer: andrew_pine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 2

So when will Bella be meeting her obsession? will she be his mate or just another meal?

Reviewer: andrew_pine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2015 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well,can't wait to see what happens.i gather the small town they are going to visit is Volterra,just what kind of crap will she be getting into there?are the students taking a castle tour????

Reviewer: jenni1992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

love this storie

Reviewer: Pegasus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 18

God, I've always loved your stories, and this one is no exception. What a wonderful story hon. Thank you so much for sharing it with us, I truely enjoyed it...thanks...bigg huggs. Peggy

Reviewer: myuniverse424 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 18

This was the stefan fic I've read and I really liked it.  It was well developed and everything was tied up well.  Loved it.

Reviewer: brneyez84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2013 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Just came across your stories and read this one first..... And I gotta say HOLY SHIT ON A BRICK I LOVED THIS......I have never read a Bella and Stefan based one before and this was AWESOME!!!!!!!!! I would love to read more if u do decide to write another in the future..... How does this story only have 9 reviews?...10 if u count mine??? It's awesome!!! 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2013 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 18

love it

Reviewer: Jolynda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hi,

That was a wonderful story.  I didn't review before cause I wanted to read it all.  

You kept your readers interested till the end, and this in my book is what a good writer is, along with a good story that is credible.

 

Thanks to you to share your writings

 

God Bless

 

Lynda

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 18

Fantastic and sarcastic and all around awesome.

Loved this story. Please tell me you'll be writing a sequel.

XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin

Reviewer: MrsBrowne Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

I love the whole cat and mouse thing... 

Reviewer: MrsBrowne Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 6

I really am loving Stefan, But i am wondering.... Did Bella already get bitten by James? Guess i will find out in the other chapters....

Reviewer: MrsBrowne Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 5

Boy that was scarry....

Reviewer: MrsBrowne Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm Loving the story so far.... 

Reviewer: MrsBrowne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow... I love this Bella... 

Reviewer: MrsBrowne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good First chappie, I would so love to read . Edward having a tantrum.... : )

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