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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 9:18 AM Title: February Junior Year

Oh poor, deluded Jasper 'she keeps to herself' lololololol.  Edward's finally noticed Bella, well how could he fail not to, she's stalked him relentlessly since September and schemed her way into his life, lol, just your average normal teenage behaviour.  I bet she nearly wet herself when he sat next to her in English and then to be assigned the seat next to him in biology....well I'm surprised she could word vomit about that shit call in the game, I'd have been so tongue tied.  She's gone from knowing nothing to being the uber fact girl on hockey stats and plays......well I suppose something good had to come from the stalking, lol. 

I'm so glad that Jasper and Alice are finally together.  Will Bella's planning turn out the way she thinks it will?  Time will tell.  Rose was very wise with her words and friendships can survive boyfriends especially if you don't neglect the friendship in the first place. 

I know Bella's wondering now what she actually wants to happen with Edward now that she's actually getting closer to the prize.  I'm beginning to wonder if Bella's getting a little scared that this is just a pure obsession and she might not want anything further, I mean she's not told her friends anything and usually your friends know who you're obsessed with and become your enablers, or she may be getting scared that she might actually have to do something and we all know how inexperienced Bella is.  Of course, I could be reading too much into this as well, lol, at least I make you laugh. *grins*

Can't wait for the next chapter, I love this story.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Edward did notice Bella.. and now the funcan begin!! She was a bit besides herself with all her good luck... hence the word vomit.. I think she wanted to impress him..and she at least left a good imnpression!!

 

We will see how Bella processes everything she is feeling... and along the way.. we willsee how Edward reacts to her!!

 

Thanks!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 8:19 AM Title: January Junior Year

Lol, Edward knows he has a stalker and thinks it's Jess, hahahaha isn't that lucky for Bella.  Yuk, I can't believe she's taken sweaty socks and a sweaty towel, well I'm assuming she popped into the changing room after she spoke to Alec, like you do, maybe sniffed and cuddled his t-shirt before grabbing the towel and socks and legging it out of there.  I now have a vision of her wearing Edward's t-shirt she nicked previously, his sweaty socks and the towel wrapped around her waist.......am I going too far?  I'm starting to worry myself a little.....um.

Imagine if Chief Swan had to get a restraining order out on his own daughter, ohh the shame.....*snort*

Jane x



Author's Response:

Yea.. the socks and towel may be over the line.. but Bella is a bit crazy!!! Hmm I think Bella would more be the type to put them in plastic bags to preserve the smell.. lol....

Ohh could even imagine if the Chief had to arrest her!!?? OMG.. too  funny!

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 2:25 AM Title: December Junior Year

Bwahahahaha!!  Stalker - much?  Oh my God, I'm reliving my teenage years.  Lol, Bella's made a scrapbook and a bit of spy file on Edward, yeah well let's hope that doesn't fall into the wrong hands.  Now she has her campaign to get up close to Edward but still keeping a little distance in the process of which, she's now graduated to full on stalker by nicking his t-shirt, hahaha, I take it she'll be sleeping in that. 

She's right there is no reasoning for all of this, it's just something you have to do. *snort*  Like I said I'm reliving my teenage years and my mild (compared to Bella's) stalkerish tendancies of a boy in the year above me called Chris.  He had the low rise jeans thing going on before it was even trendy (we're going back some years here) and would actually speak to me.......sometimes. *swoon*

Jane x



Author's Response:

Ohh Jane.. your reviews make me laugh!!

Yea.. I think if ya look up stalker.. Bella's picture would be right there.... lol.. but you are right.. I think on some level it a common thing for teens to do!! I sorta kinda did it as well... I just have Bella going to the EXTREME!!

glad I could helpyou relive your teen years with a smile!!

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: RPatzonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 1:04 PM Title: December Junior Year

LOL!!  She is quite the stalker!!  



Author's Response:

Yea.. she is.. I love this Bella!!

Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 1:00 AM Title: December Junior Year

OMG TALK BOUT STALKER OBSESSED!!!!!!!!!!! WOW I CANT BELIEVE SHE ACTUALLY STOLE ONE OF HIS SHIRTS!!!!!!!! I RLLY WANNA NOW WAT WAS UP WITH THE PROLOUGE AND WAT SHE REGRETS BY GETTING WHERE EVER SHE GOT!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

HEHE... yea.. she is a bit obsessed.. altho.. this is just the start of it all!! Come on.. haven't you ever wanted to steal the shirt of someone you had a crush on??

As for the prolougue... that wont happen until we get to the summer between Junior and Senior years in high school. so we have some time!!

Thanks!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 12:23 AM Title: November Junior Year

And so the sexual awakening of Bella begins, woohoo!!  I had to laugh when Bella mentions she knows Edward's schedule and has a sudden interest in hockey, then she wonders why she's in such a tizzy about Edward, lol, lust Bella, pure unadulterated lust and now she's being led around by her clit, hahahaha!!  I'm surprised at Alice and Rose not reading more into Bella's questions about Edward, was she really that good at hiding her interest?

So Edward's back, easing himself back into general population, walking around with his eyes closed......wonder how long that will last now that Mike has mentioned Bella, a little seed has been planted in his brain and little does Edward realise but Bella's on a mission, especially after her first 'O' so glad that happened for her.  Bwahahahaha!!

Jane x



Author's Response:

Yes..it has begun!! Bella had her first O and she has her obsession!!! But like the Bella she is.. she is resisting it all.. trying to make sense out of lust and well..sometime ya just need to ride that for all its worth!! As for Rose and Alice..wel.. Bella is good at hiding it.. she's kinda stealthy!!

Edward is back....and the seed of Bella has been planted... I have a feeling he is gonna be a stubborn boy!! But it will all be better for the chase..right??

 

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 6:44 PM Title: November Junior Year

GOD I READ THE ONE SHOT AND THEN I HAD TO READ THE ACTUAL STORY AND GOT THE PROLOGE MAKES ME WANT TO KNOW WAT SHE DOES REGRET AND WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED!!!!! I ALSO WANNA KNOW IF THE PROLOUGE MEANS THAT HER AND EDWARD ARE TOGETHER AFTER HS AND COLLEGE!!!!!!! CANT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE MAKE IT SOON DYING FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Ohh you got lots of questions and I promise you that they will be answered.. just give it time.. for now enjoy the story and the ride.

See ya next week sweets!!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 6:18 PM Title: October Junior Year

Awww, Edward is so hurt.  He says he's back to his hockey routine and it's comforting, but that's just it, he's closing himself off and using his comforting hockey routine to get through.  Have Jasper and Emmett noticed what their friend's doing or are they just being unobservant guys?  They need to help him get back into life again, it doesn't have to involve a girl, ahem.  Bree wants him back.  The only reason for her apologising is because everythings gone pear shaped, she's realised she's made a huge mistake and wants Edward back.  I'm glad that Edward didn't fall for her little game.  Jog on Bree, jog on.

Well, the vibe made it out of the drawer and eventually even to the promised land, lol.  I think Bella needs to either turn it up a notch or use something like those links Alice sent her, after all she doesn't want to hurt the vibes feelings now does she, bwahahahahaha!!  Bless her, she'll get there.  I had to laugh at the staring contest she was having with it. 

Love and lust *sigh* such a tricky subject but as teenagers we do mistake lust for love.  It's such an all or nothing time and everything is either magical or devastating and then we grow up.  I feel sorry for Charlotte and of course, Rose is right, Riley doesn't have the first clue what he's doing so it has to be Charlotte's fault.  Riley will probably always be that 'wham bam, thank you ma'am' guy or the two pump chump, call it what you will but that will be him, lol.

Jane x



Author's Response:

LOL.. I think you give his friends a bit too much credit.. but I think they are giving him his space... he will come out... just give him some time. Plus... he really doesn't want the school to pity him. He's soo over her.. so he's just ignoring the pity..thats all.

Yes..the vibe made it out..and well it hard tosay who won and who lost.. lol.. I thinkshe wants tpo feel normal.. but not freaked out by how the vibe feels.. its a scary thing to try the first time!!

Lust is tricky and they mistake the two all the time.. but I guess live and learn!!

Thanks for a kick ass review!

Reviewer: zdra8351 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 12:09 AM Title: September- Junior Year

Cant wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

So glad ya liked it!! Will see you next week with more...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 11:02 PM Title: September- Junior Year

they are MFEO.....but the timing has to be right...



Author's Response:

Ahh love the sleepless in seattle reference!! You are right..things need to be perfect!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 10:41 PM Title: Summer- Junior Year

good riddance, Bree. he wasn't meant for you anyway!  great start. gonna love this story, I just know it!



Author's Response:

LOL.. yea.. she is no good for him!!!

So happy that you are enjoying it!!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:21 PM Title: September- Junior Year

Could Bella be any more naive?  Dear God, I'm tempted to say she's like a twelve year old little girl but even those are interested in boys, lol.  I can't believe she's shoved that vibe in a drawer, so not where it's meant to be, hahaha!  I can only think that once Bella does stumble across Edward that she'll be struck by lightning and Bella will be needing to replace the batteries in that vibe at least once a week. *snort*

I can appreciate Bella's confusion about the girl code, I mean she does seem to have been living under a rock or in a book but there's nothing to say that she can't tell Alice that Jasper really likes her, get her to notice what's a plain as the nose on Alice's face. Mwahahahaha!!

Oh, by the way, I'm salivating over Edward's six pack.......is that wrong of me?  He is legal in the UK. Lol.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Ahhh yes... she is naive.... a very very late bloomer..... and like you said.. she's been in a book... been keeping to herself.. so all of this is new.. A the vibe.... dont worry... we haven't seen the last of it!!! hehe give her some time... her journey is gonna be too funny!!

The girl code can be tricky..... but like you said she is new to this... she will learn and Alice will school ya.....

 

Girl.. amaze over the abs hun.. its ok.....we all want to do it!!

Reviewer: RPatzonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 7:48 PM Title: September- Junior Year

Curiosity will get to Bella soon!!  LOL

at least Edward isn't a manwhore;)

Love it!!



Author's Response:

Ohh yea.. I am sure that curiosity will soo get to her!!

Nope.. my Edward is not a man whore..... 

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 5:15 PM Title: Summer- Junior Year

Great chapter. I liked the part where it said never let them see you sweat. It was funny and the angry birds thing. I'm always yelling at the dumb birds to kill those stupid pigs. Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

hee..glad ya like it!! Its true.. never let them see you sweat!! As for ANgry birds..man that shit is addicting!!

thanks for reading!!!!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:11 PM Title: Summer- Junior Year

Double clicked her mouse....bwahahahahaha!!  Oh my God, I love this story it's so funny and witty.  Alice has two Barbies now, Bella and Malibu, lol.  I have this picture in my head of the girls sitting in Rose's bedroom, Alice and Rose obssessing over boys and sex whilst Bella's chin is permanently on the floor, lol.

If I was Edward, which clearly I can't be, but if I was I would have slammed Bree's bedroom door and run off just to make her wonder and panic about who'd caught her just to mess with her head a bit, lol.  I loved Edward's text message, boys will be boys but she deserved it.  Poor Edward, but now it's on to better things.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Yea.... I just love that phrase... I can sooo see Bella looking like that as they said that.. I mean.. its an odd phrase if ya think about it!!!

Yes... to Barbies... the Orginal and Malibu.....

 

Ahhh Edward.... Yea.... I think Iwould have stormed in there as well.. but.. I think he handled it well...dont you?? But you are right...better things are on the horizon!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:08 PM Title: Prologue

I'm intrigued, I can't wait to read more.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Ohh thyat is the plan.. get you all intrigued!!

Thanks...

 

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:51 PM Title: Summer- Junior Year

 I freaking love  it !



Author's Response:

Soo glad that you are liking it!! Thanks!!

Reviewer: Love to drive like a vampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:58 AM Title: Summer- Junior Year

 



Author's Response:

ummm...a blank review?? ohh ok!!

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 4:01 PM Title: Prologue

Hmm...Sounds interesting. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Glad to have you along for the ride!!

:)

Reviewer: mmsinful Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 9:08 AM Title: Prologue

This Bella sounds slutty already. I feel like she'll bring mixed reactions.



Author's Response:

Ohhh she is just starting out...... I think you will love her transofrmation!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2012 5:49 PM Title: Prologue

never read a Hockeyward story.....here goes!



Author's Response:

well I am happy to be the first and I hope you enjoy!!

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:26 AM Title: Prologue

Liked the intro !



Author's Response:

Glad that you did!!! New chapter next week!!

Reviewer: RPatzonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:56 AM Title: Prologue

I want nitty gritty details!!!!  



Author's Response:

LOL>... they are coming..posting starts next week!!

Thanks!!

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