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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

I really enjoyed reading your story.  Thank you for sharing with us.  



Author's Response:

Bella isn't Edward's anymore is suppossedly a good story of mine to read for a laugh and plenty enough action. So i have been told. lol

I have read it myself and enjoyed it when my helpers told me it was a good one.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 12

Hot!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thankyou

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow, I was not expecting that.  



Author's Response:

He will learn to not withold details from them one way or another.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2016 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 10

They do enjoy their playtime 



Author's Response:

Of course ;D

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2016 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

I thought there would have been more interaction with Edward. I expected Bella to have words with Edward.  They sure do like to fuck.  



Author's Response:

I am not a lover of eddy boy

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2016 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 8

Another chapter filled with hot sex. 



Author's Response:

I like to make it what reality isn't

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2016 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 7

That was a chapter full of sex!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

OF COURSE! LOL

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2016 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

Did Demtri ever explain the mating stuff to them?



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2016 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 5

Can't wait to see Bella's powers. I'm wondering with her power is she going to be able to let Major be the dominant.  Lol



Author's Response:

she is going to be wonderful but not sure if i should put them in or not. it was about the relationship

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

Jasper finally had Bella and did not break her. Lol



Author's Response:

He is nearly 200, he would have some control

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

Lol. Love Bella's comment to the attendant.  



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 2

I am a little confused, how did Bella make Peter in Charlotte?



Author's Response:

have wanted to edit it for some time

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

This sounds very interesting.  Love Bella talking in her sleep about Edward. 



Author's Response:

thanx for reading this one.I liked writing it.

Reviewer: TinaF Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 13

Wonderful story!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great loved it

Author's Response:

thank you, glad you appreciated this story.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

love all your storys here ad on ff

 



Author's Response:

Thank you

I appreciate that people enjoy reading especially when they read what i write.

It helps my confidence just that little bit more when i get this type of support. Thank you and god bless

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

Cute end. Thanks for sharing

Author's Response:

No worries

 

I am glad you stuck with the story all through

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 12

Glad Maria made them change the law. Stupid men who created it

Author's Response:

Yep! That is why she had it changed. she saw the point the women were trying to make. she knows Jasper messed up and needs to sort it out. so sending him on that 'mission' they sent him on and then getting the ceremony done was good for them

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

Ooh Jazz ...you are in trouble now

Author's Response:

YEP! He definately messed up big this time.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 10

Like domsper best

Author's Response:

Who wouldnt, huh?

A strong, commanding and hard, in all ways, Jasper. delicious

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

Yea for bad ass bella and all the dead jerks

Author's Response:

Thanks heaps for your support of this story

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 8

Yummy b and domsper

Author's Response:

glad you liked it

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 7

Yummy domsper

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Hope the rest of the story is alright for you

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

Maria and demetri. Huh?yummy times

Author's Response:

I kind of thought who he ould have and then looked at her being in the stroy but a changed woman. then it happened and they are now mates:D

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

Pooh bad ass b with powers.yummy domsper.

Author's Response:

tHANK YOU

I appreciate you sticking with this story. I have to rewrite the battle part i am told by my 17 year old son. I will read it over and see. He said he expected more from the bella character. Typical teens.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

Woo hoo yummy major claiming

Author's Response:

I am happy to have done well with this chapter for you all to read. thank you

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

Yummy. Yea for visiting Peter.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love Peter and char. Yummy major time.

Author's Response:

I always gotta have P/C in a story. somewhere they fit in to it. Much like the idea i have written down. now i have to figure how to turn it in to a story. glad i have someone collabing on the other P/B idea. 

 

have a good one sweets

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Not a big Alice femslash fan but I'll go with it

Author's Response:

Me neither, but i am trying to broaden my views just a little bit. lol

 

I am glad you like it, though, so far.

 

Reviewer: wolveschildscub Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

You like Pitch Black too huh....Love that scene and the one in the elephant graveyard. I love the story and cant wait to read more and the ones you took off of ff.net

Love Ya,

Wolfy



Author's Response:

Yes, i certainly do like it, and the chronicles of Riddick.

I like Vin Diesel too, the picture of his bare torso under a shower was scrumptious and i am keeping it in my lap top now. i love the internet.

Reviewer: vampirechick13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hello my dear i must say i can't wait till you have you other stories out here !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love your stoirs still momma



Author's Response:

I know you do, daughter. Yes i am slowly moving them all out here to TWCS. will be sending you an idea soon, mainly becausee once iwrote it down i couldnt think on what to do with it.

Do you watch true blood at all?

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