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Reviewer: Scribners2328 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2020 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

OMG.  Loved your A/N (both beginning and end)!!

Reviewer: Scribners2328 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2020 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

OMG.  Loved your A/N (both beginning and end)!!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 26

awesome little drabble ;) i don't know what happened to chapter 24 and i hope i didn't miss anything? thanks for sharing this with us on here ;D

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 26

Fun and adorable!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 26

well done your story was cute

Reviewer: uga Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 26

This is why I love drabbles!  A lot of story in few words.  Loved how you hit on important moments in life.  Most of all I loved the love the characters have for one another.

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 26

Aww so cute an awesome loved the story!!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 23

Aww loved the chapter!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 22

Aww that's so sweet of Edward and so romantic they been with each other forever :D

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 22

He is so sweet! They are perfect together

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 22

Awwww

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 21

Aww poor Edward :(

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 20

Aww they called it karma lol I hope not major angst I don't like they fighting to much lol awesome chapter!!! :D

Reviewer: amanzo828 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 20

This story is so cute! Can't wait for me 

 

-Amanda 

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 19

Aww so romantic!! Well when you know you know!!! So happy for Edward and Bella and of course she's going to say yes!! :D

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

Sometimes you just know it is right

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 18

oh wow,  if Edward was my first i never would have stopped !!!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

I love Edward and Bella :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 17

I'm loving your story!!! It's cute how they been their first in everything I hope it stays like that and theirs no drama lol :D amazing chapter can't wait forthe next update!!! :D

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

Umm ... **phew** it's hawt in here lol

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 17

Ok, really like this story! But oralward make me combust!!



Author's Response:

Haha....Oralward.  Love it!   

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 17

whew is fucking right,   wow what a day !!!!!!!  Thank you :)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

wow she is sexting him pics !!!!!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh Baby, Oh Baby!!!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 13

"Bonerward"...LOL!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 7

This is so cute!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loving the story!!! :D so cute

Reviewer: purplemischief Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 15

How old are they now? It feels like fast forward, evrything is happening so fast. And pls give more

Author's Response:

I would put them at 18 here, say senior year of high school or just after.   You're right, it is moving fast....we'll have some significant time jumps from chapter 19 to the end.   Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 15

Lol lol you kill me lol 

Reviewer: RPatzonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 14

Ha ha!! Teenag eboys and blue balls go hand in hand!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 14

rememebr those days !!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

love it  busted Jacob in the face

Reviewer: purplemischief Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 14

Aw i wish there was mmore

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 14

Awww

Reviewer: purplemischief Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

So cute.

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 13

Bahahahahah!!!! 

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 12

Bahahahahahah !! 

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 11

Hehehehe!!! These two umm lets hope someone had the umm responseable safe sex talk lol Thank you 

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

Sweeeeet!!!!!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

First loves, so sweet

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 9

Awwwww 

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 8

I flove this story!

 

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 7

I'd of battered Edward or Vinny if I'd of caught them under my bed, at least I think I would have ;)

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

He's a so sweet :-)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

oh so sweet, remember those days passing notes,  now adays they probably pass texts

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 4

omg too funny

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

very cute so far

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love it!

Reviewer: purplemischief Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love this story. Makes me toasty warm inside

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

Awwww, bless them!

 

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

...but you have to love a clueless Edward!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 4

I think I'd of agreed with your brother!

 

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 3

He isn't all bad then?

 

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

purple nurples! I'd forgotten about them!

 

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 6

Awwww see I told you he's so ADORKABLE !! 

Reviewer: RPatzonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

Sooo sweet!!  Love it:)

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

He is so adorkable lol thank you .

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

Aww so cute!! :D

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love little stinkers !

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a little ornery ass!  I can just see him and shy little Bella. Update soon! :)

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