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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 20

excellent story ;) thanks for posting on here ;D

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 12

So Tanya has free rein and everyone is afraid of her. I'm a teacher and the parents lack of action would be considered neglect. She didn't get this way at 18, she's been ruling the roost for a while. The path of least resistance is not always best.

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Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 7

Bella needs to step up and claim some responsibility. She doesn't want to be the bad guy and leaves it to Edward. Then when she disagrees with his methods she bails. Edward may not handle the situation right but at least he tries. Bella does nothing.

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Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 20

So glad that she finally seems to have changed and went back home :) Thanks for writing and sharing this amazing story!

 

-Kate



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Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 20

I loved it!  I'm glad to find out why Tayna was such a B****.  It looks like she learned her lesson though.  Thanks for the story.



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 20

what a great ending ! 



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) brilliant chapter



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 19

looking forwqard to more 



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) brilliant chapter



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Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

I really want to smack Tanya, hopefully Vanessa is right and in the future she will regret how she treated her parents. Excited to see the epilogues and how the story ends!

 

-Kate



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 18

looking forward to more 



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) love this story.  Poor Bella. Tanya is a teenage nightmare



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 17

looking forward to more 



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Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) Great chapter

  (just a quick question though, are Tanya and Demetri back together?)

-Kate



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Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Yes, they are back together.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) loved this



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Reviewer: xodani Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 17

Glad to see the update...but I'm a little confused. What is up with Tanya and Dimitri becuase last chapter he had kiked her out of his house when he thought she was pregnant and told her how he would never marry her and now they are going to move in together? I hope that is cleared up next chapter...can't wait to read more! 



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Thanks for reading and reviewing.  They were broken up, but now they are back together.

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 16

This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 4th which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 14 not 16!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!! This is truely an such an amzingly well written story than so many people don't even realize it has been update & will believe it hasn't be updated since then ssssooooooooooooooo please fix!!!

 

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Thanks for reading and reviewing! I have tried to fix it and contact the administration. It is already set to most recent, but for some reason with this story, I can't get the date to be corrrect.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Bella :( So glad that Edward was there to help her! Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 16

thye are bitches and need to be cut ...looking forward to more 



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

:) love this



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Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 15

This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 4th which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 14 not 15!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!!



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It says that it is under most recent, but I can't get it to show up. Thanks for reading and reviewing! If you have it in your favorites, you should get an alert.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

Looking forward to more 



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Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

Well I guess Tanya realizes how right Bella was about everything, at least she is not pregnant, and jeez with Masen, that is gonna be a fun conversation! LOL

Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



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Reviewer: Gemini18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter.can't wait for more.

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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 14

Looking forward to more

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Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 14

Tanya was so cruel! And she is going to totally regret the tatt.

Love the kitchen table story!!!!!!!!!!!!



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2013 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter! :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



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Reviewer: jillapet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 14

I am so glad that I am not the only mom to call my teen daughter an ungrateful little bitch. Sometimes, that is the only description that applies! And oh, will she regret that tat!



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 13

looking forward to more 



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Reviewer: Eileen22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 13

Good riddance tanya is gone



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Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

I dont't think Bella should leave Edward-even for a couple of days...



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Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 4

Mrs Weber is an asshole!  So, E&B  not going to church is an issue? Some people are so small minded! I was VERY religious when I was younger, but not anymore



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Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

Tanya is such a bitch! Sure glad that E*B are still so hot for one another!!!!



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) loved this



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Reviewer: xXCicadaXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 12

Just started reading today... And I'm confused by how Bella and Edward could let their spoiled teenage daughter do whatever the hell she wants. They (well Bella mostly) let her get away with her crappy spoiled self entitled attitude, she has no accountability and no responsibility for her actions at all. I get that she's 18 but she's still in high school living under their house, and she obviously doesn't do any chores, is disrespectful and ungrateful to her parents and plain outright evil to her younger brother. Her parents who although are imperfect have a loving home. If she was really all grown then her spoiled self entitled butt should get a job and start pulling her own weight in the house. Or she just needs to be put out to live with the grandparents until graduation and then out her out on her own. See what its really like to live on your own and be an adult. Honestly, I am also really tired of Bella always standing in the way of her not being responsible actions. She lets get away with everything. Just yelling at her one moment and then not holding to punishment is ridiculous - just because you don't want her to hate you. You're the parent you're not a friend. Our kids are not going to always like us but honestly they're not suppose to but they should respect us. Trust me I know. I think it's important to teach consequences, accountability and responsibility and hope to hell they make the best decisions when they have to.  How is letting a spoiled brat go out into the world doing anyone any favors least of all Tanya.  I really hope that both B&E realize how much damage they're doing to Tanya - she's selfish, mean and extremely spoiled for someone who comes from a "poor family" as she puts it. Regardless of whatever underlying issues Tanya may have - her parents are doing her no favors by letting her do whatever she wants cause she'll do it anyways. I'm actually shocked by that statement. Parenting is the hardest job anyone can have and just cause you don't want another argument from a disruptive child is not a reason to let her run rampant. 



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Thanks for reading and reviewing! I know this is a very tricky story. The next chapter will be the change in the story.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

cute chapter looking forard to mroe 



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: Gemini18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it. Poor Masen.

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Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter! :) Poor Bella just needs some peace and quiet LOL :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate

 

(teaser please?? oh and quick question, how old is Angela?)



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Thanks for reading and reviewing. Sorry for not having a teaser.

Angela is 17 almost 18

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 10

looking forward to more 



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Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great story so far! Jeez Tanya.... well she is a teenage girl, and see that is why I don't have girls! LOL :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



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Reviewer: Amapola026 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

Could you please make Tanya a little nicer to her brother, she's so brat!!! 



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Thanks for reading and reviewing! I can't change her character, but there is a reason why she acts the way she does. You will find out later.
Here is your teaser!!!
Jake came around the corner of the truck and finally noticed me with a smirk. “Cullen, you have a visitor!” he called to Edward.
Edward, covered in black grease, rolled from underneath the car. He had his back to me. “Who is it?” he asked Jake.
“Why don’t you turn around?” I asked.
His head whirled around and a crooked smile appeared on his face. He stood up and walked over to me, bending down to give me a quick kiss.
“Edward, you can take the earlier lunch break. I can handle this by myself. Have fun.” Jake winked and disappeared in the garage again.
Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com
I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.
See you Sunday!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

looking forward to more 



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Here is your teaser!!!
Jake came around the corner of the truck and finally noticed me with a smirk. “Cullen, you have a visitor!” he called to Edward.
Edward, covered in black grease, rolled from underneath the car. He had his back to me. “Who is it?” he asked Jake.
“Why don’t you turn around?” I asked.
His head whirled around and a crooked smile appeared on his face. He stood up and walked over to me, bending down to give me a quick kiss.
“Edward, you can take the earlier lunch break. I can handle this by myself. Have fun.” Jake winked and disappeared in the garage again.
Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com
I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.
See you Sunday!

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 8

I hope they finally get to talking, it is starting to sound like the calm before the storm. Can't wait to see how this plays out :)



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Here is your teaser!!!

Jake came around the corner of the truck and finally noticed me with a smirk. “Cullen, you have a visitor!” he called to Edward.

Edward, covered in black grease, rolled from underneath the car. He had his back to me. “Who is it?” he asked Jake.

“Why don’t you turn around?” I asked.

His head whirled around and a crooked smile appeared on his face. He stood up and walked over to me, bending down to give me a quick kiss.

“Edward, you can take the earlier lunch break. I can handle this by myself. Have fun.” Jake winked and disappeared in the garage again.

Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com

I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.

See you Sunday!

Reviewer: Gemini18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow. I think everything finally got to Edward. Cant wait for more.

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Jake came around the corner of the truck and finally noticed me with a smirk. “Cullen, you have a visitor!” he called to Edward.

Edward, covered in black grease, rolled from underneath the car. He had his back to me. “Who is it?” he asked Jake.

“Why don’t you turn around?” I asked.

His head whirled around and a crooked smile appeared on his face. He stood up and walked over to me, bending down to give me a quick kiss.

“Edward, you can take the earlier lunch break. I can handle this by myself. Have fun.” Jake winked and disappeared in the garage again.

Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com

I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.

See you Sunday!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

looking forward to mjroe



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Here is your teaser!!!

Jake came around the corner of the truck and finally noticed me with a smirk. “Cullen, you have a visitor!” he called to Edward.

Edward, covered in black grease, rolled from underneath the car. He had his back to me. “Who is it?” he asked Jake.

“Why don’t you turn around?” I asked.

His head whirled around and a crooked smile appeared on his face. He stood up and walked over to me, bending down to give me a quick kiss.

“Edward, you can take the earlier lunch break. I can handle this by myself. Have fun.” Jake winked and disappeared in the garage again.

Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com

I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.

See you Sunday!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)



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Jake came around the corner of the truck and finally noticed me with a smirk. “Cullen, you have a visitor!” he called to Edward.

Edward, covered in black grease, rolled from underneath the car. He had his back to me. “Who is it?” he asked Jake.

“Why don’t you turn around?” I asked.

His head whirled around and a crooked smile appeared on his face. He stood up and walked over to me, bending down to give me a quick kiss.

“Edward, you can take the earlier lunch break. I can handle this by myself. Have fun.” Jake winked and disappeared in the garage again.

Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com

I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.

See you Sunday!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

looking forward to more



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Here is your teaser!!!

Jake came around the corner of the truck and finally noticed me with a smirk. “Cullen, you have a visitor!” he called to Edward.

Edward, covered in black grease, rolled from underneath the car. He had his back to me. “Who is it?” he asked Jake.

“Why don’t you turn around?” I asked.

His head whirled around and a crooked smile appeared on his face. He stood up and walked over to me, bending down to give me a quick kiss.

“Edward, you can take the earlier lunch break. I can handle this by myself. Have fun.” Jake winked and disappeared in the garage again.

Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com

I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.

See you Sunday!

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

It's so sweet how much they still love each other:)



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Jake came around the corner of the truck and finally noticed me with a smirk. “Cullen, you have a visitor!” he called to Edward.

Edward, covered in black grease, rolled from underneath the car. He had his back to me. “Who is it?” he asked Jake.

“Why don’t you turn around?” I asked.

His head whirled around and a crooked smile appeared on his face. He stood up and walked over to me, bending down to give me a quick kiss.

“Edward, you can take the earlier lunch break. I can handle this by myself. Have fun.” Jake winked and disappeared in the garage again.

Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com

I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.

See you Sunday!

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

I hope Mrs. Weber get fired! 

Great chapter can't wait until the next one:)



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Jacob and Edward went off to play with the boys while my sister and I sat in the water. She had a hot body, but she always wore an ugly one-piece bathing suit. “What’s with the suit, Nessa?” I asked.
She rolled her eyes at me, “Oh come on, Bella. I am not as brave as you to wear a tiny bikini. I have stretch marks— I don’t think I can find even one on your stomach. Plus, I am older than you. I am almost forty, and I shouldn’t be showing off my wrinkly body.”
“Wrinkly?” I laughed. “There is not one wrinkle on your skin. You have a fabulous body, especially after having three boys. Show it off.” I nudge her.
“Let’s change the subject. What’s up with Tannie?” she asked. Her eyebrows were raised and her lips were raised up in a smirk.
“Okay? I’m sorry for mentioning that you should be in less clothing.” I laughed and put my hands up.
“Bella?” Her tone told me that she wanted to know what was really going on.
“She’s just a teenager. That’s all I can say.”
She snickered. “I seem to remember a certain girl who use to act the same way. She was always on the phone, even on the computer. Her name was Bella.”
“I was not that bad,” I interrupted her.
Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com
I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.
See you Sunday!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

looking forward to more



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Jacob and Edward went off to play with the boys while my sister and I sat in the water. She had a hot body, but she always wore an ugly one-piece bathing suit. “What’s with the suit, Nessa?” I asked.
She rolled her eyes at me, “Oh come on, Bella. I am not as brave as you to wear a tiny bikini. I have stretch marks— I don’t think I can find even one on your stomach. Plus, I am older than you. I am almost forty, and I shouldn’t be showing off my wrinkly body.”
“Wrinkly?” I laughed. “There is not one wrinkle on your skin. You have a fabulous body, especially after having three boys. Show it off.” I nudge her.
“Let’s change the subject. What’s up with Tannie?” she asked. Her eyebrows were raised and her lips were raised up in a smirk.
“Okay? I’m sorry for mentioning that you should be in less clothing.” I laughed and put my hands up.
“Bella?” Her tone told me that she wanted to know what was really going on.
“She’s just a teenager. That’s all I can say.”
She snickered. “I seem to remember a certain girl who use to act the same way. She was always on the phone, even on the computer. Her name was Bella.”
“I was not that bad,” I interrupted her.
Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com
I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.
See you Sunday!

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

It's a good thing this is fiction because if it were real I would be taking names and kicking some as*es! Poor Masen:(



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Jacob and Edward went off to play with the boys while my sister and I sat in the water. She had a hot body, but she always wore an ugly one-piece bathing suit. “What’s with the suit, Nessa?” I asked.
She rolled her eyes at me, “Oh come on, Bella. I am not as brave as you to wear a tiny bikini. I have stretch marks— I don’t think I can find even one on your stomach. Plus, I am older than you. I am almost forty, and I shouldn’t be showing off my wrinkly body.”
“Wrinkly?” I laughed. “There is not one wrinkle on your skin. You have a fabulous body, especially after having three boys. Show it off.” I nudge her.
“Let’s change the subject. What’s up with Tannie?” she asked. Her eyebrows were raised and her lips were raised up in a smirk.
“Okay? I’m sorry for mentioning that you should be in less clothing.” I laughed and put my hands up.
“Bella?” Her tone told me that she wanted to know what was really going on.
“She’s just a teenager. That’s all I can say.”
She snickered. “I seem to remember a certain girl who use to act the same way. She was always on the phone, even on the computer. Her name was Bella.”
“I was not that bad,” I interrupted her.
Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com
I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.
See you Sunday!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 4

looking forward to more 



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“Well, I am glad you guys were able to meet with me today.” She pulled out the first paper showing Masen’s math scores. As you can see Masen is doing extremely well on his division. It is advanced considering most children are still on addition.”
She handed us the paper to keep. She moved on to reading and writing which were advanced as well. Masen was a smart kid, so his advanced skills never really surprised me. She finally got to his report card and it was all fours and fives until we got to his behavior.
“I gave him a needs improvement for behavior. Masen tends to talk a lot in class and get off task. He also likes to talk with my daughter. Lately, he has been throwing pencil erasers at her. Now, this may be acceptable in your home, but it is not in the classroom.” She paused.
I took this opportunity to speak up. “Now, Masen can’t be the only one who talks a lot. I have been in this classroom multiple times and have seen many kids shouting out. I also think your daughter isn’t helping the situation. She could kindly say to him that it is not appropriate to talk to her, but she doesn’t. I’m not going to even mention this eraser thing, because I know for a fact your daughter throws them back at Masen.”
“Bella,” Edward whispered, trying to calm me down.
“Mrs. Cullen, I know Masen is a sweet kid. I’m not trying to say that he is bad. I am only trying to help him improve. It is hard teaching twenty-five students the solution to a math problem when Masen is constantly shouting out the answer.” First she was talking about him talking, and then throwing erasers, now it was shouting out in class.
“So send him out into the pod to work on it,” I interrupted her. The pod was a big room that connected all the teachers’ rooms together. It was their computer lab where teachers sent out disruptive children to complete their work.
“I see where Masen learns his behavior,” she murmured loud enough for me to hear.
“What’s that supposed to mean?” I asked, offended that she would insinuate that I am a bad example for Masen.
Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com
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Date: 23 Jul 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 3

lokinmg forwardo t more 



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Mrs. Weber motioned for me to sit down at the long brown table. “Mrs. Cullen, there seemed to be an issue today with Masen. He refused to work with Paul when I asked him. He was also late getting to class after lunch.”

I stopped her. “He was with me at the office. I came and grabbed Paul and Sam from your classroom.”

“Yes, I know. It would have been nice if he had told me what was wrong.” She raised her perfectly arched eyebrow.

“Hold on, you are upset with my son? He was trying to help his friend and in turn Paul and Alec hung him on the bathroom stall. Are you are blaming my son?”

“Mrs. Cullen, please don’t raise your voice,” she said in a condescending tone.

“This is absolutely ridiculous. They did this to my son and you are blaming him. Do you have some personal vendetta against him? Why don’t you look at the big picture here? I don’t see you out there watching all the kids and I can tell you my son isn’t one of the trouble makers. It is always Paul and Alec. I have heard other parents complain about Paul, so I know I am not crazy.”

“Mrs. Cullen, I know there are no boundaries in your home, but can you please teach Masen appropriate school behavior?”

“I’m done,” I said in a calm voice.

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Reviewer: pricana81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Edward, it's never easy finding out your daughter is having sex.



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Mrs. Weber motioned for me to sit down at the long brown table. “Mrs. Cullen, there seemed to be an issue today with Masen. He refused to work with Paul when I asked him. He was also late getting to class after lunch.”

I stopped her. “He was with me at the office. I came and grabbed Paul and Sam from your classroom.”

“Yes, I know. It would have been nice if he had told me what was wrong.” She raised her perfectly arched eyebrow.

“Hold on, you are upset with my son? He was trying to help his friend and in turn Paul and Alec hung him on the bathroom stall. Are you are blaming my son?”

“Mrs. Cullen, please don’t raise your voice,” she said in a condescending tone.

“This is absolutely ridiculous. They did this to my son and you are blaming him. Do you have some personal vendetta against him? Why don’t you look at the big picture here? I don’t see you out there watching all the kids and I can tell you my son isn’t one of the trouble makers. It is always Paul and Alec. I have heard other parents complain about Paul, so I know I am not crazy.”

“Mrs. Cullen, I know there are no boundaries in your home, but can you please teach Masen appropriate school behavior?”

“I’m done,” I said in a calm voice.

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Reviewer: pricana81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 2

I can't wait to see how they handle Tanya. They should ship her off to boot camp;) I feel sorry for Masen :(. can't wait for the next update!



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I sat at the counter with Masen finishing up the puzzle he brought out. Tanya was still upstairs sleeping. I expected Edward any minute. As if he knew I was thinking about him, the door opened and he walked inside with a big smile.

I smiled back at him and took a sip of my coffee. “It’s pussy!” Masen chuckled.

I choked on the warm liquid and looked at Masen, “What did you just say?”

He looked at me with a frightened stare. “I heard you scream that word and I went to ask Tannie what it was last night because your door was locked. She said that dad was a pussy.”

“Is that right?” Edward asked.

I couldn’t believe we were so loud that Masen heard us. We definitely had to quiet down our little escapades from now on. “Masen, that is a bad word. I don’t want to hear you say that again.”

“But Tannie says it when she talks to Demetri.”

“She what?” Edward yelled.

“Yeah, I walked in her room the other day and she whispered things on the phone to him and said that word.”

“Masen, the bottom line is you are not to say it.”

“Okay,” he pouted.

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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 2

looking forward to mroe 



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I sat at the counter with Masen finishing up the puzzle he brought out. Tanya was still upstairs sleeping. I expected Edward any minute. As if he knew I was thinking about him, the door opened and he walked inside with a big smile.

I smiled back at him and took a sip of my coffee. “It’s pussy!” Masen chuckled.

I choked on the warm liquid and looked at Masen, “What did you just say?”

He looked at me with a frightened stare. “I heard you scream that word and I went to ask Tannie what it was last night because your door was locked. She said that dad was a pussy.”

“Is that right?” Edward asked.

I couldn’t believe we were so loud that Masen heard us. We definitely had to quiet down our little escapades from now on. “Masen, that is a bad word. I don’t want to hear you say that again.”

“But Tannie says it when she talks to Demetri.”

“She what?” Edward yelled.

“Yeah, I walked in her room the other day and she whispered things on the phone to him and said that word.”

“Masen, the bottom line is you are not to say it.”

“Okay,” he pouted.

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Reviewer: pricana81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to read more:)



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Edward still had the game on, and Masen had his Legos put away. I handed Masen his ice cream and Tanya soon joined us, taking hers. I sat on the couch cuddled up with Edward while eating my dessert. I wasn’t into sports and I really didn’t know much about football. I only knew what they wore and what the ball looked like.

Masen was trying to get Tanya to talk to him as he sat next to her. He really wanted his sister to like him. I don’t know how she could be so cruel to him. He was such a cute little boy that it was really hard to get mad at him. He was always happy when she wasn’t picking on him.

I finished my bowl; Edward placed in on the coffee table next to him. He kissed my temple and pulled me closer to his chest.

“Stop pushing me,” Masen grumbled at Tanya.

Tanya ignored and pushed him every time he tried to get back on the couch. “Tannie, stop it!”

She snickered and pushed him again. “Tanya, knock it off,” I snapped.

She gave me a bitch brow and a smirk before she pushed him with a lot of force, making him fall hard on the wooden floor. He immediately started crying and I got up to see if he was okay.

“Tanya, why the hell did you do that to your brother? Is it really that fucking bad that he wants to sit next to you?” Edward yelled.

“Who cares? I’m going up to my room. You people suck.” Tanya scampered off up the stairs.

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Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

yes i would like to read more and hahahaha making tanya Bella and Edward's daughter and she'still torturing poor Bella and Edward!!!!!  One big butt spank for you !!!



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Edward still had the game on, and Masen had his Legos put away. I handed Masen his ice cream and Tanya soon joined us, taking hers. I sat on the couch cuddled up with Edward while eating my dessert. I wasn’t into sports and I really didn’t know much about football. I only knew what they wore and what the ball looked like.

Masen was trying to get Tanya to talk to him as he sat next to her. He really wanted his sister to like him. I don’t know how she could be so cruel to him. He was such a cute little boy that it was really hard to get mad at him. He was always happy when she wasn’t picking on him.

I finished my bowl; Edward placed in on the coffee table next to him. He kissed my temple and pulled me closer to his chest.

“Stop pushing me,” Masen grumbled at Tanya.

Tanya ignored and pushed him every time he tried to get back on the couch. “Tannie, stop it!”

She snickered and pushed him again. “Tanya, knock it off,” I snapped.

She gave me a bitch brow and a smirk before she pushed him with a lot of force, making him fall hard on the wooden floor. He immediately started crying and I got up to see if he was okay.

“Tanya, why the hell did you do that to your brother? Is it really that fucking bad that he wants to sit next to you?” Edward yelled.

“Who cares? I’m going up to my room. You people suck.” Tanya scampered off up the stairs.

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