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Reviewer: Lovingyou-4ever Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Will You Be Mine

:)



Author's Response:

Hi Lovingyou-4ever

 

Apologies for the late response. Thank you for reading and leaving a smily face. Glad you enjoyed it.

Take care

maryhell

 

Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Will You Be Mine

Hot and thoughtful and hot and true to the characters and hot.  So well written also.  Very impressive 1st foray!



Author's Response:

Hi Delia

 

Glad you found it Hot and true to the characters. Thank you for the compliments, they are very much appreciated.

 

Take care

maryhell

 

Reviewer: Sabkay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Will You Be Mine

Wow.. I really can say, this was one of the best Story i've read! Every single chapter was wonderfull! Hope to see soon more from you :)



Author's Response:

Hi Sabkay

Heyyyy you found me - I was just about to reply to your ffn PM. Wow what a wonderful review - thank you so much.

My next thing to go on line will be Hostage The Honeymoon - the follow up to my other completed story Hostage. Another Chapter of The Teachings of Dr Nancy Gaylove is also being written.

Then if I can get my head around a decent plot I will write another CM fic - my brain is always on the go, so who knows what will strike next.

Again many thanks for reviewing.

Take care

maryhell

 

Reviewer: antigone21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Will You Be Mine

Beautiful ending! I loved your fic very much and hope you will write more CM fics. Your style of writing is unique and this story progressed at just the right pace with no gaps between each chapter. You are at the top of my Fav list and look forward to reading more of your stories!!!!!

 

oxox

Tig

 



Author's Response:

Hi Tig

Oh bless you sweetheart - you never fail to uplift my day and inspire - thank you. I love receiving your reviews. If I can dream up a good enough plot, I promis to write another - I really enjoyed writing this one. The only thing against me at the moment is time.

Trying to concentrate on Hostage the Honeymoon at the moment and as soon as I get another couple of chapters done, I will start posting.

Because you have been such a loyal follower - please read the snip bleow from HTH - you are the only one who has received it.

Take care

maryhell

x

Edward stood astride, naked under the spray, leaning into his left arm that had found purchase on the side of the cottage. The early evening sun shone through the trees and reflected through the rivers of water as they ran over his head and down every contour of his body.  His eyes were closed as constant droplets fell from his jaw and further down - his manhood. The sight was beautiful and breathtaking.

 

Reviewer: Herky Illiniwek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Will You Be Mine

Fabulous.

I want to read more MoReid slash from you.

:D



Author's Response:

Hi Herky llliniwek

Thank you for reading and reviewing. LOL bless you, I have a couple of other fics to get on top of first, but during that time, I promis to get my brain around a plot, and if I can come up with something worthy, I will definitely get to writing it. I love Morgan and Reid to.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Will You Be Mine

Great story.  It was my first Criminal Minds story too and I really enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Hi Debbi

WUHOOOOOO neither of us are CM virgins then. You for reading, me for writing. Over the moon that you enjoyed it - I love CM and I am sooo chuffed at the response to this fic. Thank you for giving it a go.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Hello and Goodbye

I love a good Morgan/Reid story and this was great! Happy to see Reid strong and knowing what he wants.



Author's Response:

Hi jacknalecsmom

Thank you so much for your encouraging review. I always like to see my characters grow in a story and learn something. 

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: Sam_Maddy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Face Your Demons

This is a wonderful story and I'm really enjoying reading.  I can't wait to read what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing - over the moon that you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: wheresreenie Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Chess

Hi Maryhell!  Found you here from fanfiction.  Love the story.  Glad I could track you down.  Keep up the good work!!

 



Author's Response:

Hi wheresreenie

Glad you found me. Thank you for following me here and reviewing - it is really appreciated.  Last chapter of this story will be up in a day or two's time.

Many thanks

maryhell

 

 

 

Reviewer: Maryh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Face Your Demons

Awesome!

Author's Response:

Hi Maryh

Glad you enjoyd it - many thanks for the review.

Final chapter will be up in the next few days.

Take care

maryhell

 

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Face Your Demons

Glad Spencer stood up to Morgan.  It was wrong for Morgan to just leave Spencer after their night together without a note or acknowledging him the next day.  Great update.



Author's Response:

Hi Debbi84

I totally agree with you. I think a touch of reality hit Morgan and it scared the shit out of him. But, every action has a consequence, and you never know what is going on in someone else's brain. 

I love it when Reid has some backbone. He used his words to cut Morgan down to size. Glad that is was as satisfying to read as it was to wright.

Take care

maryhell

 

Reviewer: antigone21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Face Your Demons

Oh you love me!!!! Imagine my joy when I logged in and found you had updated!!!! Great chapter! a little sad that Morgan is such a wuss but I am hoping for a smexy reunion in th next update! Well written as always and I humbly await the next chapter to come!



Author's Response:

Hi anitgone21

 

Yes it was your review that encouraged me to post early. You know me by know and how much I love an HEA. Hopefully their lemony reunion in the last chapter will make up for the lack of action in the previous ones.

Next chapter will probably be up mid week.

Take care

maryhell

 

Reviewer: TLCATLADY Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Chess

it is surprising to me that spence was able to 'cold turkey' himself from theunit like that...it was needed, but still surprising.  TLC



Author's Response:

Heyyy TLC

When Spencer puts his mind to it, he can be a very stubborn young man.  He knows his weaknesses and he didn't want anyone to be able to talk him out of doing what needed to be done. He would have found it awkward and messy to talk to the team, so he avoided them.

As far as Spencer was concerned, that part of his life was over. He kept in touch with Rossi, who was the only person in the team he considered a true friend.

Glad you agree that his movements were necessary though.

Next chapter will be up next week 

Take care

maryhell

 

Reviewer: bellemeer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Chess

I love the character development in this chapter.

Thank you for letting Reid grow to be happier with himself, even if he's not 100% over Morgan. And I love that Morgan is slowly but surely coming to peace with himself too, over his sexuality.

And Rossi.......... the chess master......

Looking forward to Chapter 3 with relish.

Belle

 



Author's Response:

Heyyy Belle

Ohhh yeah - Rossi s the chess master. Over the moon that you like the character development. It is mainly what this story is about. Having said that I have enjoyed playing with the case itself - it almost made me feel like a profiler.  Morgan will get there, but it just might need a bit more prodding.

Luvs ya always

Yvonne

xx

 

Reviewer: antigone21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Chess

I am totally loving the way that you are writing this fic-one of the best i have read by far and hope you update soon!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi anitgone21

 

Thank you so much for your wonderful, encouraging and inspirational words - they are truly appreciated. I had the final chapter 4 back from my beta this morning, so I guess that now it is a question of whether I have the patience to hold off or whether I will think - ahhh what the heck.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: crazyinalabama Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Chess

Very different approach. I am truly enjoying your story. Thanks for the update on fanfiction that tells where to find it. Thanks for updating. I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hi Crazyinalabama

Thank you for reading and reviewing. It's a shame things have to be done this way on ffn - but they are changing so many things and doing it all in a small timeframe. I am all for change, but I can't say that I like what ffn are doing. I love being over here at TWCS - it's great to be able to add banners and pictures to stories and individual chapters.

 

Take care

 

maryhell

Reviewer: bellemeer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Hello and Goodbye

What is it about this sute that seems to hinder readers from reviewing?

Their loss.

This is a great start to an exciting and wonderful fic. I can't wait for chapter 2! I only ever saw the first season of this show before I stopped watching television - you story has sparked an interest in my and I have now watched Season 2 and one of my sons has bought me the bosxed DVD sets of Seasons 3 and 4.

You've inspired me!

 

Belle

 

 

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