Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 30
*IDK if I missed this detail, but how were Charlie & Edward friends in the first place? Edward is caring, nice & a good person-basically the exact opposite of Charlie. Yet, Edward knew Charlie & his other friends. ??*
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
This has been an amazing story to read. I have looked forward each week for the next update. Thanks for all your hard work and dedication in writing this beautifully well written story. Will u be including any OUTTAKES??? I give this story a #10 & am sad it has come to an end.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
wow a baby for the couple. they deserve all the happiness
it seems the family has grown quite a bit
love the bath at the end. i think all parents have expierenced the exploding diaper and the relaxing in the tub
have a great time with the story. thank you for writing
Date: 27 Oct 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 29
I have looked foward to following this story each week!! This has been an amazingly beautifully well written story!!!! Could u do all of us a huge favor Please???? Could u pleade fix the banner on this site so those of reading this story will not have a blank x with no image for the last chapter. Please fix for the final show down and ending of this wonderful story. We would all love u for it if u could juct fix this image on this site Please!!!
We tried to fix it, but it didn't work. I think it's because of the site because it doesn't show any of the banners... Anyway we will retry to fix it, but I wouldn't hold my breath on it working. sorry :( you can go visit our group on facebook to see the banner and the other pictures :D
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 28
I have truely loved reading this story. Thanks for such an amazing and beautifully written story. Keep up the great work. I love following along w the story. Just a note the image for your story is showing a red x can u please fix.
I don't know what the problem is. It worked just fine until yesterday (that I know of)
Date: 06 Oct 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter. So is Porno Bears something that happened in real life?
Actually, yes. The porno bears happened but nobody was high. I was having some dumped on the table in front of me. and I was in the middle of a joke with by friend, when I decided to tell her what I saw. and tell her I did, because the 69'ing and the other pervy stuff were happening right in front of me. (it probably doesn't make much sense right now but it was funny for us and that's why we decided to put it in the story)
All that being said, thank you for reading and reviewing our story.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
well Edward is trying to take care of everyone. Problem is some mistakes need to happen for people to learn. If they won't kill them let them be. You make dumb mistakes you get hurt, a little. That is when you learn.