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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 26

loved it great chapter

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

Listen this is a really odd situation. If he is going to be a father to his wife, he should have just filed for guardianship and not married her.  What happens when he wants to have sex with one of his "friends"?? Bella now will get hurt. She is forming feelings for him and he is just taking care of this kid.

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

CALLING THE LITTLE BABY SHABELL... HERE IN MEXICO THE NICKNAME FOR ISABEL (I GUESS LATIN FOR ISABELLA) IS CHABELA, SO CLOSE

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 25

ALL I CAN SAY ABOUT THIS CHAPTER IS  HOT

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

I DON'T LIKE SUE. SHE'S ALRIGHT WITH CHARLVIE AND HIS BIMBOS AROUND BELLA BUT DISLIKES EDWARD WHO TREATS HER WELL AND BROUGHT HER INTO A FAMILY? I HOPE IN TIME SHE SEE EDWARD IS A GOOD MAN

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

BELLA'S EMOTIONS ARE LIKE A ROLLERCOASTER, FIRST THE SEXING THEN CHARLIE'S ALMOST DEATH

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 22

I GUESS JACOB DIDN'T SEE THE WEDDING BAND

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 21

LOVED ALICE'S BIRTHDAY BUT I HOPE LAUREN DOEN'T CAUSE ANY TROUBLE LATER

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 19

OH I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT CRAZY EX-GIRLFRIEND

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 18

GLAD THEY SAY THE ILY'S

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 17

SO GREAT THAT THEY'RE BONDING

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 16

IS IT WRONG THAT I WANTED SOMETHING MORE BLOODFILLED TO HAPPEN TO TANYA?

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

TANYA IS A CRAZY B**CH, I HOPE EDWARD DRIVES LIKE AN ANCIENT MAN

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 26

I wonder if they'll have a long wait for babies. The way those two are I wouldn't bet on it. Lol

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 14

OK SO MUCH FOR ROSALIE BEHAVING. WHAT'S WRONG WITH TANYA? YOU CAN'T GO TO A BIRTHDAY PARTY AND INSULT THE BIRTHDAY GIRL OR EVEN DO IT IN A STRANGERS HOUSE

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 13

I LOVE HAPPY BIRTHDAYS, EVEN ROSALIE BEHAVE

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 11

MAYBE IT'S JUST ME BUT I'M ON EDWARDS SIDE THIS TIME. THE RULE OF THE TEXT JUST TELLING YOU'RE FINE IT'S GRRATT AND WELL HE IS IN CHARGE OF THE HOUSE JASPER AS LOVELY AS HE IS, ACTS TOO IRRESPONSIBLY HE'S AN ADULT

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

OH IT WAS SO SAD THE WAY THEY'VE LOST THEIR PARENTS I WONDER IF ROSALIE'S BITCHY ATTITUDE OR JASPER'S LIGHT ONE CAME FOR THAT

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

OK MY HPOES OF ROSALIE BEING JUST APROTECTIVE SISTER JUST DIED

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 7

I REALLY LIKE JASPER HE'S REALLY LIKE A BROTHER TO BELLA

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 26

Great way to bring in the new year.  Bella is a natural with the babys :)

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

WHERE'S THE LINE OF PEOPLE READY TO KICK EDWARD BALLS? 

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

BELLA IS SUCH A NAUGHTY GIRL ;)

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 3

I LOVE JASPER! AND STLL HAVE HOPES ON ROSE, MAYBE SHE'S JUST PROTECTIVE OF HER BROTHER. GLAD THAT BELLA PUT THOSE CHEERLEADERS ON THEIR PLACE

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

OH MY! EDWARD IS REALLY OVERPROTECTIVE AND POOR BELLA HER FIRST KISS WAS KINDA OSAD

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

POOR BELLA, AT LEAST EDWARD AND CARMEN ARE TREATING HER BETTER THAN CHARLIE

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 26

LOVE IT!!!!!! Wow, Jasper getting all mature on us in this chapter. lol. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 26

thank you for the update

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2012 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 25

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 25

oooh yummy time for our kiddies

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 25

LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!  I like how playful they are with each other. I don't think Bella willl let Sue influence her. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 25

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE.....To cute

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 25

good times ;)  Sue will come around she has to see how happy they are together.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 25

I love this story... Sue needs to go back where she came from...

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 24

LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS CHAPTER.  Can't wait for the next chapter. Now I have to wait like everyone else. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMGosh!!!!!! Charlie was driving and hit them. WOW!!!!!! Poor Bella!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 22

glad that they had a good time. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 21

OMG!!!!!!!!!What in the world happened to Jasper.??????

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

God tanya is a bitch. What would she of done if she found out Bella was his wife. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 19

Love that they are sosoo Comfortable with each other. Love seeing Alice and Jasper. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 18

I can not believe that they are getting tattoos.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 17

Glad that Alice was not mad. So good to see them getting along. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 16

I am so glad that everyone was not seriously hurt. WOW, Rose is sorry and treating Bella nice. WOW!!!!!!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

Poor guys to lose their parents like that. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 15

I knew that Bella would get in trouble. I was wondering why she went there without Edward.

Red head???? Who was with Edward.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

Yeah. Bella and Edward were Rolling around on the bed kissing like teenagers. Well I guess one of them is one. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 14

I can not believe that Tanya acted like that in front of everybody. What was she thinking. What does Emmett think of all of this??? 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 4

I wonder what Edward is think about the new and improved Bella. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

I love Alice. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow that's a tuff break. I don't blame Bella for feeling a little nervous and upset. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

LOVED IT!!!!!!! What is the deal with Esme and Peter??? I know that Esme is younger than Carlisle. Is she the same age as Peter.....Did they used to date??????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 12

Love that she is messing with him!!!!! LOL!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 11

I am like Bella, when did Edward find the time to go back to school and become a DR.? I know Edward was going to be mad at Jasper for picking up Bella on his bike. lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved Bella's come back to Lauren. Great job. I am glad that Edward talk to Bella about his past. Thanks for sharing that with us. What is with the talke about blaming Rose???

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oooookkkkk!! Well, I can see Edward's pov with the brownies. I would have been mad too and thrown them away. What happened with Edward taking care of them? What is Rose do? So glad that I can go on to the next chapter. Yah, Me!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 8

Glad that Bella and Jasper are getting along. Also that Edward and Bella are getting along as "husband" and "wife". lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

Glad to see Edward giving it a try!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 24

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 6

Edward keeps turn Bella down, he is seriously going to damage he ego. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

Edward is sooo in trouble. He just put his foot in his mouth. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

Glad that she stood up to Edward. He is not her daddy so he does not need to act like her daddy. ButI also see Edward's point. Charlie must have been a playboy. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 24

Sue has nerve sticking her nose into b&e's marriage. Poor Jazz.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 24

They need to get Sue use to the idea they are staying married.  So glad Peter is going to be ok but I am worried about Jasper 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

Can not believe that Jasper put netal in the microwave. Really!!! And Edward did not know you could not put metal in the microwave. lol. Glad that Bella stood up for her self. Glad that she will have a friend with Alice. 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 24

Sue needs to butt the hell out!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ok, so Bella is starting to fall for Edward a little bit. What about Edward? Will we hear from Edward any in this story??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am assuming that this story is taking place in modern day time. What is the deal with Charlie giving her away? What would make Edward even consider taking her and marrying her? I am assuming that he has known Charlie for a while. 

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 23

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 23

;wow   Lots going on.  Ugh   Damn Drunk Drivers.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 22

ah so Bella ended up outing them huh?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 21

OMG too funny...broken penis.  ha ha.

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 22

Love this story!!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 22

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 16

Finally Tanya got what she deserved

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 15

Seriously!

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 14

Tanya is a bitch

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

Cute

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

Ha ha

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

What's up with tanya

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh no

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 8

Interesting

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 7

Haha

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

Uh oh

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 21

God I'm laughing right now, Alice thinks she broke Jasper's peen and called Bella of all people to talk to.  Like she wants to know about her brother in laws private area, but poor Jasper that must have been traumatizing I can't imagine he will be eager to go anywhere near Alice for awhile poor man will probably have nightmares.

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

Awesome

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 3

Lmao!

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

Is he attracted to her at all?

Author's Response:

who are you talking about?

Reviewer: barbarito Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looks good

Reviewer: noway Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh man! How can you not love Alice and Jasper? It's impossible. 

Maria

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 21

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 21

Well, I'm so curious as to what exactly Alice did to Jasper!! Thanks for writing. Can't wait for the next update.
Lisa

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 21

I read one other story that had a so called broken penis but this Edward made me understand.  OMG, priceless.  I love it.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 21

sounds like they had a hell of a party

omg poor alice. i am assuming her wanting to get frisky with jasper and him getting hurt will tramatize them both. oh goodness i can't wait to find out what really happened.

love it

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it haha poor jasper x

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 21

LOL!!!!  Poor Jasper!!!!

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 20

ROFL  what a way to meet the ex

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