Date: 06 Oct 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
loved it great chapter
Date: 05 Oct 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
Listen this is a really odd situation. If he is going to be a father to his wife, he should have just filed for guardianship and not married her. What happens when he wants to have sex with one of his "friends"?? Bella now will get hurt. She is forming feelings for him and he is just taking care of this kid.
Date: 05 Oct 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
CALLING THE LITTLE BABY SHABELL... HERE IN MEXICO THE NICKNAME FOR ISABEL (I GUESS LATIN FOR ISABELLA) IS CHABELA, SO CLOSE
Date: 05 Oct 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 25
ALL I CAN SAY ABOUT THIS CHAPTER IS HOT
Date: 05 Oct 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
I DON'T LIKE SUE. SHE'S ALRIGHT WITH CHARLVIE AND HIS BIMBOS AROUND BELLA BUT DISLIKES EDWARD WHO TREATS HER WELL AND BROUGHT HER INTO A FAMILY? I HOPE IN TIME SHE SEE EDWARD IS A GOOD MAN
Date: 05 Oct 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
BELLA'S EMOTIONS ARE LIKE A ROLLERCOASTER, FIRST THE SEXING THEN CHARLIE'S ALMOST DEATH
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 22
I GUESS JACOB DIDN'T SEE THE WEDDING BAND
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
LOVED ALICE'S BIRTHDAY BUT I HOPE LAUREN DOEN'T CAUSE ANY TROUBLE LATER
Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
OH I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT CRAZY EX-GIRLFRIEND
Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
GLAD THEY SAY THE ILY'S
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
SO GREAT THAT THEY'RE BONDING
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
IS IT WRONG THAT I WANTED SOMETHING MORE BLOODFILLED TO HAPPEN TO TANYA?
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
TANYA IS A CRAZY B**CH, I HOPE EDWARD DRIVES LIKE AN ANCIENT MAN
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 26
I wonder if they'll have a long wait for babies. The way those two are I wouldn't bet on it. Lol
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
OK SO MUCH FOR ROSALIE BEHAVING. WHAT'S WRONG WITH TANYA? YOU CAN'T GO TO A BIRTHDAY PARTY AND INSULT THE BIRTHDAY GIRL OR EVEN DO IT IN A STRANGERS HOUSE
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
I LOVE HAPPY BIRTHDAYS, EVEN ROSALIE BEHAVE
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
MAYBE IT'S JUST ME BUT I'M ON EDWARDS SIDE THIS TIME. THE RULE OF THE TEXT JUST TELLING YOU'RE FINE IT'S GRRATT AND WELL HE IS IN CHARGE OF THE HOUSE JASPER AS LOVELY AS HE IS, ACTS TOO IRRESPONSIBLY HE'S AN ADULT
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
OH IT WAS SO SAD THE WAY THEY'VE LOST THEIR PARENTS I WONDER IF ROSALIE'S BITCHY ATTITUDE OR JASPER'S LIGHT ONE CAME FOR THAT
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
OK MY HPOES OF ROSALIE BEING JUST APROTECTIVE SISTER JUST DIED
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
I REALLY LIKE JASPER HE'S REALLY LIKE A BROTHER TO BELLA
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great way to bring in the new year. Bella is a natural with the babys :)
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
WHERE'S THE LINE OF PEOPLE READY TO KICK EDWARD BALLS?
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
BELLA IS SUCH A NAUGHTY GIRL ;)
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
I LOVE JASPER! AND STLL HAVE HOPES ON ROSE, MAYBE SHE'S JUST PROTECTIVE OF HER BROTHER. GLAD THAT BELLA PUT THOSE CHEERLEADERS ON THEIR PLACE
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
OH MY! EDWARD IS REALLY OVERPROTECTIVE AND POOR BELLA HER FIRST KISS WAS KINDA OSAD
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
POOR BELLA, AT LEAST EDWARD AND CARMEN ARE TREATING HER BETTER THAN CHARLIE
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 26
LOVE IT!!!!!! Wow, Jasper getting all mature on us in this chapter. lol.
Date: 05 Oct 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
thank you for the update
Date: 29 Sep 2012 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks good chapter
Date: 29 Sep 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
oooh yummy time for our kiddies
Date: 28 Sep 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
LOVE THIS!!!!!!!! I like how playful they are with each other. I don't think Bella willl let Sue influence her.
Date: 28 Sep 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE.....To cute
Date: 28 Sep 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
good times ;) Sue will come around she has to see how happy they are together.
Date: 28 Sep 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story... Sue needs to go back where she came from...
Date: 27 Sep 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS CHAPTER. Can't wait for the next chapter. Now I have to wait like everyone else.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
OMGosh!!!!!! Charlie was driving and hit them. WOW!!!!!! Poor Bella!!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
glad that they had a good time.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG!!!!!!!!!What in the world happened to Jasper.??????
Date: 25 Sep 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
God tanya is a bitch. What would she of done if she found out Bella was his wife.
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love that they are sosoo Comfortable with each other. Love seeing Alice and Jasper.
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
I can not believe that they are getting tattoos.
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
Glad that Alice was not mad. So good to see them getting along.
Date: 25 Sep 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am so glad that everyone was not seriously hurt. WOW, Rose is sorry and treating Bella nice. WOW!!!!!!
Date: 25 Sep 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
Poor guys to lose their parents like that.
Date: 25 Sep 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
I knew that Bella would get in trouble. I was wondering why she went there without Edward.
Red head???? Who was with Edward.
Date: 25 Sep 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yeah. Bella and Edward were Rolling around on the bed kissing like teenagers. Well I guess one of them is one. Lol
Date: 25 Sep 2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
I can not believe that Tanya acted like that in front of everybody. What was she thinking. What does Emmett think of all of this???
Date: 25 Sep 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
I wonder what Edward is think about the new and improved Bella.
Date: 25 Sep 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow that's a tuff break. I don't blame Bella for feeling a little nervous and upset.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
LOVED IT!!!!!!! What is the deal with Esme and Peter??? I know that Esme is younger than Carlisle. Is she the same age as Peter.....Did they used to date??????
Date: 22 Sep 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love that she is messing with him!!!!! LOL!!!!!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am like Bella, when did Edward find the time to go back to school and become a DR.? I know Edward was going to be mad at Jasper for picking up Bella on his bike. lol.
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved Bella's come back to Lauren. Great job. I am glad that Edward talk to Bella about his past. Thanks for sharing that with us. What is with the talke about blaming Rose???
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oooookkkkk!! Well, I can see Edward's pov with the brownies. I would have been mad too and thrown them away. What happened with Edward taking care of them? What is Rose do? So glad that I can go on to the next chapter. Yah, Me!!!!!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Glad that Bella and Jasper are getting along. Also that Edward and Bella are getting along as "husband" and "wife". lol.
Date: 21 Sep 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad to see Edward giving it a try!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks good chapter
Date: 21 Sep 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward keeps turn Bella down, he is seriously going to damage he ego.
Date: 21 Sep 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is sooo in trouble. He just put his foot in his mouth.
Date: 21 Sep 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad that she stood up to Edward. He is not her daddy so he does not need to act like her daddy. ButI also see Edward's point. Charlie must have been a playboy.
Date: 21 Sep 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 24
Sue has nerve sticking her nose into b&e's marriage. Poor Jazz.
Date: 21 Sep 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 24
They need to get Sue use to the idea they are staying married. So glad Peter is going to be ok but I am worried about Jasper
Date: 21 Sep 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can not believe that Jasper put netal in the microwave. Really!!! And Edward did not know you could not put metal in the microwave. lol. Glad that Bella stood up for her self. Glad that she will have a friend with Alice.
Date: 21 Sep 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 24
Sue needs to butt the hell out!!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ok, so Bella is starting to fall for Edward a little bit. What about Edward? Will we hear from Edward any in this story??
Date: 21 Sep 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am assuming that this story is taking place in modern day time. What is the deal with Charlie giving her away? What would make Edward even consider taking her and marrying her? I am assuming that he has known Charlie for a while.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks good chapter
Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
;wow Lots going on. Ugh Damn Drunk Drivers.
Date: 08 Sep 2012 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 22
ah so Bella ended up outing them huh?
Date: 08 Sep 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 21
OMG too funny...broken penis. ha ha.
Date: 08 Sep 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love this story!!
Date: 07 Sep 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks good chapter
Date: 02 Sep 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
Finally Tanya got what she deserved
Date: 02 Sep 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
Tanya is a bitch
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
What's up with tanya
Date: 01 Sep 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
God I'm laughing right now, Alice thinks she broke Jasper's peen and called Bella of all people to talk to. Like she wants to know about her brother in laws private area, but poor Jasper that must have been traumatizing I can't imagine he will be eager to go anywhere near Alice for awhile poor man will probably have nightmares.
Date: 01 Sep 2012 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
Is he attracted to her at all?
Author's Response:
who are you talking about?
Date: 01 Sep 2012 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh man! How can you not love Alice and Jasper? It's impossible.
Maria
Date: 01 Sep 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thanks good chapter
Date: 31 Aug 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well, I'm so curious as to what exactly Alice did to Jasper!! Thanks for writing. Can't wait for the next update.
Lisa
Date: 31 Aug 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
I read one other story that had a so called broken penis but this Edward made me understand. OMG, priceless. I love it.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
sounds like they had a hell of a party
omg poor alice. i am assuming her wanting to get frisky with jasper and him getting hurt will tramatize them both. oh goodness i can't wait to find out what really happened.
love it
Date: 31 Aug 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it haha poor jasper x
Date: 31 Aug 2012 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
LOL!!!! Poor Jasper!!!!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
ROFL what a way to meet the ex