Date: 27 Jan 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good story, horrible ending. I believe fanfic should allow characters to have what they can't in other platforms. The ending was sad and depressing and we already get pelnty of that in the show. A happy ending would have been so much better.
Date: 10 Sep 2013 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
wow! This story is simply amazing! The Hailey you're presenting is very authentic, although I have never considered her being a manipulative little bitch!
signing up on twcs to read this story was definitely worth it :)
yours,
Zebrastreifen from fanfiction.net :)
Date: 30 Mar 2013 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yes I agree with Jekkah a sequel is needed for this one where these must get back together!!!!!!! Please?????????
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
They need to get together! It wasn't the right time then, but it will be! :D
As sad as I am to see them part (though it was the right thing for their characters), that was one heck of a send off! Amazing!
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
Aw, that was sad and sweet and hot all in one! Completely true to character!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ouch! Poor Hotch and JJ, Haley has them both by the balls. And poor Jack. He's stuck in all this and he isn't even born yet! Can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to review, glad you're enjoying the story
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2012 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aw, my heart's just breaking for JJ... and for Hotch...
Not being a Haley fan, I love the way you have painted her here.
Author's Response:
Thanks, yes apparently I'm working out all my Haley frustration here from rewatching some of those earlier eps, lol.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Fantastic! Love the idea of them getting dirty in the back of the SUV!
Author's Response:
Thank you, that seemed to be their idea more than mine, lol.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter! Hope to see more soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 22 Aug 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow that wasn't what I expected lol looking forward to Haley getting what she deserves.... a divorce
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2012 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh when is he going to confront Haley I really want her to get what's coming to her. I wonder what's going through JJ's mind ?!? More please and I was really hoping they had separate rooms too :);):);):);) lol
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2012 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Nooooo!!! You can't stop there! I want to see Hotch just lay into her!
Author's Response:
Don't we all! Thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yes!!!! Update pleasseeeeesee
Date: 29 Jul 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome chapter! Haley's so manipulative, can't wait to see where you take this! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I thought this would be s short story but apparently Haley's bitchiness knows now bounds in this, now have to think of where to end it, lol. Appreciate you taking the time to review.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
In a way I hope JJ gets pregnant just to throw back at Haley. I knew she was up to something and I hope Aaron chooses JJ now hehehe
Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Another great chapter! Hope to see more soon. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 27 Jul 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
this is definately (sp) different, and very hot.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
More soon please. Kind of glad he ignored his wife and continued at his pace but she is definitely up to something
Author's Response:
Of course she is :) - thanks
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
Pure awesomeness! Hope you update soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much - hope to soon, they're trying to decide who does who/what next, lol.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
Fantastic! Especially loved this line: “I wanted to bend you over my desk the first time I met you.”
Author's Response:
Thank you, that was one of my favorites also
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
Please update soon that was sooooo hot but you ended it as it was getting good so please post next chapter soon like now :):):):):)
Author's Response:
Thanks, hope to update soon
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
Haley is up to something that is for sure more please i love this story
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love how JJ and Hotch remain one with each other even has Haley was the one that gave him the orgasm. She's definitely up to something!
But yay! JJ and Hotch are now alone!
Author's Response:
Of course she's up to something :) -- thanks for your review
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
woww!!! i miss you!! tks for return
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my!!!! Hehehe looking forward to Hotch joining them hehe. Oh don't forget your other story:)
Author's Response:
updating it as we speak :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
And I might have died.
Oh, this is just awesome! I can't even describe how much I am loving this. The sweet torture of Hotch is just delicious!
Author's Response:
*bg* thanks
Date: 14 Jul 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
interesting, more please.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lol more please
Author's Response:
I'm probably going to have them all dead from exhaustion by the time they finish :). Thanks
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh please oh please oh please oh PLEASE continue this! :D
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it, will try to keep the pace going.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm already in love with this story. I'm not a Haley fan, but I love how she's taking control of this situation and lulling both Hotch and JJ into it.
Author's Response:
Thanks that's certainly the plan, as will be MUCH clearer in ch 2