Date: 27 Jan 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good story, horrible ending. I believe fanfic should allow characters to have what they can't in other platforms. The ending was sad and depressing and we already get pelnty of that in the show. A happy ending would have been so much better.
Date: 10 Sep 2013 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
wow! This story is simply amazing! The Hailey you're presenting is very authentic, although I have never considered her being a manipulative little bitch!
signing up on twcs to read this story was definitely worth it :)
Zebrastreifen from fanfiction.net :)
Date: 27 Nov 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
They need to get together! It wasn't the right time then, but it will be! :D
As sad as I am to see them part (though it was the right thing for their characters), that was one heck of a send off! Amazing!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ouch! Poor Hotch and JJ, Haley has them both by the balls. And poor Jack. He's stuck in all this and he isn't even born yet! Can't wait to see where this goes!
Thanks for taking the time to review, glad you're enjoying the story
Date: 08 Sep 2012 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aw, my heart's just breaking for JJ... and for Hotch...
Not being a Haley fan, I love the way you have painted her here.
Thanks, yes apparently I'm working out all my Haley frustration here from rewatching some of those earlier eps, lol.
Date: 29 Jul 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome chapter! Haley's so manipulative, can't wait to see where you take this! :)
Thanks, I thought this would be s short story but apparently Haley's bitchiness knows now bounds in this, now have to think of where to end it, lol. Appreciate you taking the time to review.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love how JJ and Hotch remain one with each other even has Haley was the one that gave him the orgasm. She's definitely up to something!
But yay! JJ and Hotch are now alone!
Of course she's up to something :) -- thanks for your review
Date: 14 Jul 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm already in love with this story. I'm not a Haley fan, but I love how she's taking control of this situation and lulling both Hotch and JJ into it.
Thanks that's certainly the plan, as will be MUCH clearer in ch 2