[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2012 11:53 AM Title: If i could, make a deal with god...
Durty Nelly says she loves reptile...I am like huh?
Tyggs wrote it go read it ! I couldn't get here fast enough....
GAWD YOU OWN MY FANGIRLING ASS WITH YOUR WORDS!
HIS TONGUE...FUCK ME RUNNING THAT SHIT IS OFF THE HOOK!
makes me want to draw a picture! lol
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 2:30 PM Title: If i could, make a deal with god...
I kinda like how this is written. It's different from what I'm used to reading but I like it. The Idea of the two men is brilliant I can picture it perfectly.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 10:23 AM Title: Smoke and Signal fires...
Oh so much hatred for her late husband and so much lust for her young lover
Date: 29 Jul 2012 10:14 AM Title: I'm so Sick...
Oh have they just buried her husband in the dessert? He is a conniving bastard
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 10:07 AM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
Oh a conniving and gold digging man..wonder if he gays her cash
Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:09 PM Title: If i could, make a deal with god...
Now why the Hell didn't I get an alert?? Fuckin piece of shit puters!!! Loved the "greypupon"! WHO THE HELL'S IN THE GROUND?? Ernest??
Ohhh..I'm sorry about your colleague! That sucks!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 4:42 PM Title: If i could, make a deal with god...
More please!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:32 PM Title: If i could, make a deal with god...
It's almost like watching a movie. So it really is the husband they buried. I almost got confused by the way you wrote this chapter but I re-read it again and got it. The husband is thinking in the italics, not saying it?
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 3:40 AM Title: Smoke and Signal fires...
I read this during the trip, but couldn't comment until now.
I LOVE THIS!!!! MORE PLZ. NOW BISH, NOW!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 7:20 PM Title: Smoke and Signal fires...
wow, what a sad sad predicament she finds herself in.. Really freaky... let the games continue..
Date: 21 Jul 2012 11:08 PM Title: Smoke and Signal fires...
nice... so she's not as clueless in all this as we first thought... loving it darlin'!
Author's Response:
As to what he really is... SHe's clueless. But what she did, I like to think it was of her free will. I am a believer that noone can make a person do something they don't want to do. I want to beleive that when the seed was planted there was already one budding. It's usually like that with crimes of passion.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 10:54 PM Title: Smoke and Signal fires...
:)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 10:46 PM Title: Smoke and Signal fires...
She seems confused. Did she want to do it or not? I really can't tell but she's no better than him.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 10:43 PM Title: I'm so Sick...
Oh he just plain loonie! I really am liking this. It seems so, real almost. Like he could be a real crook!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 10:35 PM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
WOW! This is one vile character!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 10:31 PM Title: Smoke and Signal fires...
She's so pathetic. I would never let someone manipuate me like that. That is just horrible.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 4:55 PM Title: Smoke and Signal fires...
She's just as likable as he is. Nuff said... Damn, Tyggs, they's just plain ole sick in the haid.*hillbilly accent*
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 4:24 PM Title: Smoke and Signal fires...
blah blah blah praise praise praise. mwuah!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:10 PM Title: I'm so Sick...
OMG.. WOW>>> Creepy and fucking fantastic.... your still teasing me Tygs.. e is just a whole level of insane and she just follows. The strong women in me feels sick by that but on the othert hand I want to see how this evolves... Give me more Mami.....
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:35 AM Title: I'm so Sick...
This is so sick and this is only chapter 2! xD I can't wait for more. Write bish!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:28 AM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
Sorry, I'm late. I'm sooooo outta the loop with everything lately. But I'm here. Better late than never, right?
Yes, he is something else!!!! *squees and shudders*
I love it already! Love the picture you paint in my mind when I read!
Author's Response:
Awweeee thank you bish!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 8:26 PM Title: I'm so Sick...
Where's the next chapter is all I have to say!
Date: 20 Jul 2012 7:31 PM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
This is the first story I've read of your Thaigher, its just amazing, your male character is just so vile, I love it!! Can't wait read more xxx Angela LuvsFanfic
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing darling!! It's nice to have some new people around. And he is incredibly Vile. Sad part is..it's so easy to write him. I may need to talk to a shrink. lol
Date: 20 Jul 2012 2:07 PM Title: I'm so Sick...
I wish you could see my smiling face! Spliced tongue, shedding skin, PUS?? Friggin LOVE this!! So 1 buried & pissed on husband down & many more to go I suspect. Onward Reptileward!! mmuuaaahhhh Love Linda xo
Author's Response:
Yeah totally. The real shit is about to come up, I just have a story to tell first and a couple of laughs along the way.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 1:22 PM Title: I'm so Sick...
He's something else and I'm hooked!
Author's Response:
Something else is indeed the word. He's emotionally cruel. But what I like about him is the open bookness and how honest he is with himself. He knows he's a piece of shit and the fact that he doesn't care makes him a terrific character to probe. His mind is so straight foreward. He knows what he wants how to get it and will do what he has too to earn it. Even if it disgust him. It's odd having that much freedom to work with. Thanks for reviewing the prompt. I didn't think anyone would pay a single morsel of attention to this but it makes me happy to see someone who really doesn't know me or dabble that much into horror and gore give something I wrote improvitive a chance. thanks doll!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 1:16 PM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
WOW!!!!! Don't think I breathed the whole time I was reading...
Author's Response:
Oh! I hope he wasn't too bad!! Thanks for reading my prompt!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 10:16 AM Title: I'm so Sick...
OMG - runs to the bathroom. What a chapter. shudders
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 2:41 AM Title: I'm so Sick...
What i'm really starting to like about this is that rawness you have but I think I can sense some of your personality. I bet you're really sarcastic. lol I think a little bit of every author comes out in their writing. And I think this guy is somewhat you.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 1:53 AM Title: I'm so Sick...
I laughed so hard at the R.kelly comment. Priceless. It's wicked scary you can write a person like this. You sure you haven't had someone randomly pee pee in the desert?
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 1:39 AM Title: I'm so Sick...
Oh my god... haha, I am laughing so fucking hard! That's amazing.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 1:31 AM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
Holy shit... I actually like him even though he is a asshole.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 1:25 AM Title: I'm so Sick...
Christ, Tyggs, I knew you were a sick fuck but really... I love it. Nuff said....
Author's Response:
BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 11:18 PM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
Ok, Tyggs, you got me. I don't normally read the original stuff, much less horror or 'gore' but you got me into this stuff... Now I'm really enjoying it. I like this minimalistic style you've got working here. It creates an eerie feel while giving just enough information for the reader to extrapolate. I won't even try to guess at where this is going because I know how much you like to fuck with your readers. Just know that you have now started me on a new type of story to read. Thanks for getting me to dip my toe into your pool...
Author's Response:
Well I'm glad to broaded your horizon. This style is technically a poetic form with a mix of just not giving a fuck. I could've wrote this out hugely, but I thought about it and decided to keep it simple. There's noone to impress but myself so I decided to take a style I wrote in before and just write. Oddly enough this is free hand. No planning. No outline. All brain and 15 minutes a piece to write it. This is a great exercise for prompt work. It's not meant to be serious. It's meant to be...fun. Challenging, but nothing to burst a blood cell about lol So it's always amazing to see someone whose actually interested in my improv prompts.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2012 11:14 PM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
Interesting. :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2012 11:06 PM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
0_O is this ::gasp:: something smutty? Tyggy, you lying little BIOTCH! And you said you couldn't write smut. ::shakes head and whispers:: so full of it. I expect lots more from you. A LOT!
LOL Great job hun :)
Author's Response:
This is SMUT! He's just nasty! lolol And no's I can NOT write smut. I don't even enjoy reading too much of it let alone write it. That shit is all the same with fandom writers. dick in the mouth. dick in the ass. Secretary big boss. Blah blah blah. lololol So i'm glad to have a character whose jobless and still pimping the hoes.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2012 11:01 PM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
I kind of want to stick my foot up his ass and it's only the first chapter. I'm not one for horror but your summary really stuck out so I'd thought I'd peek in. I'm going to stick it out to see what you got coming.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:48 PM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
He is scary but no nightmares. Awesome stuff hun.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:47 PM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
WOW,, What a prick,, literally.. Makes me want more... To be that fly on the wall, delicious read as always.. MORE... Tygs more.....
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:35 PM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
Wow. I've never read a guy who was this harsh. Is like the male form of a black widow?
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:56 PM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
Wow, he's an ass. Great writing, cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
Great writing? You sure about that? *kidding* Thanks doll!!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:50 PM Title: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...
OHHHH..he's a Naughty Naughty boy!!! I like it! ;D Linda xo
Author's Response:
Buahahahah! Yes. He likes to pet pussies from time to time too.