Date: 07 Sep 2015 11:44 PM Title: The Epilogue
Very sweet story
Date: 28 Dec 2013 8:55 AM Title: The Epilogue
You've written a really lovely story here with believable characters and a nice hand with the pacing. I'll mention that H/JJ isn't my personal OTP just to let you know that you made this work for me. They are so great together in this, and his deep concern and caring for her was so touching. I love stories that bring out the happier or more open sides of Hotch.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 11:17 AM Title: Family
Awwww, how sweet. Loved the scene with Henry. Look forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 10:47 AM Title: The Reveal
Liked seeing them get the team, well played!
Date: 25 Jul 2012 11:35 PM Title: Schemes
LOL, cute, it's fun seeing JJ and Hotch doing turnabout on the games the team is trying to play. Looking forward to everyone's faces when they realize they've been had.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:56 AM Title: Cute and Sweet
ROTFL, I love it. JJ's mother was a trip. Glad their feelings are starting to surface more as she moves through the grief process. Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Thx so much for taking the time to review! :)
Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:26 AM Title: Alone
LOL love it, the team making bets as well as the remarks about how they behaved when JJ first joined the team. I wish! Glad that Hotch is the one she's clinging to
Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:22 AM Title: The Funeral
Again well written, good portrayal of the grief process - glad Henry's being so good also and that the team is there for her
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:21 AM Title: Tragedy Strikes
Love it - such sadness but so well handled... glad that JJ turned to Hotch
Date: 20 Jul 2012 3:53 PM Title: Tragedy Strikes
I loved this story the first time round (how scary that this was first published in 2009!!)
Going to have another read of it, thanks for uploading!
Author's Response:
I know! It was so long ago. Thanks for reviewing then and now. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)