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Reviewer: JoDRG Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2019 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yo, I love this 

Reviewer: huangjinyuer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: Deeda Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

i love this story and wish that you had continued it till they actually got together!!!

Reviewer: Dream24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

At first I wasn't sure how this was going to turn out (Chapter 1), but as the story progressed it became really erotic and hot. Poor JJ/Hotch, they must have been so embarrassed at first. Nicely done on a subject that some people would be uncomfortable with, no matter what. 

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh wow wonder what's going to happen next hehehe. Very hot chapter update soon

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: hojear Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

i like your way of writing about my favorite couple, you know how to combine their personalities so hot, congratulations

Author's Response:

LOL, glad I didn't gross you out, thanks

Reviewer: Jekkah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it.  Not sure about an adult drinking breastmilk in real life, but I love how you handled it here.

Author's Response:

Thanks, yes apparently to some people it's a turn on and/or natural thing to happen -- am sure it could be it's whole seperate fetish thing as well, but we won't go there :). 

Reviewer: JanPan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG!!! I haven't had any children of my own yet but I have read somewhere that men do like the taste of breast milk. Is that a fetish?. I am actually intrigued to find out what happens next because Hotch liked doing that a bit to much. 

Author's Response:

LOL, from what I read it could be anything from a weird fetish to a more natural event of some leaking out during marital relations.  Thanks for reviewing

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