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Reviewer: Courtstuffs Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2024 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Bad Girl Bella: Men Are Too Easy

Bella is so hateful and unlikeable that it makes for a hard read. 

Reviewer: Courtstuffs Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2024 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Bad Girl Bella: Men Are Too Easy

Bella is so hateful and unlikeable that it makes for a hard read. 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

i LOVED this story!!! ;) i'm off to read the sequel now *squee!* ;D

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

love it i hope it works out for them!

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Good Boy Edward: Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want

lol love it

Reviewer: mom_nancy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

Hmm. can't wait to go find your sequel. Great fic, I am hoping for a little more bad ass bella though, and more than anything I would love to see lots of BA Edward!! Great Job!

Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

wow BEST story EVER!!!!!!!!  I loved it so much.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

That was the perfect place to end the first part.  I can't wait to see how Daddy Masen takes the news of Edward's new direction with his life.

I honestly don't know how long the friends thing will last.  The two of them are so much in love with each other.  I'm just glad they are talking and working things out :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Bad Girl Bella: WTF!

So glad Bella didn't go all wild in Europe.  I think she handled her time there perfectly.  The tattoos she ended up doing in each country was great.  I like that you have their tattoos have meaning.  There's nothing that irritates me more than someone doing something permanent like that with some stupid little picture.

Anyway, the moment I've been waiting for is coming.  I can't wait to see what they say to each other.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Good Boy Edward: I'd Wish It All Away

I have a feeling that Daddy Masen wouldn't be too happy with Edward getting a tattoo like that.  Not good for the professional appearance he would want his son to have.  I love it!  I hope this trip to LA ends well.  If his dad won't follow through on the threats against Charlie I can totally see him being able to live without his father's money.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Bad Girl Bella: A Punch In The Gut

Okay, so Alice gave Edward his graduation present from Bella.  I just know seeing that is going to kill him.  I hate his dad even more now.  At least Charlie didn't let Bella down.  He was there when she needed him and didn't give her crap about Edward.  He's such a good dad.  I could totally see Charlie having a chat with Edward's dad about all of this crap.  You know he has to have an idea of what went down.   At least Bella can get away to Europe for a while.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

OMG, I have to leave for work and I don't want to.  I want to read the next chapter.  I knew the fluffy goodness couldn't continue.  I really hate Edward's dad right now.  He needs to run into Charlie's Hells Angels in a dark alley.  WTF is up with that douche.  You can happily run your son's life but you can't even show up to his graduation?!

I'm dying to know what Bella's tattoo is and what Alice gave Edward.  Is Bella pregnant?  That would change everything.  I'll be back in about an hour when I get to work to find out :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 20: The Bad Girl Bella: Sweet Rewards

So, they both got into UCLA.  You've got me wondering if the college choice will cause some drama for them.  I hope not because Eddie definitely loves Bella.  I can see his parents giving him shit about following her.

Edward getting inked was hot.  I can't wait to see exactly what Bella got.  I'm wondering if it involves his initials.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Good Boy Edward: Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want

I'm so happy that B&E are together and happy.  I've read so much wrist slashing angst lately that it's nice to have some sweet and hot new love fluff.  I'm just hoping there is no huge hurt coming.

Alice and Jasper trip me out with their Sub/Dom switching.  I think B&E need to get some payback for their cockblocking actions in the woods.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 18: The Bad Girl Bella: I Wanna Love Ya

Awe, the I Love You at prom was sweet.  Too bad Bitchy Vickie had to show up and ruin the moment.

If Eddie hadn't said I love you too I would've had to give him a beat down.  Glad I didn't have to go WWE on his ass.  That was so perfect that Bella could share some first with Edward for his first time.  Just beautiful :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Good Boy Edward: Welcome to My World

The hospital scene was sweet.  I had not doubts Bella coudl reign in the Bad Girl to enjoyt he kids.

The riding lesson was total win :)  I cringed when they ended up at the rez.  I kept waiting for Jake to show up with Bella deep throating Edward being all pissy and WTF on them.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 16: The Bad Girl Bella: There Are No Words

Fist pump for sleep overs :)

I get that Jake and Bella have a history and are supposed to be friends but WTF was he thinking?  Did he honestely thinking giving Bella an ultimatum like that would force her to dump Edward?  I was waiting for 'I love him' to come falling out of her mouth when she stepped between Edward and Jake.

LOL!  Bella catching Charlie and Sue like a couple of teenagers on the couch was greatness.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Good Boy Edward: Down, Down Baby, Down By the Rollercoaster

Eddie takes directions so well :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Bad Girl Bella: How Sweet He Is

Do the bitches honestly think that harrassing Bella is going to get them anywhere?  Get over it and move on.  James is creeping me out.

Edward being nervous is so cute.  Honestly I would worry if he wasnt' nervous.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Good Boy Edward: Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic

You ladies had me worried a few times in that chapter.  I started to worry that Bella would actually feel like a whore by Edward dragging her into a room and doing that with her.  Thankfully she didn't.

Of course Edward hearing about the bet had me gasping.  That could've been disastrous.  I really want these 2 together and happy.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Bad Girl Bella: Smoke and Mirrors

*snort*  Edward jumped off Bella like his ass was on fire when Charlie got home.  Priceless.

I think they should've skipped the party.  You knew nothing good would come from being there.  WTF is up with the Bitch Brigade calling Bella a whore? Hello kettle, meet pot.

Bella punching Tanya put a huge smile on my face :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Good Boy Edward: I Like The Way You Ride

Ah, Satan's Mistress at her finest.  Loved it.

Bella telling off the Bitch Brigade was awesome.  Of course Edward backing her up was even better.  I would say that little display made them official.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Bad Girl Bella: Put On Your Dancing

I can't tell you how entertaining it is to see this bad girl Bella all giddy over a date.  We all have a squealing girl deep down inside no matter how hard we try to supress it.

The date was great.  Nothing better than dinner and dancing (real dancing, not the club stuff).

I love Charlie.  Maybe Edward being the good guy can work to his and Bella's advantage with Charlie.  Youv'e got me worried about the whole breaking and entering thing.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Good Boy Edward: A Little Birdie Told Me So

The Bitch Brigade needs to be taken down a notch or two.  Bella and Edward will be together so deal with it ;)

Edward is so awkward at times that it is so freaking adorable.  Can't wait for the date.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Bad Girl Bella: Making Waves

I'm so glad life has settled down and I can finally finish reading this.  God how I've missed these two.

I love that Bella is freaking out over that awesome kiss and then the make out session.  Yeah, you two just need to give in and be together.

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

Awesome story. Started reading today and couldn't stop until I finished. Now off to start on the sequel. Loved it!!!

Reviewer: belle123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

This story is the best, you have a good imagination!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

and the healing begins...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 24: The Bad Girl Bella: WTF!

yay the talk is next. time to wrk this shit out

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 23: The Good Boy Edward: I'd Wish It All Away

yay jasper eddie needed to be smacked down for what he did. both of the tatts sound so perfect.

loved the line'i just want her close to me now' such an awwww moment.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Bad Girl Bella: A Punch In The Gut

wow this charlie seems like a pretty awesome dad, even with the illegal stuff he has going on the side. bella gets to go to europe but what will happen betweenb and e? what did he think of the book? what will bella think when she finds out alice gave it to him even after the breakup?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

oh boy the 'gift' i wonder what it is? still no answer on what b's tatt is...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 20: The Bad Girl Bella: Sweet Rewards

wow she got his name?!? most tattoo artists around here refuse to do names unless it's you mom or your kids. love fades tatts are forever.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Good Boy Edward: Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want

well eddie has been deflowered and has now become a sex fanatic. yay for bella!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 18: The Bad Girl Bella: I Wanna Love Ya

wow!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Good Boy Edward: Welcome to My World

well now riding lessons and a BJ sounds like a good night

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Bad Girl Bella: There Are No Words

look at them growing together, helping the other to blossom.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Good Boy Edward: Down, Down Baby, Down By the Rollercoaster

hot. i think eddie is a natural.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Bad Girl Bella: How Sweet He Is

aww eddie is so sweet. and it is too cute that he is the one who is nervous about sex.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Good Boy Edward: Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic

that was hot! i think that it really speaks to bella's true motives that she is willing to give up lola to end the bet. eddie should see how big that is.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Bad Girl Bella: Smoke and Mirrors

they are too cute! and bella finally got to hit one of the girls

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Good Boy Edward: I Like The Way You Ride

wow bella can sure plan a date too. so cute how the dates they each planned are so different but still so right for both of them.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Bad Girl Bella: Put On Your Dancing

yeah that was a date! so sweet.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 9: The Good Boy Edward: A Little Birdie Told Me So

god he is just too cute!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Bad Girl Bella: Making Waves

i wish my daddy would buy me that car. i wonder how bella will get home after school? maybe gentlemanly eddie will offer her a 'ride'...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Good Boy Edward: Redo and Make It Up

wow not bad for a second kiss

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter Six: The Bad Girl Bella: The First Fall Is The Hardest

wow looks like things may not be going quite how b wanted. she seems a little too effected by that kiss...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Good Boy Edward: Minions to the Army

boy edward is in trouble

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Bad Girl Bella: Men Are Too Easy

now i wonder why eddie was so nervous...? and i wonder if that was his first kiss?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Good Boy Edward: I Dub Thee Sir Prudeward

aww poor baby, if you don't like the name you shouldn't act the part. but don't worry bad ass bella will lead you off of the straight and narrow into the wilderness.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Bad Girl Bella: The Stakes are High

oh boy she put her bike up? good thing he likes her.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Good Boy Edward: This Is Where the War Begins

well looks like eddie needs to get laid and maybe he would be happier. bella sounds hot! can't blame the boy for panting after her.

Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

I liked the whole story :)

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

aaaawwwwwww that was sweet...

And finally daddy E is getting put on his place! Damn I'm mad at that man!

Let's go to LA!!!!!!

much love!



Author's Response:

Thanks, so glad you liked the ending. =0 J

Reviewer: cam87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

AWESOME i loved this...so cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Remember to put us on your favorite authors so that when we start posting the sequel you can be alerted. =0 J

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

So does that mean this Friday we'll be seeing something???? I loved this story and cannot wait for you to start posting the sequel.



Author's Response:

Yep, Friday the sequel starts. So glad you love it. =0 J

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

:)



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=0 J

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

yay!! Can't wait to see the sequel! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 25: The Good Boy Edward: I'll Take What I Can Get

Yay! So glad he was finally honest w her. About freakin time. I hope she doesn't officially take him back too soon though. Make him work for it. But a little sexy time between friends never hurt anyone either;)

Author's Response:

Oh, she is going to make him work for it. The tension should be interesting. =0 J

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Bad Girl Bella: WTF!

awesome chapter!! so happy that we get the next one later because I can't wait to see the next part!! :) added you to favs too :)



Author's Response:

Thanks. Yep, we'll be back. These two aren't done yet.

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Bad Girl Bella: WTF!

oh my gosh tell me already!!!

I'm dying here!

you et your sweet ass I'm putting you on my faves right now!!

much love!



Author's Response:

Thanks. You won't have to wait long. =0 J

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Bad Girl Bella: WTF!

Ladies, you make my heart swell with glee; a clit piercing for dirty minx Bella. Let's get Eddie in a gimp mask and Jasper in a nice sweaty leather outfit and I can die happy!



Author's Response:

*laughs* Eddie in a gimp mask, that is great. Oh, this Bella is a vixen.

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Bad Girl Bella: WTF!

Love the chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Bad Girl Bella: WTF!

:)



Author's Response:

=0 J

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 23: The Good Boy Edward: I'd Wish It All Away

oh crap! Keep writing... so excited to see more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks. More is coming soon!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Bad Girl Bella: The Stakes are High

Ha, ha talk about, sealing her fate...

Reviewer: twilightme1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Good Boy Edward: I'd Wish It All Away

Ok I was almost in tears for the breakup. I hope Edward will explain and his jerk of a dad will leave them alone.. Like the story a lot....



Author's Response:

More to come, hang in there with us. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Good Boy Edward: I'd Wish It All Away

:)



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=0 J

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Good Boy Edward: I'd Wish It All Away

It's all so tragic :(

Love the chapter



Author's Response:

It is very sad, but they have to learn and grow. Thanks!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Good Boy Edward: I'd Wish It All Away

Uh-ohs.  Not good



Author's Response:

Just hang in there with us. It will get better. =0 J

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Good Boy Edward: I'd Wish It All Away

please let this be the edward/bella reunion...they've been unhappy too long



Author's Response:

You will have to wait and see. He's going to fight for her, you know he will.

Reviewer: Twi-Addict Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Good Boy Edward: I'd Wish It All Away

I can't believe you left me hanging like this!  Love the story.



Author's Response:

Sorry. We kinda like cliffies. =0 J

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Good Boy Edward: I'd Wish It All Away

oh god that is so sad.... I hope she hears him out...

much love



Author's Response:

It is very sad, hang in there with us. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Teaste Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Good Boy Edward: I'd Wish It All Away

Feel bad for Edward, but I can't blame Jasper for wanting to protect Bella.



Author's Response:

Oh yes, Jasper is very protective. Edward and Bella, it's all sad.

Reviewer: Teaste Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Bad Girl Bella: A Punch In The Gut

What a cliff hanger, what did Alice give Edward?

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Bad Girl Bella: A Punch In The Gut

:)

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Bad Girl Bella: A Punch In The Gut

damn! why does parents have to be like that?? don't they care about their childrens happiness??...

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 20: The Bad Girl Bella: Sweet Rewards

oh lordy! that should be fun!!

I loved this couple!!!! I just love them!!!

Much love!

Cynthia Romo

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Bad Girl Bella: A Punch In The Gut

It's even sadder from Bella's point of view :(

Great chapter ^^

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Bad Girl Bella: A Punch In The Gut

OH NO U DIDNT!!  You put her on a plane.  NOOOO.  lol

ek

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Bad Girl Bella: A Punch In The Gut

Aw, you heartless woman! Fancy leaving tough bitch Bella heartbroken after her first love. Please let sexy, insatiable Edward stand up to his SOB Dad and make everything good again as I know there won't be any of your naughty lemons until they kiss and make up. Hurry, hurry, hurry!

 



Author's Response:

Well, it might take a few, but Edward will eventually get there. Hang in there with us. =0 J

Reviewer: smartcandies103 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Bad Girl Bella: A Punch In The Gut

still dont know wut the tattoo is.......



Author's Response:

Sorry, the tatt will be revealed in the next chapter.

If you want a picture, let me know, it's on my blog (chartwilightmom.blogspot.com) but you will see all the teasers for what is current since this is ahead on FF.

=0 J

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

NO!!! No! No! No!

I can't take this, it almost hurts, it's so sad :(

but awesome chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks. It is very sad. Hang in there with us. =0 J

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

My heart is broken for both of them.  Poor Bella and Edward.  They belong together and Carlise has got to see that,  Maybe Esme could stand up for them.  Something, Anything they need to fix this.  I'm scared for these two...

ek



Author's Response:

Edward's dad is Edward Masen Sr. Carlisle & Esme are Alice's parents. Hang in there, so sad, but it gets better. =0 J

Reviewer: smartcandies103 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

i thot u said u were gunna tell us wut the tattoo was...  :(

Reviewer: emmettrocksmysocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

this is stupid...he should have just told bella the truth and they could have just snuck around



Author's Response:

Well, the boy can be stupid sometimes. =0 J

Reviewer: starlight07 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

Edward is a dumbass motherfucker.Why in the hell didn't he just tell her what his dad said to him?Why in the hell did he just break-up with her the way he did?I'm starting to hate Edward now.All the stories I'm reading make him look stupid and fucking heartless.It's bullshit.I'm surprised Emmett and Jasper even restrained Bella from beating the living shit out of Edward.They shouldn't have.



Author's Response:

He is very much a dumb ass, but he has to learn what is important.

Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

But you didn't reveal her tat????? :(



Author's Response:

Sorry, it's coming. And if you are desperate, you can check our blogs to see the image.

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

This chapter was really sad.  You did a great job capturing the emotion and I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

It was very sad. Posting tomorrow. =0 J

Reviewer: racejunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

i love this story! my heart broke when bella & edward's did...cannot wait for an update!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Wednesday is the next update. Oh, it did break our hearts to write this part of this story. =0 J

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

aww :( I hate his Dad!



Author's Response:

We all hate this Edward Masen Sr.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

:)



Author's Response:

=0 J

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

Fuck him. That was so lame. How would Carlisle know if he told B what had happened?

Author's Response:

Edward's father is Edward Masen Sr., not Carlisle (who is Alice's father). Just hang i there with us. =0 J

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

What is that?  What kind of an ending is that?  Thank God I only have to wait until Wednesday to find out what is going on, and I hope it involves Edward telling his father to go to hell with some additional profanity.



Author's Response:

Sorry about that. I know, hold out till Wednesday. Don't hold you breath. Boy has to learn a few things first. Hang in there with us. =0 J

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Bad Girl Bella: Sweet Rewards

Great chapter!! I can't wait to read about Bella's new tattoo!



Author's Response:

Thanks. On my blog (chartwilightmom) I have a handdrawn picture of the tatt. =0 J

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Bad Girl Bella: Sweet Rewards

:)



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=0 J

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Bad Girl Bella: Sweet Rewards

Yum, yum.  Edward naked from the waist up being inked - sigh. Your human Edward is turning out to be a naughty little oversexed fox isn't he! I can't wait to see what he does next.



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Oh an inked Edward, so sexy. =0 J

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Bad Girl Bella: Sweet Rewards

Love the chapter :)

I can't wait for the next one :D

 



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Thanks-Posting every other day!

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Bad Girl Bella: Sweet Rewards

Ooh! A pressie for E! His signature maybe?

Author's Response:

Hmm, maybe.

Reviewer: starlight07 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Good Boy Edward: Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want

Hahahahahahahahahahahaha!Those pervs were totally about to start jacking off to them having sex! Weirdos!



Author's Response:

Alice and Jasper are very unique, that is for sure.

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