Date: 22 Sep 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
well back on the pearl - good.
adele as a stow away - bad.
jack giving away her dress - bad.
john and gibbs and the crew ok - good.
jack being stuck between two girls - bad.
not sure what is gonna win out here before the fireworks hit...
Date: 22 Sep 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 25
is adele lying? she definately got a reaction but probably not the one she hoped for. lol
they finally did it and now jack wants to keep her all to himself. pretty sure she's ok with that but will this change thngs for the better or the worse?
Date: 22 Sep 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
uh oh i think jack is mad that josh didn't want to kiss him but is ok with bringing john into his room for a talk when the ship is empty.... and of course adele knows this and a little more...
is it time for the descovery of what josh really is?
Date: 05 Aug 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
Read it all in one shot. Terrific job on Jack Sparrow character!! Great story but how can she be any where close to him with all those women he has!! I would have a hard time believing he would give them up. I'm sitting here ready for the next chapters!! This the 1st story of yours I read but I will be watching for more of your stuff.
Date: 05 Aug 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
I was somehow hoping that maybe there would be more chapters here then on fan fiction :(. What can I say, I'm desperate for the next chapter!! Best story ever, and I'm going to review on fan fiction as well so hopefully you update soon :)