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Reviewer: jackieo38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2018 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 12

I thought this story was Awesome, I love when the Major Jasper are sometimes dominate. But also paired with only Bella, and I especially like it when she isn't a push over like in other stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you, i sppreciate this review. some naysayers make it hard for people like me and a small group of others get some very negative reviews sometimes. But we always try to write our best.

Reviewer: andrew_pine Signed star [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 2

crappy writing i am done,bye.



Author's Response:

whatever

have a wonderful day

Reviewer: andrew_pine Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hope it gets better.



Author's Response:

it is as good as it is. obviously some people do have certain expectations from a writer, but we who write fanfiction do it for the love of it.

Reviewer: sabrina michaels Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 6

Now we are getting somewhere they are mated and claimed...the Cavalry has arrived in the form of Peter and Charlotte...and I feel an impending confrontation soon to take place.



Author's Response:

but what will P/C think of B

Reviewer: sabrina michaels Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 5

Aha..their inner monsters meet for the first time...They will recognize they are mates surely.



Author's Response:

damn straight they will, but Major is going to know that he isnt the boss all the time

Reviewer: sabrina michaels Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 4

The more I read the more I want her to make them suffer a worse fate then what she did.



Author's Response:

I can understand that. But ithink Bella needs to find a way that is peaceful for all.

Reviewer: sabrina michaels Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh but sweet Bella he is yours.  i want to see her tear the other idiots apart and burn the pieces.



Author's Response:

Where would the fun be in that

Reviewer: sabrina michaels Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 2

They are mates...Alice and Edward have a ton to answer for...and God help Carlisle and Rose if they knew about it too.



Author's Response:

You do know that i wasnt trying with this to upset anyone. I am sorry if it is upsetting at all.

Reviewer: sabrina michaels Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Bella has a very valid point...Alice had to have seen Bella being cptured and tortured by Victoria...did she not say anything because Bella and Jasper were mates? This will be very good.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

don't worry it was great can't wait intil your heath gets better



Author's Response:

Thanks doll,

I honestly do worry at times about the endings i write. Hey, ithink i still have your address from when we used to have time to email. if i have, i will send something for you to peruse. Yes, i trust you will delete it once you have read it or you'll edit and send it back. lol. Either way, i wouldnt mind an opinion on these ones. one is a crossover with true blood and twilight. the other i am unable to remember. but it is A/H

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 12

Cute ending.  Glad Esme got her HEA too.

 

Ty for writing and sharing

ty



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support. I have many one shot ideas, which could work in to multi chapter, but i havent got it in me to do that, health wise. So i will be adding more one shots soon for all the readers who look in on my writing.

 

If you ever want a sneak peek in to the next one let me know.

;)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 11

WElcome back.   Glad she told him.  Glad he forgave her.  Cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hi sweets,

long time no hear. I did update one story last month, then a couple more this month. I got on fanfiction and updated the one i adopted, GODDESS BELLE.

But one person asked me to update on tht 'ASAFP' which actually confused me fr a second, then i realised what the 'f' stood for. lol! daughter saw this and she was not happy that someone told me to update soon when i just updated. i had to calm her down, and that isnt easy considering her youth, trength and size was against me. but i used smarts.

I told her she is hurting me by being mad at my readers. if i gove her a lolly pop will she be calm and go finish watching her move and he did.

 

this will be updated soo, but not too sure when.

love to all

wendy

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

i love that see watch true blood and got the idea from that show keep up the good work put one thing you never said about eddie and what happen to him?



Author's Response:

in the edited version which i was just putting up now my beta has worked her magic, it states briefly that he is dead. it is in Marcus's POV

Reviewer: Lady Skyelite Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 9

I was wondering when you were going to work on this again, my dear Wendy. This is definately one of the good ones! I love it when Bella and Jasper put the pretentious doctor and his golden bratlings in their proper places, under their feet!! I'm sorry I havent been reading too much here lately, but my eyes just started working really good again about mid-December, so Ive been doing a lot of catch-up reading. Keep up the great writing that you always do, and post up the new ones and the old ones too! Thank you, I'll be looking for the stories again, I promise! Lady Skyelite.

Author's Response:

It is a pleasure to write for me and have others enjoy what i write as well. Thank you.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2013 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great good story

Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 9

oh yes rose pist off bella watch out lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, *chuckles* i thought you might like that.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

Hope they find someone worthy for Em.  Rose is such a skanky biatch.   Awww for Marcus and Esme



Author's Response:

Don't worry, he will have someone i am sure

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

loved it!



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Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 6

loved it!



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thank you

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

loved it!



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Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

loved it!



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Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

loved it!



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thank you

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

loved it!



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thank you

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved it!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

Glad she got to kill victoria herself.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and i let her kill victoria as well.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 7

cant wait intill next ch. i like the way is going



Author's Response:

Thank you, i appreciate that you are enjoying the story so far. But i am taking a little time on the next chapter because i have always had trouble expressing emotions on paper, so to speak.

So i hope to have another chapter in a couple of weeks.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

MArvelous.  The detail and emotion here is wonderful.  I can't wait to see everyone's reaction to where Bella was reborn.  Seeing it firsthand should be mind numbing.  I imagine each of them reacting differently.



Author's Response:

it is going to be heartwrenching forBella as her empathic ability is going to pick up on not just her own and her mate's, but all the others as well.

 

I will do my best to get this right so each reaction is individual as it can be.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

Love Peter and Char in this



Author's Response:

I'm glad ya like them. I wanted to do different but not too different. so i hope it was alright. mind you Jasper will be put in hhis place one other time when he tries to prevent Peter from accepting the challenge from Bella.

Guess who takes it up for Bella

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 6

I think these "4" could be fascinating - Jasper/The Major and Bella/Isabel.  I'm looking fowArd to an update!



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed this chapter. Isabel will be challenging the major a time or two through the story. Not all is about hanky panky, but a good challenge made to the major can be rewarding in the end result. even if it didnt strt out as the hanky panky challenge. It is the major she is challenging, Jasper is a very sexual heightened vampire, more so than normal. Imagine what the major can be like. lol

 

BUT

Don't discount our lovely Isabel. she is bringing Bella in to her own self, and just needs Bella to see that.

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

Great story so far can't wait to see wat happens next update soon

Author's Response:

I will update soon.

Reviewer: IlOvE yOu JazZ x Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

please write some more soon

Becky xxx



Author's Response:

As soon as i can i will. But i am still trying to tie up another at the moment. and update others. I'm getting there though. as i have to also put up the one shots i used to have on fanfic. i took them down as that is what ff admin was doing to my fics. so i am putting everything up on here bit by bit.

 

Thanks for reading this

Reviewer: mickey777 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!!

Author's Response:

thankyou

will be updating when i can get a chapter written each time.

Reviewer: Lady Skyelite Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really am so glad that you are continuing this story here on TWCS, ai enjoy your work so very much. Are you intending to transfer ALL of your work here? I hope so, you left quite a few very interesting stories unfinished at fanfic, and I'd love to see them in full. You are the best! Lady Skyelite(Skye).

Author's Response:

Of course i am bringing them allover to here. Slowly but surely.

I won't add anything more to fanfic because of them taking down some of my stories. I have been deleting my fics from there bit by bit.

 

will eventually bring them all over and get them complete.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice start!



Author's Response:

thank you. will update slowly but surely, as i get a chapter written.

Reviewer: Hanastasio Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

Story is good...can't wait for updates.

Author's Response:

Thank you. Will update soon as i get a chapter written each time.

No definite time on when

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