[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2012 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
So far your story is great... but I think you should make your chapters a bit longer, even if the chapter is extended by a bit more it can make a lot of difference to peoples opinions as the extenion might make the chapter that bit more interesting.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 23
the evil one appears......
Date: 26 Sep 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 23
things are surely heating up now!
Date: 25 Sep 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 22
this is my first review and feel have to do this. have read most of your stories but am sad to say to say that am running out of great stories to read!! your work is beyond amazing please ever be discouraged to write! please continue making my day with each chapter and story!
Your work is unique in the best sense of the word and I cannot remember when last I read a story or found an author of such brilliance! All your stories have made me want more! I'm sad there aren't more like yours! Or authors who do not write crap!
I'm not just saying this to sound nice but its honestly how I feel!
Pleae keep writing and if you have any suggestions of other authors or stories that you have enjoyed. Please let me know I am a huge Dramione fan!
Your fan from the Southern tip of Africa!
(Cape Town South Africa)
Oh and I would love to read a follow up to Draco farting glitter as well as any other Enigma stories you may have! I love the darkness of those stories!
Date: 24 Sep 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 22
so excited for more!
Date: 24 Sep 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
love her power
Date: 24 Sep 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
so sweet again!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
interesting story line-glad to see A good Draco!
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
Forty chapters sounds like a good length for this story.
I hate Ron, I mean it's not her fault really.
Harry is nicer, he at least hangs around her sometimes.
Date: 20 Sep 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 21
I hope you're happy. My entire life is devoted to checking on this story every day to see if you updated it.
In other news..bravo! This is amazing!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
yes!!!! well done
Date: 16 Sep 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
I like it. I'm looking forward to Harry's and Ron's reaction. Good writing!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm loving the vamp Hermione and I think she will grow to as well. I'm really enjoying the continuation of your story and expanding the characters. It's hot. Thanks for writing.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
Im loving your story more than the first time! It's great. On the ending...more, more, more chapters. ;)
Date: 15 Sep 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
i cant wait to see what happend when she meets up with her friends!!!! i dont kno if i cant a blow up or understanding......maybe both????
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
glad things are working out!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
wow-did not see all of this coming-what a tangled web you weave!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am so looking forward to everyone's reactions?! I swear that is usually the best part!
Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
ahhhhhh the L word!
Date: 07 Sep 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love this chapter..Great smut..Please update soon..
Date: 05 Sep 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
Good chapter..opened an Acc here..Will took some time to understand the rules of TWCS..Please update soon..
Date: 04 Sep 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
kinda funny how draco knows her well enough to know how she'd want to be as a vamp.makes you wonder how long and how close he's been watching her....
sorry about the shit with ffn welcome to twcs!
Date: 04 Sep 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
This was really good!
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
i knew it! he had this planned out... maybe not this far this fast but it was there.
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
sure is a lot to think about in your last moments. i think this was drake's plan from the start...
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
i get the no choice and just going with it but why did he have to change her so quick?
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
he just wants love and companionship....
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
poor draco, growing up like that would surely fuck up your head...
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
well mione you are well and truely fucked. lol no getting out of it now...
Date: 02 Sep 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
you should watch what you say mione...
Date: 02 Sep 2012 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 9
he wants her for everything and to be his everything...
will he try to change her in the end?
Date: 02 Sep 2012 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
well the deed is done and she has learnt the joys of the flesh. drake seems very happy with the outcome of the deal and all it will mean...
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
the bond is forrmed and the deal is done... now to get to the meat of the issue..lol
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
good choice mione, and the terms are rather agreeable...lol
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
drake almost has her....
heehee love the fic idea...
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh drake i think you are talking her into it...
sounds fun to me... just saying
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
ignore the haters they don't like it they can hit the big red X in the top corner!
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
it's a good deal drake...
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh the trouble a simple saying like 'bite me' could get you in in this world....
Date: 01 Sep 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
lemme just say first that i LOVE your stories and i understand the turn on some ppl have with a strong male blah blah blah but is hermonie ever going to get the upper hand he had her fall into his web so quickly. so much for the smartest witch if she cannot have the upper hand and make her own choices with out being a slave to him.
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
Very well played. Love the bloody tears. :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
wow-he does love her, it will be okay!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
Sad and beautiful all in one.
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
whoa......interested to see where this goes.......
Date: 23 Aug 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
Interesting!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
30 chapters? Yes, please! I just love what your doing with this. So different from your other stuff; it has the same elements that you work with, but there's a different quality to it at the same time. I like the mind-reading thing. I wonder what will happen when that develops.
Date: 23 Aug 2012 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ooh, I liked this chapter. I liked what you did with Draco, especially the memory work.
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
there is our Draco!!!!!!!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh boohoo Draco had a horrible childhood. That still does not give him the right to do what he did to her. Now hermiones gonna feel bad for him and forgive him. -.-
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2012 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love the update!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Brilliant story!
Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hey ! I want more chapters! Please!
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
sorry-just not in to the glitter idea-so have not read that but looking forward to more of this and the next chapter of What a Malfoy wants-nice work!
Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
I want more! I love it!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm in love with this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love it! It is so fun to look forward tto a chapter every day, even though they are fairly short. And at least you do have something occur in each one, unlike some drabble that have such short chapters, some have nest to nothing happen. So I do not think it is to rushed. I am really enjoying your story-always loved Draco! (and in the real series, he was just to meek and mild at the end!)
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2012 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yup enjoying it...
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
How weird would it be to have cold jizz inside you?
Date: 18 Aug 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
yay!!!! jumps up and down
I cant wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2012 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
yes! Well done-love that this had so much to it-not just a wham bang! And thrilled their will be more to the story-you keep dropping hints of other questions that need to be answered!
Date: 17 Aug 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ah yes you're a terrible tease!
More please! maybe 2 chapters this time?
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
totally cool! Thanks for explaining. now you did still leave us hanging......get on to the good parts!!!!!!!!!! nice job.......
Date: 17 Aug 2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think how you've made additions that add to your story such as Hermione's vow on her honour of being a witch and the undead being able to disapparate inside Hogwarts' grounds.
Ah, how I love Dramione.
Date: 17 Aug 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
Your not being fair! Please dont leave me hanging like that!
Lol
Its totally awesome by the way!
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
yes! but do not leave us here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! such a tease..............
Date: 15 Aug 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Farts glitter?! Awesome!
Loving the story by the way!
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
how do you change into a vampire in your story-or how did Draco become one?
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
I really hope there are alot of chapter to this story I can't get enough!!
Oh and I hope Hermione asks for complete details of the arrangment too!
Bravo!! I love it!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
do not listen to people that review like that-I love your stories and all the DIFFERENT faces of Draco! Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2012 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
Require more than her blood......... Hummmmm
Date: 13 Aug 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
If someone can't stand by what they say by posting an anonymous comment then you shouldn't even listen to it. Coward's criticism.
And as creepy as your stories are, I like them. I would never want to be in the situation Hermione finds herself in but I can't help but find them fascinating. It's so weird. Like as humans, we really can't help but ogle at horrible things. Something that comes to mind at the moment is the public executions of medieval times. Not that that has anything to do with Hermione and Draco.
Can't wait for your next post. And I know it's drabblefic, but I always get to the end and I just want more!
Date: 12 Aug 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is a very interesting story so far! I can't wait for more :)
Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness!!!!
give me more Pleasee!!!!!!!
I loved it!