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Reviewer: Redgirl2018 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2017 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it 

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 37

nice.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 37

Finally, the good stuff. But not much of it!



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Thanks for reading! And well, it is a drabble which by definition means SHORT chapters... lol.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 36

Beach proposals. Nice.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 35

What with her obsession and all, does she realize what her, her husband's, and her boyfriend's names are?

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 34

They have to wade through a lot of sadness to get to the good part.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 33

She's finally getting the good stuff.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 32

It was not a sexual moment...and she smelled a little musky.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 31

Well now that's just ridiculous. If you have a gorgeous, huge, marble tub, just sitting there doing absolutely nothing to hurt anyone...YOU USE IT!

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 30

So do we know how she feels yet?

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 29

I'm with Edward...huh?

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 28

Guilt?

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 27

Was that the Wake or were they waiting for word of what happened to him?

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 26

Aha is right.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 25

Now she's gonna feel too guilty for any proposition.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 24

HOLY SHIT!

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 23

Wow, didn't see that coming. (No pun intended.)

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 22

I don't know about this. Why doesn't Bella divorce Carlisle no matter if she ends up with someone else or not?

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 21

I had one of those.... Once.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

The first step is the biggest. Of course they haven't REALLY taken the first step, have they?

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 19

Good to animals...aces!

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 18

*singing* They're gonna get caught.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 17

I wish I knew some more backstory on Carlisle.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 16

Short, but sweet introduction.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

His balls were ticked by her giggling? I've never heard that before. Great line.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 14

Is Carlisle the Evil Sorcerer?

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

OK the dogs didn't run into each other's arms; they just sniffed each other's butts. Still a little romantic.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 12

Will Leah and Sam run in slow motion into each other's arms?

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh, great plan! Might piss Carlisle off a little too.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh Edward, go buy a Rolex and simmer down a little.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 9

You know what they say about when you assume.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 8

Rats! I think you just missed her.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 7

I can't imagine where she's going.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

Edward and Bella have shared values; that's always a good start.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 5

Lonely, lonely, lonely. Poor Bella.

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 4

I wonder who his wife was? Tanya again?

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow, this is a "moment."

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

Didn't mind that hot coffee, did she?

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well of course I know who "her" is, but still, I'm looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 37

LOVED IT!!!!! THAT WAS PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 36

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! Boy when he goes for it he goes for it all!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 35

Loved that you names the puppies after the Twilight "Native Americans" lol!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 34

At least Edward has been through this before and can help her. What are people going to think with him being there with her??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 33

As if the water was not in hot enought all ready. That tub water may be boiling. lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 32

How sweet

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 31

Edward will take care of her

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 30

Poor Bella and Poor Edward. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 29

Poor Edward has no idead what he has just walked into. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh, she did not find out till Sunday night. So she has not buried him yet. Well, with a plane crash there may not be a body. Poor Bella.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 27

Oh no, Edward does not know about Carlisle. How horrible. What is going to be Bella reaction to seeing him after having probably burying her husband in the two days they did not see each other. WOW!!!!!!! Awful!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 26

What is Edward's job???? Oh wait, Bella's pool boy!!!! lol 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 25

O no, What in the world has Bella come up with????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 24

NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMGosh!!!!!!!! That is awful!!!!!!! Poor Carlisle!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMGosh, he is gay!!!! I never thought about that!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 22

Edward is sooooo sweet!!!!!!! I am sooo glad that I can go from chapter to chapter and do not have to wait for an update!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 21

OMGosh!!!!!!!! Bella surprised the hell out of me here!!!!! You go Bella!!!!! Make your move girl!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 20

OMGosh, I saw the picture first and got excited. Thought we had a lemon here!!! You are such a tease!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 19

Things are heating up!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 18

Bella is getting brave!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 17

What did Carlisle have to say about the dog???? I figured he would throw a fit. Wished I had about 20 bathing suits. lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

Let the good time begin and the hot ones. lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 15

LOVE IT!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 14

OMGosh!!!!!They are going to meet!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love the pictures!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 12

OH HOW SWEET!!!!!!!! Love it!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 11

Bella is one smart cookie. I would never have thought about that. lol. Love it. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love the picture. Poor Edward. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 9

Hope they meet again soon. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 8

I was wondering why he just did not go back to where he saw that morning on his run. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 7

Where is Bella going????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

So sad!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 5

Bella seems like she is very lonely.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, that was awful about Edward's wife. Hope he will get a second chance with Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 3

Glad I found your story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 2

VERY very interesting!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds interesting!!!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 37

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 36

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 35

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 34

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 33

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 32

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 31

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 30

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 29

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 28

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 27

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 26

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 25

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 24

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 23

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 22

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 21

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 20

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 19

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 18

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 17

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 15

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 14

loved it!

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