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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 36

did not like how you ended it

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Date: 17 Dec 2013 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 18

he shouldn't be using his school email

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 17

u and your beta are doing a great job

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 15

I hope this has prompted youto finish your other stories

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

instant attraction ie LUST

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 36

vampire couples

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 35

nice scene

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 34

foot in mouth moment

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 33

yay vamp edward

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 32

go bella

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 31

poor teased edward

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 30

an alice sleepover

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 29

naughty bella

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 28

sticky fun

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 27

ok mr.cullen

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 26

curious little student

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

ah jasper always wanted calm and alice was a spaz

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 24

phone manuals always suck

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 23

happy edward

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 22

wow free phone

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 21

teachers dont usually make housecalls.

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

ouch on the stitches

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 36

Awww, poor Charlie.  Not that Sue can replace Bella but at least he as someone to turn to.  Bella's so eager to start her new life, when you're in love it's like that though, everything is so exciting.

I've really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing it.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 35

I can't believe I nearly missed these last two chapters, I've no idea how they nearly got past me.  Well Bella's a virgin no more and about to start her new life with Edward, she's going to miss her dad.

Jane x

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 36

loved it can't wait for more.

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it 

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 34

loved it

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 33

Loved it

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 32

Dear gosh...loved it

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 31

loved it

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 29

Dear God, help me. LOL

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 28

love it

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 26

Edward sent the questionable photo first...her's was kind low key make you think. Then he goes and sends a little boarder shot. LOL :)

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 24

:) I wonder what kind of picture she sent???

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 17

How sweet?!

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 16

Goody!

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 7

Gosh, I hate that Charlie heard. :)

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh, an email....can't wait to see where this goes.

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 2

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Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looks like this might be a pretty good story, and where was Mr. Cullen when I had biology?! Oh, yeah he wasn't thought of yet. LOL.

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 36

Pleaaaaaaaaasssssssse do an epilouge.  Looove it .

Jukie

 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 36

aww will there be a epi??



Author's Response:

Yes in time there  will be thanks for reading

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 36

Thanks I love HEA's



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it !

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 35

That was hot

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 35

I love it!  Now will he change her in Alaska??

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 34

Oh my the end to the chapter was hilarious obviously Bella has a possesive streak and isn't afraid to let it be known.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 34

Lol loved it :)

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 34

Wow that was fast. And Bella cracks me up.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 34

That last line, so funny, pure Bella in all her eighteen year old awsomeness, lol.  I feel sorry for Charlie, Bella seems to have left him behind very easily.  I'm looking forward to the next update.

Jane x

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 34

wow go bella.fab chapter.update soon

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 34

time is near

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 33

ugh!!!! more plz!!!!

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 33

I never saw this coming nice twist by the way. I put you my fav's list.  Keep up the good work.

Love jukie

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 33

Well I didn't see that coming.  I thought Jasper was a bit odd and it was odd that Alice was ignoring it but I never expected this.  Bella's made her mind up very quickly.  What will they tell Charlie?

Jane x

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 33

Loved it :)

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 33

wow fab chapter thats a big step for bella.update soon

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 33

Very good

Reviewer: nix69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 33

Never saw that coming at all!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 33

Bon au moins c'est rapide ! J'aime cet Edward, il va faire ce qu'il faut et transformer Bella pour en faire sa compagne, j'adore.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 32

:)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 31

Edward a plein de projets.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 30

Bon chapitre !

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 33

moving right along lol

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 33

I love where this is going!  great chapter.. .wasn't expecting him to be a vampire though..

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 32

wow that was sooo hot!!!fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 31

aww hes such a romantic.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 30

i think edwards gonna combust lol.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 29

wow go bella love the confidence.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 28

wow!!go bella fab chapter so hot!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 27

wow that was hot!fab chapter.aww bless alice.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 26

wow what a hot pic.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

aww bless.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 24

i think he will love it.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 23

aww.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 22

hes so thoughtfull.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 21

aww hes so sweet.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 20

aww bless her glad she sok.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 19

aww poor bella edwards gonna be so worried.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 18

aww fab chapter wonder what hes bought her.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 17

aww bless him.fab chapter

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