excellent proposal;) but what happened about her birthday? i'm so loving this story ;D

Good lord, the sex between them is so hot! xo Kelly

I saw on FFNet that chapter 100 showed as complete and on TWCS the chapter itself showed fini but the story summary showed no for completed at the ch 100 stage, so was not entirely surprised to see 101 but thought it would be about a baby or something.

I assumed anyway, unless they are very unlucky, that Bella will become pregnant in the next couple of years. 

They had already started to settle down near the end which was good as they would have to tone it down once the children came but I think being parents will be their next big adventure and I think each stage of their lives together will be one adventure after another.

I don’t particularly want to hear about Renee, she’s served her purpose and is only a bit player in this story as Bella’s very much an adult.

I am glad Edward being gorgeous and smitten and sexy and the love of Bella’s life didn’t have to be rubbed in Jake’s face. Jake found out before Bella that they were not suited and would have had a mediocre life together at best.

Whatever life he has with his Brazilian person is beside the point.  Jake breaking up with Bella freed her to find an exceptional life partner and she will have an exceptional life with him, with no regrets.

Thank you again

Luv

XOXO

so happy for them... wished we would have read about them having babies and such... I enjoyed reading this story.. great job!

Sure sure Heidi’s bad but Emmett is far from innocent, so he decided to clean up his act for someone he couldn’t get otherwise, big deal.

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I think the proposal was gorgeous.

Bella did get her job offer a day early making it Thursday and now Thursdays just got better.

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Those two, I just hope they can always be on each other’s wave length but I supposed they are an ideal B&E.

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Bella’s quiet thoughts were not disapproval of Leah but she was self-conscious of intruding on a private matter between mother and daughter.  It goes to show that unless you are a mind reader you can misinterpret body language that’s why verbal communication is so important.

I always think that women in same sex relationships don’t really present a problem for parents wanting grandchildren as their daughters can get pregnant, it’s just the contributing male thing they have to think about and even if they were in a hetero relationship or marriage doesn’t mean it would last.

Anyway Bella and Edward look like the ideal lovey-dovey well mannered couple on the outside but are sizzling, I was going to say behind closed doors but the doors or windows are not always so closed, the scamps.

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Edward is supportive; he always has Bella’s best interests in mind.

I don’t supposed they saw each other that much at work as she was often away on her tours but now it will be school hours if she gets the job.

Of course with the way Edward is moving and given both their ages she might be pregnant in the not too distant future.

 Great story

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yes bella go rescue your man

Ah now it's on here too.  I haven't read this one to see if it's more raunchier, i don't suppose it could be, but it's all good clean fun.

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Edward sure learned a lot as a teenager but then again I supposed he’s watched his share of stuff and has a willing partner to try it all out, especially since they are so suited and can turn everything into a plus.

Even though they haven’t been together, together they have been quite smitten with each other for some time and have certainly gotten to know each other outside of the now intimate aspects of their relationship.  They may have appeared to have been just colleagues during that time but as Edward said, he hung on her every word.

Now we have to see how Charlie will view their relationship.  I think he is observant enough to see that Edward is very serious about Bella.  He approved of her relationship with Jake who strayed at the first opportunity, so this time he should be more observant.

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I wanted to comment on the last chapter by had already done the coffee cups.

Poor Edward he’s quite the exhibitionist but at the same time he’s also quite the prude.

Very funny chapter.

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Great story! I look forward to the updates, so keep going :)

That Lauren chick... what a bitch...

Good thing Jess isnt sure if she wants to be friends much longer wth her... I think her and Bella make better friends....

lmao the ending to this chapter was awesome lmao

I want to hear about Bellas life before she met Edward. :) xo Kelly

Oooh, what is this? I can't wait to find out more  about their histories. I just love these two! xo Kelly

That was an awesome chapter!  can't wait for more... I do love his parents...

great chapter

Boy look what he turned her into lol!!

*sighs* Oh you sexy couple...  ;) Kelly

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I wonder what was going on in Edward's life in Chicago. I'm very curious. I'll bet it was about a girlfriend or something. I hope it wasn't mentioned in an earlier chapter! I would feel so silly for forgetting! :) Kelly

I can't help but giggle at these two, they are so cute and sweet. :) Kelly

wow... he sure was about to jump off the deep edge of the cliff witht he bruise huh ... poor edward... its cute when he gets sappy...

aww he is just the sweetest thing!  Way to go with that explaination Bella!!

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Oh this should be hysterical!

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I want to live there! Preferably with my very own sweet Edward. :) Kelly

I bet you had so much fun writing these chapters! I'm totally in love with your story! It's wonderful to read a light, romantic, sweet and funny story. I sometimes get so burned out on angst, or heartfail, so I try not to read anything like that too much. I'd much rather smile, giggle, and swoon while reading a story! So thanks for writing! :) Kelly

*giggles* *grins* Kelly

Hmmm, I wonder what's up with Emmett and Rose. I love your description of the back of their home, it sounds beautiful. I can almost picture it. :) Kelly

I'm sorry I keep saying the same things, but your story is so much fun to read; it makes me giddy and happy! I love the anticipation of these two getting to know each other better on a personal level. I love your Edward and Bella. :) Kelly

*grins* I'm having fun reading your story, it's so cute! :) Kelly

Oh, they're so cute, acting as if they aren't attracted to each other. :) I love it! Kelly 

juat read all 64 chapters today..... great, great great!!!! i have to say hottest , realistic sexy times and seriously just not to get into TMI but i love it because its all stuff that i have experienced. its real and it written so well. the way you describe their sexy times is perfect. Love it :) I also love that Edward seemed kind of quiet and shy at first but now that him and bella are together he is a little freak.... i love that he is bold and takes charge without making bella feel uncomfortable and i love how he doesnt pressure her into doing things she might not be comfortable with. i can't wait to read more!!!! oooh i bet he is going to freak out about the bruises, isnt he!!! anyway, again great story and i am hooked!!

much love and luck always

b

very hott

Cute chapter, thanks for the double update! :)

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! Can't post tomorrow, so three updates today (just did another one) to make up for that.

OOOHYEAH WOOTT WOOTT

More Sexy Seattle Adventures please :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm caught up now, so it'll be about one a day. Hope you stay with me for the ride! :)

Ahhh....Bella thinks too much

Wow its hot here.... :)

LMAO!

Sex Olympics is right!

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Sexy!!!

Hope the phone call wasn't to say they came home early, lol!