Date: 26 Dec 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
love it! so sweet, but has me thinking what all of this could mean!
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm so glad Jasper is beginning to come around.....fighting his way back to them.
Date: 15 Dec 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
love your story-so different from anything else I have read.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope Jasper is okay.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
I do love a good prophesy! Nice work!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
Happy mom and Leah are supportive. Argh, no guesses. Wonder who it is.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
Nice talk with Rose
Date: 27 Nov 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
more more more please!!! thanks for writing.
Date: 26 Nov 2012 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bravo Rose! And Alice...without visions but still with "vision". Jasper is so solid in this story. He truly can make the differance in how Seth overcomes this. Nice!
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Hello there :) Your review made me smile soooo big :D Thanks for being awesome.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
I have just started reading and I am just confused. Where are the rest of the Cullens? why we don't see or hear of them, Esme apart? If Alice exists in this story, how cannot she have interaction with Jasper, who evidently ignores her.How is this possible?
And time wise, when is the story happening? Before or after the newborn army?
Date: 23 Oct 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad they got the bad "Paul".
Date: 23 Oct 2012 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Jasper in this fiction is marvelous. He is a man who knows what it's like to be hurt badly and won't let that happen to a friend. That many copies still has me scratching my head though! A have to say this one has my curiousity and fascinations peaked! Nicely done.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
wow-this is a crazy story!
Date: 22 Oct 2012 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
:)... I like it a lot... Please keep posting...
Date: 08 Oct 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
Happy Seth has everyone's support.
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Excellent mystery you've given us! Could Paul, without knowing, be a twin? It would explain the similar looks, different personalities, and violence. Loved it!
Date: 01 Oct 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thank heaven Seth finally got that off his chest! And bravo Jasper for coming through big time since all this started. Sam and Jacob's reactions should be interesting. Seth should talk to Rosalie. Nice work here!
Date: 24 Sep 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
Enjoying them having a little banter and glad Seth decided to stay.
Date: 22 Sep 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
love Seth love Jasper- am really enjoying your story!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
interested in where this is going????????
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:59 AM Title: Help
interesting pairing-2 of my favorites-Seth and Jasper!
Date: 06 Sep 2012 6:24 PM Title: Help
I'm intrigued. Please continue!