[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
J'ai hâte que vous ayez du temps pour continuer cette histoire plus régulièrement, je l'adore!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
wow!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
adorable Bella!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
wow!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Google Translate. French.
Wow!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
good story I hop you keep it going
Date: 14 Dec 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
love love love that you are continuing this fic, awesome story.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
So freaking hot! This is such a long foreplay!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
I'm so happy this yummy story is back!! And with a steamy fun chapter too!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
Thank you so much for updating this! I love all of your stories but this is my absolute favorite one! Thank you, thank you, thank you! This chapter was amazing and I look forward to reading more!
Thanks - TSW
Date: 13 Dec 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
Yummy yummy...I can't wait either!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
Love it please hurry with next chapter. He's back!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
Yay!!!! Im so excited there is more. Laughs. This has taken top spot in my fave fanfics. I never thought that would happen. Yay yay yay!!!! Giggles. Thanks for continuing to write!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
He wants to pave the way leaving her feeling and study more about what are all the toys before getting in her life?
A year without being able to communicate with it ......
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
Increasingly interested in history.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
Wow I love your story.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
That was a very Hot chapter. Loved it can't wait for more.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
so like your story, I am hooked hope you update soon
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
Wow- talk about building anticipation! Can't wait for your next chapter.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
Yaaaay! I loved this story. I was beyond surprised to find an email about it. OMG. So fucking good! The only thing that was weird for me was the way Bella talks sometimes. It's too wordy and smart, like how she "yearns" for Edward. It just didn't fit for me.
I await the next installment eagerly :)
P.S. I just had phone sex with my boyfriend too. It felt so weird to read a scene of it 10 minutes afterwards.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
this story is so HOT HOT HOT!!!
can't wait to read more.....when do you usually update?
Date: 13 Dec 2012 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
Oh parting is such sweet sorrow......can't wait for next year....lol
Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
That chapter was HOT HOT HOT!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
Yay!!! I'm so glad you updated. This chapter certainly did not disappoint. I like the way you are building the relationship between Mase and Bella. Cannot wait for your next chapter!!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
Oh he seems like a nice guy Mase....love Emmett
Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Hahahaah.....do you study flash floods in women...LMFAO!!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
omg!!!! That was so fucking hot!!! Their conversation or phone sex, whatever you call it, was so hot!!!! Bella is a lucky bitch!!! I loved that they foubd each other through facebook and that Em had uploaded all this photos of her!! That was how she found out Edward too!!!! Can't wait to see them together again! Edward won't be able to kip himself in check this time and I don't think that either of them want him to... lol!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
:)
Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
can't wait :)
Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
oooh its going to be explosive when they acutally get together in person after that yummy phone sex time. Cant wait!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
I LOVE this story please write faster and update sooner. Keep up the good work
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
Thank the lord you updated! Are you a mind reader or part volcan?? I was seriously just thinking about how this story hadnt updated in a while yesterday :)) Gahhh love Mase
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
yes!!!! its updated!!!! i seriously couldnt wait for this and now that it has i am soo happy. i love pervward soo much. le sigh...cant wait till they meet up again...i hope you updatethe next chapter soon :) but if you dont its ok...i will read and re read until the next chapter :) but i did catch on to something... when she said that he couldnt stress enough how close they were( him,em and rose) and she said that she felt like she was missing somthing...umm are they close in the sense that they have threesomes....i kind of hope not but it is your story to tell and i will love it regardless.
much love always
-B
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
So. Fucking. Cute!!!
update soon!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
More! More! More please more!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
Your back!!! So glad to see this update...can't wait for the next one...
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
Hello there! Imagine my surprise when I opened my inbox this evening to find a new chapter for this story, one that I have been pining over for months now. I understand that as a writer you have to go where the Muse takes you, but I had almost given up on this one. I see you've found a direction in which to take this sexy little story and couldn't be happier. I get wet listening to Mase's phone sex with Bella, I can just imagine what it does to her. I sincerely hope you continue to write new chapters for this story, daresay I that maybe you'll finish it one day? This reader can only hope....
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
Yay! I was just thinking the other day that even though I love all of your stories, that I was jonesing for a Mase fix! Please say there will be another update soon?!? I might just combust if they don't get together!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
totally miss this story...hope for more soon.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
Aww how sweet! I love these guys. I don't see the common bruding Ed. I'm so over it.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Yay! You made my night. Can't wait until the convention!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Ha! Funny
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
I like this story, i really hope you update soon.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
I just re read this story. Please continue it, I love it.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
Please Please Please tell me that you are going to continue this story. I beg of you because it is really good. I wanna see what happens next year.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
This is a great story. I can't wait to read the next update I hope it's soon thank you for sharing
Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
Wow those two are HAWT and got it bad
Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
hawt Dayum. Why cant that happen to me????
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
Those two boys are trouble incarninate I can tell. Love it though.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
lol for shy Bella and super Flirty Mase
Date: 21 Nov 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
Yo cat loved this fic update son yeee heeeeaaaarrrrr meeeh lol c
Date: 31 Oct 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
Great story! When will you post Year 2? Will it be BPOV or EPOV?
Date: 30 Oct 2012 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
CAnt wait for an update!!! Love the story!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
I am loving the story can't wait for an update!
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Just wondering if you were going to continue this story because this story is HOT!!! Please update soon!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
:'( Well kinda sucks BUT I do love this story. Hope we get to see next year :D
Date: 23 Oct 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
LOL Bella XD and Mase does sound flood worthy :P
Date: 18 Oct 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
oh sooo good i hope there is more i love mase.....
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Please please please write more! Can't wait to read on about these two. It completely drew me in...and I'm aching for more! I loved it!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
Awww can't wait to read more
Hope you up date soon
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
OMG thats it? There was no lemon. :'(
Are you continuing this story?
It would be a shame if you didn't continue this it was hot damn great.
Author's Response:
lol! this was only the end of year 1. There are 3 years in total. ;)
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
Wow I think I need to change my panties.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
OMG Again LOL That would totally be me. Fumbling all over myself. But I could totally see myself going bat shit crazy for a guy with tatoos.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
O.M.G. This is SOOOOOOO good. I cant believe I just found it. I wanted to let you know that whoever did your banner misspelled your name on it. At least I think they did unless you have multiple spellings out there.
I cant wait to read the next chapter. I hope this is not going to be a short story.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Update pretty pretty please?
Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
What?! They can't not see each other for a whole year!!!!!!!!
Date: 26 Sep 2012 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
love it
Date: 24 Sep 2012 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
AMAZING!!!! :)
Date: 23 Sep 2012 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
More,more,more....Please!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
no, seriously? no. a whole year? no. really? a whole year? come on. that's just wrong!
Date: 18 Sep 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
this poor girl! lol
Date: 18 Sep 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
the creepy guy sounds, well, creepy
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
toy study??? okay
Date: 18 Sep 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
Loved it :)
Date: 18 Sep 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
Loved it :)
Date: 18 Sep 2012 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
Loved it :)
Date: 18 Sep 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Loved it :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2012 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
Awwh! No!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
That is so sweet, packing up her lunch for her.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
I read this yesterday on ff.net and now again here. I wonder now about the bag. An easy answer is to say there is a toy inside, but I wonder if Mase didn't also leave a note or his number or something as well. At the very least, Bella is a smart chicky and can easily look up the contact info for the company and get in touch with him that way. I like the idea of Bella pushing her limits a little before she sees him next. It bothers her how often people are telling her that she's innocent, so maybe she needs to pull a Sandi from Grease and knock him on his ass when he comes back next year. Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
Love this story. Please tell me they will be seeing each other sooner than later!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
A..duh.. Wait? Is it over?! Oh come on! It can't be over already?.. Wait, maybe it's one of those slow burn, deflower Bella until she is just right story.. Yeah that's it..* looks at you out the corner of her eye for confirmtion*... Pls continue!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
I know I reviewed this chapter in FFN but I read it again here as I enjoy reading here much more....Is this the end? I hope not....this is a great little story, right up my alley!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
Wow! He stays away for a year? No way!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
But....but....but... Sniffles....this sounds like the end. Nonononononooooooooo. Can't breathe. Plezzzzzzzzzz no.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Please don't make them wait a year to see each other! What is E thinking to leave like that?
Date: 16 Sep 2012 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
:O
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
Just so you know who this is.. I sent you that message on fanfiction :)
And well again... you have blown my mind although I wish this chapter went on forever and ever!!! If I could I would ofrce updates out of you cause I love you stories and the development of the characters in this particulat piece. Hope to read another chapter again soon!!!
Emily :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
Poor Bella. Is she really going to have to wait a whole YEAR to see Mase again?
Date: 16 Sep 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
you ae going to continue this right? :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
really.....nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Date: 16 Sep 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
:)
Date: 12 Sep 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
Loved it!!
Date: 11 Sep 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
heeheehee... cocknip!
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
LoL I love how Mase is so forward with Bella, its hot. Definitely swoon-worthy. I so need a Mase in my life.
That whole pierced nipple molestation bit was super hot, those two are going to spontanoeously combuse when they finally hookd up.
Mase's t-shirt & "is that a bracelet" = LMAO! Bella's naivete is too funny.
More soon please!
Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
I'm totally addicted to this story already, can't wait for another update!
Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
yummy chapter!