Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Honey if I were worth a shit in editing, I would try. You already know that at only 3 chp, this is my fav of yours. Mase's words K.I.L.L. M.E.
Date: 10 Sep 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
Oh Cat, now that you are posting at TWCS, you must post all the visuals to this story we post on FB. You can insert pics anywhere.
SQUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Author's Response:
lol!! I keep forgetting to add the pics!!! guess there will be a pic overload in the next chapter. I still don't have a banner though!! :(
Date: 10 Sep 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
MASE IS THE DEATH OF ME....oh...and YOU !!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
Keep going
Date: 10 Sep 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
Ok - so I am totally addicted to this story! Love it!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
They are so frakking adorable and sexy together. Sigh. I love it.
I'm really enjoying your writing very much. Your characters are engaging and the storyline is sweet and interesting.
I've attended many of these product conventions and it's exactly the way you describe it. VERY few inhibitions and just outright hedonistic joy. Not much debauchery but lots of sensualistic sybarites...with toys!
Keep up the great work. I look forward to your updates! ~RoseE. xx
Date: 10 Sep 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
Awesome story..now does the new chapter start?? lol see you next time!!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
Oh God I forgot just how good this is....I read 3 chapters you posted on FFN months ago. I am so happy that you seem to be continuing this story and that it is here on TWCS. I am now caught up to where I read before and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.....Love the nipple ring interaction between Bella and Mase....so so sexy....
Date: 10 Sep 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
Please tell me there is another chapter ready. I need Mase and Bella to get together soon. My panties can't handle the ust.
Author's Response:
*insert evil laughter* hehehehehe
Date: 10 Sep 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
Idk if its Mae or You but I'M an intellible puddle of goo!!! GAHHHHHHHHH
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
I am so looking forward to reading more of this. i love the discription of Mas'es tattoo. I wish there was an image of it to see. I wonder what the drunkin one was and why it would scare her off. i love that he called her his pet. LOL I also love the mystery behind him, I'm hoping we find more out. His shirts are cool and funny too.
I hope you decide to update this story.
~Jennifer
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
I'm hooked. More soon please!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Omg, really?!! After I submitted my review I thought, "maybe I shouldn't have sent that, cause everyone else might have already done so..." Lolz
I'm available if you want a prereader...;)
Date: 08 Sep 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
:)
Date: 08 Sep 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
Convenioneers? Typo or did u change the name.... Either way, will it be finished or still WIP? I really like it and hope it completes.
Author's Response:
-_- OMG HOW ARE YOU THE FIRST TO NOTICE I SPELLED IT WRONG?!?!?!
LMAO!!!! *goes to change* See, lesson in typing too fast!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
Great chapter. Mase is very sweet! Can't wait to see what kind of products they sell.
Date: 08 Sep 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
I'm so glad you are posting this story here. I read the 3 chapters you posted on another site but was disappointed to see the postings stopped there. I hope you continue the story here! This had promise, I believe, and I'm going to read it all....
Date: 08 Sep 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
Ooh! If you're posting this here does it mean you are going to finish it? I've had it on alert on ff.net for a while and I'm excited to see it here! Yay! This Edward makes me hot and I can't wait for more!!!
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
:)
Date: 07 Sep 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
I'm interested - so far I love it!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Great start, sensational hehe, already put in well-deserved favorite.
Date: 07 Sep 2012 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
So funny. Love how campy it is.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Looks like the beginning of a great relationship. Shall we continue.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Hahaha! I love it! Going to be a good one :)
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
I love this story! I was always disappointed you never took it further on FF
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
Oh my this is getting interesting quickly.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
I <3 it already this Bella seems super snarky I love it!!
Date: 05 Sep 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
lmao!!
Date: 05 Sep 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
It's good to see you here! I read the first 3 chapters on FFN and then there was no more.....I was intrigued by where this story could go and hope you continue it beyond those first 3 chapters here. I, for one, am reading it and eager for more. Thanks!