Date: 19 Sep 2014 6:52 PM Title: Last Fling Before the Ring
Well, that was one fun party. Lol ;)
Date: 19 Sep 2014 2:35 PM Title: Last Fling Before the Ring
Smoking hot!
Date: 17 Sep 2014 2:34 AM Title: Last Fling Before the Ring
I about peed myself when I saw this update! So glad to see it, and read it. These two just couldn't hold out the whole three weeks. Though most of us saw this coming. Hehe I'm so sad that this is almost over.
~Z~
Date: 16 Sep 2014 8:33 PM Title: Last Fling Before the Ring
Wonderful chapter. Glad they had a fun party. Alice needs to learn to take others wshes into consideration. The joint party was a good idea.
Date: 16 Sep 2014 3:26 PM Title: Last Fling Before the Ring
Oh yes indeed they need to make up on sexy times. Loved the gifts. Paul is amazing. Alice is in need of help.
Date: 16 Sep 2014 1:55 PM Title: Last Fling Before the Ring
I LOVE THIS!!!! :)=)
Date: 16 Sep 2014 11:27 AM Title: Last Fling Before the Ring
:)
Date: 14 Sep 2014 9:41 PM Title: Questions and Answers
OMG!!! Can't get enough!!!!! Loved the chapter!! Looking forward too the next!
Date: 09 Sep 2014 6:00 AM Title: Questions and Answers
I finally caught up, and why I waited so long I will never know. It was good though, I can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 07 Sep 2014 11:38 AM Title: Questions and Answers
Wow what a chapter, write more soon
Date: 06 Sep 2014 7:58 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Oh my it was bond to happen
Date: 06 Sep 2014 1:40 AM Title: Questions and Answers
I feel incomplete
Date: 04 Sep 2014 10:42 PM Title: Questions and Answers
can´t wait for the next chapter!
Date: 03 Sep 2014 7:29 PM Title: Closing One Chapter...
Wait they were supposed to join the mile high club!
Date: 01 Sep 2014 8:16 PM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
Loved it! They are really cute together!
Date: 29 Aug 2014 3:07 AM Title: Questions and Answers
OMG! You will update soon, right!? ;o)
Great story! Love it!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 6:07 PM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!
I was just wondering if you forgot about the bet the Edward made to Bella, he bet her that Becca and Dr McCutie would be married by valentines day, that obviously didn't happen. So Bella needs to claim her prize, was it she could have her fantasy weekend doing whatever she wanted to Edward, is that going to happen? I would look forward to reading about that. :-) (Lemons galore)!!!!
Author's Response:
I haven't forgotten...it's going to be brought up during the wedding chapter (which is coming up next) and she will collect on her bet as an outtake?
Date: 14 Aug 2014 8:12 PM Title: Questions and Answers
Yeah! It is a good thing that Jasper is a patient man.
Date: 14 Aug 2014 7:28 PM Title: Some Day my Prince will Come...in a White Lab Coat?
OMG I just remembered that Jimmy kept calling Edward Eddie, being an ass about it. He knew who Edward was all along. Alice had to have told hime about her brother and showed him pictures of her family. OOOOOOOO this is getting good. I think Becca and the doc will get hitched asap!
Date: 14 Aug 2014 1:58 PM Title: Newsroom Awards
Great chapter. I wish all men were like Edward. He is a gem.
Date: 08 Aug 2014 3:59 AM Title: Questions and Answers
When men feel angry it all goes outward, whereas women tend to internalize things. That's why almost all these mass shootings are done by men. At least Alice had someone to help her, which is more than she did for her brother. Hopefully she and jasper can works things out.
It sounds like the Rhiannon episode had one good outcome in that it was a catalyst for Bella and Edward to work through stuff, which is best done before the wedding. Now they can concentrate on having a good time and celebrating their big day.
Date: 08 Aug 2014 2:59 AM Title: Questions and Answers
Loved it.... OMg she kidnapped a baby to get back at Edward... That is just so wrong. She needs the Feds knocking on her door. Can't wait for more.
Date: 08 Aug 2014 2:57 AM Title: Questions and Answers
That nice little morsel about a baby was a nice little bit of drama, especially since you will be ending the story soon. It has taken awhile to read each chapter I have enjoyed every word. Update soon take care.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 10:26 PM Title: Questions and Answers
I liked this chapter. I liked what Carlisle found and loved the talk between Alice and Edward... Can't wait for more!
Date: 07 Aug 2014 9:34 PM Title: Questions and Answers
Loved it! I really though Lauren was going to show up with some incuranle disease and apologize for being a slut, hahahahaha!
I hate that Alice didn't deal with her pain about James better; but, it was a realistic part of the plot, which I love.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 1:53 PM Title: Questions and Answers
WOW! This is fantastic!! So happy with the DNA results! Phew! :)=)
Everything else is going to work out. I just know it. I have faith in your writing. ;)
Date: 07 Aug 2014 1:50 PM Title: Questions and Answers
Glad that alice is getting help.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 6:47 AM Title: Questions and Answers
Whew!!! I'm SO glad that the baby wasn't his! :) But I'm so sad for whoever the parents of that baby is. I hope they get him back soon & that nut case Rihannon goes to prison!
That being said, I'm REALLY disappointed at Bella's behavior - running off without standing beside Edward, or even giving him the benefit of the doubt. Is this the type of wife she's gonna be - flighty & selfish, running at the first sign of any trouble or problem? I'm not saying that I don't understand her being hurt because I do! I'm just saying that she completely handled the whole situation wrong. :(
I also disagree with Emmett & Jasper keeping Edward from going to Bella. I think they should mind their business from now on.
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 07 Aug 2014 5:45 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
I HOPE for everyone's sake that it's NOT Edward's baby. If it is, I think it will just ruin everything that he & Bella has built...& right before their wedding no less! This would definitely NOT be a good way to start a marriage out. Bella certainly WOULDN'T be in a baby making mood with Edward anymore, & possibly not in the marrying mood anymore either, not that I could blame her. It will also sour his family's opinion of him again, as well. Everything he's worked so hard to fix will be ruined. This just has disaster written all over it. :(
I do have to wonder WHY this woman hasn't come forward before now? Why would she wait all of this time, go through a pregnancy alone, cover all of the expenses herself, so far, & then ironically come forward right before Edward's upcoming wedding? It sounds very fishy, like she's only wanting to cause trouble or wanting money.
Besides, I thought Edward said that he always wore a condom with everyone from his past. If this is true, then unless one broke while he was with her, the child being his is pretty impossible. And I'm sure Edward would've known if it had broken, wouldn't he?
Does the baby even resemble Edward in any way? There are just too many holes in this woman's claim. Do the dates even match up between the time that he was last with Rhiannon with the age of the baby? Before anyone gets worked up, I hope they think of these things.
If Rhiannon really wants to push things, I'd call her bluff & demand a paternity test before anything further was discussed & promptly see that she was escorted off of the island. I'd also tell her before she left to only contact me through an attorney from now on.
I'd just hope & pray that by some small chance that it isn't his because like I said, I think this will really change things between E&B - impact them & their relationship in a VERY negative way, whether they can help it or not.
Bella has got "baby fever" bad & is wanting to have a child of her own with Edward, NOT take on or have to worry about some illegitimate kid from his long line of former flings, for the next 18 years, at least. Bella wants to be able to give Edward his first & only child, not some woman who meant nothing to Edward.
No matter how much you love someone or how understanding you might be, this would definitely be a difficult obstacle to overcome, even for Bella...especially for Bella. It would always be a point of contention between them & something that would get thrown up during every arguement, no matter if the fight was over the child or not. I mean, Edward thought his old villa was "tainted" & didn't want to live in it with Bella, if it was still around, so how do you think either of them will feel about this?! This is WAY more serious of a reminder than some bachelor pad!
If this turns out to be Edward's kid, he will probably withdraw & beat himself up with guilt & remorse & push an already angry & hurt Bella further away.
I just don't see this as being a winning situation, no matter what. So PLEASE don't let this be Edward's kid. The whole situation is already going to cause enough trouble as it is, as well as put a real damper on the wedding & everyone's wedding spirit. :(
I hope it all works out. Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 07 Aug 2014 5:22 AM Title: Questions and Answers
Thank goodness that Edward's not the father and that he and Bella have been able to talk and work things out.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 5:11 AM Title: Questions and Answers
Oh of course after Alice gets professional help jasper will be there for her. I knew the baby was not his. She is a crazy loon.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 5:04 AM Title: Questions and Answers
Well glad that that baby thing is over, man.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 4:41 AM Title: Questions and Answers
Oh wow to think she kidnapped somebody's kid in the process. Scary.
ALice def needs help. Glad Carlisle was in his corner
Date: 05 Aug 2014 7:56 PM Title: Confrontations
I just love when Charlie is like this. lol I forgot all about Becca. Lordy I hope that girl is alright.
Date: 05 Aug 2014 3:00 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Well I am thinking that Edward would have kept it wrapped up during his whoring days.... But one never knows. Loved it.
Date: 04 Aug 2014 9:37 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Didn't see that coming believe it or not. I don't think the baby should be Edward's. Rhiannon is a witch and bitter because her hubby found out about her many affairs and divorced her. So now she's using the baby, product of another affair, but she can't remember who, to try to get Edward's money in revenge. Great chapter though!!
Date: 04 Aug 2014 7:17 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Oh shit is it even his she was a hoe so there's no telling
Date: 04 Aug 2014 1:46 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Bella should say, " if the baby is proven to be Edward's the child will be part of our family," she should stand by her man, mostly remember that Edward always used a condom maybe two.
Date: 03 Aug 2014 8:25 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Dude the baby better not be Edward's or all hell will break lose!!! Hopefully this bitch is lying to get k oney or s ok mething because of the video game success and everything! !!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 3:36 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
There is no way that is his baby! He always wrapped up! Rhiannon is just trying to get paid!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 3:17 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
OMFNG!!I figured something like this was going to happen! I pray to all that is right in the world that the baby isn't his!!! :( I am hoping she is just looking for a free ride...money. I am talking about the money! :P I am dying for more!!! :)=)
Date: 03 Aug 2014 11:02 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Hmm... Interesting ending. Can't wait for more!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 9:22 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
While I do love babies, I hope the baby isn't Edwards. Edward might have slept around, but I remember him always being safe. Besides, Bella deserves a perfect wedding and the happily ever after and baby mama drama just won't do. But if the kid's his, I hope everyone does what's best for the baby.
Date: 03 Aug 2014 6:01 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
It is possible that it is Edwards son but it's also possible she is trying to make drama for him. There are still people out there who would love to mess up their life and I wouldn't put it past them to try something like this. The first thing I would demand is a DNA test. And it's not like he forced her to sleep with him. Here is where Bella has to stay strong.
Date: 03 Aug 2014 4:40 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
I don't think that baby is Edward's. If she was pregnant and had an inkliing that the baby was his why didn't she contact him before then? Why wait til the baby was 3 months old. Besides, if the baby is already 3 months old then that means she was already pregnant when she hooked up with him. Right?!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 3:34 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Damn...i really hope the baby isn't edwards otherwise I have to stop reading the story...smh! But it's your story and yours alone, so do what you want.
Date: 03 Aug 2014 2:49 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Whooooo. ... what a great cliffie! So jerry springer
Date: 03 Aug 2014 2:40 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
I hope the baby isn't his. That woman has no one to blame but herself for her marriage ending. If I remember correctly isn't she the one that kept coming on to Edward. I this means that Alice was right about her feeling of something bad was going to happen.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 11:04 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
As much as I love babies, I really hope this one isn't Edwards! Bella deserves the happiness of bringing his first child into the world!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2014 10:12 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Oh jebus that a cliffy and a half! I'm hoping its not Edwards baby! Had a look back at earlier chapters and Rhiannon said her marraige was one of convinence so maybe she stepped out more than that time with Edward and decided Edward had the fancier lifestyle and money.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 9:35 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
it's mean to leave us not knowing :( great chapter
Date: 02 Aug 2014 8:02 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
No he can't have a baby. She was a slut it could be any body's. Love the house christening and the birthday blow job. The bridal shower with her mom and friends was awesome. Alice was right the past was going to bite him on his ass.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 6:38 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Hmmm Alice does sounds like she needs some help. Hmmm no way that Rhiannon's kid is his. You've pretty much said before while he was a mlut, he was a safe sex mlut.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 3:57 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
no this can't be happening!! this is not edwards biological child!! or at least i hope not. they do no deserve this now that they have everything coming together! please let this pass without them doubting one another!!! did i mention i love a strong bella and edward
Date: 02 Aug 2014 3:30 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
It was bound to happen. He was premiscuous and condoms are not 100%. There is a real chance it is his. The timing would have been about a year ago, so it is possibly but by my calculations a bit improbable. Edward and Bella are getting married at their 1 year anniversary, right? That would mean she would have been one of his last conquests.
~Z~
Date: 02 Aug 2014 2:38 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Oh snap, oh no, knew something was coming but wow, post soon.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 1:17 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
oh dear!!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:49 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
You are evil!! I really hope it's not his baby. Yes he treated women horribly but I like to think he was careful and the only he will be having are with Bella.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:38 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Please do not make that baby Edwards!!!! Of course this bitch is going - to blame Edward for ruining her life, when all she had to say was NO! Sick and tired of hearing excuses from people who cheat - I was drunk - I felt presured - I just wanted to feel loved - this all equals - BULLSHIT! If you are married and you are sleep with anyone else it is called CHEATING!
Josie, please do not make that baby Edwards - I am begging you!!! I know condoms fail but I remember Edward talking about how he always wrapped it up!!! Also, Bella should not be angry at Edward - this shit with this girl was before his relationship with Bella!
Please don't make us wait to long for the next chapter!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:01 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Well I was surprised he's dodged the baby bullet for so long but please please please don't let that be Edwards baby
Date: 02 Aug 2014 11:03 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
No way is the baby Edwards.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 6:50 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Of course this would happen. Are you ready to rumble !!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Jul 2014 5:28 AM Title: Closing One Chapter...
thought charlie and renee would move to the island too
Date: 27 Jul 2014 4:18 AM Title: Closing One Chapter...
Wonderful long chapter, Edward and Bella are a lovely couple. She did get drunk several times, I guess it's party time. Hot sex in her office, gave even me ideals
Date: 26 Jul 2014 1:58 AM Title: Closing One Chapter...
Totally awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.... of their lives, and this story.... they do go hand in hand.
Date: 25 Jul 2014 8:32 PM Title: Closing One Chapter...
Wonderful chapter
Date: 25 Jul 2014 1:55 AM Title: Closing One Chapter...
Lol. Love it
Date: 25 Jul 2014 1:42 AM Title: Closing One Chapter...
I can imagine moving that far from home is tough but love inspires great courage. It reminds me a little of the story of Steve and Terri Irwin (minus the crocs of course). I look forward to hearing about the wedding.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 6:00 PM Title: Trouble in Paradis
I think Huilen is stealing her butt off. Why sin't security looking for her butt to keep her off the property?
Date: 24 Jul 2014 5:25 PM Title: Closing One Chapter...
Wonderful chapter. Goodbyes are hard but well worth it sometimes. Go Charlie on his new job.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 2:19 PM Title: Closing One Chapter...
cue awwwww
Date: 24 Jul 2014 8:13 AM Title: Closing One Chapter...
Oh, no, not close to the end. I love this story.
thank you.
Date: 23 Jul 2014 4:04 PM Title: Stormy Weather
nooooooo be good Eddie. I like the convos and all the sharing time. Keep your panties on Bella!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 8:36 PM Title: Newsroom Awards
my hubby needs a prescription of what ever edward is on lol
well done great chapter
Date: 22 Jul 2014 7:42 PM Title: Flipping Out
Sorry, but I totally laughed at Bella falling. I've fallen like that and giggled until I tried to get up and fall again. No bueno. But still funny.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 7:09 PM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
I think that Bella will be all about being sexed up and that will be all good for Edward in the beginning but he will fall for Bella and lie about his feelings to himself and to her.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 6:23 PM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Oh mu goodess. Thi sstory is so facd paced! *checking on tickets to Brazin* I need a vaca.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 8:34 AM Title: Newsroom Awards
Whew! Damn girl I need a cigarette after that one!! :)
Date: 12 Jul 2014 8:15 PM Title: Newsroom Awards
WILL THERE BE A SEQUEL OF THERE NEW LIFE ON THE ISLAND???????
Author's Response:
I don't think so...
Date: 12 Jul 2014 7:06 PM Title: Newsroom Awards
Ohh la la this was one hot awesome chapter. This couple spells love in capital letters. Truefully I'm not looking forward to a ending, I love the way you have written this story yep, more power to ya.
Date: 12 Jul 2014 6:03 AM Title: Newsroom Awards
sad this story is almost finished.
thank you for writing.
Date: 11 Jul 2014 11:31 AM Title: Newsroom Awards
I'm glad that Edward was able too be there for Bella and her big night. :)
Date: 11 Jul 2014 6:58 AM Title: Newsroom Awards
While I am glad that Edward was able to surprise Bella, I did feel that she was acting a little childish when she thought he was not coming. I understand it's hard being separated but it's not like he was just up the road. But they had a really hot reunion to make up for all the drama lately.
Date: 11 Jul 2014 5:06 AM Title: Newsroom Awards
I knew he would come back he is too perfect not to be there for her. Rose had a little girl how cute. Edward is already wrapped around that little finger. Wonderful reunion.
Date: 10 Jul 2014 11:27 PM Title: Newsroom Awards
WOW! I love it!! I knew Edward wouldn't let her down!!! :)=)
Date: 10 Jul 2014 8:52 PM Title: Some Day my Prince will Come...in a White Lab Coat?
loved it!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 4:46 PM Title: Newsroom Awards
WOo hoo What a wonderful surprise for B. Yumminess with lemony time!!!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 2:14 PM Title: Newsroom Awards
what an awesome reunion!! loved every bit of it!!!