Date: 02 Jan 2013 2:59 PM Title: Shame
Well I read this a while back. Wanted to reread before I reviewed. The story is as always well written. You are a very good writer.
The subject matter is what trips me up. I must say if you are attracted to the point of cheating,separate. This is a better plan than cheating especially with a family member. The hurt is double.
Date: 08 Sep 2012 5:17 PM Title: Shame
Hey hun Heres the Review as Promised I have added the story to my favs and you as well although I thought I had you added anyway . LOL
I really enjoyed reading this, the passon between them was intense. I loved that she tried to fight her feelings for him though I know it was impossable to fight what is clearly there embedded in your heart, body and soul.
I was happy for her that she was carrying Edward's child, and as she was i thought he was very unhappy with the news of her pregnancy.
I was relieved that Jasper felt okay with eveything that happened and was fine with the disalution of their marriage. A part of me wanted for him to have had relations with alice too so It wasn't so much a total betrayal of their vows on Bellas part but he was loyal to her making me feell even sadder for Jasper. Though he wasn't In love with Bella he did still love her and was faithful to her regardlessof his attrations to someone else. Thank God he didn't hold it against his Brothert and Bella as he could have. I do like that everyone was civil to each other and the way you had Alice and Jasper both helping to move Bella into Edwards and not leaving it all up only to Edweard and Bella was just the right touch to show their unity that everyone had on moving forward and being happy with each other and all the decisions made in the past and how they will reflect on the future they all will have to face and see every day as a family.
I look forward to reading the futuretake updates. Please let me know if you do add to it. My e mail is JRAlderton72@aol.com and I am also a facebook friend my profile is: Jen Twilightsonefan Pattinson on there...