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Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 8:59 AM Title: The Break Room

I love it ,when are u going to continue  this story , i cant wait to see what happens...    LOL

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2015 10:22 PM Title: The Break Room

ooh juicey!!! looking forward to the extention ;D

Reviewer: supersosox Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2014 1:13 PM Title: The Break Room

Love it please post soon 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 3:05 PM Title: The Break Room

Wow! Fantastic cliffie!

Reviewer: erikajo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:57 AM Title: The Break Room

Hot one shot!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad to hear you liked it.  Did you see that it's continued as "Beyond the Break Room"?

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 1:02 AM Title: The Break Room

Excellent story I'm super thrilled you're continuing i'll be adding this to my favorites.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Glad to hear you know about the continuation and that you're reading "Beyond the Break Room".  Another chapter should go up soon.  I'll look forward to hearing your thoughts over there!  Thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: Cinaxoxo99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 1:38 PM Title: The Break Room

Okay, i was not expecting that! Awesome story.



Author's Response:

I like to keep you guys on your toes!  Glad to hear you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!  I really appreciate it.

If you'd like to read the continuation, keep an eye out.  I'm hoping to post the first chapter of "Beyond the Break Room" in the next few weeks!

 

 

Reviewer: rosekelly1021 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 3:45 AM Title: The Break Room

oh please more more more more...I'm very interested in more.  Good job!!!



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you enjoyed it so much, thanks for letting me know!  I'm working on the continuation as we speak.  I hope to begin posting it in the next few weeks! -Discordia

Reviewer: teamcullentwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 5:18 PM Title: The Break Room

I usually don't read one shots but I was looking for something quick to read.  I'm so glad I picked this one.  Great story, fast moving, excellent cliff hanger!  Please continue!  How did Bella not know he had a daughter?  I would love to see Bella go head to head with Heidi. 



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much!  I'm really flattered that you read it, since you don't you don't usually read one shots.

As for how she didn't know he had a daughter, I think it's pretty plausible.  I'll let you in on a little secret, I basically have Bella's job, and there is a really hot V.P I drool over all the time.  That's pretty much where the similarities end...

But, I did hear through the hospital grapevine that he was divorced, but I have NO idea if he has kids.  I know a few people in administration that do, but only if their kid happens to come in with them to work for some reason.  It's not something they generally talk about that much.  They may talk about it more with each other, but I've only had one actually discuss his daughter with me.

Believe me, at some point Bella and Heidi will have a chat.  ;)

I am hoping to post the first chapter of "Beyond the Break Room" in the next couple of weeks!


-Discordia

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 8:49 PM Title: The Break Room

awesome story!   please continue



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you enjoyed it so much, thanks for letting me know!  I'm working on the continuation as we speak.  I hope to begin posting it in the next few weeks.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 7:20 PM Title: The Break Room

Je crois qu'Edward a une fille et qu'elle n'est pas contente.

Merci.



Author's Response:

Merci! Vous êtes correctElle n'est pas heureuse

-Discordia

Reviewer: bambieyes80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 12:29 PM Title: The Break Room

this is really interesting! i cant wait for you to start posting!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Glad you enjoyed it.   I'm working on the continuation as we speak.  I hope to begin posting it in the next few weeks.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 5:10 AM Title: The Break Room

More please!



Author's Response:

 I'm working on the continuation as we speak.  I hope to begin posting it in the next few weeks. :)

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 1:42 AM Title: The Break Room

Tasteof the forbidden is right. Awesome first chapter. Looking forward to your next installment!!!

Author's Response:

 Aww, thanks!  I am glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate that you took the time to let me know.  I'm working on the continuation as we speak.  I hope to begin posting it in the next few weeks.

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 8:33 PM Title: The Break Room

loved it, i think u should post what u have already. lol, cant wait to read more.



Author's Response:

 Aww, thanks!  I'm working on the continuation as we speak.  I hope to begin posting it in the next few weeks.  Hopefully that's not too long of a wait for you!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 7:21 PM Title: The Break Room

yes please thats all sorts of hot and would love to read more !



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review! I really appreciate it.  Glad to hear you enjoyed it so much.   I'm working on the continuation as we speak.  I hope to begin posting it in the next few weeks.

Reviewer: bmary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 6:32 PM Title: The Break Room

please more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! I'm working on the continuation as we speak.  I hope to begin posting it in the next few weeks.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 5:55 PM Title: The Break Room

yes plz continue



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you enjoyed it!  I'm working on the continuation as we speak.  I have it written through Ch. 6.  I hope to begin posting it in the next few weeks. 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 4:57 PM Title: The Break Room

should have known this was yours because I LOVED IT!! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Your reviews always give me warm fuzzies!  You're so sweet.  Glad you enjoyed it so much.  :)

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