Date: 25 Feb 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
So, it seems Carlisle is a doctor at the hospital. I wonder if he knows that Edward has kidnapped Bella. The hospital may be a place she can escape from.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
What's the deal with Edward? Why did he choose Bella and why did he feel he had to kidnap her???? Moving on to the next chapter. :0)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
I found this story a few days ago, but this is the first time I am reviewing. I like how Bella is conflicted about how she feels about Edward. His kind words and affection versus the fact that she is a prisoner. It will be interesting to see how that plays out now that she has decided to try to escape. Somehow, I think an escape will be impossible anyway.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
hmm wonder who the boss is and what he wants with Bella? Going to read the second chapter now. :0)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh My Gosh they have bella!! This isn't good
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow! Nice chapter.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 12
you hang us on new situation im egar to see what you want this story goes thank u for writting please up date sooner
Date: 25 Feb 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
poor edward life is hard and tough
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
You can't end there!! What an evil little cliff hanger! ;-) Update ASAP (please) :-) Merci!!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
wow good part, she will not escap emmm nice to know , i like your emett and i think you bring this horibble james to the story to tourture bella more thanks for writting
Date: 24 Feb 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
love emmet action , good scape
Date: 24 Feb 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
Yikes poor Bella!! Please don't let them hurt her!!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
wow , what can i say , this was very slow burn i had tingle in me when read poor edward , i felt for him why he is not that smart not understaning this condition of bella life emmm very good you are good in writting keep up hope you dont left us hang in . thank u for putting your time to write
Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
love this chapter bella is not givin up this edward sick i like the way edward describe him in her head , love have to be two side not one way love . keep writting dont give up , not a lot of people are here but they will come you will have more than 1000 reviews
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow, i was suprize but its not realalistc wow interesting.:d thank you for writting please write more of the chapter but edward action is fast .
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
emmm,some times i think edward is eidiot with this action of his kid napping her and want her be normal and be lovely and fall in love to him in days so this very confusing actually , emmm, poor bella i feel for her
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
WTF???? How can you leave it there? LOL Damn. I can't wait for the next chapter please hurry
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
wow , this edwards of yours is scary and confusing ,poor bella this wasnt way to come to her emmm, becuase she is innocent and it is hard for her to sleep or talk to edward its hard how he could he think she could be so easy in such limitted time emmm
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
emmm, this chapter is suprizing how could edward can be so sweet with her when he doenst know her is really hard and shock as he said to her to be his wife and lover emmm i have to read furthur i think you will explain for it
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow, i hope you write fast i like this first chapter eeemmmmm why he choos her , i dont underastnad this part your chapter was short but it was okay thank you for taking your time to write
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
i know exactly what bella was goin thru, i've had my appendix taken out. the only difference is that mine ruptured. but i dont remember those first 2 days in the hospital cuz i kept fading n and out, when i woke up tho i had a nasal gastric tube that went thru my nostril down my throat and n2 my stomach 2 drain the area of my appendix juices and i couldnt eat or talk for 2 and a half weeks (then i spent 4 more days there). then for the following month i was pretty much stuck in bed at home and i've bn left with an UGLY scar there. hav u had ur appendix removed?
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
ooohhhh they are real creeps doing this to poor innocent bella. edward better just give it all up for her.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
i just knew when edward started talking to bella about this stuff in the restaraunt he was in trouble...i mean who does that? well, i guess bella is in for another ride.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
Really good!! Would like to read more!!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
ooooo scary
so sad :.(
Date: 23 Feb 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
you are certianly keeping me on edge. I hope you update soon I really want to see where this is going.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG, a hit definately goes out on James and the guy from the restaurant.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love your story :) It has a unique twist to the other stories out there where Bella gets kidnapped. I was initially expecting Edward to be "Darkward"...but I love where you've taken this! I would write more, but I have more to read! :) Just thought I'd mention how much this story has entertained me. :-) Have a wonderful day
Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
This story is real good
Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor girl not again hope they let her go when Edward gives them what they want. Hurry need her safe and in Edwards arms.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Major cliff hanger!!!!! Please update soon!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Holy crap... you can not leave me hanging.. they have to get to her...
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG!!! The guys have got to find a way to save her and get rid of James and Aro!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh i would have had something nice to say after that. wooooh!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
ok..I's stay with him. :)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
OK this is sounding like one crazy story...it got my attention. so lets see where this takes us.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
I like the story so far. I am really enjoying it. Hope to see what happens next soon.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
:O
drama coming soon!!!!!
Date: 21 Feb 2010 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
I read your story- it was so amazing I could hardly stop long enough to breathe. You're very talented, I really love your style
Date: 21 Feb 2010 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
This chapter was wonderful
Date: 21 Feb 2010 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
I read your chapter- it was just as lovely
Date: 21 Feb 2010 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
The chapter was well- written, very nice to read
Date: 21 Feb 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
Enjoying the story. Looking forward to more.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
Please dont let anything happen to her she needs to go back to Edwards. Hurry More More More
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh man! Can't wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love Edwards heartfelt speech!
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh.. you have to update soon.. I have to know..
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
Amazing! Love how Bella was asking for Edward to help her!
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
this is cool.................
keep writing
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Huh! Well I guess staying at Edward's place was the best idea! Intersting!!
Date: 21 Feb 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella's going to be old hat at being kidnapped soon enough!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am loving this story. Not at all what I was expecting after the kidnapping. Thanks for writing. You are extremely talented!
Date: 21 Feb 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
I read your story- it was so amazing I could hardly stop long enough to breathe. You're very talented, I really love your style
Date: 20 Feb 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
I just came across your story and am loving it!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am really into your story and thoroughly enjoy reading it!! It's good!!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love seeing them get closer! Can't wait to see what you have in store for them!!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
Please stay focused I am loving this story. I cant wait to find out what he is doing and to see there relationship grow. I hope she stays in the house with him. Waiting for more Thanks.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
great chapter
Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
great chapter
Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
great chapter
Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great Chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
Even though Edward is a stalker I find him rather endearing!
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
great chapter
Date: 19 Feb 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter
Date: 19 Feb 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
great chapter
Date: 19 Feb 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great Chapter
Date: 19 Feb 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
cant wait to what Edward does for a living
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
I just start read ...and I loved.thanks for shared...your fanfiction...
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good for Alice pointing out the flaws and good for Edward trying to look at things from anothers point of view.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well I am shocked that she opened up to Jasper and Emmett. But I freakin love how they handled Edward! Punch him again Emmett!
Poor Bella now she is sick!! Poor little thing! Great chapter!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! Edward is something else but I know their is a soft side there. Great Chapter
Date: 18 Feb 2010 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great Start! I can't wait to read more.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
AWESOME STORY I LOVE IT!!!!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
i like this story.. thanks for writing it
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love it. Read it in FF. Hope you will update the rest and add more :)
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait to find out what Edwards answer is!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow he pulled his head out of his ass. I cant wait to see what happens next please tell me she doesnt go back to her place. I cant wait till they all get together so she can see what kind of a person he really is with the rest of the family. Just face it I cant wait LOL
Date: 18 Feb 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to see what Bella's decision will be.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
yay!
more more more
Date: 18 Feb 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm so happy that she has the choice.. I would love for her to go backt o her apartment.. and truly miss him.. then maybe decide to move to the mansion, but maybe in a guest room at first...great story
Date: 17 Feb 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
wow! I love this story! i started reading today and i´m hooked! Evil Edward is someting i can´t run away :)
I can´t wait to see what Bella has plan :)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
Just found your story and it´s definitly an interesting idea! Thanks for sharing and I´m looking forward to the next update :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
i read it on ff!!!!!!!!!!!!IT WAS AWESOME LOLZ
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 8
oooo drama
WRITE FASTER!!!!
plz :)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
hehehe i think shes the physco one
Date: 16 Feb 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter. Bella's confusion was very good and its nice to see Jasper and Emmett are really on her side and willing to stick up for her.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
I like seeing Edward's POV on things periodically. Especially after their intimacy, it was important to understand that he is a severely misguided and I dare say delusional, at least when it comes to Bella. I think otherwise he would be an unsympathetic villain. I'm oh so curious to see if Bella actually ever tries to escape from him. Sadly, he does seem to care about her, but yeah, love is not kidnapping and forcing your will on the person. :(
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh shit! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
Go Emmett Go what a guy love him and Jasper too I am in love with Edward but how isnt LOL I am happy the boys showed him he was wrong in what he did even though she did love it but that was not the point. Poor Bella now in pain and feeling all alone but she was alone before i keep on controdicting myself because under different cercimstances she could feel like she had a loving family instead of kidnappers. What is going to happen in the hospital??????
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow...Would love to know what gives him the right to treat her like that or expect such things from her right after she was kidnapped.