Date: 29 Mar 2019 4:09 AM Title: Bird
I really really hope you continue this story. I love it!
Date: 31 Aug 2018 9:02 AM Title: Bird
Hi...
I really like this and all your other stories but is this story complete? Because on FF.net it's marked as completed but here's not!
Thanks :)
Date: 25 Nov 2016 12:24 AM Title: Bird
I bet that felt good!
How often do you update this story?
Date: 24 Nov 2016 5:49 AM Title: The Zoo
Yay! finally he grew a pair!
Date: 09 Aug 2016 10:15 PM Title: Cop and Copper
I really like this story, I wish you would finish this on as well as Tribute. Two great stories that need to be completed. Thanks
Henrietta
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2015 7:59 AM Title: Bird
Good story, not the ending I expected. :-)
Date: 26 Feb 2015 3:51 PM Title: Bird
Noooooo!! You can't leave it there! I have to know what happens next! I have been reading this for 2 days now and I love it. You are by far my most fav author on here! You are very talented and I have read almost every story you have posted! I have learned a lot from your stories. They have substance, angst, drama, romance, and are just too good to put down! :) Plz finish this soon... No pressure... But I HAVE to know!! Lol
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2014 3:18 PM Title: Bird
I noticed that you haven't updated since 2012, and i just found this story, is this just on the back burner to be updated later, or have you quit writting it? I hope it the former not the ladder, anyways it was a really good story!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2014 1:36 AM Title: Bird
I like that this is about Edward. He is human, with issues that puts layers to the character
Date: 16 Mar 2014 9:29 AM Title: Bird
Wow Edward is a good man and needs to stop worry about what others think about his dad he has so much anger in him and it comes out at wrong times. Poor Jacob I would piss my self to being shot at .
Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:06 PM Title: History
He cant get Bella off his mind that is love love love.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 12:30 PM Title: Bird
Great story. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:03 PM Title: Bird
If I were Edward, I'd be livid that nobody respected my wishes regarding my family! They just went behind his back and arranged to get them all together for a dinner without telling or inviting him. Wow. It boggles the mind. I love getting this chapter today. We've not heard much from you as far as writing goes in a long while. Not complaining, I loved Sloth, but these episodic stories of yours always get to me. They seem so real, true to life emotion evoking real. Maybe you are busy preparing to publish QS? Maybe just busy doing RL stuff, IDK. I miss reading you regularly. This was an awesome chapter. Chock full of stuff. I read 18 and 19 first to get back into the swing of things. Always satisfying to read you.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 7:19 PM Title: Bird
Yay Lexi! When SALIGIA went up, the only one out of the group I kept comparing them to was your writing. Then you grace us wih this soon after. I am so happy right now. This one was an outstanding chapter. Thank you.
Date: 07 Dec 2013 11:59 AM Title: History
Hey Lexi, thanks for updating, I've been missing reading your writing;-)
Beat up by a lesbian, cute.
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2013 1:46 AM Title: Gray Matter
Hard to read through the first part. Although you did warn us.
Date: 04 Dec 2013 8:39 PM Title: History
They are all very human, very real person. Thank you for coming back, this story is a great one.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2013 11:31 AM Title: History
Thank you for the update - loved it
Date: 29 Jul 2013 7:49 AM Title: Panic Room
I didnt realize you updated this story again, it was agreat surprise finding a few chapters, I love this story line, I was a huge fan of Third Watch so I love this fic, keep writing it please!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2013 1:57 AM Title: Panic Room
Hello! I had mentioned a few chapters ago of the leep/jump of how Alice & Bella came to be in Manhatten. I reread story this month and see it is not important at this point. Unless further on that it may. Please update us soon on how the muesum goes.
Date: 28 Jul 2013 7:15 AM Title: Panic Room
I really like this so far, I hope you update soon. I have truly enjoyed everything I have read written by you. Thanks for putting yourself out there like that.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2013 4:33 PM Title: Panic Room
OK, I'm caught up on this one...update soon! *hugs*
Date: 13 Jul 2013 10:22 PM Title: Panic Room
I love this story so much. I found this while cleaning my inbox. I have never been so happy in my life!!! I love these two!
Date: 08 Jul 2013 9:32 AM Title: Panic Room
I think Charlie is very proud and happy with Edward because he is very in love with his daughter.
Date: 03 Jul 2013 2:29 PM Title: Panic Room
Edward handled her Dad's behavior perfectly I thought. Charlie was a little creepy in his controlling bossy way. Edward had him pegged from the get go.
Thanks so much for updating.
Date: 29 Jun 2013 6:19 AM Title: Panic Room
It couldn't be an easy situation, andit wasn't. But Edward proved how good they are together and ow good he is for her. Not even her dad can argue with that.
Date: 28 Jun 2013 2:02 AM Title: Panic Room
Love! I am glad ChArlie is giving him a chance. And go Edward for standing up to him.
Date: 28 Jun 2013 12:11 AM Title: Panic Room
I don't like Charlie. I know, I know, he's doing what he thinks is best for Bella. So what, he's still wrong. I love that Edward wants to love and protect Bella. I love that he said he'd follow her anywhere! Tanya and Jacob? Oh damn, that's just wrong....but funny!
Date: 27 Jun 2013 9:21 PM Title: Panic Room
Thank you for this great chapter. I like it very much. Take care of you.
Date: 19 Jun 2013 5:38 PM Title: Gray Matter
Wow what a shity day so sad there is so much evil in the world. Now he isin his safe place and Charlie shows up. Now he gets to show Bella how much he loves her by standing up to her dad got to love him
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2013 3:06 PM Title: Gray Matter
Damn. Thats a lot to go thru in one day, and to think they do that on a daily basis. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 17 Jun 2013 1:49 PM Title: Gray Matter
Ugh oh. What the heck? Charlie's a bit overprotective it sounds like.
Date: 17 Jun 2013 12:17 AM Title: Gray Matter
Thank you for writing this story so well and for just, everything!!! I'm a teacher and I've had students with autism and I hate, HATE, when people say something about them. As if being autistic is a illness or disease. It's not. Anyways, back to the story. I love how Edward and Bella respond to each other, not just physically but emotionally. They are growing so much and just make me so happy to see how good they are together. They support each other and finally Edward opened up to Bella. I thought it was never going to happen. LOL. BTW, what an EPIC cockblock!!! That was just cruel!
Date: 16 Jun 2013 10:34 PM Title: Rat Race Part One
Tell her!!! Ugh, he needs to tell her he loves her!
Date: 16 Jun 2013 8:24 PM Title: Gray Matter
And face the music, I will with you in the next chapter. Exception done the "Jennifer" case, very emotionnal, I love the chapter, thank you for the update.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2013 4:42 AM Title: Gray Matter
oh o looks like Charlie is going to be giving someone the third degree!! lol
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2013 4:28 AM Title: Adh Mor
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
wwow i really love them together!
Date: 16 Jun 2013 2:32 AM Title: Gray Matter
Poor Edward can't catch a break.
Date: 16 Jun 2013 12:56 AM Title: Gray Matter
what a shitty day in the life of a cop.....a NY cop....you write what you know....what the fuck else could go wrong for him today? geez, he needs to catch a break. first the little girl, then his so-called father, then Charlie. Bella seems like she's letting what her dad thinks get in the way of her relationship with Edward....poor baby, she can't catch a break either....somethings got to give, I fear....
Date: 15 Jun 2013 12:16 AM Title: Adh Mor
I Love reading your writing.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 11:43 PM Title: One
I wish he could share his real fears with her so she could reassure him. Not that would make his trust issues go away that will take time and Bella.
Great chapter, I love how their scattered, stumbling through this new relationship comes across in the writing.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 10:56 PM Title: Adh Mor
They are not perfect but they are perfect for each other love them
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 9:49 PM Title: Adh Mor
I wanted to clock Kate too.
Damn good chapter.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 8:34 PM Title: Adh Mor
Great chapter!
Date: 14 Jun 2013 7:38 PM Title: Adh Mor
I send you all my thanks for updating with this great chapter. I hope Carlisle will be definitely out of the picture, unable to hurt Esmé again and without a dollar in his pocket. What a bad father and (ex) husband. Esmé can hold her head up and "man up" to put Carlisle out of her life for good.
Take care of you.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 7:04 PM Title: Rat Race Part Two
oh man
that was so sweet at the end it melted my heart
Date: 14 Jun 2013 6:01 PM Title: Adh Mor
what a real and moving chapter! i love that he opened up and told her everything. those moments of real intimacy are what makes life and love all worth the rest. it makes me feel. it moves me, this story. carlisle is an ass. a lonely, drunken, broken man. esme will suffer again by him, i bet. people like kate, who judge a book by it's cover, make me want to scream and hit something, someone. bella and edward get each other. that's what is important here. i really love this story. thanks, lexi.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 5:14 PM Title: Adh Mor
I am so ad Edward finally opened up to her! Love them!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 4:17 PM Title: Rat Race Part One
oh my god thats scarey as hell
I'm a little worried now.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 4:09 PM Title: Aftermath
well hell, that was hot!
Date: 13 Jun 2013 9:16 PM Title: One
They're both so scared aout losing each other, it's kind of endearing. Bella needs structure, Edward hasn't had mich in his life, so balancing that is tricky. But they will manage, just because they're love is steonger than either one realizes.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 4:37 PM Title: One
Very nice chapter, thank you. THey are both two lovely ordinary people.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 4:30 AM Title: One
Poor E... He's going thru it mentally and his issues are bubbling up even more.
I love how he approaches b and her autism. Quite not sure if he understands autism or just doesn't care but love it.
Can't wait for the next update... I love this guys!!!
Date: 12 Jun 2013 1:58 AM Title: One
He can't tell her that he's afraid of losing her....his way to grieve over losing his grandfather when he won't let it show otherwise. I love her way of coping, the cleaning, the honesty, the way she just blurts out her view to him. She's afraid he'll leave her. What a pair. So right for each other.....this has become a favorite in the last half dozen chapters....
Date: 12 Jun 2013 1:11 AM Title: One
Awww I love them. They are so sweet.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 5:33 AM Title: Here I am
And Bella lokes his funny business ;)
Sje's blunt at times and that can't be easy getting used to, but she copes better than she thinks.
Date: 06 Jun 2013 8:12 PM Title: Here I am
I love the way your characters evolve. They are both simple people, trying to live the best they can. Thank you for the update.
Date: 06 Jun 2013 10:31 AM Title: Here I am
I'm not so sure about the, "And you made a friend in Kenny." They may of made an enemy out of those guys. And now he's going to be riding with hot head McCarty and possibly become a target for all the ill will he's creating.
Thanks for the update;-)
Date: 06 Jun 2013 9:06 AM Title: Here I am
They are so good for each other. She figured once he found out about her quirks he would leave her not have him tell her he loves her so happy he did.
Date: 06 Jun 2013 8:22 AM Title: Rat Race Part Two
Alice now knows how much Edward loves Bella I hope she does to.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2013 6:08 AM Title: Here I am
loved this, a little sad ... but the ending was so sweet. :)
Date: 06 Jun 2013 2:00 AM Title: Here I am
Aww loving this story again. I missed it.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2013 12:18 AM Title: Here I am
Thanks for the update! I wonder if he is going to have a confrontation with Carlisle. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 06 Jun 2013 12:18 AM Title: Here I am
you know, I really like this Bella....she's not your usual type Bella, but she's got some endearing qualities that I gravitate towards.....It's good to see them together, E and B. The ILY popped out of his mouth in the heat of passion....funny it's usually the girl who does that and I love that you had HIM do it this time.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2013 6:08 PM Title: Rat Race Part Two
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 05 Jun 2013 3:34 PM Title: Rat Race Part Two
Thank you so much for updating :) why do I get the feeling there may be more than one rapist on the loose ? Looking forward to more.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 4:31 AM Title: Rat Race Part Two
Adorable, I'm so ready for him to tell her he loves her. They are great together.
great chapter, I keep wondering about James and if they got the right guy.
Thanks for the update;-)
Date: 02 Jun 2013 12:33 PM Title: Rat Race Part Two
Aww so good! Love these two!! I am happy he didn't freak after her episode.
Date: 01 Jun 2013 2:27 PM Title: Rat Race Part Two
3 chapters at the same time, you are generous, thank you. Those were good ones. There are some words I don't understand, I can't find them in my English/French dictionnary, but I understand the general idea. So, it's all good.
Thank you for you great commitment to you fictions.
Date: 01 Jun 2013 5:32 AM Title: Rat Race Part Two
My son is like Bella. Diagnosed with HFA.
Date: 31 May 2013 10:35 PM Title: Rat Race Part One
I have to agree with Black, he guy has to be aking something! Which makes him so much more dangerous. Good thing the girls are toether, I just hope one knows how to use a gun.
Date: 31 May 2013 10:25 PM Title: Aftermath
Her OCD had to make an apearance. Good thing it was a cute one ;)
Date: 31 May 2013 8:19 PM Title: Rat Race Part One
I'm so glad you're updating this story again. I really enjoy reading it!
Date: 31 May 2013 3:23 PM Title: Rat Race Part One
I'm so excited you're back with this story!... I'm not complaining about lack of updates, though, because I have been happily reading the updates on your other fics :)
Date: 31 May 2013 5:19 AM Title: Rat Race Part One
he is not saying it but he is showing it she has to know he loves her.
Date: 31 May 2013 4:52 AM Title: Aftermath
I have missed you so glad you are still with us love these two they are so cute. Most deffinetly thank CaraNo she is so good ant writing lemons.
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2013 11:42 PM Title: Date Night
Like this avenue that your takin. Edward has a different demeaner in this storu. Bella is the OCD!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2013 2:01 PM Title: Dreams
The pace is fine Sexi!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2013 4:19 AM Title: Cop and Copper
Story has my attention. Like the relationships between charcters. Alice and Bella could be a tad older. Two 20yr olds in Manhatten from the other side of country, and 1of them is OCD is a bit of a leep. Attracted to story, plot can go different ways.
Author's Response:
how is it a leap?
Date: 07 Jan 2013 1:01 PM Title: Disorderly
hello. I want to ask you for permission to translate this story on Russian I would be glad to see your written permission in the form of letters in the mailbox anyutik-k@yandex.ru . thank you in advance! and thank you for the beautiful story!
Author's Response:
No, I'm sorry. I do not want this story translated. Thank you, but no. <3
Date: 06 Jan 2013 7:14 PM Title: Date Night
Up date pretty plz :) I'm hooked
Date: 06 Jan 2013 7:13 PM Title: Cop and Copper
Will you plz plz plz update I'm hooked !!!!!