[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2012 2:44 PM Title: Date Night
Another great one Lexi!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2012 11:15 AM Title: Date Night
Poor Edward, so much baggage, he's really weighed down with it. I wonder if Carlisle has changed at all. Will Edward ever decide to 'catch up' with him? Hmmm. I guess time will tell. I had to giggle at Bella for wanting to leave so quickly. That had to be the shortest date in the history of dates. :) I can not blame her though, I'd want to take Edward home and have my way with him too! xoxo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2012 10:42 AM Title: The Zoo
I probably keep saying this, but I am so in love with your Edward and Bella! Edward's nieces crack me up, they are so damn adorable! I just love your story so much! xoxo Kelly
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:22 PM Title: Date Night
Bella's move of giving Jacob Edward's number was clever and the best proof that they are together. Just what Edward needed, along with her promise of profing it to him ;)
Date: 21 Oct 2012 4:32 PM Title: Date Night
Very nice chapter. Maybe there is hope for Edward and his father to reconnect.
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 8:37 AM Title: Date Night
Loved the phone number lol poor Jake though he was going to play with her lol. He needs to start opening up to her before she shuts him off. He needs to go home with her.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 6:04 AM Title: Date Night
Off to her apt. :-)
Date: 20 Oct 2012 5:42 AM Title: The Zoo
Hope he holds her tight!
Date: 19 Oct 2012 2:37 PM Title: Date Night
Such a good chapter! Keep them coming! I can't wait to see how the story unfolds.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 6:15 AM Title: Date Night
I can't stay mad at Carlisle, what's up with that?
Great chapter & I can't wait for the next, sexy times ahead but more than that I hope he opens himself up to her more than just physically.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2012 5:35 AM Title: Cop and Copper
loved it. keep on writing this story.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 4:51 AM Title: Date Night
oh wow....so he now may have a place with Jacob, maybe will have sex with his maybe girlfriend, Bella, and maybe a beginning again with his dad. That's a lot for a short chapter. I love his inner workings. He seems to be so insecure on the inside all the while giving the impression of confidence or whatever on the outside. I like them together. I like that he doesn't play classical music on the date because of her fears...I like that she wants to get him alone after one song...I like that she is smart and observant....great job, Lexi!
Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:39 PM Title: The Zoo
I don't know why I don't have the alerts for Offbeat, the story is in my fav. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 10:57 PM Title: The Zoo
Ok this story is amazing. Between this and Riders I am hanging by a thread till i get the next chapter. Your and amazing writer and I have followed all your stories. Thank you. I cant wait for the next chapter. :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2012 5:38 AM Title: Cop and Copper
Just getting started and hope to get caught up on both by the end of the weekend. You as always have got a good thing going here Loving it already
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:00 PM Title: The Zoo
love, love this story and glad they are finally getting there .......
Date: 10 Oct 2012 8:32 AM Title: The Zoo
Wow he is thick headed good thing he is not stupid lol
Date: 09 Oct 2012 10:34 PM Title: The Zoo
I DON'T KNOW IF BELLA INVENTED TIM OR IF HE'S REALLY ASKING HR OUT, BUT IT WAS A GREAT IDEA TO MENTION HIM TO EDWARD.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 10:06 PM Title: The Buddy System
OH MEN ARE SO CLUELESS!
Date: 09 Oct 2012 9:38 PM Title: Edward Part Two
FIRST OF ALL I WANT JASPER TO BE MY FRIEND, I WANT TO COME TO JASPER FOR ADVICESECONDLY THE NEXT DAY HANGOVER WILL BE REALLY AWKWARD
Date: 09 Oct 2012 9:08 PM Title: Edward Part One
POOR EDWARD
Date: 09 Oct 2012 8:35 PM Title: Disorderly
I HOPE BLACKS LIL STUNT MAKE EDWARD MORE ASSERTIVE
Date: 09 Oct 2012 8:15 PM Title: Saved
WOW BELLA IS SO PERCEPTIVE
Date: 09 Oct 2012 5:19 PM Title: Dreams
OH MY BAD, I SHOULD HAVE MORE FAITH IN YOU. SO OFFICER CULLEN IS RELUCTANT TO ADMIT HIS ATTRACTION TO BELLA
Date: 09 Oct 2012 5:00 PM Title: Fifteen
ROSE IS A GOOD FRIEND TO EDWARD AFTER ALL. IS IT WRONG THAT I DON'T WANT TANYA OR ANY OTHER WOMAN NEAR EDWARD?
Date: 09 Oct 2012 4:46 PM Title: The Zoo
I usually read this here on TWCS. I don't know why I read on FFN this time, I guess just because it arrived first and I was anxious for a new chapter. This chapter was my favorite so far....
Date: 09 Oct 2012 4:24 PM Title: Cop and Copper
I'M SO GLAD THEY CAUGHT JAMES BEFORE HE DID ANYTHING ELSE TO BELLA
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 3:30 PM Title: The Zoo
Glad that Edward is making his move.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 2:18 PM Title: The Zoo
Way to go Bella! Pulling the green eyed monster card was perfect. No way was he going to let her date someone else after they had been kissing like that. Just the nudge he needed to wake up. Loved the zoo and the time at Esme's. Wonderful chapter. See ya next time.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 8:06 AM Title: The Zoo
I love this story.
I wishe Edward would get his head out of his arse and ask her to be his girlfriend.
Please don't let them be friends who fuck
Date: 09 Oct 2012 6:27 AM Title: The Zoo
Edward can be completely and shockingly clueless. It talk Bella walking away from him to see what hewas trying to deny. His motives are not enough for his behavior, let's hope we catches on soon.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 4:56 AM Title: The Zoo
loved loved loved this chapter. I love all your stories. Can't wait for more.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 4:10 AM Title: The Zoo
Aaaaawwww!!! It's about time she pulled his head out of his ass. Loved it! Thanks for the update! :)
Date: 09 Oct 2012 2:53 AM Title: The Zoo
I want kick Edward's ass!! damn dumb boys sometimes... :)
Date: 09 Oct 2012 2:50 AM Title: The Zoo
there is one thing i love more then Edward Cullen and that is the nypd. This story combines my two favorite things so I cant help but love it. I probably have eaten in one of the lower east side places Edwards family went to ***love pernil**
Great Job with this story I cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 2:09 AM Title: The Zoo
YESSSSSSSSSS! i got up and did a little jig at the end of that chapter
:D
makes me excited
Date: 09 Oct 2012 1:17 AM Title: The Zoo
Such a good chapter! I can't wait for more Bella and Edward romance!
Date: 06 Oct 2012 9:46 PM Title: Edward Part One
I really just wanna hug Edward right now! It's hard. I know what he went through. Gah your stories always manage to bring tears to my eyes. loved the chapter
Date: 06 Oct 2012 9:25 PM Title: Disorderly
No Jacob Back away from Bella. Loved it as always! I feel bad that Rosale has to do desk work. But what can she expect? if anything bad were to happen to her while she was pregnant Emmet would never be able to forgive himself.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 8:11 PM Title: Disorderly
I'm rather shocked that you would use episodes of Third Watch word for word. Just because you add to them does not make these stories yours. Miss-leading your readers this way is not right and you should give credit were credit is due. It's one thing to use someone's characters and essence of a story, but it is quite another to use their words too that's called plagiarism.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 7:36 PM Title: The Buddy System
The more I read Offbeat, the more I love it. I like what you have done with the characters, every day people with everyday life. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 6:56 PM Title: The Buddy System
It seems Bella isn't too happy just being Edward's friend and he's clueless about it. Maybe his nices wil see and tell him ;)
Date: 05 Oct 2012 10:23 PM Title: Saved
Loved it. This bella makes me laugh alot. She's very aobservant. I can't wait to see how they progress.
Date: 05 Oct 2012 10:07 PM Title: Dreams
I literally almost bursted our laughing in the bus im in right now. Tanya with braces that was a funny image not to mention the fact that Edward was scared to even let her blow him. THANK GOD you didn't have Edward hook up with her.
Date: 05 Oct 2012 9:53 PM Title: Fifteen
Loved it!! I've never read a story where Bella was like this. I'm actually even more excited because it's a breath of fresh air.
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:03 PM Title: The Buddy System
Why are guys so dumb... He's even worse not seeing a normal relationship ever... Open your eyes man... *just kiss the girl* (totally thinking a out the little mermaid lol)
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:53 PM Title: The Buddy System
Awe, whys he gotta be so pessimistic about him & Bella & relationships in general? Just cause he came from a broken home with an abusing drunk dad and his other family members aren't much better off, what's with the pessimism? Haha. Great chapter & update, I'm really starting to feel these characters and looking forward to reading more.
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:39 PM Title: The Buddy System
He's adorable in all his boy stupidity. LOL I love him.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2012 9:46 AM Title: The Buddy System
*giggles* This chapter was so fun, his neice's are soooo cute! I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. xo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2012 9:13 AM Title: Edward Part Two
Poor Edward; I hope he let's Bella in, I think she could help him feel better about himself. Maybe he needs to seek out a therapist for himself. I know he was drunk, but deep down inside he doesn't think much of himself, he's holding on to the past and he can't let go. Maybe he blames himself. I'm not sure about my ideas, but I do know that he's hurting. I just want Edward to feel good about himself. xo Kelly
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:58 AM Title: Edward Part Two
They are both weird
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:45 AM Title: The Buddy System
cute kid interaction. A buddy huh?
Date: 05 Oct 2012 1:26 AM Title: The Buddy System
Wake up Edward ......men , so stupide sometime
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:17 AM Title: The Buddy System
I dont think Bella wants to be in the friend zone lol. The zoo should be fun.
Date: 04 Oct 2012 10:51 PM Title: The Buddy System
What a wonderful story! dear SexylexiCullen I really love it, by the way I love your other stories too. Please go on, I'm very curious how this one develops and can hardly stand the time till the next chapter appears - Lol - tiina
Date: 04 Oct 2012 10:48 PM Title: The Buddy System
Oh boy, these 2 are quite a sight to behold! She's OCD, he's emotionally stunted. They're perfect for each other....His story about Prom night was just the most typical guy thing ever...I love Bella's sarcasm. The nieces, and how he acts with them, are such a tell. He has the capacity, just not the experience. This story grows on my more with every chapter. Yeah, and Jacob Black is still a dick!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2012 10:35 PM Title: The Buddy System
Another great chapter. He is so clueless he doesn't even realize he has already fallen head over heals for her. See ya next time.
Date: 04 Oct 2012 2:45 AM Title: Edward Part Two
Well I am rather lost on this chapter. Edward is totally a mess. Are we gonna move forward or is going to amble around in sadness?
Date: 02 Oct 2012 4:09 PM Title: Edward Part Two
Yeh the alcohol doesnt make anything better. Bella can see him better than he can see himself.
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2012 3:28 PM Title: Edward Part Two
I'm enjoying this story. They are both very intereting characters and I look forward to reading more about them.
Date: 02 Oct 2012 12:57 PM Title: Edward Part Two
He's breaking my heart.
Date: 02 Oct 2012 8:16 AM Title: Edward Part Two
he's going to feel like shit in the morning
Date: 02 Oct 2012 5:09 AM Title: Edward Part Two
Edward reached his braking point. Lets see how the morning after looks like.
Date: 02 Oct 2012 3:20 AM Title: Edward Part Two
Awe, poor Edward he's so flawed and those Daddy issues are huge. Good for him though, in a way, going out & getting drunk & fighting back a little bit. Hopefully he'll figure out he can be lame & people still love him inspite of it.
I can't wait to read more!
Date: 02 Oct 2012 1:26 AM Title: Edward Part Two
good chapter, poor Edward he didn't get any.Ha Ha
Date: 01 Oct 2012 10:35 PM Title: Edward Part Two
he's a sad little boy....trapped inside a man. she's the hero and she will save him, and in saving him, she will save herself....
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2012 5:22 AM Title: Edward Part One
Wow, what a hard life they lived. It seems like Edward didn't really know any thing different until he got older. That explains a lot. It's funny too, that Bella seems to sense that Edward is kind of a lost soul, I think that's why she asked if she could save him. I think maybe he does need some TLC from her. I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm really having a good time reading your story! Thanks for writing. xo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2012 4:14 AM Title: Disorderly
Ah yes, the cocky, full of himself rookie. Edward is going to have 'so much fun' showing him the ropes.*heavy sigh* xo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2012 3:50 AM Title: Saved
I love your story, and I love your characters so much, but I have to admit that I can't figure Bella and Alice out. I guess I wonder about all of their backgrounds. I can't wait to find out more about what makes these crazy kids tick. xo Kelly
Date: 30 Sep 2012 5:21 PM Title: Edward Part One
hope kate doesn't get hooked
Date: 30 Sep 2012 3:59 PM Title: Fifteen
hope he doesn't get side tracked with tanya
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 4:32 AM Title: Saved
Loved the chapter. It was weirdly sweet!!! LOL! Well, we got some insight into these two and now some of the quirks are starting to make sense. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 9:39 PM Title: Edward Part One
Wow, those girls, his sister & mom. Lord they are risking those little girls safety letting Steve be there, who's not above hitting a woman, god only knows what else he's not above doing. Yeah for Edward trying to call them on it. Not that they seemed to listen, we're just defensive.:-(
Great chapter, a lot of fillin in the characters:-)
Date: 29 Sep 2012 8:39 PM Title: Edward Part One
Wow, that explains some of Edwards issues. Hopefully he goes to Bells's. is he moving in with jasper?
Date: 29 Sep 2012 8:38 PM Title: Edward Part One
Great chapter. Poor Edward. His family is a reall mess.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2012 5:17 PM Title: Edward Part One
Wow Edward's family's kind of fucked up. I hope things get better for him soon.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2012 3:20 PM Title: Dreams
Love these guys! :) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2012 3:06 PM Title: Fifteen
Your story is great! Love it! I really love your characters. :) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2012 2:38 PM Title: Cop and Copper
I really love the beginning of your story! I can't wait to see what happens next! :) Kelly
Date: 29 Sep 2012 9:37 AM Title: Edward Part One
He had a ruff life growing up but it is what he knew. He needs to worry about his mom and sister and he needs to go to Bella.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 7:57 AM Title: Edward Part One
no wonder he is like he is look where he came from. When you don't respect your parents you have a hard time respecting yourself.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 4:57 AM Title: Edward Part One
And he thought Bella was weird :-)
Date: 29 Sep 2012 3:39 AM Title: Edward Part One
I liked it.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 1:54 AM Title: Edward Part One
Loved it :)
Date: 29 Sep 2012 12:00 AM Title: Edward Part One
interesting thank u.....
Date: 28 Sep 2012 11:58 PM Title: Edward Part One
An eye-opening look into Edward's family and past....wow. Where will he live now? I think he went home just to see if it would be an option. He sees it isn't. Don't have him live with Jacob! JFC! Not Jacob! It's nice he's taking his nieces to the zoo next weekend.....will he go Saturday to see Bella? This is a gritty and real story and I am liking it a lot. I read it here on TWCS just in case FFN gets another bug up their butt to start that censorship crap again....Thank you Lexi for writing such entertaining stories!