Date: 28 Sep 2012 4:21 PM Title: Disorderly
Jacob is an ass.....that is all! LOL!
Date: 28 Sep 2012 1:55 AM Title: Disorderly
Aghh, they almost hit it off, if they could communicate. What did Edward "ranted like a lunatic" about anyway?looking forward to next update;-)
Date: 27 Sep 2012 8:47 PM Title: Disorderly
Hummmm, I'm sensing a little JealousWard...... I'm sure Bella was only looking for Edward when Jake decided to give her his number. Bella does have a little catching up to do with Alice.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 7:31 PM Title: Disorderly
Emmett did the right thing, even if Rose is upset. The bad part is how it turned out for Edward.
He really is awkward with girls, but Bella asking about him is a good sign.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 7:28 PM Title: Disorderly
He is hooked and may kick Jacobs ass lol
Date: 27 Sep 2012 7:17 PM Title: Disorderly
He is a different Edward.. Ha ha.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 7:05 PM Title: Saved
Jasper's asumption was right, while Edward kind of followed him but was intrigued by Bella. She is unique and different, but not in a bad way. She's very honest and that intrigues Edward. What else will they learn about eachother?
Date: 27 Sep 2012 5:31 PM Title: Disorderly
Jacob thinks he's all that. Not
Date: 27 Sep 2012 4:44 PM Title: Disorderly
It sounds like he is almost as socially awkward as she is. They make a good match, then.... he is confused....wanted to hook up but sort of glad they didn't....Jacob is still an ass, as always! I'm very happy you're updating this so often. It attracts me, I like it!
Date: 27 Sep 2012 4:33 PM Title: Disorderly
I love it being an Edward story! I can do with out Bella just fine, lol....but thanks for getting Tayna out of the way fast, now onto Black, grrrr, lol
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2012 4:23 PM Title: Disorderly
Sweet Lexi - You are a dear for this chapter update, and yes, the cats out of the bag, so to speak about Rose's pregnancy and her Baby Daddy seems pretty protective, we wouldn't expect less from dear lovable Emmett! Well that sucks that now Edward is partnered up with Jacob; as much as I don't like Jacob Black's character, sometimes he is okay in the FF stories; however, in this case, he did run after Bella to give her his digits when she clearly asked about Jasper and Edward.... how dare he.... Sorry Rat! Sadly Edward is still feeling the frustration it would seem from NOT getting what he was unsure he wanted, until he definitely woke up without it! LOL! Hope that made sense...
Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:53 PM Title: Saved
Okay, I'm ready for more:-D)
Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:34 PM Title: Dreams
Thanks for putting braces on Tanya, heehee
okay doesn't talk much, Bella is sounding perfect for Edward.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:13 PM Title: Dreams
It took Edward sometime but he found his calling, that's always a very good thing. And a very lucky one.
His personal life, that hasn't been that good, but he's trying. Maybe thses two unique girls can help him there.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:07 PM Title: Fifteen
Yuck Tanya? Haha, and Bella does sound pretty weird.. I can't wait to read more:-)
Date: 26 Sep 2012 10:09 PM Title: Saved
ohhh la la!
he kissed her
Date: 26 Sep 2012 10:01 PM Title: Dreams
well shit!
legal counsel can shove it up his ass
bitch should not have driven drunk*grumbles*
Date: 26 Sep 2012 9:55 PM Title: Fifteen
well shit i hope he does go see bella :(
Date: 26 Sep 2012 9:22 PM Title: Cop and Copper
WELL FRICK!
wht a way to start damn im so glad jasper made him throw the rule book out!
Date: 26 Sep 2012 2:17 PM Title: Saved
I am loving this so reaking much. I'm so glad your continuing with this. I really look forward to more.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 7:45 AM Title: Saved
Looking forward to more of their evening together.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 3:57 AM Title: Fifteen
There's no doubt that Rose wasn't planning or expecting to be in this situation. It will make things a bit complicated. At least Edward knows, even if he would rather not, Rosalie needs someone to know until she has to tell Emmett and the chief.
Alice and Bella are unique, I'm sure that after getting to know them, they're wonderful.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 3:38 AM Title: Cop and Copper
I've seen there are four chapters so far, so I'm glad that you continued, how, that I still need to find out ;)
Date: 26 Sep 2012 1:33 AM Title: Saved
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 25 Sep 2012 9:06 PM Title: Saved
Wow, I'm not sure what to say. I guess everyone has skeletons in there closets. Edward seems closed off and like he said she has no verbal filter where he is concerned. Maybe he'll eventually trust her and open up.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 7:47 PM Title: Saved
Holy Schazam! Lexi- Our Bella is really something in this story and I find that I indeed love her. I have always Loved BeBella, but I truly must say that I am really digging on this Bella and CopWard for sure.... great chapter and thanks for the update
Date: 25 Sep 2012 7:18 PM Title: Saved
Such a good chapter! I really like this Bella! I haven't read anything like this story before!
Date: 25 Sep 2012 7:15 PM Title: Saved
She is getting right to the point and he is not sure how to handle it lol
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 7:05 PM Title: Saved
Loving the story! Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 6:58 PM Title: Saved
:-) I like it! More please
Date: 25 Sep 2012 6:30 PM Title: Saved
I am rather shocked they asked guys in to obtain sex without even really knowing them. Seems rather a masculine trick to me. Women are usually more careful. Except the bar floosies.
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:38 PM Title: Saved
wow...what a nice chapter....sorry if that word doesn't exactly describe it, but it was just sweet and honest how she zoned in on him with an almost tourettes-like quality....it moved me and I love it when that happens. can't wait to see what happens next, but I certainly will....thanks for posting so quickly!
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:29 PM Title: Saved
absolutely loving this unique, unexpected version of Bella!
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:00 PM Title: Saved
you are doing a great job . love your story
Date: 25 Sep 2012 3:08 PM Title: Saved
Awww! That ending was so sweet! I think I may love your Copward almost as much as I love the Skip! LOL!
Rhonda
Date: 25 Sep 2012 2:41 PM Title: Saved
nice unexpected twist-really engaging story-but what happened to the lasagne!!!
Date: 25 Sep 2012 2:36 PM Title: Saved
Wow strange Bella but i love her
Date: 25 Sep 2012 12:23 PM Title: Dreams
Very interesting start. It's different, and I like it. Can't wait to see a little more of this Bella. She seems interesting.
Date: 25 Sep 2012 6:29 AM Title: Dreams
Oh God you just made my day :) I live close to the police station and pass every day the fire station goign to my work, and always think of Third Watch, I kinda take a look to the guys when they are out there, and I always hope to find a Bosco or Ty, that show was awesome, I could see the re runs over and over, so now picturing Rob has a NYP, OMG!!!! I hope this is uptadated has fast has Riders..
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 2:44 AM Title: Fifteen
Great chapter. Alice and Bella are definately out there. Poor Edward, he seems likes he wants to like be he's just not sure if he should. Just keep Tanya away!! :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 2:42 AM Title: Cop and Copper
Loved this first chapter. So excited to read another one of your stories. Can't wait to see where you take this.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 1:19 AM Title: Dreams
OMG... Alice and Bella are out there. LOL They always say opposites attract. Jasper's all for this hook up but I'm not sure what to think about Edward. I'm really enjoying your story.
Date: 25 Sep 2012 12:42 AM Title: Cop and Copper
Only the first chap and I love it! I think Jasper and Edward have just figured out that you don't go against Alice :)
Date: 24 Sep 2012 10:28 PM Title: Dreams
I like this Edward and Jasper they are funny and real. Great story so far.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 9:34 PM Title: Cop and Copper
Great story so far, keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 8:31 PM Title: Dreams
I really like this story so far. All the characters are very quirky and interesting. Looking forward to see how you get Bella and Edward to have a one on one conversation and form a relationship. Please update soon !!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 6:25 PM Title: Dreams
Thank goodness he didn't hook up with Tanya. I'm tired of reading stories where he hooks up with the skank
Date: 24 Sep 2012 4:04 PM Title: Dreams
I wasn't sure if he would end up with Tanya. Thank god he Didnt like her, have to laugh about the braces:-) Can't wait to see how the night goes over at the girls apartment. They keep commenting on ages, so how old is everyone?
Date: 24 Sep 2012 2:27 PM Title: Dreams
I love this story! Keep the chapters coming! When I see an update alert, it makes me happy!!
Date: 24 Sep 2012 2:17 PM Title: Dreams
Thank you no hook ups with the Skank Ho. I wondered if you were loosing it there. LOL
Date: 24 Sep 2012 1:02 PM Title: Dreams
I am loving this story so much. I really can't wait for more of it.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 12:58 PM Title: Dreams
Such a great story so far! I can't wait to read more! Please make it a full length story!!!!
Date: 24 Sep 2012 12:49 PM Title: Dreams
Thanks for no Tanya :-)
Date: 24 Sep 2012 9:28 AM Title: Dreams
charming story-loking forward to see how it unfolds
Date: 24 Sep 2012 8:36 AM Title: Dreams
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 24 Sep 2012 7:03 AM Title: Dreams
Edward seems to have a self-image problem? women think he's good looking, but only good for a fuck? poor baby...I like the way this story feels, like I'm in an episode of a police drama....love that Rose and Emmett are going to try to raise their kid....love that Edward won't live with an infant. Where's he going to go?
Date: 24 Sep 2012 6:52 AM Title: Dreams
Thanks for letting him stay away from Tanya dont know why I hate her so lol
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 6:28 AM Title: Dreams
Aww i'm addicted , i can't wait for more
please update soon
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 6:16 AM Title: Dreams
Damn he loves his job. Drunk driver suck hope she gets the chair (even though realistically I know it's only 5 yrs for vehicular homicide.)
Date: 24 Sep 2012 3:35 AM Title: Cop and Copper
Another great beginning. I feel for Bella, I sure hope Edward doesn't cancel on dinner. And don't get me started on Tanya. Looking forward to mte.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 9:24 PM Title: Cop and Copper
awesome. just awesome. i loved the fast pace. there is a real life quality to your story. i just lved it !
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2012 7:01 PM Title: Fifteen
Awe! Poor Bella. She is really gonna start feeling bad about herself if Edward blows her off to fuck Tayna. I totally understand her, I have a touch of OCD myself. It is a lot worse when you are under stress. I am sure she was very upset thinking she was going to see the freak that kidnapped her. Thanks for updating! :~)
Date: 23 Sep 2012 4:01 PM Title: Fifteen
Sexylexicullen -- I'd pretty much read anything you write and I think I have too! :))
So hoping this will be a full- length fic - I'd love to see where this goes.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2012 7:39 AM Title: Fifteen
Wonderful chapter, looking forward to more. :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2012 5:14 AM Title: Fifteen
Is B autistic or OCD w/nervousness? Rose a cop plus prego by Em, priceless! This is an entertaining story.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 4:07 AM Title: Fifteen
What was Bella talking so fast to Charlie about??? He cant get out of going to dinner
Date: 23 Sep 2012 2:49 AM Title: Fifteen
Good story. What I get from this is everyone thinks Bella is coocoo. So Edward says she is pretty but he is NOT interested. Okay. Tanya is his type and he is looking to get laid not have a relationship. Alice really needs to stop trying to SELL Bella. She cheapens the girl. I am not ALice's biggest fan. I hate pushy people.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2012 2:18 AM Title: Fifteen
Yay! They didn't have to actually see the inside of the courtroom....sad Officer Cullen doesn't feel good enough for our girl.... hum.... perhaps he needs to see Bella's therapist...just saying..... ey, Rose is pregnant.... oh boy!
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2012 1:54 AM Title: Cop and Copper
Elongate!!!! Yes, lots you can do, you're, of course extremely capable, and very creative............on to the next chapter
Date: 23 Sep 2012 12:11 AM Title: Fifteen
Bella is a little crazy , but i like her
edward is a little cold but i will for sure like him more in à few chapters
I can't wait for next chapter.
Date: 22 Sep 2012 10:56 PM Title: Fifteen
15 years is not bad. He could have gotten less....this Bella is quite weird! Edward, the hero? Not so much, I think. Is he going to fuck Tanya? Yuck! I see a friendship building between Edward and Rosalie. I'm glad he told her that he know Emmett was the father....yeah, I'll read. I like your stuff; love some of it!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 10:55 AM Title: Cop and Copper
OK, I'm in for the long ride. Your fiction is a fine one. Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2012 7:13 PM Title: Cop and Copper
I was going to read this on Fanfiction but that website has been pissing me off. So I made and account here just to read this story and re-read all your other stories.
Anyways, Can I just say that one chapte and I already have a place for Copward in my heart! I mean just imagining him in the uniform is enough but yeah. Love the chapter, and I'm looking forward to reading more!!! Literally can't wait I'm like bouncing in my seat from excitement for chapter 2!!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 4:42 PM Title: Cop and Copper
Hi, if I see a story labeled AU, I think it is supernatural (with or without vamps, but still supernatural). If your characters al all human you should label the fic AH
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2012 2:31 PM Title: Cop and Copper
I really liked it. And was so excited to see another story of yours. I vote no drabble. Anything else would be great.
Date: 21 Sep 2012 1:03 PM Title: Cop and Copper
Here is the deal. You write I read. I think this is worth elongating. Perhaps just a short story of less than 60,000 words. Just see where it goes..
Date: 21 Sep 2012 12:52 PM Title: Cop and Copper
I like the idea of this story but I dont like that Edward is just learning the ropes. Its a complete 180 from his total control in Quiet Storm. And some of the things that Emmett and Rosalie are doing just doesn't sound right for cops. I mean like pick and chosing what call they are going to answer. I guess real cops will do that, however I cant see them racing to a scene to see who gets there first and then leaving so they dont have to do paperwork. Gosh that does not pain a pretty picture for the police force at all. lol. I guess I am just so in love with a possesive, very in control Edward. And you could still turn him into one I guess, we just haven't seen enough to know for sure.
Date: 21 Sep 2012 9:42 AM Title: Cop and Copper
Definately worth elongating it. I loved it. Definately loved it. Keep it up!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 7:10 AM Title: Cop and Copper
Great so far can't wait to see wat happens next update soon
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2012 1:27 AM Title: Cop and Copper
This is definitely worth elongating. Maybe not a full novel. Just a short novella.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2012 10:03 PM Title: Cop and Copper
Oh i loved this!!! Cant wait for more!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2012 9:15 PM Title: Cop and Copper
I LOVE IT... please continue this... a full length story would be awesome...
Date: 20 Sep 2012 8:33 PM Title: Cop and Copper
Such a great start! Make it a full length story please! You are such an amazing writer! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 20 Sep 2012 7:02 PM Title: Cop and Copper
Lexi once again you have me hooked on a story! I think you should definately continue with Copward....he sounds like a keeper!
Rhonda
Date: 20 Sep 2012 6:43 PM Title: Cop and Copper
How about a full story
Date: 20 Sep 2012 5:43 PM Title: Cop and Copper
Whoo hoo new story. Love it
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2012 4:59 PM Title: Cop and Copper
WOW, that was very good!
Date: 20 Sep 2012 3:37 PM Title: Cop and Copper
I'm glad you posted this again on TWCS. I read it on FFN, gave my opinion, then read it again here. The format seems to make for easier reading. I hope you choose to expand this. I will definitely put it on alert and read.
As an aside.....will you finish Have Mercy Baby and Made In The Shades? I know writers need to be inspired to write and the muse takes you guys where she will, but I love both those stories and just wondered.....