Date: 22 Jul 2015 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Jasper!
Date: 22 Jul 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it! Go Jasper!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it!
Date: 21 Aug 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter!
Date: 21 Aug 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
Fantastic story so far!
Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter!
Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it! Poor Bella! Is Peter okay?
Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it! Poor Jasper!
Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Jasper!
Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Awesome story so far!
Date: 22 Jun 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 29
I could not stop reding this. thank you for writing something refreshing.
Date: 05 Oct 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 29
Sorry I haven't reviewed yet but I read straight thru the story. I really like it and I was relieved the E&J resolved the mistake right away. Looking forward to more. :)
Date: 02 Jan 2013 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awww, I hope Edward gets the full story, he needs to know that Felix won't ever be a threat to them.
Jane x
Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love the house. I'm glad that Bella's helping and giving Jasper the chance to speak to Edward.
Jane x
Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 23
Lol, don't mess with Bella.
Jane x
Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
And the chase is on.
Jane x
Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
Awww, poor Edward he's devastated. I hope he gives Jasper a chance to explain.
Jane x
Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
Why didn't Rosalie warn Jasper that Felix was there, he could have explained then who he was then to Edward. Don't you just hate it when ex's won't get the message?
Jane x
Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
Uh-oh, sounds like Edward's bubble has just been popped.
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, Jasper's going to have a permanent reminder of what went on in that elevator, he's always going to know exactly where Edward's cum was running down the wall. It's not wrong of him to want more......I want more, lol.
Now, I know you've been flamed and I'm not here to do that. I'm the last person to even pretend I know everything especially when I'm not brave enough to post anything I write. You have a really good story and if you haven't got a beta you need one or maybe just check more carefully before you post. You change your tenses within your sentences from past to present and vice versa. Uncomfort is not a word it would either be uncomfortable or discomfort and seethed would be used more like 'I seethed with anger,' you meant sheathed, all of these things a beta would pick up for you.
I hope you take this in the spirit it's intended, you have a good story and with a little bit of attention it will be even better. I can't wait to read more.
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
That blow job was hot, now Edward need to brace himself for the elevator ride of his life. Bwahahahahaha!!
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
And it's not only all of Edward's dreams that are coming true. Are their mirrors in this elevator, cause they're about to get a little steamed up, lol.
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
Deep breath Edward, all your dreams are about to come true, hahaha.
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ohhh, things are getting exciting. *rubs hands together, grinning*
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Boy does he know. Now who's going to clue Edward in that green is Jasper's favourite colour?
Janex
Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ah, don't we all love a good meddle in someone else's business?........All in a good cause of course. Hahaha!!
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
Lol, if I was Edward I'd put up and shut up and do as I was told.
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
See, they really are as bad as each other, but then that makes them perfect for one another.
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ooooh, plotting, scheming and more plotting, love it.
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ahhh, you can trust the girls to do their devilish work and get these two together, mwahahahaha!!
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
These two are as bad as each other, good job Jasper has his own bathroom, poor Edward's going to have to suffer for a bit.
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
I know Jasper's his boss, but jeez that was very formal, are people not on first name terms in this company? Lol, it probably suits Edward's 1900's persona.
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Belly-Boo, hahahahaha!!! Seriously though, this is the last thing that Bella needs, I hope Peter comes home in one piece and, more importantly, alive.
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
No messing from Rosalie then, lol. As brash as she was at least she made Jasper realise that he wasn't really in love with Felix. Lol, I'd have chopped holes in clothes as well.
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my God! Poor Jasper. "It's not what it looks like." What the fuck? What else could it look like? Maybe if Felix was a urologist it might be a bit different.........nah, it is what it is and he should grow up and stop with the whiny excuse. I hope Rosalie hunts him down and gives him hell. Lol.
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
A works night out, woohoo!! Always good for Monday morning gossip about all the embarrassing and eyebrow raising things our colleagues get up to.
Jane x
Date: 02 Nov 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lol, I know how Edward feels with the evil laptop of doom.
Jane x
Date: 25 Oct 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow, pretty awesome!
Will there be more?
Date: 19 Oct 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am enjoying this even if I do get a bit frustrated by the short chapters!!
Author's Response:
Its a drabble fic, they are only supposed to be 100-200 words each.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
I have always considered myself a writer. A writer or poetry, stories, little saying etc and it has only been recently that i have decided to share what i have written.
I have posted a story on Fan Fiction using the characters from vampire academy and will finish that before i start on my twilight ones.
My point is you should really be worried about reviews but more on the fact that writting makes you feel. Dont get me wrong it is always nice to see what others think but dont let the lack there of stop you from continuing your story.
update soon
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well Im liking it! Write more soon. Thanks for writing.
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
I dont really like drabbles cause its frustrating to wait. But I like slash and I need a fix. LOL! Thanks for writing.