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Reviewer: Kezzasilver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 81

This was a amazing fantastic epic story. Thanks so much for writing it.

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Like he would really not have security.

Reviewer: MissVicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 56

Very intense and hard core. She's a better woman than I. But then my list is different from hers. ...

HOWEVER, I do have one comment though, if you are waxing, there is not a way to do most of it EVERY week, legs alone need longer than that b4 they can do them again. "Missing" waxing for 2 weeks is not a thing that should exist in this scenario, makes for MF hot shaving scene though.  :P

Reviewer: MissVicki Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 36

Oh=KAY. Have been reading on my phone & it won't let me review.

Wow.

So far: I am surprised that the plant Vic gave her didn't have a wireless camera in it spying on her; Is Edward "technically" the 1st person she has had sex w/ bc Jerk-wad raped her w/ a candle? has she ever been consensually w/ someone else (seeing as she left RIGHT after the attack?)


The party. Yes, she was wrong, but daymn! he fell down on the job too, big time.

He did not recognise the need for HIM to keep in mind the need for HIS behaviours to also be modified as a Dom now that he is in a D/s relationship w/ a girlfriend, not someone solely a sub. Even when experienced, knowing what to expect and being able to react appropriately, it doesn't mean that it wouldn't hurt you if your monogamous partner was behaving in a non-monogamous way. D-uh.

Miss Bitch started it off by (actually) disrespecting HIM by touching his sub without permission, not cool. Even the kiss he could be excused from, but the second he shouldn't have allowed (won't go there, that gets complicated)

Then, LIAR! won't play w/ anyone else? He allowed Vanessa to be part of their scene when he discussed what he wanted to do and allowed her to be there when he got Bella off bc he knew V got off on that sort of thing- - It's one thing when experienced partners do something impromptu; but new partners, especially w/ public scening....yikes. I see where he was pushing Bella's boundaries, but he was doing something that no one would be aware of as long as she was quiet- buthetoldV and had her there. Technically, he just scened w/ Vanessa right then, as well as Bella!

Bella had never been w/ him to a party b4 and he gave her NO info on HIS expected interactions w/ people; no prepping on separating "girlfriend" from "sub"; AND, other subs are who she will eventually be mostly interacting w/ in less "formal" situations than this one- who apparently are his friends, she should have been formally introduced to. Part of her upset could have been averted from the outset if, when she came out of the bathroom, he had formally introduced them to her and rewarded her w/ the knowledge of their respect; rather than her coming out and witnessing what looked like fawning (not to mention what she heard out of context). 

I'm sure I missed a few points; but there, in a nutshell, BAD DOMWARD!!

                                *ahem, steps down from soapbox*


Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 4

nice dream

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

oh boy

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

forced domination

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

interesting passenger

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

Holy crap! That was HOTTTTT! 

Reviewer: LADYREB Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 81

I absolutely loved this story and especially the fact that it was a long one.  I can't wait for the continuation as to where all of these characters are going in their lives.

Thank you so much,

Ruby2sday

 

Reviewer: reggiec92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 37

Although years late I have to say that I agree with pennycocktail,Bella may be Edward's sub but she's also his girlfriend and she can't just turn that part of herself off...He was in the wrong and he should have apologised,Bella took all the blame and it just doesn't sit right with me...It gives me the impression that Edward only sees Isabella,his sub and not Bella,his girlfriend!!!On a happier note I've loved the story up to this point!

Reviewer: mirveil Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 81

I loved all characters of this story but I have a soft spot for the uncles...

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 81

This story has been amazing!  I was so sad about getting to the end of it and then I realized that I had already put the sequel into my favorites to read next!  So once again I'm happy & so thankful that you love these characters.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2013 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 78

So true about marriage!  I always say marriage is one of the hardest things but best things you will ever do.  As long as you don't dig a six foot grave and put your spouse in it.  People who have never been married can not wrap their head around the fact that you can madly love a person and still want to bury their body.  ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 69

There were so many great parts to this chapter!  I laughed so hard at all the pregnancy stuff.  You are an amazing writer! I will miss this story when it ends! 

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2013 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: lmc123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

Am loving your story, if you don't know about this stuff you write about it in a really human way, much more realistic than most stories like this x x

Reviewer: stoohey Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 81

Michele,

Awesome story.  Thank you for sharing your talent.

Susan

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 81

WOW! Just finished People Like Us, and I truly loved this story!. thanks you and hope for an update soon on the sequel to this story! 

Thanks again I really enjoyed reading!

Reviewer: DanaLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 17

I wanted to let you know that I am absolutely loving this story!!!! This the first one of yours I have read and when Edward had to leave Bella in Italy, I cried!!! I never cry because of a story, but you brought me to tears. Great work!!!! I can't wait to read the rest of it! Keep writing and don't let anyone discourage you! Dana in FL

Reviewer: Sandalyn05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 81

Wow! What an awesome story.  I couldn't stop reading it.  I loved all the family characters.  I especially loved the love story between Bella and Edward.  You made me laugh, cry and have a lot of other emotions throughout the story.  You are a great writer.  Now on to reading the Family.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 81

Why did edward yell at rose to find bella if she cared after the accident, if he dodnt blame bella?

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 70

I couldn't enter the rec'd site without an invite.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 68

Damn! I wish the pictures would show up. I like the added visuals.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 58

I love the addition of the photos but most of them have been removed.

:(

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 56

Honestly, why is it that she really doesn't get it. I think that his name for her is fitting. She is a little girl playing a big woman's game. She really needs to get her shit together and she is really annoying me! Lord. Her behavior is just like my 14 year old child and I'm really curious as to when she is going to grow the fuck up!

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2013 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

something is wrong with this. I can't get past chapter 34!

Reviewer: Alaska88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

Just throught i would let you know i think you wrote a great story!

I have read it once already , but like a good book had to reread it!

Thanks!!  Lynda Jacox

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 60

still no photos

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 81

What an amazing adventure... I laughed and cried so much and can not wait to begin A Family Like Ours!!

Reviewer: elke Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 81

FANTASTIC!!   This was a real joy to read.  Thank you sooo much for writing.  Bella's come a long way from that ALONE girl, with no self esteem and no one loving her,  to the capable mother, wife, lover, sister, daughter, artist.   She still needs Edward's assurance to keep growing, but much better than  early in the story.

I am looking forward to the sequel later, and to Hope Springs sooner.

Thanks again and keep writing.

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 81

Wow, Michelle, thank you, thank you for such a wonderful story. This has been a wonderful journey.  Two years of your life have fed two weeks of mine. :-)  I learned a lot about myself through your words and about how I can have a different kind of relationship with my kids.  Looking forward to, 'A Family Like Ours'.  (Q.  Why do they eat lamb all of the time and why are the nurses always portrayed as star struckand/or unprofessional ?)

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 80

I see the end on sight *sigh*. This is such a great story! SUPERB!  

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 75

Wow, I'm going to miss them when you're done. Thank you so much!  I think the 'slave' thing will work for 3 months, but not be renewed.

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 74

Love it!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 73

Holy cow, this entry was huge!  So much happened!  This brought back so many memories of my own twins birth ( a planned C-section, so much easier!  I was done in an hour and no pain! ). Yeah, 2 crying infants that won't sleep, been there! Thanks for this one, it was perfect!

 

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 69

WTF! Holy Hell!  Creaky put his foot in it. That's gonna take A LOT to fix...

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 66

So nice to have a healthy E back!  Not a fan of 'Giagantor', I would've safe worded that toy!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 64

Bravo! You've outdone yourself!

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

*Big Smile* Loved this chapter !

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 63

FINALLY!  THE WEDDING!!!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 62

Love it!  :-)

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

CATFIGHT !!!!!

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

No spanking when impaired....I'm glad you made that clear at the begining. No discipline should be given when the giver is not in complete control, or whe the receiver is incapacitated in any way.  Nice chapter

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 11

Perfectly written

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 60

Awwww...lovely

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 61

Love this story, it owns me! Why does Renee have to be so horrid?!  Are you going to give a back story to explain why she's evil?  That whole scene with her propositioning E was just sick.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 4

Best chapter so far....yummo

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

My, my....she has alot of self control.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds promising.

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 56

Wonderful!  Thank you

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 55

Delightful and inspiring :-)

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 53

Great work;-)

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 52

Great chapter

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 50

WTF?  Oh u gotta work this out

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 49

Now theres a happy new year for you!  ;-)

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 48

Wow! I thought they might not make it there...

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 47

Pay back.....!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 46

Addicted to you!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 45

Love it!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 45

Wonderful!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 43

Awesome

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 42

Captivating :-)

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 41

Excellent!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 40

Wonderful!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 39

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 38

Wonderful!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 33

Oh dear!  I hope all is well, but hijacking a amply tradition of cooking together maybe wasn't the best idea. Esme is probably overcome with joy.

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 32

Wonderful!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 31

Good grief, these 2 together!? Why not just beat her senseless?

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 30

Good cheer, great recommendation ! :-p

 

 

 

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 29

Love it!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 28

Someone better learn to answer her phone!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 27

Lovely

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 26

Oh dear! Yeah this behavior will really get her to open up!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great work!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 23

Great &sexy

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh NOoooo! Vicky & Jim! that's never good news!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh dear!!  Greg cliffy

,:-)

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 18

What a great story. Wow, Garret is SO STRICT! 

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 17

Good one!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

Home at last! :-). 

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 15

Hey, E was partially responsible for the pay misunderstanding, HE didn't commit ate very well in that instance.  Good transition piece!

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 14

Good one.

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

Is the secrecy part of he allure? Why hide?   Great chapter :-)

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wonderful ch.  excellent

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

HOT DAMN! Y-E-Ssssss

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

OMG! Sofa King Hawt! 

Reviewer: silkenabrown Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 81

Im so sad it ended :[ i want more! <3

Reviewer: tantevicky Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi,

 

I read this stroy in german, from Haifischbecken.

But i wont say thank you for this wundervull, sexy stroy. It`s great and so much more......better then "Fifty Shades" and i hope, I can sometimes read this story in a book or can see this in TV.

Good luck for you

Vicky

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 45

There is a popular phrase in my country that says, love me a little bit less, and treat me a little bit better. This comes to mind when thinking of Charlie.  Anyway, let's concentrate on the positive I understand why you feel that Bella cannot move on until she deals with her ghost and hopefully really forgiving her father will truly set her free.  Loving how Edward is behaving towards her and the comment about making babies completely melted me, and i love that she called Carlisle dady c and mon to esme, bet that was the best Xmas present for them.  I liked how the BDSM confession between Edward and Bella went.  I think edward was indeed upset, and he has all the right to be, but he put Bella's need first.  I like how contradicting Bella is sometimes, she think of herself as a strong woman and repeatedly shouts to everyone how strong she is, but the moment things don't go her way she is everything but strong.  And I think that a very human characteristic BTW, thank you for including recs

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 45

 "Bella is more like you than you both probably know..." sorry but I don't agree, unless Edward ended the phrase with... But she is a good person unlike you. If Charlie is pushing Bella for the f**king 12 steps, well that the most selfish thing in the word.  I'm sorry for saying this but I was really looking forward to Xmas with the Cullens and Charlie totally ruined this chapter for me, hope he gets out of the way so I can enjoy each chapter again. Even the Cullens have changed around him, everyone wanted to kill him at some point and now they are all happy about him. WTF, not even Rosalie is saying anything :( Don't take me wrong I love your story, otherwise I wouldn't bother with the reviews, and you wouldn't get such a reaction if I wasn't involved. But the Cullens except for Edward has been a bunch of hypocrites in their dealing with Charlie.  Carlisle should look after Bella, and not an estranger, stopping edward was out of line, edward is too polite sometimes the Alice adoration towards Charlie literally made me sick, and Esme telling Charlie what a great man he is, was even worst  I had to stop this chapter several times because I was getting upset while reading it.  Sorry for the strong reaction, must be the hormones If I were Edward, I would be very upset with Bella for sharing such personal information about their lifestyle with her father without talking to edward first, no idea what she was thinking about

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 43

I'm really sorry about the baby and wish you sister the best of luck if she decides to try again.  Now getting back to the chapter, Is it too much to ask that Jacob never recovers from the coma, or better yet that he doesn't make it to the new year? As long as he lives, there's a threat.  The part about Eleazar was heartbreaking, poor man. Kudos for Edward, he handled the crisis really well. So the vanity fair uh, not bad. PS: still not certain about Charlie, he seems like jerk, what is he playing at? Now he is the concerned father? Hope someone makes him see what a pitiful excuse of a father he really is. Good for Edward for putting him in his place. PS2: if Bella did the car trick to me and I was a Dom, she wouldn't be able to sit for a week

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 42

That was quite an interesting weekend, the suspension scene was really cool. Loving how closer these two are getting Looking forward to Xmas at the Cullens, hope he will propose there, I mean after all he keeps seeing Bella pregnant or a small child.  My feelings toward Charlie are quite mixed. On the one hand I want him out of the picture, he is a shitty father and being sober does not change the past, but on the other hand I want Bella truly and completely happy and it seams that Charlie is part of her happiness.  I do hope that Edward makes him sweat for a while

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 41

Just what I need, a bit of kinkiness and awesome news at the end :)

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 40

So glad that Rosalie had her revenge, too bad that Jake is still alive. The chapter was painful to read and very angsty but you did a great job. I'm very thankful that nothing truly grave happened and everyone will be able to move forward. I'm trying to be positive and think that the girls won't be traumatised for long

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 39

The have a two hour Gap until Andy arrives I'm dreading next chapter.  Please don't be too cruel, Bella has suffered enough and Rose as well Ok I'm mentally preparing for next chapter, I have faith in you See you next chapter

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 38

Gotta love Kate for her "Team Edward" comment, so cute I was upset with Edward about not explaining Bella what she would really encounter on the play party, now I see he is truly clueless  The conversation with Garret was fantastic "You need to wise up... You are not single anymore"  One of the thing I'm truly loving about your story aside from all the kinky love between Edward and Bella is the real friendship between the characters.  Awesome read, thank you for sharing it with us  PS: so glad that Edward apologised sincerely PS2: interesting that Bella is referring to herself and his submissive when she is collared.  Wonder if she is aware of it PS3: I'm dreading the uneasy feeling from Edward. Hope I'm wrong

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 37

I'm glad that Bella put her foot down about the other girls.  I still think he got away too easily because he did not apologise to her.  I know they have to divide the lines between D/s and boyfriend/ girlfriend, but as her Dom, he should have explain on advance what could happen instead of expecting a girl with little to no experience to come with the right questions

 

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 36

This chapter was quite upsetting, ok so it's not one of Bella's finest moments but Edward did not behave good either. I was completely pissed about him letting the girls get all slutty on him.  bad, bad boy

He should be the one receiving his punishment and not her, he can go all possessive and jelows but she she is jealous (and with reasons to be) instead of assuring her, he disregards hem completely 

Pour boy has much to learn

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