Date: 15 Aug 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 34
One thing that bugs me is, if emmet investigated Jim, how come he did not know his real identity?
Poor Bella I think she left the room too soon, I think esme is overwhelmed with gratitude, definitely not upset
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 33
Does it mean that Jacob and Jim are out of the picture
Is she really not going back to the apartment?
Date: 14 Aug 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 31
So glad the week from hell is over
Poor Bella, why are women in general such bitches to he?
im glad how she handled Angela, she totally deserve it and I'm happy that Mona is out of the picture
so glad that I'm reading this while it's completed, that Cliffy was EVIL
Im praying that this two won't make any real damage to Bella, I know Kipling the tension is good but I'm praying that there won't be any rape or serious damage
Anyway on to the next chapter
Date: 13 Aug 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 28
Well it had to happen sooner or later. Hope she can deal with that side of fame
I'm loving every single chapter, I'm truly enjoying how their relationship is evolving
Date: 13 Aug 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 81
Amazing......that's all that needs to be said.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
Will they ever get this right?
I was proud of Bella for finally telling Edward about Jim; his reaction is not quite what I expected
Hope Bella chooses to stay, even if he does not deserve it
Date: 10 Aug 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh Bella, swallow your pride and get out of that apartment pronto!
Not a chance that Ridley is going to behave
... Uffff this is getting even more interesting
Date: 10 Aug 2012 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
"Temper tantrums scare the shit out of me" interesting she said that... As she is the one having a tantrum on a daily basis. I really like this chapter, it was a difficult one and for a moment I though that all would take sides and Edward would take all the blame. Glad you did differently and happy that the chapter ended on a happy note
Date: 09 Aug 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
Uff, this was a tuff chapter. I truly felt fit Edward, he is trying to do the right thing but Bella is not making it easy for him
Hope Bella learn to truly trust him in the near future or they'll have a bumpy ride ahead of them. I know Bella keeps telling herself that she does trust him but I don't think she is 100% there yet
Date: 09 Aug 2012 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh! I'm really enjoying this, thank you for sharing your talent with us
Its sexy, tender, fun, erotic and so very interesting
On to the next chapter
Date: 03 Aug 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 81
Many thanks for a wonderful love story. I love it!
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 81
you did a great job on this story. I cant believe i finished it
thank you for this lovely story. i will remember it for a very long time. I have to say i was a little disappointed when edward left bella in the hospital to fend for herself then proceeded to tell her she was the most important person in his life. well i think what a person does instinctively in more telling than when they have time to think about their actions. I noticed also that edward didnt even seem to be sorry for leaving her for 2 hours. I mean carlisle was with the twins for petes sake. I just dont get it. but speaking about the story as a whole, you brought out every emotion in me i could possibly think of, and to me that is a sign of a great story teller. thanks.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 80
i enjoyed the chapter but i thought that the discription of what esmes parents did to her room was a little more disgusting then it had to be.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 76
i didnt notice the lack of length to this chapter until it was mentioned. Its all about the content and i think you did a great job revealing the real purpose behind the dom/slave assignment. I also liked bella telling alice off for her selfishness and self centerness. I like it when things dont go well for the cullens, because it becomes a true test of thier character to see how they work things out. does that make sense? well it makes sense in my own head.
Date: 16 Jul 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
Holy crap! That was a very emotional chapter!
The question is what is Ali up to?
Ido t think Angela is going to show either:(
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Beegeez! F'ing Jacob what a dick!
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Idk but I like it!
Date: 11 Jul 2012 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 51
omg i never thought i would ever come a across a writer who live in south africa, i actually live in durban! anyway i'm really enjoying this:) i should be studying but this story is way more entertaining:)
Date: 03 Jul 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 81
This has been an amazing story to read. It really says a lot about you as a writer when your readers cry with the characters and also get angry with them at the things they do. I have loved reading every chapter of this story and I truly look forward to reading the sequel. Outstanding job!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Jul 2012 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 80
This was a great chapter, but I'm sad now because I only have one more to go before the story is over.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 78
I'm glad they worked things out so quickly. Loved the way Bella handled the guy.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 77
Okay, I'm concerned.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 76
Short but still very good!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 75
I'm curious to see if he controlls himself during his next movie or abuses his control.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 73
I can't believe I'm almost to the end. I'll miss these two and their crazy family.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 70
You are doing a fabulous job with this story!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 69
Wow!!! So much excitement in this chapter.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 68
Well, I'm glad they seem to have mended their problems, but I must say I'm extremely disappointed in the way Edward handled Bella coming to him about becoming pregnant. How quickly he forgets the fact that he pushed her away during their honeymoon because he was too afraid to admit his fear. He then left her without discussing it but had no problems discussing such a serious matter with Jasper instead of his wife. After he got shot, he had is little "peen malfunction" and with held that info as well. During both times she was exceptionally patient. She did come to him and maybe she told Alice first but it was only because she had a sudden realization then broke down. The point is, they both have issues, but he doesn't realize that he does the same thing sometimes. Just to let you know this in no way reflects your writing. I'm absolutely hooked, but sometimes I'd like to through the characters through the window!
As for their current pregnancy news, I can't wait to see how this plays out.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 66
Oookaaayy, this explanation should be interesting.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 64
This chapter had me in tears.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 63
Renee is just evil. I can't believe Charlie tried to pull the "protective father" crap. It really irritated me. I mean, come on the guy was never a father and who knows what would have happened to Bella if she hadn't met Edward. He hasn't earned that right and I found it to be very disrespectful to both Edward and Bella. I'm glad Sue at least tried to rein him in.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 62
Great chapter. I'm glad to hear they won't turn 24/7. I don't think it would fit the characters. I'm glad to hear she will eventually become pregnant.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 61
Wow!!!! That was one emotional roller coaster.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 60
I think everyone should read your story. I just can't seem to get enough!!!
Date: 30 Jun 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 58
I loved this chapter. Edward didn't pull his Dom card on her and was the sensitive fiancée she needed.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 57
Yes, I'm so happy!!!!!!
Date: 30 Jun 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 56
He definitely was harder on Bella and she did get caught up in her work and neglect herself, but Edward's job has had him keep some impossible hours too. He can raise his voice to her and overreact and that's fine, but if she does it it is disrespectful. She has a journal and is to write her feelings down, but when she does she is scolded for feeling that way. It is a journal. I just think sometimes he doesn't apply the same rules to himself. I mean, he forgot to tell her he betrayed her confidence and Bella lets him off the hook, but when the last incident with Alice occurred he didn't even truly listen and had her believe she really should have been punished. Now he is going to use what little time they have together to teach her a lesson about neglect. It's a great story I'm just venting at Edward for some of his decisions. Perhaps Mr. Bristles needs to get acquainted with Edward's rear end. LOL!!!
Date: 30 Jun 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 55
Another great chapter!
Date: 30 Jun 2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 54
Great chapter. I wondered how he would handle the scene without breaking his own limits.
As for the Riley situation. Wow!!! I'm glad Bella told Edward, but she did ask him not to say anything to anyone else due to his mother's extreme embarrassment. What does he do, he calls Emmett and tells anyway. Brother or not, he should have kept that personal information to himself. Plus, he stuck his nose in someone else's business. Can't wait till Bella finds out he opened his mouth.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 51
Every chapter just leaves you wanting more!!!!
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 50
Murder....really??? The guy had a gun, beat her and was going to rape her again. What a joke! Poor Bella!
As for Edward, I must say I'm disappointed with him. Bella never said she was going to keep the "Ali" thing from him. She simply said that she gave her a couple of days to come clean on her own and then she was telling Jasper and Edward. Now, she is being punished for encouraging Alice to be honest. All he seems to hear is she didn't run and tattle the moment she found out. He really disappointed me with this situation.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 49
Loved this chapter and what you did with Edward.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 45
Yeah, I'm still not on the "Charlie" train, not yet anyway. Charlie was so out of line reprimanding Bella. Did he really think he could do that? First she is a grown woman, and second he has NEVER been any kind of a father.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 43
I hope Charlie doesn't think he suddenly has earned the right to play the all caring father.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 42
I love your story. Can't wait to see what happens with Bella's dad. I hope Edward puts him in his place if he gets out of line.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 40
Oh my gosh, my heart was pounding through this entire chapter!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 37
I'm glad that things are smoothed over. He needed to know how angry some of his actions made her. And she is right, he would have gone balistic if some guy had done that to her.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 36
This was a great chapter. I just simply don't agree with Edward's actions at the party. He went all caveward when she simply danced with someone at the club. I'm mean totally lost it, but it's okay for him to let someone kiss him on the lips in front of her. Then have another sub at his feet? I'm sorry, but that was cruel. I'm don't know the rules, but the kissing part was so hurtful and disrespectful to her and then his "smirks"????
Date: 28 Jun 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. I started to read this because it had so many reviews... How do people get through this?? The writing is SO BAD and sloppy! I spent so much time trying to re-interpret the text ('of' where 'off' should be, missing commas, missing words, completely missing punctuation), that it's impossible to follow the thread of the story.
Back to searching for the gems in the crap-stack. sigh.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
Sorry, but Edward has issues. First, he wants Bella to open up to him. He knows she has issues and no proper upbringing. She finally gets the courage to tell him how she feels and now he is going to punish her??? Wow, that will really make her want to open up the next time. NOT!!! Now, she really needs to tell Edward about Jim and she is holding back because she knows he will get angry. Maybe if he didn't react so harsh every time she might be more comfortable opening up.
Great story. I can't seem to put it down.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Can't even find the words, but wow, Alice sure did lead our poor Bella down the wrong path tonight!!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it..can't stop reading it. Too bad my house cleaning duties have all been neglected as a result..totally worth it!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 81
I have read your story thrice already.and still it made me swoon,laugh,cry,horny and most of all HOPEFUL.that the kind of love that Bella and Edward shared still exists.can't wait for is continuation, "A Family Like Ours".
Date: 22 May 2012 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 20
I am loving this story but it is taking it's toll I am staying up way to late to read I am reading on the train even at work OMG it has taken over my life. Love it love it love it
Date: 10 May 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 81
This was a great story! I can't wait for the sequel and to begin your new story!
Date: 03 May 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 45
I have been reading this for several days now and it is fabulous!! I have not reviewed yet but when I read this chapter I had to stop and review. This was heartwrenching but so realistic! I'm glad you put them on the road to healing, Bella truly needs this in ordering to help with her own self esteem.
Date: 01 May 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 79
Yes!! Please do continue this story with a Family like Ours!! That would be awesome!
Date: 06 Apr 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 62
I so wish the pics thro out this story were still working I would have loved to have seen everyone in their wedding outfits, it sounded so hot.
Date: 27 Mar 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 75
I enjoyed your story so far, but this new agreement is only horrible.
I agree Bella has a big problem at the moment, but Edward should talk direct to her and and doesn't go behind her back to her therapist. There are a lot a women, who has problems after the birth of their children. Such a behavior isn't trustful and honest. What would happened if Paul wasn't right? Bella's mental health would be in jeapardy. Did Paul his diploma in the lottery? The good doctor should talk with his patient and not with her Dom.
The negoation of this "agreement" is a sick joke. Edward gives her a false pretense for change. Again he abuse the trust which has his wife in him. The next point is Bella hasn't the chance to say no to it. Edward takes advantage of the situation shamelessly. At first in Bella's unhealthy state of mind she wants to do everything to fulfill the requirements of her Dom. Then she wears his collar during the negoation what is a big mistake. During the negotiation of new agreements Dom and sub must be equally. So they both can't the right consent, because the Dom has so the upper hand. And when a Dom can't convince the sub by substantive arguments, he doesn't play the trustcard, because it's only emontional blackmail, especially when the sub is collared. It's only poor.
In my eyes the fake-safeword proves Edward's status as poor excuse as a Dom. There is a good reason why some munch groups get rid of such Doms with these manners.
I get it, Edward loves Bella and wants to help her, but he has no right to act like this. Mental health issues are a serious subject and the D/s-lifestyle isn't a therapy.
I'm really happy I'm in a munch group which doesn't tolerate such practice. Paul, Edward and Jasper would be long gone here.
Date: 03 Mar 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 72
I would really love to finish this story and I think this is where I left off but I see that ALL of your pictures are not working. Can you fix this? I would really love to see the pictures while I am reading. Thank you so much. Oh by the way I am really loving your new story Hope Springs.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 81
Best story I've ever read seriously I had happy tears!!!! ;')
Date: 31 Jan 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 79
I thought the unlces plan was genious ;-D LOL. They got Irina really good LOL...
Date: 30 Jan 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 78
I was impressed to how well this chapter developed.It felt real and I loved every second of it ;-).
Date: 27 Jan 2012 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 41
Oh my "Baby Cullen". Can't wait to see how Daddy to be Emmett is until the baby gets here...
Date: 26 Jan 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 66
I loved the twist in the end...
Date: 26 Jan 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 39
Great job. Loved the way Edward could feel something was not right, that is what true soul mate love is all about, well that's my opinion anyway. Can't wait to see what's next...and how guys find their women.
Date: 26 Jan 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 81
Superbe! Impressionnant! Délicieusement tordue!
Encore des rebondissements jusqu'à la fin. Vous m'avez fait rire... et pleurer.
merci pour le petit résumé au début.
Youppi! Le chapitre au complet a été traduit par Google Translate, je ne comprends pas, vous dites que le chapitre a plus de trente-six mille mots, est-ce une erreur? Ma nouvelle version doit traduire à peu près vingt-trois mille mots... Je suis contente d'avoir pu lire la fin. Je croyais que ce n'était pas possible, vu le nombre de mots indiqués.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 80
Merci pour le court résumé au début du chapitre. Franchement j'avais peur de lire le chapitre 79 car je savais qu'il me manquerait la fin...
J'ai attendu pour avoir une meilleure version de Google Translate, lol, mais il me manque quand même une partie, Fuck!
J'ai lu jusqu'au début de la fête d'Halloween. Espérons que vous aurez la gentillesse de faire un court résumé au prochain chapitre.
Vous êtes un merveilleux auteur, mais Please la prochaine histoire, ne jamais dépasser 20,000 mots dans un chapitre, c'est déjà énorme!
C'est le seul reproche que je pourrais faire à votre histoire! LOL, elle est passionnante!
Date: 25 Jan 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 63
I loved this chapter ;-)...But I seriously can't stand Renee she's just horrible.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 81
*Sigh* I just finished re-reading PLU again. I just love this story. I missed seeing the pictures this time though. I cannot wait until AFLO starts! In the meantime, I am enjoying Hope Springs. Thank you for sharing your stories with us.
Author's Response:
hey there dazzledmom,
Thank you so much for rereading my story - that was very brave of you! I had to take the photos down because I had maxed out my photobucket account but I endevour to repost them!! I'm glad that you are enjoying Hope Springs but I miss our PLU Edward and Bella as well - they just keep trying to 'talk' to me!!
Michele
Date: 20 Jan 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 33
<3 the story!!! Are you going to publish it? I would <3 to buy it
Author's Response:
thanks so much - I don't think that I would publish this one - this is Edward and Bella and who on earth could replace them. But perhaps one day I will write an original story that isn't about these awesome characters.
Thanks again,
Michele
Date: 18 Jan 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 81
This has been such an wonderful story
It came to life for me
thank you so much
Date: 14 Jan 2012 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
I don't know if anyone told you, but she will definitely be bruised from the cane.
Date: 13 Jan 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 58
I love this story but the photos are not showing up and I really really really want to see them.
You have written such a great story and I am so glad I found it thanks
Date: 11 Jan 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 60
Is there a place that I can go to see the pictures? I don't mind reading the story without them, but it sure does help!
Author's Response:
Hey there elmarie,
Thanks so much for your review - I will reload the pictures and will let you know what the link is for them - I had to remove them from photobucket because I had maxed out my account!
Michele
Date: 10 Jan 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 81
Some how the notice for this update got lost in my email over the holidays. I am sooooo glad I found it. Thank you for sharing your WONDERFUL story with me. You have done a GREAT GREAT job. I am very sad to see it end. You will definitely be put on author alert. I am looking forward to the continuation of the Cullens and thier many many children!!!!!!! Plus their D/s playtime. Again Thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 10 Jan 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
Still enjoying , thanks
Date: 08 Jan 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Damn for your first story I have to say you are doing a great job. This is awesome
Date: 08 Jan 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 2
Nice fantasy ,painted perfectly ;)
Date: 08 Jan 2012 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looks promising ;)
Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 81
Oh Sweetheart! What an ending! What a story!!!! You have owned me for so long with this, it is only the promise of its continuance that is keeping me from breaking down in tears right now. I know it may be a little while, but I will wait patiently to see how you carry this story further. :)
The scene with her and the kids in the car with those bastards endangering them...I was on edge the whole time. You always pull the truest emotions from me.
Loved it, loved it, LOVED IT!!!!!! Did I mention I freakin loved this story? This is one of only 3 stories that I have ever read in fandom that I would ever want to reread and I guarantee, I will reread this!!!
Thank you so much Michele for sharing this absolutely amazing story with all of us!!! And I truly believe that you NEED to publish this! I would buy copies for my friends. THAT is how much I believe in this story and the appeal it has to sooooo many!
XOXO & Lots of love,
Nickey
PS. I plan on starting your new story very soon!!!! :)
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella is killing me isn't Edward the one who usually has issues about the relationship? OH yeah that is in the book, but seriously Bella in this story has a lot of growiing up to do.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
With the exception of Bella being really tiresome this story is really quite interesting. I just am so bored of the excuses and whining, Ugh every single chapter.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 81
I finished your story this afternoon and was glad I wasn't able to put it down. I'm not into the lifestyle but was amazed at the way Edward was able to bring out that side of Bella & show her how to be a stronger person and overcome her past. I can't wait to start reading the sequel. Great job.
Date: 14 Dec 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 81
BRAVO! this was absolutely freaking amazing! i can't believe it's over. you've had me hooked since i found this. i can't wait to read the next one! you should be so proud!
Date: 14 Dec 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 80
awesome chapter! so much happened! i thought i was gonna lose it when the kids raided the pantry :) and OMG! 2 Academy Awards! Stellar!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 81
Oh my....it's over?? It feels surreal...like a family member is gone!
Thank you so much for allowing me to accompany you on this magnificent journey. To reflect on how they met & what they went through to get to where they are now.
I look forward to the next adventure.
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 81
Another great chapter. I wanted to smack Edward up the back of the head for his reaction towards Bella after her car accident. Glad there all okay though.
Edward being nervous at the acadmy awards was really cute, it was nice to see Bella helping him overcome that.
I now realise i'm not a patient women because waiting any length of time for the sequel will be too long. I'm interested to see how the BDSM side of there relationship manages to progress while juggling a possible army of children.
Thankyou for spending two years of your life creating this amazing story.
Jesse
Date: 11 Dec 2011 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 81
wonderful end to a superb story. Loved it even when you left us with evil cliffies. Thank you for taking the time to write and share with us.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 81
Wait so youre posting Hope Springs AND THEN the sequel to PLU? Ooh harsh! But I'll be here. Especially after that. I don't think my heart could've taken any more after that car crash. I can't wait to read more from you. Thanks again sooo much. I just ask that if it's going to be awhile before the sequel if you could post a recap of everything from PLU before posting the sequel. Thanks again soo much. Bye for now.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 80
Aww! Edward breaking down about killed me! And Carlisle comforting him. Ooh soo sweet! But I can't remember: is Edward adopted by the Cullens or is he esme & Carlisle's son? I can't wait to read the next chapter, which is posted. :) off to read now.