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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 79

Let me know if you still need a beta.  I'd love to help out.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 79

This story could go on forever and I would continue to read. They have become like family to me. I enjoy hearing about their adventures. I am so proud that the uncles stepped up and put little miss hot pants in her place. Bella needed it to be done. Edward wouldn't because of the movie business. Irina was so out of line. I can't believe the babies are a year and number 3 will be hear in no time. I think it was great that Charlie and Sue could come out and spend some extended time with the family. I love how they call Charlie Grumpy.

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 79

This was a great chapter!  While the uncles can be crazy and over the top it certainly obvious that they love and protect their family, I thought what they did to that cold harpy bitch was hilarious!  The fact that they put her in her place and have video evidence of it is fantastic, what a whore she deserves what she gets.  Can't wait for the noodle to arrive!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 79

OMG!!!! I love that that uncles put Irene in her place. LOVED IT!!!!!!! I still think she deserved more. I am excited that you are going to continue with their lives. I would love to see how Edward, Jasper and Emmett deal with the kids being teenagers. LOVING THIS STORY!!!!!

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 79

THAT'S WONDERFUL NEWS!!!I was almost afraid to get to the end of this chapter as I thought that might end it...and you just made my day  by continuing the saga.  Thank you and I am sure I am speaking for all your  readers.  I am not sure that I will ever be done with this  family, but I do miss the interaction of Bella and Alice.  The trouble that they get in to is so funny....the off springs can take over and heaven hellp anyone that wants to date the  girls!!LOL  Thank you again for a wondeful story, amazing characters, and interesting plots.  

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 79

Yet another outstanding chapter... I can't believe that you would ask if we want more... Yes!!!!  I love this story... ups and downs... all of it!!!

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 79

Loved it and so glad you are going to write a sequel.  I have been dreading the end of this story and this crazy family. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 79

YOU ARE GOING TO CONTINUE THIS?!?  REALLY???  I FUCKING LOVE YOU!!!!!!!  You have totally made my night.  I would love to read more about this group!  They are my favorite fan-fiction family ever!  And the title is perfect!!!  Just no matter what, remember that we always want more D/s time with Edward and Bella...ALWAYS!!!!!

This was an incredible chapter and as much as I had hoped that Bella would put that harpy slut in her place, what the uncles did was soooo much better!!!  I love the uncles.  They are horny, crazy bastards, but they are excellent protectors of their own!  It was such a well written part of this chapter that I could go on and on about it, but I won't. ;)

I was a little bummed that you completely skipped the play party, but there is always next chapter to make it up to us (wink, wink, nudge, nudge).  I know Bella is as big as a house, but even you said we were going to skip forward a little.  Come on, give us a little play time...please?

Either way, you know I love you and this story!!!!  And I still think you should publish it...just saying. ;)

XOXO

Nickey

PS.  Laughed my ass off at the visual of Edward gagging over having to clean up the poop!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 79

    I absolutely love the uncles they are hilarious and very protective of their family.  I am so happy that there will be a sequel!  I was getting very sad that this story is close to being over but you just made my day.  Can't wait till the next update!

 

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 79

loved the update. cant wait for noodle to come

Reviewer: Teri Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 79

Oh the uncles were an absolute riot. Loved the chapter. Edward is so sweet with all of his helping Bella all of the time. Just love the story.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 79

Wonderful totally wonderful. It was hilarious to see Bella in trouble but at least her arse was saved. lol  The Great uncles were brilliant. How can you not love them. I don't want you to ever end. So just go for it hun. Hugs.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 79

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it SO much!  Yay for another boy, but I hope they have another girl eventually too :)  I loved how the uncles dealt with Irena ;)  Hehe!  Cannot wait for more :)

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 79

Hey Michele~

Loved this chapter and I think that you have done such an amazing job with these characters in making them your own,  Just wonderful.  fiorella emailed me once about her story adn sent me stuff to read over, and I made the suggestions and asked a few questions but she has not gotten back to me.  I woudl suggest redsparklypen or projectteambeta if she needs a beta.  I am still willing to help her, but I would feel stalkerish to message her again.

Look forward to reading more, and I think the Uncles did swimmingly!

Hugs~

Kasi

xoxo

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 79

Oh Em Gee....I cannot imagine that Bella doesn't want to hear all about her dad's sex life!  Ewwwwww.....

So glad that Edward is "there" for Bella and all her pregnancy hormones!!!

I cannot believe that they have been married for two years already.

OMG... I think I heart the uncles a little more now for them "protecting" Bella!  LOL!!!

There was just so much that I loved about this update.  You ladies just rock my world with your story!  Of course we want more!!!

Can't wait to read what happens next!!


Oh and congrats on the newest addition to your family Fiorella!!!!

Have you thought about approaching the SRP for a beta?  Link:  http://sparklyredpen.com/

I have lots of friends that work for them and they are awesome.  Just a thought. 

Keye

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 79

GREAT CHAPTER.   Prego hormones suck.   LOVE!!!!what the uncles did.   PRICELESS!!!   Woo Hoo for new baby.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 79

Of course more, more and more, wait for each and every update and oh! God that was the best sting, just love the grand unks.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 79

First, please let me say YES I am so glad, relieved, happy, many more words to know that a continuation of this story is happening!!! I absofuckinlutely love this story, all and every bit of it. Now, as for this chapter....the uncles are hilarious!! What they set up for Edward and Bella and Miss Ross was touching how protective!! When will Bella tell Edward?/ No secrets, right. That party sounded like fun!! Glad that Alice had a easier delivery with Christopher than Tiffany. Shorter labor!! And now Bella will deliver soon, will they announce any names before delivery??  Oh, the camping...HOT!!!  As usual, I can't wait till next update!!!!!

Reviewer: FangMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 79

I cant tell you how estatic I am that you are going to continue this story! Its like Christmas came early this year! Woo Hoo! Thanks for creating and sharing such a beautiful story for us all to enjoy!

Respectfully,
Fangs XxOo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 79

Michele- Girl!!!! Oh, flip Uncles are so Amazing, Wonderful, adorable and extremely talented in the art of vengence......  what a vile woman, Irene was.... I was even shocked at some of the things that spewd from her mouth....but I must back up to the first part of the chapter and the Steaks...  OMG!!!  I know there were unlying things at play in Bella's mind but wholly shit this girl, when she's pregnant has no self preservation does she? Arguing with and showing disrespect and rudeness to THE Mentor of her Dom, Garrett, while she was collard by her Dom,  wholly crow I was rolling with Laughter, but the poor girl couldn't really help her tantrum considering the pregnancy hormones and all.  You must admit that sounded plausible anyway......  Darn I just love this story and I am so flippin happy about a sequel.....  Oh yea I can definitely see baby Stevie growing into a Dom and may Tiffany with him or even Lexi.... Then You have Zoe's new baby too to work in that whole relm.  Oh the possibilities!!!    Loved the entire chapter and I really loved Lexy walking first and how much of a daddy's girl she is.  I missed Anderson and Bryan in this chapter but they do have lives now... but still missed them.. Loved Charlie, Sue and Billy...  what a wonderful and endearing time they had over the time they were all together...  Yes a little Master Whitlock!!!  excited for the next post....

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 79

Yes, a continuation would be great

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 79

what a beautiful name...congrats!

 

michele....i think the uncles were perfect!!!! outstanding! the pics wer amazing...as usual. i literaly squealed when i read the next installment's title!!!!  yay! cant wait but so glad SO GLAD we r continuing!!!!!  

 

if i could send u flowers i would!

Reviewer: Library Lolita Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 79

Yes, I SOOO want to see what happens with this crew after you finish this story!! Thank you for sharing them with us!!

Reviewer: LanaLee1248 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 79

I loved this chapter. It was so much fun. The uncles were awesome.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 79

loved the chapter ! i would love to read more about them growing as a family in a sequel

Reviewer: paula1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 79

Yes I would definately love to read more about the Cullen/whitlock/nomad clans

 

Reviewer: mojoja Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 79

All I can say is I LOVE the Uncles they Rock

Reviewer: chacha09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 79

I love this story and these characters.  I am thrilled that you wiill continue with them.  Good job!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 79

Wow ... Love the chapter, love the Uncles, love Lexi's first steps ... Love everything. So don't want this story to end so I give a resounding YES to a sequel. I need my biweekly fix!!!!!

 

Congrats to Fiorella on your niece. Always exciting to welcome we babies!

Reviewer: nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 79

Love the story and please pass on my congratulations on the birth of your niece to Fiorella xx

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 79

I love the Uncles. They're more loyal and smarter than anyone gives them credit for.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you love them too - thanks for the review G

xoxo

Reviewer: smith052293 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 79

That was F*CKING GREAT!!! Not much else I can say!



Author's Response:

oh smith - you have a way with words - thanks so much for the review :)

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 79

I'm in love with the uncles!  Yes, they went over the top...but we would have been disappointed if they didn't!



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review - the uncles are my 'poetic license' - my little indugence!  I'm so glad that you feel the same way!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 79

Thank you for this update, it made my day!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it KOW - thank you so much for the review

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 79

Those uncles are heros,  I love them.  I really enjoyed this chapter, so glad that Edward and Bella are doing so well. Makes me wonder if her delivery will be textbook or if there will be a hitch, maybe Edward sits and prays and thinks back over all his time with her and their relationship while waiting for her to wake up or something similar, nothing to scarey  just somthing to give him the time for reflection.  



Author's Response:

I love the characters of Ernest and Nicholas that I created - they are such fun!  OOhh you love the drama, don't you?  Okay so let me see what I can do about that, then!  xoxo

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 79

fantastic chapter.that was so emotional brought tears to my eyes poor bella her hormones must be all over the place.love the uncles they were awesome irena got what she deserved.update soon



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review xoxo

Reviewer: FangMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 78

It took me 3 weeks of reading this story every single day to get to this point. I am really enjoying your tale. I was actually afraid of the story because of the length AND amount of chapters (crazy, huh?) but now that I've gotten into it, when I read a few chapters back that you felt the story was coming to a close I felt a twinge of panic because I have started to look forward to getting my fix of these two. They've grown so much and even though I struggle from time to time with the content; it's so awesome to see what you come up with next. 

I am super sad that the pictures don't work because I LOVE stories with pictures; it brings so much and lets me see things a little more from your perspective. I hope you can get that worked out. I'd love to see what your Bella looks like pregnant, her many various constumes, their new house and playroom and also the babies! I have a picture of them in my head but I'd love to see what YOU think they look like.

Anyway, I will wait patiently for your next update and keep my fingers crossed that you'll change your mind and keep writing about the many adventures of Edward and Bella.

With much love and great respect,

Fangs

P.S. You have Inspirerae to thank for the recommendation. She has told me over and over I need to read this; I'm so glad she told me about your story!

XoXoXo

Reviewer: dsccc Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 78

It is easier to agree with your motives now that they have realized their errors. I was ready to gough Edward's eyes out! I am so glad his phone calls were not to skankrina! I for one am ready to see Bella set skankrina straight!

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 78

Loved it.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 78

i was about to strangle Edward myself!!!! omg, yelling at the possums and at Bella, moody and cranky! lucky he snapped outta that! they so needed that time alone, i can't wait till they all go to MT

Reviewer: leinchen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 78

Hey there

I just wanted to let you know, that I'm eagerly following your story from each new chapter to the next. I can hardly wait until the newest chapter shows up.

I really do like your story and I'm really impressed on how you manage to write such long chapters in such a short amount of time.

Furthermore I enjoy your style of writing and the way your characters enfold themselves within the story. I really get wrapped up in every chapter because everything is written so naturally, so "normal", which makes it really easy to feel as if being a part of everything instead of "only" reading it.

I started reading the story in it's German translation version on fanfiktion.de but I must admit that I wasn't able to wait for the next chapter being translated and so I switched to it's original. :-)

You are really doing a great job!!

Greetings from Germany,

leinchen

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 75

we definitely want to see the teen years!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 78

I am so glad that Bella and the babies are going to Montana. It is hard being a family separated, especially when their is a skank lerking about.

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 78

I'm glad that I trusted you wouldn't have Edward cheat on Bella.  Miscommunication is bad when it comes to any relationship, especially marriage and I'm glad these two both got their heads out of their asses and realized they needed to talk and get things out there or they weren't going to make it.  I can't wait to see what these two get into coming up!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 78

LOVED IT!!!  :o}

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 78

I just want to thank you for this unbelievable story.  It makes me laugh, it makes me cry and I just love your characters.  You take evey day life situations and...sigh.  Just thank you for this wonderful story.

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 78

Wow..  the worrys that Edward had before the movie was coming true..  Both him and Bella know that they can not live with out each other for a length of time..  it to hard on them and their children.. 

It was a sad beginning but Beautiful ending. 

Edward has realished Bella needs play time to keep in her submissive role.  and if they go to long it hard on her and he has to punisher her..  Glade he realied and going to make a better effter to Bella submissive role. 

Can't wait to see how their d/s dinner session goes.  mmm.  going to good.. 

bye your now <3 leona :)

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 78

I have a very different "take" on what constitues cheating.  Because of Bella and Edwards very different lifestyle, Edward demands honesty at ALL times from Bella.  But he was going against his own rules by not discussing what was going on with Irina.  Plus, she was hanging out with him and the crew after filming, playing cards etc.  By him not telling Bella this, he was essentually cheating...he felt extreme guilt...that is a sign of emotional cheating.  (yep, too many psych classes under my belt)

Bella is a little too easy to forgive, which then gives Edward the knowledge that what he did wasn't as serious as he assumed it was.  I mean lets face it...Bella gets a good f*cking and all is well in her head.

Love the story, don't always love the characters actions, thats what makes it interesting.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your comments and review!

Reviewer: grilzhea Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 78

I'm so glad everything worked out. Bella was so strong. I'm glad for her. I'm also glad Edward got his head out of his rear end. Hopefully having Bella and the kids around will help him out.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 78

LOVED IT!!!!!

You are very right, outside influences can be a bitch and when the communication breaks down, all hell can break loose.  Now add in a hormonal Bella and an emo Edward and you have hell on steroids!  I am glad the drama didn't ruin Edward's entire time home and I loved when Bella called him out, in her own way.

I loved the play time.  I was just thinking that it had been forever since we got to enjoy some play time with our favorite D/s.

OMG!  And Jasper saying, she can't come to the phone right now, Darlin' because I have her trussed up like a thanksgiving turkey with stuffing in all the right places - like I said, she will call you back'!'  

That was awesome!!!!

Excellent chapter sweetie (as always!)!!!!!

XOXO

Nickey

PS.  Play party with a slightly prego Bella...hell yes!  And I can not wait till the little chit chat amongst the couples!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Darling Nickey, you kinky beast you!!  I'm glad that you liked Jasper's comment, I giggled like a 5 year old when I thought of it and wrote it down - yes, I was actually blushing!!!!  Glad you liked the chapter, baby!

Love,

Michele

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 78

I think you handled that "outside interference or distraction" well.  You are right, that is real life.  I've always been of the opinion that althought their might be soul mates, most of us don't meet ours necessarily. But when you agree to marriage, you are making a choice and a promise  A commitment to stop looking, if you will.  It doesn't mean that there won't be others you find attractive or that you could be happy with.  But you agreed to spend you life with that person and not look around anymore.  That requires you try hard to avoid temptation when you have the ability to avoid it....and to resist it when it is presented.  We are not perfect and niether are our partners...so we can screw up and so can they. There are always consequences, some are mild and some devastating, but again, that is life.  You try to learn and avoid making the same mistakes.  This is one of the cream of the crop stories out there in the world of Fan Fiction. Thanks for all your effort and especially for you quite regular updates. It helps readers "stay in the game" when the time between chapters is reasonable....some people go months and even a year between updates....I know their life comes first, I'm not trying to be critical of them but it makes me so greatful for what you've accomplshed with updates.  In those other stories I have sometimes forgotten the whole plot and have to re-read several chapters to get back up to speed. It really makes them much less enjoyable.  Hope your real life is treating you well. Thanks so much for this particular story...I'm dreading it's end as it is a sweet escape now and then.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your insightful comments and your review.  so, I guess that you would like a sequel, right??  The next generation of doms and subs....

:)

Michele

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 78

Wow ... Just Wow! Just when I think you can't get any better you give us a chapter like that. Love seeing Edward and Bella interacting with each other, Esme and Carlisle, Jasper and Alice, and the world outside.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your wonderful words - you always make me feel so gushy and warm!!

:)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 78

thanks awesome chapters



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 78

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  Go Bella and Edward!  Will they find out the sex of this baby too?  Just curious :)  There are a few minor mistakes in this chapter...for instance the crocodile "clams" should be "clamps" ;) Cannot wait for more :D



Author's Response:

thanks for the review and the comments - your answers are in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 78

it most certainly is work. the hubs and i are on a quck saturday night get away for our anniversary. we've gambled...he lost i profited...and ate a delicious seafood dinner. now we r resting in he big bed watching the world series [ GO RANGERS!!!!!!!! ] ..then we plan on gamblin some more then he is going to ravish me...agan! lol   i like the uspense u write in the story! 



Author's Response:

I hope that you got ravished several times, RT!  thanks for the review xoxo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 78

Glad Bella challenged him for his behavior.   He really messed up yelling at the kids.  I agree with the no more sharing clause int he contracts too.  LOL for Reg and Maggie when they came back from their "walk" 

 

ROFL for when Esme came and got the kids.  Aww for mama bear freaking over them leaving.  New moms.... lol.     Woo Hoo for yummy alone time.

ROFL for Jazz' comment to her about tied up.  Aww for esme's talk with her.

Great date.   Glad she challenged the Papz.    Titanium.....ROFL.    Glad Ed and Jazz talked at the club.  Go Bad ass Bella!!!.   LOL for hormonal Bella when they got home. 

 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that I could make you chuckle this chapter! xoxo



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that I could make you chuckle this chapter! xoxo

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 78

Michele - you are awesome.  This chapter was great and I think you handled it really well.  Are the girls for the club real girls or fangirls?  And I totally don't think they should go to a play party in a month.  She will be pretty pregnant.  I lov the fact that you made sure they communicated and acknowledged that marriage is hard work.  You wrote a great chapter to an already superb story!



Author's Response:

thanks so much for your comments and your review. xoxo

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 78

Another awesome chapter!  I must admit I was worried they would separate (not legally) and he would run off and Irena would console him... etc.  I wasn't worried that he would cheat... that is not his style as a man or a dom.

As always I look forward to more.

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 78

If there was a fan fiction anonymous, my kids would probably force me to join but I would always miss the meetings if you had updated because I can't not read what you write! Everything else can wait!



Author's Response:

Oh my word KOW, you make me laugh!!

Reviewer: smith052293 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 78

I was so relieved after reading this chapter! I was driving myself crazy with worry over what could happrn. I'm happy things went the way they did.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 78

always love and update! they are always getting into trouble and its always becuase they dont talk! loved it

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

Jacob is crazy! I am glad she got away from him. It is sad that Charlie wasn't there for her like he should have been. I am glad she opened up to Edward. I can't wait for him to tell her his story. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 78

Great story i live for your updates. This story has everything and very well written i like what you wirte about relationships how they their ups and downs but in the end it all breaks down on communication it's really important that they talk to each other.

You are a wonderful writter and this story is so very well written. So keep up you wonderful an exciting work

Reviewer: orangepeel Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 78

Enjoyed where you took the characters this week, all the focus on relationship & dialog, especially the kid-free time. Jasper was a treat!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 78

I can always trust you to make it right. I love how you show people tend to make the same mistakes over and over again.  Edward and Bella are fine examples but they have both grown up and that is nice to see.  As always I love your chapter and you can go on forever and that would be fine with me.

All the best

Hugs Caroline.

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 78

Great Chapter ... I loved how Bella took care of the unwanted dance partner LOL!!!!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 78

Good chapter. Way to go  Bella, showed that creep to keep his hand to themselves. I am glad that Edward recognized he needed to make changes

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 78

Well,  I definetly believe Edward waited to long to talk to Bella, and even that Bella let him off to easy also. I can see becoming a little tiny bit aroused, but Edward took it to another level. But thank goodness, that's all over. I just hope that the actress/slut,lol, doesn't say something to Bella, as when they move to Montana, Bella and the twins will more than likely visit the set one day, and she will probably say something to suggest Edward cheated. Afterall she did see quite alot of him while doing the scene. Still lovin the story and can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love it!  These two are driving each other crazy!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 78

I liked this chapter.  See how they handled the conflict and communication now compared to earlier in this story and you can really see both of their character's growth.  Just like they said being new parents sometimes makes you forget to do things for your marriage, and this chapter really highlighted the importance for taking time for yourself, your spouse, your kids, your family and friend, and always keep communicating to build and maintain all these relationships.  Great job!

PS - and I am so glad that Bella and the possums are traveling on location with them, they don't need any more separations.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 78

My mouth dropped open when Edward yell at the twins. I thought.."Oh no he didn't". Loved that Mama Bear came out in Bella then. Glad that they finally opened up to each other. They both need lessons on talking to each other. Glad they are having a D/S open talk session with Jasper and Alice. I loved that Bella took care of herself on the dance floor. I sooooo hoped that she went and washed her hands after cupping that guys balls. LOL!!!!!!!

Thanks for sharing with us. Always get excited whe you update and you ALWAYS leave me wanting more and more.



Author's Response:

When I wrote about him shouting at the kids, I could feel that I was red in the face, and my fingers were positively pounding the keys!!!  Thanks so much for your review and your comments xoxo

Reviewer: AlliSweets Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 78

I'm so happy they worked it out. It just goes to show u how guilt can really eat at you. I do hope her new friends area trustworthy. I love this story & thank u so much for writing it.. can't wait till next chapter. =0)

Reviewer: Teri Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 78

OMG what a chapter. You write so much better than I could ever dream up. They were both so mature with the handling of Ms. Ross. It seems to me that Bella is getting fiesty. Can't wait to see what she does with Ms. Ross when they finally meet in person. Hmmmmm.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 78

fantastic chapter glad they sorted it out n i can just picture irenas face when she knows edward isn't doing the sex scenes but knowing her she will try it on with body double lol.wow they are just so hot together awesome story.update soon

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow...these two are barely hang on to the edge.  I love it!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 78

Wow the last two chapters really overwhemed me with incredible writing and ideals that were a little to "real life".  Sometimes I think that  lines are blurred between real life and fantasy when reading fanfiction, especially stories that are "special".  That's what happened to me last week and it bothered me thinking about Edward's problem of honesty.  Glad that a week later and a well written chapter puts some perspective on their realationship.  Thanks for the reality check and another GREAT chapter. I do miss the pictures but I love your writing style...you make everything so understandable and clear. 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 78

The way these two were able to "take the bull by the horns", so to speak and confront what was being kept hidden is truly awe inspiring. Too bad most marraiges don't use that method. Instead things get swept under the rug and then they fester.

Excellant chapter. I love these people!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review Honey!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting!  I can't wait to get caught up!  Great job..thanks!!!

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 78

I'm so Happy that he finally told her what was going on.. They so needed it.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 78

Wow!!!   what a wonderful chapter!!!  Yes, relief abounds in reading this.. it makes more sense and understanding on Hearing Edward's explaination of his guilt over his bodies response to being aroused, not that he was aroused by the woman, but the warm soft body, while he was really thinking of Bella.  This sort of thing can happen sadly enough in any marriage if one is not aware of staying AWARE open and honest with you partner...  Great  Fantastic chapter!!!!  I loved how you pointed out and showed that Edward is selfish and he knows it, funny thing was Bella is the one that sill had to bring the topic up he was not willingly opening up, he put in her court by having her talk to him, rather than him just saying... Bella, I need to talk with you about issues I had while we were apart or something like that..so Kate had some Post Partum depression that too, explains alot!!!  Great chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your comments and your review

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 78

I'm sure many people, like me, are still reading and eagerly anticipate the next chapter.  Thanks for writing! 



Author's Response: thanks for the review

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 78

i will keep reading this story as long as you keep writing, my favs from this chapter, "Bella says why woudl I believe anyhting you guys write about my husband" and her defending herself on the dance floor.   .   This story is my number 1 favortie of all time and all sites.   Thanks for sharing !!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, FIS - you are the best!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 78

Michele~ Of course i am still here, untilt he end bebe.  I loved this chapter, and I am glad that oyu showed the reafimination of their love for the other, by how they handled the stressful situations.  Everyone has to work to make a relationship solid, there is not any such thing as an easy no work at partnership.  If one person believes that in a partnership, than they are wrong, it is the other person who makes up for them, and it is no longer a partnership.  I love the way you have written these two especially, and I am looking forward to seeing a bit more of the time with Alice and Jasper and the talk, not to mention, Montana, and Miss. Ross.  I love that Maggie and reg will be there with them, and I am so excited for the next update.  Big hugs and lots of love.  Talk to you soon.

Kasi

PS...let me know what you think of Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso, the first few chapters are up, both here and at fanfiction.  Looking forward to your input.



Author's Response:

Aaaaaw Kasi, My faithful Mistress of all things Twilight, thank you once again for your honest words and review - I'm going to head over to read Lipstick Kisses now.

love

Me

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 78

Absolutely. Marriage/ relationships all need to be worked on and nurtured. I like to think of it as a plant...without care & attention, it will wither & die.

Good & powerful chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouragement and review.

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 78

Yes, well Edward, the ever "in control" Dom, is completely BLOWING it, isn't he?  Good grief...Mr. "I am the KING of communication" isn't speaking?  So, how many spanks with a paddle does he get for being so dishonest with Bella?  I just hate it when one does not do what they preach!!!!

Yeah, yeah, yeah, he's under stress...whatever.....don't feel sorry for him.  I feel for Bella and the kids instead.

All that being said.......I'd still "do" him!  ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!

But I am glad that they made up.  *giggle*  And everyone needs a Maggie, Esme and Carlisle to rescue them when things are hitting the fan, don't they?

Jasper cracks me up too! "He said, and I quote, ‘she can't come to the phone right now, Darlin' because I have her trussed up like a thanksgiving turkey with stuffing in all the right places - like I said, she will call you back'!"

 OMG...that was so funny!!

Oh I cannot wait to see what Irena has to say or what she thinks about the set being bombared by Edward's family...and the others too.  Wonder if she is going to change her somewhat slutty ways?  Or are she and Bella going to be great friends?  You know Bella...she does make the most surprising friends at times.

Nice that have so much help with the kiddos.  Must be heaven!!!

Piano sex.....yum!

Okay so the play party...wonder if Edward is going to take her?  Surely he will, right? 

Love how you keep everything fresh and interesting.  Still love this story today as much as I did when I started it!  You have been doing an amazing job with the characters and the plot....well, everything really!!

As always, I cannot wait to read what happens next!!!!

Keye



Author's Response:

Oh my word, Keye, you are so funny!  When I wrote Jasper's comment, I giggled for ages! (so sad!)  Edward isn't taking her to the play party, coz, let's face it, that's not what she really wanted. she really wanted to know that he was still going to find her sexy - I mean come on, this is Bella and Edward here!   I am having such fun writing thse last chapters before we say good bye ONLY FOR A WHILE -  we will be back for the next generation.... dum, dum...

What do you think?  Sound good, or should we just say good bye and ride off into the sunset??

Let me know what you think - I don't want to drag this on if the story gets old and boring, you know?

Love,

Michele

Reviewer: chacha09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 78

Thank you for the great chapter!  I wasn't sure I could read it when I got the email alert but I am glad I did.  I am so devoted to your story but can't stand a skank to get the upper hand.  Loved Bella with the paps.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 75

Oh, Michele, I run out of words, after all these chapters, to tell you just how totally amazing this story is. This chapter, with Domward back in full force, was just so very good. I can't wait to see how this new arrangement works out for them. He is so good for Bella! And I know this story has to end, but I am going to feel like I have lost my friends. I have been reading this story for so long, that I won't know what to do without your updates. Well, one thing I'm going to do is start your new story....while I start this one over again on Chapter 1. Thank you again for sharing this amazing story with us.

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 77

I am kind of irked at Edward right now! whats he thinking? Ugh! I REALLY hope you have to send Brian or Andy heck even Em & Jazz to kick his ass! It seems as if he's forgetting how much Bella is the LOVE of his life!!!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 77

What a fantastic chapter. Excellent contrast between home/family life and the job. Love that Irena is making things difficult. Loved that Garret the dominant came forth there at the end. Hoping to see some of Edward and Bella together at the set at some point. Edward doesn't give Bella enough credit sometimes. Maybe Brian and Anderson can help out knocking some sense into Edward. Whatever you come up with will be awesome. Love your story. I look forward to my biweekly fix.

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 77

Uh Oh! looks like someone is in trouble.  I can not tell you how much I love this story.  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 77

Nope, not buying the guys will be guys thing.  Yes, men are very visual, but by Edward not telling Bella IMMEDIATELY about what was going on with Irina, he was actually cheating emotionally.  He demands total honesty at ALL times from Bella...he has actually now become Irina's submissive.

Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 77

I've had to let this sit for a few days... I have to admit I lost faith a bit with this chapter. I really don't want Edward to cheat on our Bella. I have since count my faith and convinced myself that you know where this is going and I will trust you with this sooty that I feel so invested in. 

 

I am almost more upset with Garrett than Edward. Oh btw, it must really suck to be a man and not be able to hide your arousal. I am not mad at Edward for being aroused--that is just his body's response to the stimulation. I am more upset with how his mind is working and not talking to Bella about this...

 

Anyway, thanks for another fantastic chapter and I can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 77

yikes, i hope this doesn't bring out crazy insecurity in Bella.....that girl sounds like a bitch!back off skank! i don't think Edward should hide what happened, it may bite him in the ass.....

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 76

i'm so glad Bella finally let Alice have it...and that Edward and Jazz stayed out of it.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 77

Another GREAT chapter. I am sooooo loving this story. You are doing an amazing job writing it. I can not believe that there are 77 chapters, WOW!!!! I am glad to see that Edward and Bella will have some real life issues to handle and that everything is not always roses. I do not think that Edward needs to keep things from Bella. He would furious if Bella did him that way. Can't wait to see where you are taking this!!!!!

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 77

I am trying to keep the faith here but I hope you aren't planning on having Edward be unfaitful because Bella is already feeling a little insecure that would surely destroy her confidence.  Espescially since he is now hiding things from her it makes it look like there is something to hide even if there isn't and she is pregnant which means her hormones are all over the place.  While I know that nobodys marriage is perfect and Edward and Bella are no different and there will be bumps in the road infidelity is just not something I can picture with these two, and what the hell is Garrett's problem why is he pushing Edward so hard and what is going on with him that he's upset about Kate is more clingy? 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 77

Well, he feels like he cheated because he became aroused.  Yep right there. Bella being pregnant again with baby #3 and being insecure will take a hit on this.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 77

Michele - I think this chapter was needed.  I love them happy, but there are always bumps.  Some bigger and sluttier than others.  You know I have always thought that E was the weak link, so I like that you are challenging him like this.  Great chapter. you are amazing.  keep it up.

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 77

megan is beautiful yes, but I don't know, she gets to me for some reason.  She comes off like she knows it I guess.  That kind of attitude gets to me in an actress.  Her not doing the 3rd transformer movie was just silly.  Sooo I surely hope that there's not going to be crazy angsty drama over her.  As long as he doesnt act upon the arousal that she may cause during the scenes its ok.  And if she uses her ability to arouse to cause trouble than she needs to be kicked to the curb.  And I believe Bella would do it if she wasnt preggers, right?!  ha!

Hugs, Stephanie

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 77

I just knew when E asked B if she thought they were too happy, that something was brewing on the horizon.

Oh E, don't do it!

I made the mistake of forgiving & taking my husband back and will always live regretting it, even though I loved him with my life.

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