Date: 10 Oct 2015 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
Just found this story and so glad that I did. I like angst and I love E/B so thank you. XOXO,Cheri
Author's Response:
I am so glad you *just* found this because I only started updating it again in late September. I've neglected this and I feel terrible about doing so! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Joie
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2015 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
another great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! :D
~Joie
Date: 10 Oct 2015 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
That was priceless they will fix each other. Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :) I truly do think they will be great for each other! I have so much planned for them!
Thanks again,
~Joie
Date: 10 Oct 2015 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Jake knows how special Bella is he can feel the love.
Author's Response:
I am bound and determined to make their relationship much like Jake's wolf form and Bella!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Joie
Date: 10 Oct 2015 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
To bad Charlie didnt kill James that would have redeemed him. Edward is doing her room up right and taking very good care of her.
Author's Response:
I *almost* killed off James, but what would that do for the plot?! ;)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Joie
Date: 10 Oct 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love June she is all fisty. Bella needs Edward so much
Author's Response:
June wasn't someone I was going to use but she came to me at the last minute. I'm glad she did!
Thank you for reading and reviewing,
Joie
Date: 10 Oct 2015 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
My heart is breaking
Author's Response:
Bella is going to have a very long road ahead of her, but I promise, all will be well in the end.
THank you for reading and reviewing,
Joie
Date: 10 Oct 2015 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Edward maybe they will be on the same floor. Emmett knows what happened to Bella when Edward finds out he is going to freak out more than he already has
Author's Response:
Keep reading! ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
~Joie
Date: 09 Oct 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
I agree, they are the best thing for each other.
Author's Response:
Absolutely! Thank you for reading and for reviewing. :) More soon.
~Joie
Date: 09 Oct 2015 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMFG poor girl has been living in hell I wish they would nail James Dick to a pole
Author's Response:
BAHAHAHA! He will SO get his! Don't you worry! Thank you for the review! More soon.
~Joie
Date: 09 Oct 2015 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds so good and so sad
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. More soon!
~Joie
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2015 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
Please continue this story, I m hooked now and want to see it finished. Thanks Xanath
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2015 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
WOW, this is hard to read but necessary. i hope they have a HEA.
Author's Response:
It is incredibly hard to write. I just feel like this story has to be told. I can say this: Karma is a BIG player in this plot, so good things come to those who suffer - and suffering comes to those who hurt. :) *evil grin!*
Thank you for the review,
Joie
Date: 07 Oct 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
Please tell me James will get his and soon! Charlie is a little too late but maybe in the future he and bella can repair their relationship, if he is sincere. If he is just doing this to save face then I hope he gets his too! I love June! She will help Bella get through this. Edward is wonderful and Emmett is just a goofball and I just love him. Rosalie is fierce and I would not wan to be on her bad side. What is with her and Emmett? I just love this story and Jake. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
I am working so hard to make this one of my top priorities. I let it lie for too long and that's not fair. The story has so much more to tell! I can assure you James will get his in the end. I'm scheming up some really good karma! Thank you so much for the review!
Joie
Date: 07 Feb 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love your fic. Love dogs too! Thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
Just stumbled across your story and am hooked. I love Charlies redemtion on James. So long over due.
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2012 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
You did good! I was really getting sick that he could allow James to get away with that.
Author's Response:
thank you! *blush* im glad you enjoyed the chapter (and gave me coffees!). i love charlie and i thought i could make him evil but i really cant. stupid, a little naive, sure but not evil. happy holidays! more next week.
Date: 22 Dec 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and reviewing. ill have more next week! happy holidays!
Date: 22 Dec 2012 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
I like that Charlie gave it to James. He needs to have a long talk with Bella and let her know how he feels...but not just yet. She needs to get control of herself first.
Author's Response:
i agree. they have a lot to talk about. thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 21 Dec 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ugh pathetic excuse for a human being
Author's Response:
i know right?? im glad charlie wanted me to have him start making it up to bella!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
You're still bearking my heart. However, things are looking up for Bella. Well written. I really like June.
Author's Response:
Aww, I know, it's a tough one. It's so hard for me not to just go POOF happy ending! I promise she's going to get out of that hospital and get some doctor perscribed puppy love!
Date: 19 Dec 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! More next week!
Date: 18 Dec 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
Will be waiting for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! More in a week!
Date: 18 Dec 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
The story is great. I think Charlie is in for a rude awakening!!! And I hope Jane will keep her word and help Bella.
Author's Response:
June is definitely going to keep Bella safe as long as she can, and so will Edward. Charlie's got a lot to learn and a lot to apologize for. Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
It was a good chapter considering the contents. WTG Rose clear out a room. I'm really liking James' mom too!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I appreciate feed back so much! Rose and Jane are very important for Bella. She needs to know some strong women!
Date: 15 Dec 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
im giving your fic a shot. i like it so far. thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
I appreciate it! Thank you muchly. I hope to have my next chapter up today or tomorrow morning. Just some finishing touches!
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2012 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
I just discovered this story today and I have to say that I am hooked. I can't believe Charlie, now all of a sudden he cares? I'ld be a little skeptical too. How could a father take the word of some ex-drug addict who apparently was in trouble a lot when he was younger, over his own daughter who never was? Rosalie was great. I can't wait to see what Edward is going to do when he finds out what happened.
Thanks, Maria
P.S. I know it's been just over a month, but I'm very sorry about your grandfather.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you like this! I'm going to work on more today, but it may not be posted until tomorrow - that's the day it's SUPPOSED to be posted, but I've been a flake. Charlie is a tool, but I've decided he's not going to be an evil tool, just s stupid - needs to really apologize and beg - tool. Edward's chapter is next, and he's going to find out everything! WOOHOO!!!! O_o
Thank you so much, he was an amazing man and I still miss him. <3
Joie
Date: 08 Dec 2012 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm so into this story please hurry and continue.
Author's Response:
yes maam!!! i will have more very soon! im so glad youre enjoying!!
Date: 08 Dec 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, I think I am in love with this story!! lol, Cheri
Author's Response:
im so glad you love it! i will have more asap!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
WOW, you are right it was tough and yeah I expected some of it. Please give her some peace finally.
Author's Response:
i promise its coming!!! thank you!
Author's Response:
i promise its coming!!! thank you!
Date: 15 Nov 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
I read your disclaimer and I am still tryin to hang in there only because I know there will be a HEA.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting so far!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
I was wondering when Edward was going to find out about Bella, and am glad that Tyler filled him in. And with him being in the hospital with her, that would give him a good chance to go and see her. I just hope they are keeping James far, far away from her and that she is going to press charges, cuz that guy is not right in the head, and for Charlie to defend him and think that what he does to Bella is okay, well, he's nuts right along with him. That's some father she's got there. I would get a restraining order on both of them.
Author's Response:
This was a tough chapter to write. I wanted him to find out sooner than later, but I didn't want to make it fake. If Tyler would have come to him and basically escorted him to the hospital it would have been way out of bounds. I have an EMT in the family so I know the rules they have to go by. I hear some amazing stories, but I'll never know the patient's name or where they live.
It was also tough deciding what I was going to do with Charlie. I love their daddy/daughter relationship but being that I don't have one it is always so hard for me to write a good - realistic - one. SO, he's going to be the biggest douche bag in the history of the world. Still undecided if he'll change in the end. I may have to, because I do love Charlie as a character.
James...............this is the hardest guy to deal with. In a perfect world he'd be hit by a bus coming to the hospital. In Vicious I can't let him get killed so easy. He's still going to be around, but he will definitely get his in the end. The bad guy always loses, you know!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. It helps me see what readers thing and want to see. I take all comments into consideration. :D
Joie
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! I will have more up the beginning of next week, for sure! I may feel frisky, though, but don't take me at my word. I have so much to do!!!
Date: 22 Oct 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
looking forward to seeing where this is oging
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I promise - it's going to get good!
Joie
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Def want to see where this goes!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I will have more soon, and from Bella's POV!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great 1st chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm glad you liked the chapter. More soon - and from Bella's POV!