Date: 05 Aug 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
enjoyed very much wish there was more:[
Date: 01 Dec 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love a happy ending!
Date: 20 Nov 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
hey
great OS
I rally liked is..
but what does Edward do now??
he has resigned his job, so...
bye
Lil
Date: 23 Oct 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
cool great story thanks
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'ce never been in the FBI, but I think a good rule of thumb might be that when choosing a fake name with which to fly under the radar, don't use one that's of a famous musician. :p
Author's Response:
You know, you're the first person to even notice that, but I changed his last name slightly because it is a good point. I was just thinking that it is a common last name and didn't put it together. Thanks for the review.
Date: 18 Oct 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was bad ass!
Date: 18 Oct 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love that it was a one-shot but would love to know more it was great
Date: 18 Oct 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
really good so far..
Date: 17 Oct 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was a fun, exciting read! Edward and Bella always find each other, don't they? Being a life-long resident of the Pacific Northwest, I loved the road trip they took together.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just found your story here and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. very well put together.