Date: 21 Apr 2023 10:32 PM Title: Epilogue
Another wonderful story. You are so good at writing characters with Bella that I don't normally look for, since i'm a Bella/Jasper groupy. But they are wonderful stories and fun and funny and smexy. I wish you had a million more of them!
Date: 10 Mar 2020 2:07 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved this story!!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2020 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 13
She just keep surprising them
Date: 10 Mar 2020 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hehe, Peter cracks me the fuck up! I truly hope Bella decimates Alice
Date: 10 Mar 2020 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
So will Peter, char, an Jasper be ok?
Date: 09 Mar 2020 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
So Demetri is still head of the guard? And the masters defer to him on this not only out of respect due to it being his mate, but obviously they trust him.
Date: 09 Mar 2020 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh Demetri, you are a noble one and I'm glad Aro was there to talk to her. I do so hope the brothers take a liking to her though.
Date: 09 Mar 2020 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
Naw he's a cutie
Date: 09 Mar 2020 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh how pissed is she gonna be?
Date: 09 Mar 2020 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
So Demetri chose her as his mate instead of of her just being his mate to begin with?
Date: 09 Mar 2020 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
At least two of the brothers see what they are already
Date: 09 Mar 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
Huh, why does Aro want her when she doesn't even know about vampires
Date: 09 Mar 2020 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nothing like being puked on. Soooo she's not Demetri mate?
Date: 06 Dec 2017 12:37 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved the story wished there was more of it
Date: 05 Dec 2017 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love this story and know I'm not finished reading but do have to say no he wasn't anything close to that guy but he did lie and take advantage of her being drunk so she wasn't totally wrong when she said it so sad that he got mad at her for it he didn't rape her but did get her drunk to make it easier please don't take what say wrong just the way took this chapter I really did like the part where she was changed and how but he still lied when said didn't do it on purpose and for him to get all defense yes he's a good guy and love the mate ship and always hea
Date: 27 Dec 2016 9:54 AM Title: Epilogue
So good, I wish there was more!
Perfect little story. Love your Demetri, Bella and the others in the Volturi Coven.
Date: 27 Dec 2016 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
Very satisfying battle.
Date: 27 Dec 2016 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
Peter saved Jasper after all. Thank goodness. He didn't deserve to die for Eddie's and Alice's fuck-ups.
Date: 27 Dec 2016 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
The Cullens aren't suicidal. Just selfish.
Date: 20 May 2016 10:32 AM Title: Epilogue
hehe this was great!
Date: 29 Nov 2015 3:33 PM Title: Epilogue
wow!!! I love your characters. Thanks for writing and for allowing me to indukge in my obsession and fantasies
Date: 19 Sep 2014 6:45 AM Title: Epilogue
Awe! Absolutely loved it!!
Date: 16 Sep 2014 4:51 AM Title: Epilogue
ah! so happy i found you here. i was in the mood to re-read some fabulous Demetri/Bella. Love it. well done.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 12:24 AM Title: Epilogue
Enjoyed very much. Thank you for writing it!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:49 AM Title: Epilogue
loved this. not sure HOW I missed this previously.
Date: 24 Nov 2013 11:46 PM Title: Epilogue
I really like the way you portrayed Demetri. I like him. Loved the story.
Catherine
Date: 22 Apr 2013 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm enjoying the story. This chapter was off, confusing, and didnt fit -for me.
I' ll keep readings. I'm likeing the pair.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:36 PM Title: Epilogue
Yummy end. Ty for writing and sharing
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
Rofl for the wolves turning tail. Go b kicking malice's arse
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
Yeah for jasper being saved. Rofl for b going after malice
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad b is settling down and mostly getting along with everyone. Oooh hope Peter doesn't get hurt. I love Peter.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ah so james is a v spy huh? Yummy shower time. Woo hoo for bikes
Date: 22 Oct 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh wow. Way to piss off d and Aro. Wonder what caius wants?
Date: 22 Oct 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
Good chapter. Lots of info
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Aww he made her first time wonderful
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Lol for getting her drunk.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hmm demetri has picked himself a mate huh?
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hmm so aro's gift worked on her?
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
Lol for all the teasing
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Omg. That was hilarious
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting twist to the whole Twilight thing
Date: 21 Oct 2012 5:35 PM Title: Epilogue
LOVE BELLA AND DEM!!!! YOU WROTE THIS WONDERFULLY.. MORE!! MORE BELLA AND DEM PLEAAAASE
Date: 20 Oct 2012 8:57 AM Title: Epilogue
Amazing...I think this may be the best one yet...that's saying alot....
Date: 20 Oct 2012 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
well other than Jasper they have killed them all. I am not sure I get that because Alice is the one that instigated that. Edward participated, Carlisle is the coven leader he let it happen.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
Alice is always too bold, too confident. TOO>>>much
Date: 20 Oct 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
wow, now if that were the case in real life maybe marriages would be better.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well in the throws of passion I guess it hurt less.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
the scene sounds sweet.