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Reviewer: triinity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2023 10:32 PM Title: Epilogue

Another wonderful story.  You are so good at writing characters with Bella that I don't normally look for, since i'm a Bella/Jasper groupy.  But they are wonderful stories and fun and funny and smexy.  I wish you had a million more of them! 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2020 2:07 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved this story!!!!

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2020 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 13

She just keep surprising them 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2020 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 12

Hehe, Peter cracks me the fuck up! I truly hope Bella decimates Alice 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2020 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 11

So will Peter, char, an Jasper be ok?

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2020 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

So Demetri is still head of the guard? And the masters defer to him on this not only out of respect due to it being his mate, but obviously they trust him.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2020 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh Demetri, you are a noble one and I'm glad Aro was there to talk to her. I do so hope the brothers take a liking to her though.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2020 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 8

Naw he's a cutie 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2020 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh how pissed is she gonna be? 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2020 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 6

So Demetri chose her as his mate instead of of her just being his mate to begin with?

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2020 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 5

At least two of the brothers see what they are already 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

Huh, why does Aro want her when she doesn't even know about vampires 

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2020 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nothing like being puked on. Soooo she's not Demetri mate?

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2018 5:32 AM Title: Epilogue

Love it

Reviewer: dessaleej Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2017 12:37 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved the story wished there was more of it

Reviewer: dessaleej Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2017 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

I love this story and know I'm not finished reading but do have to say no he wasn't anything close to that guy but he did lie and take advantage of her being drunk so she wasn't totally wrong when she said it so sad that he got mad at her for it he didn't rape her but did get her drunk to make it easier please don't take what say wrong just the way took this chapter I really did like the part where she was changed and how but he still lied when said didn't do it on purpose and for him to get all defense yes he's a good guy and love the mate ship and always hea 

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2016 9:54 AM Title: Epilogue

So good, I wish there was more!

 

Perfect little story. Love your Demetri, Bella and the others in the Volturi Coven.

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2016 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 13

Very satisfying battle.

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2016 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 12

Peter saved Jasper after all. Thank goodness. He didn't deserve to die for Eddie's and Alice's fuck-ups.

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2016 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 2

The Cullens aren't suicidal. Just selfish.

Reviewer: nekkou Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2016 10:32 AM Title: Epilogue

hehe this was great!

Reviewer: cerberusfluffy1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 3:33 PM Title: Epilogue

wow!!!  I love your characters.  Thanks for writing and for allowing me to indukge in my obsession and fantasies

Reviewer: beth626 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2014 6:45 AM Title: Epilogue

Awe! Absolutely loved it!!

Reviewer: SagaDevotee Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2014 4:51 AM Title: Epilogue

ah! so happy i found you here. i was in the mood to re-read some fabulous Demetri/Bella. Love it. well done.

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2014 12:24 AM Title: Epilogue

Enjoyed very much. Thank you for writing it!

Reviewer: mvs0706 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:49 AM Title: Epilogue

loved this.  not sure HOW I missed this previously.  

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 11:46 PM Title: Epilogue

I really like the way you portrayed Demetri.  I like him.  Loved the story.

 

Catherine

Reviewer: dbg Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm enjoying the story.  This chapter was off, confusing, and didnt fit -for me.

 I' ll keep readings. I'm likeing the pair.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:36 PM Title: Epilogue

Yummy end. Ty for writing and sharing

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

Rofl for the wolves turning tail. Go b kicking malice's arse

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

Yeah for jasper being saved. Rofl for b going after malice

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

Glad b is settling down and mostly getting along with everyone. Oooh hope Peter doesn't get hurt. I love Peter.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 10

Ah so james is a v spy huh? Yummy shower time. Woo hoo for bikes

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh wow. Way to piss off d and Aro. Wonder what caius wants?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 8

Good chapter. Lots of info

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 7

Aww he made her first time wonderful

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

Lol for getting her drunk.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hmm demetri has picked himself a mate huh?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 4

Hmm so aro's gift worked on her?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

Lol for all the teasing

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

Omg. That was hilarious

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting twist to the whole Twilight thing

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 5:35 PM Title: Epilogue

LOVE BELLA AND DEM!!!! YOU WROTE THIS WONDERFULLY.. MORE!! MORE BELLA AND DEM PLEAAAASE

Reviewer: Sophi517 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 8:57 AM Title: Epilogue

Amazing...I think this may be the best one yet...that's saying alot....

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 7:37 AM Title: Epilogue

good story.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 13

well other than Jasper they have killed them all. I am not sure I get that because Alice is the one that instigated that. Edward participated, Carlisle is the coven leader he let it happen.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 12

Alice is always too bold, too confident. TOO>>>much

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 8

wow, now if that were the case in real life maybe marriages would be better. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 7

Well in the throws of passion I guess it hurt less.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 5

the scene sounds sweet.

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 5

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 4

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 3

loved it!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 1:42 AM Title: Epilogue

I loved this story

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

loved it!

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