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Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2016 7:53 AM Title: Hello, Bella.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO BE KIDDING ME POST MORE DON"T LEAVE US ON SUCH A BIG CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!! THE SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME!!!!!!!!!!UUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 7:41 PM Title: Hmmm

My husband proposed in less than 2 months.  We have been married 22 years. When you know, you know.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 7:25 PM Title: Disputes

Bella is ungrateful. Edward is being loving and protective. He isn't being crazy.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 2:23 PM Title: Hello, Bella.

OH no you didnt lol.  Everything was going so well now the creeper is there.  Need more soon please I am begging on my knees lol :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 1:06 PM Title: Surprise!

and wow what a dream that was.  Great party

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 12:24 PM Title: OMG!

Busted lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 11:59 AM Title: Gifts and Surprises

Wow that bastard is evil

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 11:57 AM Title: Try

Wow what a present

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 11:14 AM Title: Hmmm

They better get up and get married or she will not be a virgin on her wedding night lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 11:10 AM Title: Disputes

She is has to be freaking out

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 11:08 AM Title: Who?

Is Jasper the evil one  Edward is not going to let her out of his sight

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 11:06 AM Title: Being 'his' girl

She is denying how she feels about him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 8:53 AM Title: Temptation

He better respect her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 3:31 PM Title: Bittersweet Bliss

I think he is pushing her harder that he sould and was it Bella's new best friend that broke them up lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 2:37 PM Title: Brasilda & Dinner Plans

With friends like her who need enimies lol

Reviewer: Zamar22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 9:04 PM Title: Gifts and Surprises

Though you've given them different names chapter 17 and 18 have the exact same text in their chapters.    

 

 I just found the story and I am liking it 😊

 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:27 PM Title: Introductions

Sounds like this went south fast

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:21 PM Title: Oh Doctor?

I agree - it was a really hot fantasy

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:11 PM Title: Hello?

Hm...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:05 PM Title: Falling

I get her feeling quite embarrassed by that call, but she might be right about no one in her circle being a witness to it ...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 6:55 PM Title: The Call

What an interesting start ;)

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2015 4:40 PM Title: Disputes

Hmmmm.....hope the creeper didn't find her and kidnap her!!! I'm also hoping that E and B kiss and make up!!! I can't stand Brasilda and think she plays a part in this somehow!! More soon please!!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 7:07 PM Title: Disputes

More, more more

Reviewer: Payton79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 5:23 AM Title: Who?

Thanks :).

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 4:20 PM Title: Who?

That's just nasty

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2015 9:16 PM Title: Who?

Ewww! And yeah, we're thinking that.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 4:10 PM Title: Being 'his' girl

Poor Bella, she needs to change her locks and phone numbers. She has to do something to keep her idiot friend and mother away. She seems to be enjoying her time with Edward. She should not feel guilty. 

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 3:50 AM Title: Being 'his' girl

Who's watching?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 3:41 AM Title: Temptation

Go Bella!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 3:31 AM Title: MOM!

Mom???

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 3:10 AM Title: Bittersweet Bliss

Bridzilla or mom. 

Appreciate the long chapter.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 2:31 AM Title: Brasilda & Dinner Plans

I don't get the Bridzilla character but I guess you'll fill in the blanks.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 2:22 AM Title: The Morning After

Uh oh.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 2:15 AM Title: Sweet Melodies

Sweet. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:58 AM Title: Introductions

Funny

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:53 AM Title: Oh Doctor?

Nice

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:41 AM Title: Falling

Ok

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:35 AM Title: The Call

Interesting so far.

Reviewer: Payton79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 1:10 PM Title: Being 'his' girl

I'm so glad you're back!

Reviewer: LilMcG Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 12:21 AM Title: Temptation

Ahh I need more lol :) 



Author's Response:

Then more you shall have because I've updated. Lol.

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 8:41 PM Title: Temptation

what the fuck, all the waiting and then you give us that?  please update????



Author's Response:

I've updated. :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 5:21 PM Title: Temptation

Is that girl crazy? It's Edward!

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2013 5:36 PM Title: Temptation

Nooooooo. I ran out of chapters! I like this. Can't wait for another update.



Author's Response:

I updated. I apologize for the long wait. Happy New Year!

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 9:06 AM Title: Temptation

I was starting to wonder if you were going to finish. Nice cliffy, after the long wait. What is going to happen now? Why would Bella's mom be so worried about Edward stealing her virtue just to let her go to Sunday lunch by herself? Hmm, I don't know. Can't wait for the update to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

I can't wait to see what happens, too. Lol.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 6:09 AM Title: Temptation

How is Edward so patient? She is not a teenager and even if she does not want sex there is nothing wrong with orgasms.  She also should not have started if it is a morals thing. She really is irritating! 



Author's Response:

If you think she's irritating now then you haven't seen anything yet! Lol. 

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 5:38 AM Title: MOM!

I really enjoy this story. I was wondering if you planned on updating or finishing it.



Author's Response:

I've updated. Happy New Year! :)

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 8:08 PM Title: MOM!

How embarrassing. 



Author's Response:

Ikr! Thanks for reviewing, you guys keep me going :)

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 8:04 PM Title: Bittersweet Bliss

Did she fall again? No water around at least. 



Author's Response:

Lol. Her Mom caughter her getting hot and bothered with Edward.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 7:52 PM Title: Brasilda & Dinner Plans

Don't think she should trust her "friend". 

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 7:47 PM Title: The Morning After

Where did you get a name like Basilda?



Author's Response:

I tried to think of one of the ugliest, unappealing names I could and Brasilda came to mind lol. 

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 7:43 PM Title: Sweet Melodies

Very calculated move on his part.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 7:38 PM Title: Introductions

They do have a habit of falling into eachother don't they?



Author's Response:

They do! :)

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 7:35 PM Title: Oh Doctor?

She should take it to fan fiction. 

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 7:31 PM Title: Hello?

Church girls still have fantasies. Don't let them tell you they don't

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 7:27 PM Title: Falling

So  they go from late night erotic sex calls to meeting in church. Somehow that fits. 

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 7:21 PM Title: The Call

That's what she gets for deciding not to let her mom get a word in. Cute. 

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 2:35 PM Title: MOM!

Hillarious 



Author's Response:

THANKS! :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 12:19 PM Title: Bittersweet Bliss

I think Eddie got a too aggressive and I wonder who is in Bella's apartment.

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2013 6:51 AM Title: Bittersweet Bliss

huh?

Reviewer: karencullen2007 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2013 5:00 AM Title: Bittersweet Bliss

wth happened??? Great chapter

Reviewer: InHarmony Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 4:28 AM Title: Brasilda & Dinner Plans

Please tell me there is more to come?!!!!!!!!! :)



Author's Response:

YOU BET YOUR ASS THERE IS! ;)

Reviewer: InHarmony Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 3:37 AM Title: Falling

YES!!!!! don't want to stop reading to write though...

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 4:11 AM Title: The Morning After

lol, cant wait to read more

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 5:06 AM Title: Sweet Melodies

you are . so good lol  she is comfortable with him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 4:56 AM Title: Introductions

he knows it is her

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 3:36 AM Title: Sweet Melodies

loved it, think ur off to a great start. cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 3:32 AM Title: Sweet Melodies

Aww so sweet!  Need more please!

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 3:55 PM Title: Introductions

I'm sure they were both shocked to find out who each other were.  LOL  But did Edward go in after her?  I'm sure he did.  Can't wait for his pov.

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 3:42 PM Title: Falling

Oh how ironic that she would fall into Edwards arms..(I'm sure its him) and not remember her phone call.  LOL

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 10:13 AM Title: Introductions

there? really????????????????????

Reviewer: rachelle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 4:54 AM Title: Introductions

ahh, i like this :)

Reviewer: karencullen2007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 7:28 PM Title: Introductions

EPOV would be great!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 7:23 PM Title: Introductions

Very funny.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 7:09 PM Title: The Call

Oh, Bella! lol

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 8:31 AM Title: Hello?

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 8:27 AM Title: Falling

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 8:22 AM Title: The Call

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 8:00 AM Title: Oh Doctor?

She is very brave on the phone but face to face I think she will choke and need help.



Author's Response:

Lol. Yep.

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 6:23 AM Title: Oh Doctor?

I like it. Cant wait to see where you take it. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 4:37 AM Title: Hello?

And what was he doing at the church anyway?

Author's Response:

You don't know that was him. Okay screw it, it was him but Bella doesn't lol. I guess he just decided to go to church and ended up at hers...what a coincidence. More will be revealed as we go on. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: karencullen2007 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 6:20 AM Title: Falling

hmmm interesting!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 10:07 PM Title: Hello?

Oh my.....this is different ;-)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 5:16 AM Title: Hello?

;) she just cant help herself

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 12:29 PM Title: Falling

i like it....

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 8:37 PM Title: Falling

I cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 8:28 PM Title: The Call

sounds like fun lol

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 7:52 PM Title: Falling

Is it Edward, I presume?  Nice story!



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 7:51 PM Title: The Call

Love it!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 7:03 PM Title: Falling

Surprise!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 4:33 PM Title: Falling

Love it! She meets him a church, hmmmm.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 3:08 AM Title: The Call

Awesome! I remember when my hubby and I were first dating, he took me to an amusement park. We went on a log ride, were stuck under a waterfall, and my-white blouse and white bra- became completely transparent. He heard one guy call him "lucky white boy" LOL!

Do you think 555-talk would like my story?

 



Author's Response:

Lol! They definitely would but I think they would need more boobie details lol.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 11:03 PM Title: The Call

;-)

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