[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2021 11:26 PM Title: Disturbia
I have read this before so I don't know if I have review this chapter but it is a very good story
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2018 4:57 AM Title: Down On The Corner
beutiful collar-beautiful chapter!
Date: 30 Dec 2018 9:25 PM Title: Call Me
this story is a bright point inb my day
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2018 4:45 AM Title: Everyday Is A Winding Road
good and interesting contract
Date: 30 Dec 2018 4:16 AM Title: Moving On Up
I'm getting all emotional here.Excellent chapter !!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 8:48 PM Title: Rehab
Amazing chapter, I'm in love with your fiction
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 8:11 PM Title: Disturbia Part 2
I just want to say thank you for the great time you gave me by reading your story.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 8:11 PM Title: Disturbia Part 2
I just want to say thank you for the great time you gave me by reading your story.
Date: 29 Dec 2018 7:53 PM Title: Disturbia
OH,MON DIEU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Date: 29 Dec 2018 7:42 PM Title: Disturbia
YOUR WRITING IS LIKE A GOOD WINE,I JUST DON`T WANT TO STOP.THANK YOU!
Date: 29 Dec 2018 7:42 PM Title: Excite Me
YOUR WRITING IS LIKE A GOOD WINE,I JUST DON`T WANT TO STOP.THANK YOU!
Date: 29 Dec 2018 7:41 PM Title: Excite Me
YOUR WRITING IS LIKE A GOOD WINE,I JUST DON`T WANT TO STOP.THANK YOU!
Date: 29 Dec 2018 7:17 PM Title: But Whips and Chains....
YOUR WRITING IS LIKE A GOOD WINE,I JUST DON`T WANT TO STOP.THANK YOU!
Date: 29 Dec 2018 7:17 PM Title: But Whips and Chains....
YOUR WRITING IS LIKE A GOOD WINE,I JUST DON`T WANT TO STOP.THANK YOU!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:35 PM Title: In The Air Tonight
Soo good!
love it!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:35 PM Title: In The Air Tonight
Soo good!
love it!
Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:30 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
impatients de plus looking forward to more
Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:03 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
really loved this chapter, can't wait to the next one.
Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:03 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
really loved this chapter, can't wait to the next one.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:01 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
I really loved this chapter, can't wait to the next one.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:01 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
I really loved this chapter, can't wait to the next one.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:01 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
I really loved this chapter, can't wait to the next one.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:01 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
I really loved this chapter, can't wait to the next one.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:00 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
I really loved this chapter, can't wait to the next one.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:00 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
I really loved this chapter, can't wait to the next one.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:00 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
I really loved this chapter, can't wait to the next one.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:00 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
I really loved this chapter, can't wait to the next one.
Date: 29 Dec 2018 1:24 PM Title: Don't You Want Me?
Loved utis off to a good start. Intriguing. What happens next?
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 1:01 PM Title: Don't You Want Me?
i really like how you've portrayed all your characters and I love the plot!
Date: 29 Dec 2018 1:01 PM Title: Don't You Want Me?
i really like how you've portrayed all your characters and I love the plot!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:51 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:51 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:51 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:51 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:51 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:50 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:50 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:50 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:50 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:49 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:49 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:49 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:49 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
Date: 29 Dec 2018 12:48 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Good story! You have a series talent for conveyng emotions,thanks.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2018 7:57 AM Title: Futuretake: Life, Kids and The Art of Su
Wow, what a story, love it to death, sometime it was a little too much, but that is all part and parcel of the story.
Date: 24 Aug 2017 8:46 PM Title: Easy, Peaceful Feeling
As a matter of fact, as a private community, a home would NEVER be rented or God forbid sold, without the permission of the owner of the community (Edward) or a majority of the members of the community or their Board, if the Board is in charge of new members. This is one of the stipulations associated with transfer of title and escrow would fail without proof of HOA approval. This would all be spelled out in the Bylaws of the HOA (Home Owners Association) and the new people would need to sign that they are both aware of the limitations associated with the property and that they are bound by the Bylaws is their entirety.
FYI, the University of California at Berkeley does not offer Associates Degrees, it is a 4 year research university and the many schools offer Bachelor's, Masters and PhD designation programs. There are currently over 40,000 students at the UCB campus. It is possible that James might have influenced a single Dean within the university but with the high profile of the UC schools and particularly Cal Berkeley, it would only be a matter of time before any discrepancies came to light.
I realize this is fiction but considerable effort has been made to safeguard the students, particularly the undergraduate female population.
Date: 20 Apr 2017 7:33 PM Title: Sunday Kind Of Love
East coast?? Me, too.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2015 12:43 PM Title: Futuretake: Life, Kids and The Art of Su
excellent
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2015 12:29 PM Title: Honeymoon Outtake: Housekeeping
has been a great story
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2015 11:49 PM Title: Wedding Plans, Trips, and Other Things
GORGEOUS DRESS
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2015 11:17 PM Title: Disturbia Part 2
sick bastard
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2015 9:56 PM Title: But Whips and Chains....
turning page NOW
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2015 8:49 PM Title: Natural High
she has a lot of issues, no room for spontaneous
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2015 5:18 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
great so far
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2015 4:29 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
great start
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2014 11:22 AM Title: Moving On Up
I love the fun loving sassy side of Bella, I hope Edward let's her bring that side of herself out more, I think it will help her adjust to being with Edward and living with him.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2014 10:35 AM Title: Rehab
I'm glad that Bella's going to get the help she needs. I feel a little sad at her leaving Jasper, although I know Edward will be perfect for Bella I wish they could all stay together. Yes, I know, I'm a greedy girl, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 7:44 PM Title: Disturbia Part 2
I've said it before and I'll say it again, James needs his balls cutting off. Bella should be the one to do it, tie him down then whilst wide awake she should cut them off with a blunt and rusty pair of nail scissors don't forget to keep the smelling salts handy. Then if she likes she could carve the word arsehole into his forehead just so there's no mistake and everyone can see what he is. Too much? Nah, I don't think it's enough for what he's put Bella and the rest of those girls through.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 7:09 PM Title: Disturbia
So Rose and Bella knew each other at college. I bet Rose feels guilty about getting Bella involved with James even though they didn't know what he was truly like at first. I'm glad Rose was wrong enough to leave but it sounds like she didn't escape unscathed.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 5:13 PM Title: Excite Me
You should take pity on a poor girl who doesn't own a fan, talk about hot. I know it's Jasper's decision to end Bella's contract but I do think it's a little sad as well. It sound like Rose has some knowledge of James. Is this from actual contact with him or from girls she has seen in a professional capacity?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 4:51 PM Title: But Whips and Chains....
Lol, sassy Bella made a little appearance there. Will Edward tell Jasper that he touched Bella? I notice they didn't let her eat breakfast, good job she had that chocolate.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 4:21 PM Title: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....
Well lucky you, I don't have a fan, lol. That was definitely intense and I get the feeling that they all enjoyed themselves, hahaha!!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 3:54 PM Title: Natural High
Wow, that's a lot of faffing around just to do a scene. I hope that Bella can back to a place of trust where she no longer needs the form. I think she needs to go back to therapy, what James did to her is not over by a long shot. Taking Bella as his sub is going to be a challenge for Edward, let's hope he can cope with it and his work.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 3:26 PM Title: I Touch Myself
A little cyber sex is a wonderful thing, lol. Was she actually allowed to orgasm without permission? That tattoo sounds pretty horrendous, ropes and shackles. If it is something James made her do maybe she can get it removed. I love that Edward's whole family are in the lifestyle, there'll be a lot of support there for Bella.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 1:30 AM Title: In The Air Tonight
Oh my God, I can't believe Tanya. How on earth did she think she would get away with trying to blackmail Edward? She must have been really stupid. Thank goodness nothing serious happened and Edward got out of that toxic situation.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2014 9:50 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
Bella certainly landed in a bad place at the poly house. I know she wanted to be independent but when the abuse started she should have gone to the police or home, I'm sure her dad would have helped her. I'm glad she finally got out of there even though she ended up in hospital. James needs his balls chopping off so he can't hurt anyone else.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2014 9:23 PM Title: You Sexy Thing
I can't believe she wrote that she didn't want an ugly Dom. In some situations there can be too much honesty. Her questionnaire answers seemed to be more about her receiving pleasure than pleasing her master, maybe it was just my perception but that's how it felt.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2014 3:59 PM Title: Don't You Want Me?
Hmm, Bella has very low self esteem when it comes to herself personally, I get the feeling that professionally it could be the opposite. She's very clever and studious and she's confident about her achievements in that area. Edward could have his work cut out for him both in gaining her trust and building her self esteem. There could be battles once she gains more confidence in her submissive abilities.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2014 3:32 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Interesting, I'm looking forward to delving further. ;)
Jane x
Date: 29 May 2014 8:51 PM Title: Till Death Do Us Part I
great story
Date: 06 May 2014 3:28 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Enjoyed
Date: 19 Mar 2014 3:06 AM Title: Don't You Want Me?
All of your authors notes are correct. Cannot wait to read on. Thank goodness no slash.
Date: 11 Dec 2013 2:39 PM Title: Kitchen Rendezvous
Wow, no matter how many times I've read this story, it's intense. As for the 'position' it is in fact a known position. I don't know the name of it but it's something along the lines of the 'Kama Sutra' positions. In other words the person(s) would need to be human pretzels. Lol. But you did mention 'yoga training' so that'd help as well. This is another reason I enjoy reading your work, you always explain, as well as, give meaning to what is going on through out the story. (I hope that came out somewhat comprehendible)
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2013 11:26 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
I read this a couple months ago & it quickly became a favorite of mine. I decided to re-read it but was rather sad when I couldn't find it on the fanfic site I first found it. I was thankful after a quick Bing search that I found it. I really admire all of your work & was very pleased I found it.
Date: 12 Sep 2013 4:27 PM Title: Futuretake: Life, Kids and The Art of Su
I am glad that Bella got help with her anexity. I am also glad to see them back in the playroom. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful and beautiful story with us.
Date: 09 Sep 2013 10:41 PM Title: Backed Into A Corner
I wonder if our doctor remembers that antibiotics reduc the effect of birth controll ..d.o they want that kind of problem now too
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2013 5:02 AM Title: Futuretake: Life, Kids and The Art of Su
yumminess!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2013 5:53 AM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
i am surprised nothing happened to james
it seems that if you are a bad dom word would get out and someone should hold you accountable
how sad bella went throught that and is still trying to keep in lifestyle says alot about her
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2013 5:41 AM Title: You Sexy Thing
i can't believe she typed in about the ugly dom, my mouth dropped
i am loving it
thank you
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2013 5:28 AM Title: Don't You Want Me?
bella seems as a kindered soul
taken advantage by james and looking for a place to belong
man is she a smart cookie
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2013 4:01 AM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
i can't believe there are so many things you can do
hell of a list
love it
Date: 04 Sep 2013 12:36 AM Title: Futuretake: Life, Kids and The Art of Su
Loved its:)
Date: 04 Jun 2013 5:29 AM Title: Every Which Way But Loose
Interesting
Date: 04 Jun 2013 5:21 AM Title: These Dreams
What is up with Ed?
Date: 04 Jun 2013 4:36 AM Title: Backed Into A Corner
Poor Bella what is going to happen?
Date: 03 Jun 2013 11:03 PM Title: Paging Dr. Cullen
Not good Bella!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 10:56 PM Title: Doctor, Doctor
Ok kinda yucky
Date: 03 Jun 2013 10:49 PM Title: Bound By My Love
Intense..I am glad she told him!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 10:30 PM Title: Every Day of the Week
Crap he is getting closer what s he planning? I am scared for her!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 10:21 PM Title: Prisoner of Love
Naughty bella
Date: 03 Jun 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chains of Love
Hummm kinky devils!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 1:21 PM Title: Sunday Kind Of Love
Poor Bella...please don't hurt her too bad when he gets her!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:20 PM Title: Play With Me
Lucky girl! I want Edward!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 11:51 AM Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
Freaking A James come on Ed figure out he is the one that bought the house
Date: 03 Jun 2013 11:41 AM Title: You've Got A Friend In Me
Lucky girl!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 11:30 AM Title: Easy, Peaceful Feeling
Her comes James..please don't let him hurt her again